MayUr FF *Phir Milenge* (Last) Part 19 @ Pg 147 - Page 44

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hey daksha superb vm with superb promo loved it do update soon and thanks for pm
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Shaam ho gayi......Mayank and his mom arrived to Nupur's house.....

Aaj ki poori update main yaani Daksha aapko doongi......Nupur is busy......

N: Mummy kahaan se le aayin iss lehnge ko.....itna sajh dhaj ke nahin jaana mujhe.....

NM: Accha toh hai......

N: Nahin......

And she took a baby pink coloured lehnga out of the wardrobe with little sequins work....

N: Ye zyaada accha hai......

NM: Theek hai.....toh tu pehan ke neeche aa jaa.......

When Nupur's mom came down......door bell rang......she opened the door and welcomed Mayank and his mom........

NM: Aaiye.....baithiye......

MM: Ji......aapka ghar bohot sundar hai....

NM: Thanks.......Nupur bas aati hi hogi......

Then in a moment Gunjan and Nupur came down...........

Mayank's POV

Maine kabhi usse aise nahin dekha........looking like a Angel from the heaven......stepping down softly from the stairs......without any noise....looking down at the floor......mesmerizing appeal......hairs flowing down over her shoulders.....wait Mayank what are you thinking of......she is Nupur..... a competitor to you from the beginning.......but why today is something different..... never had so much tension on exams also.......huff dude.....be cool......

Nupur's POV

Main theek toh lag rahi hoon na......ek minute Nupur tujhe kab se......main acchi hi lag rahi hongi...... par main Mayank se kya kahungi.......kya baat karungi......mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha......

Nupur came down to the hall......her mother made her sit on the couch......

Nupur's POV

Kya Mayank ki mummy bhi mujhse wo ulte seedhe sawaal karengi.......kahaan tak padhi ho.....etc etc....

Nupur was looking down.......then Mayank's mom called her.......

MM: Nupur beta.......

Nupur lifted up her face to see Mayank's face.......the same spark in his eyes......same smile.....he was the same person whom she knew from so many years......but why today the similarity of past is overshadowed by the differences of the present......person sitting in front of her was more like a stranger to her......whom she knew only by face......knew him only by a name "Mayank" and nothing else......and maybe she will have to spend her whole life with him.....would it be possible......

She came out of her thoughts.....and shifted her sight to Mayank's mom.......

N: Ji......

MM: Mujhe toh tum photo mein hi bohot acchi lag rahi theen......aur saamne toh aur bhi pyaari lag rahi ho........

MM (to Nupur's mom): Dekhiye Ji.......mujhe toh Nupur bohot pasand hai......ek baar agar dono bacche aapas mein baat kar lein toh aur accha rahega......

NM: aap sahi keh rahi hain......ye inki zindagi ka khaas faisla hai......

NM (to Gunjan): Gunjan beta.....in dono ko bahar Garden mein le ja.....wahaan aaraam se baat kar lenge......

Gunjan took Nupur out......and Mayank came too.....outside in the garden Gunjan left and came back in......

Mayank and Nupur both are moving quietly........without looking at each other.......

Nupur's POV

Mujhe Mayank se bohot sawaal poochne hain......par main shuru kahaan se karun.....aaj kuch alag si nervousness......waise tu itna bolti hai Nupur....aaj teri bolti band ho gayyi.......

Mayank's POV

Kuch awkward si situation ho gayi hai.......humein aise chod diya hai yahaan jaise.....ye 20-25 min mein hum apni zindagi ka decision le lenge....... Nupur aaj kuch zyaada hi sharmaa rahi hai.... aaj sach mein sab kuch alag alag lar raha hai.......

Both of them came to a bench.......

M: Please hum baithein......

N (looked up and smiled): Hmm...

They sat down quietly.......Nupur was looking down crushing her dupatta withing her grip.......Mayank looked at her.......and then shifted his sight to see the greenery......then Nupur lifted her eyes to look at Mayank......and when Mayank was going to turn......she again downed her face.......

M: Acche flowers hain yahaan.......wo kaunsa flower hai...... (pointing towards a earthe flower pot).....wo yahaan sabse accha hai.......

N: Wo Dahalia ka mixed breed hai......mujhe bhi wohi sabse accha lagta hai.......

Then again there was a complete silence.......

Then Mayank decided to break up the silence

M: Toh ab kahaan job kar rahi ho Nupur.....

N: Main..... main Foster India mein kaam kar rahi hoon......aur tum.....

M: I am working at HBDS......

N: Oh that's really nice.......

M: Haan......(after a little break).....maine kabhi socha nahin tha....hum college ke baad yahaan aise milenge......aur wo bhi shaadi ke liye.......aaj sab kuch kitna alag lag raha hai......

N: exactly......mujhe bhi thoda awkward feel ho raha hai......

M: Main toh bohot nervous tha......pehli baar aise kisi ladki ko dekhne jaana......mujhe kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha tha......

N: Ek baat bataaoon......kal mujhe dekhne Samrat aaya tha......

Whether Nupur speaks less or more but she is pure at heart.....so she spoke that too.....which a girl would never tell in front of a boy who has come to see her.......

Mayank at the same time felt surprised and shocked.....

M: Samrat..... samrat aur tum.......

And he smiles......

N: Hai na kitni ajeeb baat......

M: Toh tum Samrat se milne ke liye tayaar ho gayin.......

N: Nahin.....meri mummy ne bulaaya tha usse.....mujhe pata hota toh main kabhi haan nahin kehti.....

M: Toh phir tumne mujhe bhi milne ke liye manaa kar diya hoga.......

N (blushed and downed her head and noded in NO): Nahin (very softly)

Mayank looked at her and smiled and felt relieved that atleast Nupur liked him.......

M: Toh Samrat ka kya hua.......

N (looked up and with a spark in her eyes): Usse khud shaadi nahin karni thi......usski mummy usse lekar aayi thi yahaan.......

Nupur stopped for a while and then spoke.......

N: Tumhein bhi aunty zabardasti toh nahin laayin hain........

Mayank looked at her, at her innocence.........and smiled.......

M: Kyun main apni marzi se nahin aa sakta.......

Nupur again downed her face and blushed......

Now they were more open to each other......they were njoying each others company......

M: Mujhe aaj bhi wo college ka pehla project yaad hai.........

N (cutting in between because Nupur will remain Nupur): Haan jismein main first aayi thi.......

M (again smiles at her childish excitement): Haan wahi.......usse submit karne ke liye jo bhaage the na......bas aaj bhi yaad hai mujhe kitne log takkar kha kar gire the.......

N (laughs): Haan.......aur Shukla sir ke paas pahunche the ek saath......

Mayank rested his arm on the bench and was looking at Nupur......at her smile.....as Nupur turned her face Mayank shifted his sight away from her.......

M: Accha ab bohot ho gayin college ki baatein......humein yahaan ek doosre ko samajhne ke liye bheja gaya hai.......toh tumhein kuch poochna hai mujhse.......

After a while......

N: Main shaadi ke baad job kar sakti hoon ?

M: Wo tum par depend karta hai......mujhe koi problem nahin hai.....par tumhaari jo bhi salary hogi usse mujhe koi matlab nahin hoga......

Nupur smiled at such a sweet answer.....he had no problem with her doing work after marriage also....

N: Tumhein toh kuch nahin poochna......

M: Mmm.......nahin........haan......ye toh bata do Shaadi karogi mujhse......

Nupur was amazed at such a question........

N: Are you proposing me ?

M: Rishta toh unofficially tay ho chuka hai......toh maine socha officially main tumse pooch loon......

Before Nupur could say anything else......Gunjan came......

G: Baat ho gayin ho toh andar chalein......sab intezaar kar rahe hain.......

And she puts her hand over Nupur's shoulders and she stands up......

G: Chalein......

The two people going from here were completely different.......they arrived in as strangers but were going from here as more familiar.......

Inside the house.......Mayank's mom made Nupur sit beside her......

MM: Tumhein humaara Mayank kaisa laga.......

Nupur's mom was worried as she feared this time Nupur hadn't created any trouble.....she wanted to know the answer......

NM: Mayank accha laga........

Mayank too was eager to know her answer......

Nupur was sitting there and she noded her face in YES......and said very softly "Haan"

Everyone smiled on hearing the answer......Mayank too.......

MM: Aur tujhe pasand hai Nupur........

M: Haan Maa.........

Fairly big Update......Please please comment karna ki kaisa laga.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
its superb..!!!
the talk in the garden was awesome..!!
cont soon..!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Daksha Lovely update dear

You described their meet very beautifully....loved it......

Wow both of them agreed ....can wait for their marriage

do cont soon..........

Luv
Nidzy~
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Posted: 15 years ago
woo...awesome update..
👏 👏 👏 Mayur convo vz nice...dey remembering der college days vz cute...ohh they both agreed 4 d marriage.. 😃 😳 do continue soon n thanx 4 d pm.

Kulsum
Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
cute mayur meeting
nice updt
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb daksha...
youve portrayed mayur very well..
loved the update...
thanx for the pm!!!
i noe it would be unfair to say continue soon but still,
please continue soon...(life is unfair, so am i!!! haha)
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb daksha........... nupur ne "haan" kardi...yippeeeeeeeeeeeeee mayur are gonna marry nowww😳 continue soon daksha can't wait longer for next update....😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update and garden scene was aussum.....loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey daksha superb meeting of mayur loved it do continue soon and thanks for pm

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