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Angle.

@Angle.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Bhaboon

lovely os

mind blowing

u r extremely talented

pls do write more

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Babaji Ka Thullu

@BabajiKaThullu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

really very nice i like it really its tooo gooooddddddddd

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Divya

@myownarea

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

That was too good Bhavna :)
just too good:)

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

oh wow
that was so awesome n amazing
i totally loved it
thanks pebo for the pm
i loved reading this one

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
i am the first one to comment! lol..... acc.2 the posts, u r!😆

oho! to yeh case hai!

yeh bhagwaan! pehle kitna confusion tha! lekin armaan is really nice here! haan....i included AR[not much of Ridzy of course] 4 the 1st time....]

i knew that nupur knew everything!

beautiful oneshot!

bole toh ekdum filmy! yeah...i'm not that experienced 2 write much realistic ones.....😃

poor mayank!

awesome yaar! thank u!😳

seriously loved this oneshot!

i found these lines to be the best-

"So that was quite a happy ending, wasn't it?" Mayank asked Nupur, who was closing their Wedding album.

"You call that a happy ending? Oh! How I dreamed of getting a handsome hunk like Raj of DDLJ for my husband & how I ended getting the 'sadu' Mayank Sharma instead!" Nupur replied dramatically.

Mayank sighed. Some things never change......
do write more!
totally different and amazing!

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: ..pebo..

bhavi!!!!!!!!!!

im first coz mahi is still res!!!!!!!!!! ohk ohk....agreed!😆

wat an awesome update

it was sooo cool thank u!😃

arre i dont know wat to say

its srsly a crazy marraige yup!😉

miss morrena expresss

will always gey her prince 'sadu' charming nice name pebzy! will try 2 remember 2 use it next time!🤣

loved this os!!!!!!!!!!

u will defi get chappals

no for throwing

but for wearing free mein???😲🤣

love pebbzzyy

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

hey bhavana

it was a mind blowing os

loved the way mayank being fool😆😆😆

and the dialge " bole to mamu bana dya "was awesum blossom

and the endiing sentences

of mayu as sadu wah kiya bt hai👏👏👏👏👏

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#147

[quote=mayurarti]
res
willl edit later

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Bhavs dear

no chapals & sandals for you

It was a lovely OS thanx!😃

Outstanding ...mindblowing .....Loved it

I loved the ending glad u loved it!😊

do write more

Luv
Nidzy~

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thanx Nidzy!🤗

[quote=aish_punk]

hey bhavana..cute OS.. thanx!😊

mayank loved nupur but he was willing to let her go for rohit..bcuz he know she loved him..
yeah...he could do anything 4 her!

armaan was sad at the way mayank was sacrificing his love..n thats why he thought of something.. yep! dimaag ki batti achanak jal gayi!🤣

he told nupur the truth..n lied to mayank that rohit ran away..so he got married to nupur instead.. that was easy coz Rohit had never actually changed!😉

mayank felt really guilty but he had to do it..he tried explaining it to her..but was shocked when he found out she knew!..n then she even confessed..n he couldn't thank armaan enough!.. yep! he'd saved two hearts from breaking....😊

thats a sweet ending..but their banter still continues!..cute..

thnx 4 d pm pebo

do write more

-aish

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thanx Aish!😃

[quote=rads14]
its awesome..!!!
loved it..😊

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thanx rads!😊

[quote=sayankgunur]

Hey bhavana, Pebo told me about your wonderful OS,

And i must say your a amazing writer, aww!thank u!😳

I was so into the story the moment you stated it

Keep writing more great OS's

And do PM me if you do yeah,,,,sure will!😊

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thanx a lot Reeshu!😃

[quote=kulsumd]

nyc1 dear...
Pm me wen u update new os..

Kulsum

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thanx Kulsum! yeah, will PM u surely next time.....😊

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#148

[quote=vaish04]

Haha WOW thats was Choooooo Chweeettt Gud one thanx!😊
I knew from the very first that Mayu was eing fooled around haye bechara !! haanji!
U knw u write more stories on MayUr and KaSh (AR for ME)...ie KaYur :D !!! they're one of my evergreen favs!😳
Love
Vaishu

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thanx Vaish!😃

[quote=VampirePrincess]

Hey read the last OS....I liked it, m not a gr8 mayur fan..but u caught me with ur beautiful writing. thanx a lot hun!😊
My fav was the last part...that was simply adorable!:D hehe....i like 2 end my stories in a bit 'hatke' way!😆

reminded me of the movie Jab We Met😊 bingo! it was inspired from the movie's climax!😉
continue writing!!
n do pm me the next:) will surely do!

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thank u!

[quote=vaish04]

U knw its was Kinda Jab we met type ;) And i LOOOOvveedd it :D

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yeah, it is!😆

[quote=Mystique]

Hey Bhavana,a very sweet os!!! do write more!!

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thanx 4 liking it!.😊

[quote=ak12]

Hey bhavna..
I am akansha..
This was a cute, sweet lovely OS.. thanx buddy!😳
Thanx to pebo for the pm..
Please add me to yoe pm list and please do write more.... will surely PM u next time!😊

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thanx Akansha!😃

[quote=RadhikaBhushan]

really very nice i like it really its tooo gooooddddddddd

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thanx Radhika!😃