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tanu

@Armu4eva

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+ 14

Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Zoya jani... today u just... KILLED me...with this awesome OS of urs..... so so so so so heart-touching and deeply stirring it is... *kudos* 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Excellent writing and wow..what a fantastically new premise....Gr8 job..😛😛😛

n goodness the OS...😭😭😭😭😭 got tears in ma eyes.. reading abt Armu in such a sad state.. n Bharti.. giving her all.. to get him back to what he was..!! Just felt soo terrible for ArBi ..n i culd feel the pain that both were going thru.. Armu.. not being able to express n Bharti.. trying her best to get him well...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Goregous ..gorgeous OS... i just luvd the song u hv chosen.. its PERFECT for the epi..👏👏👏👏 n my God.. what a End Credit...... gr8 thot...

This one sure gets a ...HATs OFF from me...

Edited by Armu4eva - 15 years ago

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harika

@SomerholicGirl

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#42

OMG OMG Zoya!!!!!!!!!!!

you really made me weep............

such an emotional os!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am not even getting words to describe!!!!!!!

its simply

outstanding!!!!!!!!!

love,

harika

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Sohana Singh

@*Sohana*Singh*

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

wow, what an amazing OS, so beautifully written, so emotional, had tears in my eyes...I could really imagine it and feel Bharti's pain. Lovely OS, great work!!👏Do write more

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Gosh Zoya,I think everybody else already said everything. There's nothing much left for me to say..I was just so touched reading this OS and i too had tears in my eyes....

It was so sad seeing Armaan in that state...and how he just grabbed Bharti's hands and walked out of the hospital like some Zombie with no emotions ( 😭).....but slowly..with Bharti's efforts..he managed to recover..was very beautifully written...and i love the title of the OS with the Song inside it too..!

Excellent piece of work..!!..👏

Got me feeling emotional..and hoping to read more from ya....:)

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Loved it Zoya😊
It was very emotional, but I have understood your msg. How pain brought ArBi together, and now nothing can bring them apart😊

Do write this kind of short stories, I really love them😊