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Posted: 15 years ago
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The ring of alarm woke Nupur from her sleep.......she shifted to her side still half alseep and felt something warm..... . immediately she opened her eyes to see her husband, sleeping peacefully next to her.....on other days he would be the first one to wake up, but they had returned very late from the picnic last night.

She ruffled his hair and kissed his forehead, and smiled at him.... he was the best thing that has ever happened to her, no matter how unreasonable she was, he was always there.

And now she has promised herself to shower him with all the love and care he deseves "being her husband".........

She quickly got up, freshen up and went to kitchen to make bed tea for Mayank.

Few mins later she came back with the tea and started waking him up..... "Mayank, mayank utho......Mayank".....

Mayank shifted and slowly opened his eyes and smiled at his beautiful wife........" Nupur tum aaj itni jaldi uth gayi"....

She replied....."jaldi?.....Mayank, 7.30 baj rahe hain"......

"kya?'.....Mayank got up with a jerk......."7.30?..... itni der kaise ho gayi? aur aaj se to mujhe job bhi join karna hai, alarm nahi baja kya?"........

Nupur laughed and said....."Relax pati dev.........mujhe pata hai mein kamal ki chiz hun, par mera itna asar"..........."tum ye chai piyo aur fresh ho jao......tab tak mein tumhare kapde nikal deti hun aur breakfast ready kar deti hun......."

Mayank was astonished at her this act, his Nupur didnt like to work......he held her back as she was getting up, and said....."Nupur, tum thik to ho na, ye sab........."

"kyun Mr. Sharma, agar tum world ke best pati ho to, mujhe bhi world ki best patni banna padega na........" she replied with an amused smile.......but then got serious.....she held his hand and said........."Mayank, maa ke jaane ke baad main hamesha Gunjan ki badi di bani rahi........par tumhare saath wo nasamajh, ziddi, bachon-si Nupur banna mujhe acha lagta tha...... kyunki main jaanti thi, ki tum ho mera khyal rakhne......par in sab mein maine ye socha hi nahi, ki main tumhe kitna hurt kar rahi hun..........tumne hamesha mera saath

diya, meri saari baatein sooni........ aur ab main apne ache pati ki achi patni banna chahti hun........main hamare iss struggle mein tumhara saath dena chahti hun....... kyunki ab hum dono saath saath hai.......hai na?".......

Mayank looked on lovingly at her........he always knew that she was very sensible and just act around as kid with him, and thats y he always ignored it........he smiled and said......."by god Nupur....tum jab aisi baatein karti ho na, to mujhe SRK ki film ki herione kam ar uski mom zyada lagti ho......"

Nupur hit him .......and he ducked and said......"main jaanta hun ki tum mere saath ho........aur haan apne ko badalne ki tumhe zaroorat nahin......kyunki maine kaha tha na.....Nupur bahut khaas hai aur mujhe wo aise hi pasand hai........"

Nupur pulled his cheeks.....and said....."aur mujhe bhi wo sadu aur akdu ladka hi acha lagta hai.......ye jalebi ki tarah sweet Mayank nahi......."

They both laughed and then suddenly Mayank realised he is getting late......he got up from the bed and said......."aaj to main gaya, life mein pehli baar late ho jaunga......Nupur tum kitna bolti ho"........

Nupur was about to reply back .......but realised that he was pulling her leg, so she just shoved him in bathroom, and started making breakfast with a smile on her face.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ annie07...
beautiful yaarrr.....
luvd it......hope cv's use dis......HOPE!!!!!!!
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thanksssss 4 the nice tpic ..........thankssssss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Another lame attempt from moi. Just tried to write something to undo the last 2 weeks.....Feedback is welcome!

It had been a week since the whole baby fiasco had taken place. Although life had returned to some semblance of normalcy, Mayank and Nupur still felt far from normal. They were walking on egg-shells around each other, trying not to rock the boat any more than was required to sail through the day without storm.

Nupur hadn't yet come to terms with the fact that there had been another girl in Mayank's life. It bothered her that she was not his first love. Mayank tried to talk to her on several occasions, but the moment it seemed that he was going to bring up the subject of Ria, she turned away on some pretext or the other. Whatever little she knew about Mayank's relationship with Ria, she had discovered accidentally in college when she had seen the both of them together and had caught a few snippets of their dialogue. When Mayank had turned around and caught her staring, his face had crumpled in agony and regret. Nupur hadn't stuck around for any explanations. She had immersed herself in the more pressing issue of trying to find the baby's parents. What had followed was nothing short of a circus act as everybody ran around trying to do his/her bit to locate the parents. Luckily, it didn't take them long and now the baby was back where she belonged, safe and sound in her mother's arms. However, along with wonderful memories, she had left behind a lot of unanswered questions as well. And Nupur wasn't sure if she was ready for the answers just yet.

Nupur rose early this morning and stepped out to the balcony to get some fresh air. As she waited for the sun to rise, she had a sudden memory of Gunjan teasing her saying that she could sleep through an earthquake. Well, Nupur thought - that theory would have to wait to be proved since sleep had been nowhere in the vicinity for the past week. She let her mind drift when she felt a hand on her shoulder and turned around startled.

N: Mayank tum….itni jaldi uth gaye? Main chai bana deti hoon.

She stepped around him to leave, but he stopped her with a light touch on her arm. She felt her heartbeat quicken as she felt the resolve in his touch and knew why. There was no running away this time. Mayank's determined gaze told her that she was going to have to hear his side today.

M: Nupur, main janta hoon, pichle do hafton mein jo kuch bhi hua hai, usse tumhe bahut takleef hui hai. Par phir bhi, please ek baar meri puri baat sun to lo.

Nupur looked up at him and he saw the mixture of anger and pain in her eyes.

M: Nupur, Ria sirf meri dost thi. Uss waqt to main Samrat ko pasand bhi nahin karta tha. Mujhe hamesha lagta tha ki woh ladkiyon ki respect nahin karta hai. Isliye jab Ria uski girlfriend bani, tab maine uspar nazar rakhna thik samjha. Aur isi liye, jab usne mujhe bataya ki woh Sam ki date bankar college ke prom me jaa rahi hai, maine bhi jaane ka faisla kiya.

N: Iska matlab tum bhi Ria ko pasand karte the?

M: Nahin Nupur, uss tarah nahin. Woh sirf meri dost thi aur main dosti ka hi farz nibha raha tha.

N: Isse farz nibhana nahin kehte, interfere karna kehte hain.

M: Pata hain. Lekin, jab tum aur main dost the, tab main tumpar bhi to nazar rakhta tha. Especially jab woh Cheeruji chipkali ki tarah tumse chipka rahta tha.

N: Haan, lekin main to dost se kuch zyaada thi naa?

M: Haan. Par mujhe tab yeh kahaan pata tha? Anyhow, mujhe meri kahaani khatam karne do. Uske baad tum mera post-mortem kar lena.
To main keh raha tha ki iss tarah main bhi wahan prom nite pe pahunch gaya. Wahaan pahunch kar maine dekha ki Sam aur Ria dono bahut khush lag rahe the aur dance kar rahe the. Isse mujhe thodi thassalli hui aur main jaakar library mein baith gaya. Mujhe laga ki ab college aa gaya hoon, to thoda kaam kar leta hoon. Mujhe bahut pyaas lagi thi to maine shaayad 2-3 glasses pee lee.

N: Kya pee lee?

M: Punch, aur kya?

N: Hey bhagwan! Mayank, tumhe pata hai na ki aise functions pe normally drinks spiked hote hain.

M: Ab pata hai. Tab to main inexperienced tha na?

N: Inexperienced matlab?

M: Matlab, main kahaan roz roz parties jaata tha jo mujhe yeh sab pata hoga?

N: Haan, yeh baat bhi thik hai. Sadu Mayu aur parties?

Mayank was happy to see Nupur's spirit coming back…it had been a while since he had seen her smile.

M: Haan, bilkul thik. Main aur parties! Anyways, tumhe to pata hai ki mujhse alcohol tolerate nahin hoti. To maine socha ki better hoga ki main ghar laut jaoon. Bas nikal hi raha tha ki Ria mere paas aayi rote hue. Ussne mujhe bataya ki Sam aur usska jhagda hua tha aur who bahut upset thi. To maine socha ki is haalat mein usse akele chhodna thik nahin hoga. Isliye main usske paas baith gaya aur usse comfort karne ki koshish ki. Bas iske baad mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahin.
Jab tumne mujhe aur Ria ko baat karte dekha, tab main yehi jaanne ki koshish kar raha tha ki uss raat ko kya hua tha. Ria ne bataya ki uss raat kuch bhi nahin hua. Thodi der baat karne ke baad, main wahin par so gaya. Aur ussne mujhe ghar drop kar diya tha. Bas.
Agle hi din woh Sam ki wajah se college chhodke chali gayi.

Nupur felt a wave of relief as Mayank's words confirmed what her heart already knew.

N: Sachchi? Ria kabhi tumhare liye dost se zyaada nahin thi?
Mayank felt his eyes getting teary as he saw just how much pain Nupur had been through the past several days.

M: Nupur, meri zindagi mein maa ko chhodke, ek hi ladki ke liye jagah hai. Aur yeh tum bhi jaanti ho. Tumse milne ke pehle main pyar ka matlab bhi nahin janta tha. Tumne mujhe pyar karna sikhaaya. And my love is reserved only for you. Aur waise bhi, mera pyar itna sasta nahin hai jo mai use baanttha phiroon. Iski haqdar to sirf tum ho aur hamesha rahogi.
Nupur's heart overflowed with joy to hear Mayank say this. She went straight into his arms and buried her head in his chest. She let all the tension of the past week melt away as her tears flowed unrestrained and soaked Mayank's shirt. Mayank wrapped his arms around her and picked her up. He carried her into the bedroom and sat on the bed with Nupur's head in his lap. She looked up at him with swollen eyes.

M: Bas Nupur, ab rona band karo. Aur thodi der ke liye aankhen band karo. Kayi dinon se tum thik se soyi nahin ho.
Saying this, he bent down and planted a light kiss on her forehead.

M: I love you Nupur. Please never doubt that. I'm really sorry for not telling you about Ria earlier. This whole misunderstanding could have been avoided…..

Nupur looked into his eyes and gripped his hand as she silently reciprocated the same. He laid down beside her and wrapped his arms around her as they both drifted off to sleep.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow bful par cvs will gve funny bkgrnd music n the entire mood will be spoilt.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mayank and Nupur go for a movie....

The exams finally got over. The days had gone rather hectic. So much to study, so little time. Mayank sighed, it was the first time he was giving an exam without his mother's presence. His mother always knew how to take care of him. Say those cooing encouraging nothings that calmed him and gave him confidence. This year there was a phenomenon called Nupur Bhushan Sharma to deal with and she was an entirely new experience. She was one hell of a person and even more strange during exams. She did sit in one place and study till a certain point then she would walk around and start reading out loud, that was really irritating for him cause he liked sitting in one place and studying.

They had eventually made up their minds to drop joint studying during exams . Nupur had sat and read aloud and studied in kitchen, in bathroom even the backyard and Mayank had stayed in his study corner. After exams got over Nupur had been so excited that she had danced around the place and Mayank had called her a "cartoon". Since then Nupur had not talked to him. He had left early in the morning while she slept, she had warned him in advance not to wake her up the day after exams got over.She had planned to sleep atleast 12 hours…….

Mayank entered to find her sitting with a pen and paper and writing something with a lot of concentration. He went and sat next to her and saw her scribbling stuffs, on a closer look found her making a list of expenditures for the month. Oh he forgot it was the 30th and they had to calculate. On a closer look he saw that her list looked quite detailed and long.

He said- Bana liya list?

N-Haan
M-Good….kitney kharach hue?
N gave him an estimate…..

Mayank looked at her closely and observed her pouting, no sulking actually. He smiled and took out two pieces of paper from his pocket and said…Movie Tickets….

Nupur looked up in glee-Kya?
M- haan… Sharaukh khan ka naya movie hain na? usi ka…. Abhi leke aya hoon…chalo taiyar ho lo… matinee show hai…. Hum bahar lunch karengey…
N- bahar khaney ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.. meine lunch banaya hai….
M comes close to her and says in a joking yet gentle voice… tum kabse itna kanjoos ban gayi? Who toh mera department tha na?
N makes a dramatic hand gesture and says- jab se tumne mujhey kharacha calculate karney diya…..


Mayank and Nupur eat lunch and go out for the cinema. Nupur was extremely excited, finally a movie after marriage and that too with her khadoos husband who hated Shah Rukh Khan. She had to prove it to him that SRK movies weren't as bad as he thought. He just didn't have good enough company before, someone to open his eyes…. They go and settle comfortably in their soft seats, the lights dim and the movie commences in a few minutes….


Within 20 minutes Mayank gets really bored. He could not stand the over acting, the drama, the OTT dialogues.His wife's drama at home and life's drama were enough for him. The stunts looked pretty fake to him, he realized they were all inspired from English movies. The heroine was attractive but way younger than the hero. The comedy too seemed too slap stick for his taste. Mayank started munching the pop corns to keep himself busy. He wondered how Nupur could calmly sit and watch a movie but not study…..He leaned back on his adjustable seat and dozed off. He woke up after a poke on his arm and found Nupur looking at him in disbelief…

N- mayank tum so rahe the?
M adding with a yawn… haan…
N- Tum Shah rukh ki movie me so rahe the? As if that's an impossibility….
M- Hmmmm…
N- By God mayank tum kabhi bhi nahin sudhrogey….
M-mujhey achha nahin laga toh mein kya karoon?
N- itna romantic movie tumhey achha nahin laga? Khadoos the khadoos hi rahogey..
M- achha mein romantic nahin hoon ha? Aur yeh sab jo kar raha hai yeh romance hai? Tum ladkiyon ko toh bass aise stupid ideas hi romance lagta hai…
N- mayank mere Sharukh ko….

An old couple sitting next to Nupur give ugly stares…. They quiten up…Interval arrives and Nupur gets more popcorn and thrusts it at Mayank. Movie commences….

Mayank leans back on his seat and close his eyes. He doesn't sleep this time. A song plays in the movie, nice one, he liked it. He had heard Nupur huming the tune before. He imagines standing on the foot of hills, on the side of a pristine lake and the Shikaras(house boats) floating around. The day dream was probably inspired from the movie Kashmir ki Kali which was his mother's favourite. He dreamt of travellling on the Shikara, the water flapping as it moved forward, the beautiful scenery around, the cool chilly breeze not too chilly but cool enough to add a certain elation to the heart. But somewhere something was missing and he looked around and saw his wife… Nupur Bhushan Sharma was standing on the door and looking at him. She looked beautiful in the the traditional Kashmiri wear and her red rosy cheeks looked like ripe plums. Her innocent smile and dancing eyes made the natural beauty around even more appealing. He felt happy, really happy……

He opened his eyes to see Nupur leaning forward and absorbing the song with her eyes, ears and all her senses. When she goes back she would probably call up Gunjan and if Gunjan wasn't available would recite the details of the movie to him. He sat up straight with alarm. No !!!!! he just cannot let her enjoy that much, he would go mad if she started talking about SRK again….He decided to distract her…

Nupur was oblivious to her husband's thoughts, wrapped up as she was in the movie, but not that wrapped to not notice the change in his sitting position. She wondered if he would finally watch the movie…. Mayank sat up and looked at her, she wondered what was on his mind, probably another set of complaints as to why he chose this movie and not some critically acclaimed one where she could sleep….. But instead of saying something he just smiled and Nupur had to look at him, he looked into her eyes and winked and kissed her on her cheek!!!!!!!

Nupur was devastated.. what is he upto? An elderly couple was sitting next to them. Did they notice? She glared at him and he was still smirking.
N- yeh kya tha?
M- Romance..saying that Mayank took her hand in his and kissed it too….
N- Mayank chhodo… sabhi dekh lenge..chhodo…
M lets go of her hand…Nupur feels a little relaxed…but not for long…

Mayank starts playing footsie with her. He was slowly rubbing his feet on hers and it was tickling her. She squirmed a bit trying to suppress a giggle and moves herself towards the old man sitting next to her on the other side. The old man looks up at Nupur and smiles which Mayank doesn't like at all and pulls her back towards his side of the seat.

Nupur detaches herself from his grip and gives him another glare and adds in an angry tone..Mayank behave yourself….Tum hi toh kahete they ki PDA galat hai? Ab tum yeh kya kar rahe ho?

Mayank in a non chalant tone adds- humey kaun dekh raha hai? Sabhi toh movie ka dhishoom dhishoom me interested hai.. aur mein bhi apne wife ke saath dhishoom dhishoom kar raha hoon…saying that he tries to tickle her….
N- Mayank stop it…. Bahut ho gaya….
M with a chastisised look says - okkk….

Mayank leaves her alone and returns to sleeping. Nupur looks at him for some time and wonders if he went to sleep again. Movie takes a really absurd turn and the whole hall starts laughing irrespective of the seriousness of the scene.. Nupur wakes up Mayank…

Mayank- kya?

Nupur- Ghar chalo..
M- kyun?
N- aise hi….mujhey apney saath sotey hue log pasand nahin hai..ghar jaake sona..

M sits up alert.- Ok Ok sorry.. ab movie dekhunga…seriously dekhunga….He looks at the screen for some time and says in a false interested tone….
waah kya scene hai…. Kya acting…. Kitnee gehraii hai actor ke anhon me..scene kitna tragic hai…itnee tragedy meine apne poori life me nahin dekhi…aankhone me aason aagaye…he dramatically wipes his eyes… the moisture there was due to the nap not tears…

N looks at his pseudo serious face and bursts out laughing…By god Mayank mazak mat karo…mujhey pata hai yeh scene bura hai… so stop acting fake….

Mayank smiles too and adds- Wow.. finally tumney sach maana… chalo kuchh toh achha hua….
N- now taking his hand and in a playful tone adds….haan hua….atleast tum normal logon ke tarah apne wife ko cinema hall me tang toh kiye?

Mayank- kya?????????
N- smiles slyly and looks away…
M realizes he had yet again underestimated his wife….

The movie continues, Mayank and Nupur both continue laughing…They laugh and joke and play footsie and eventually get more into each other than the movie.

The movie ends and they are still laughing when the couple next to them get up to leave. Mayank and Nupur make way for them and they give a most ugly look to them. The woman reach the aisle and says- Aagar movie dekhna hi nahin that toh aatey kyun ho? She turns to her husband and adds in a grumpy voice-Doosron ko disturb kartey hai…battameez log saarey… and walks away with her husband trailing behind her….

Mayank and Nupur look at each other and break out in a guffaw. They were the last to leave the hall…….
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Posted: 15 years ago
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After all the hungama & confusing about the baby' Nupur came to know about Ria & Mayank....she was very upset & left from there

Mayank was searching for Nupur everywhere in the college library, canteen everywhere he saw Gunjan

M-Gunjan Nupur kaha hai

G-pata nai

M-pata nai matlab tumhare saath hi thi na

G-Di ghar chali gayi shayad

M-acha theek hai

He quickly left for home

He opened the door it was all dark inside he went & switched on the lights 'Nupur...... 'Nupur kaha ho tum

She was not there......

M-Yaha bhi nahi hai'Nupur tum kaha ho''he was worried


Nupur......though she acted like a fighter in front of everyone deep inside she was really hurt not because she didn't trust Mayank she had full faith in him but because he hid his past from her

She didn't mind Riya being Mayank's friend in the past but she was hurt that Mayank didn't think it was important for him to share about his past with her''.......she sat there on a bench lost in thoughts '.

It was 9-00 still Nupur didn't return Mayank was waiting for her impatiently he thought maybe she went to Gunjan's house he called Gunjan

M-Nupur aayi kya waha

G-nai Jiju Di tou yaha nai aayi

M-phir kaha gayi hogi

G-wo di thoda disturbed thi na tou shayad kahi gayi hogi

M-hmm'

G- don't worry jeeju mai di se baat karungi

M-Nahi gunjan'iss baar nai mai khud uss se baat karunga akele'......

G-theek hai'bye

M-bye''he kept the phone

He knew Nupur was maha upset but where was she 'was she alright''he was tensed he felt guilty as he was responsible for what Nupur was going through

He was tensed he was missing her there was never a day when she was out for so long without him'..she was always there when he used to come home exhausted after the college work "Mayank aa gaye tum" she would say like a perfect wife waiting for her husband'.& hug him'that one hug would refresh him'the warmth in her hug vanished all the stress he had''the bliss he felt in her hug made him feel complete''

Thunder lightening brought him back from his thoughts he looked outside it was raining

Nupur was walking on the road'.........when suddenly it started raining'.......

She had tears in her eyes which slowly rolled down her cheeks'......

Rains she loved rains & she had shared some most memorable moments with Mayank in rain but today she was loving it coz it didnt show her tears...........

Mayank on the other hand was hell scared where was she it was raining so heavily was she alright

M-itni barish ho rahi hai 'mai kaha dhundu use..........

The guesthouse door was open he was pacing continuously looking outside when he saw Nupur walking

Nupur was walking she didn't observe when she passed the outhouse & walked ahead

M-Nupur kaha jaa rahi hai'.he ran out after her in the rain

Nupur 'Nupur'.he called out but she was lost in her own thoughts...........

Nupur he finally shouted which made her stop in her tracks & she turned

He went & hugged her...........

M-Kaha thi tum Nupur'college se tou tabhi nikal gayi thi na '.. mai kitna pareshan ho gaya tha ''

Kyu Mayank'..she asked'.leaving him shocked he broke the hug

M-Kyu ??? kyu ka kya matlab I was scared for you he said looking into her eyes

Though it was raining heavily Mayank could make out her tears rolling down her cheeks he knew she was disturbed because of this whole baby & Ria issue

M-Nupur mai jaanta hu tum Ria ko lekar upset ho but believe me Nupur mere aur Ria ke beech aisa kuch nai hai..............he said holding her by her shoulders

N-Mai jaanti hoon Mayank dukh iss baat ka hai ki tumne mujhe apne past ke bare mein kuch bataya nai meri tumhari life mein kya inti bhi importance nai hai ke tum apni life ke bare mein mujh se share karo bolo Mayank bolo'.kya importance hai meri tumhaari life mein

she said cutting between words the rain water was making it difficult for her to speak

Mayank stood silent wondering what was she asking........how important she was???she is his life.................'she jerked away his hand from her shoulder & walked ahead.............

Jo hawa ka jhoka ho wo tum ho..... she stopped......

Jo khushboo se mehka ho wo tum ho.....

Hai chamka sa aasman mein koi ...

Wo tara nahi ...bas tum ho......

Tum meri dhadkan ho Nupur '

Meri zindagi........ mera pyaar ho...........tum meri himmat ho'.har subha jab mein aankhein kholta hu tumhe apne paas paa kar mere dil ko sukoon milta hai....
By this time Nupur had tears in her eyes.....

tum meri saans ho Nupur Mai tumhare bina mar jaunga
Tum pooch rahi ho tum mere liye kya ho....

N-Mayank'

M-tum aisa sooch bhi kaise sakti ho ki tum mere liye important nahi ho....mera koi past tha hi nai Ria tou meri achi dost bhi nai thi mere zindagi mein sirf ek hi ladki thi.. hai' aur rahegi aur wo tum ho Nupur'.

You are my best friend 'my love...........my wife .......my life...........

his eyes were watery as he said this

what he said touched her heart she felt bad for over-reacting

M-I'm sorry Nupur ''He took her hand in his.............I never wanted to hurt you....plz mujhe maaf kardo...........I should have told you

she could see the sincerity in his eyes she had complete trust on him he could never break her trust'..

N-nai Mayank tumhe sorry bolne ki zaroorat nai hai I trust you mai hi zyada over-react kar gayi mai'..she said with tears in her eyes

M-tum meri patni ho tumhe haq hai mujh par naraz hone ka mere liye possessive hone ka'..magar mai tumhare aankh mein yeh ansoo nai dekh sakta'.he said looking into her eyes'.

Nupur didnt wanted him to know that she was crying as she knew it woud hurt him..she smiled & said'.mai kaha ro rahi hu yeh tou baarish ka paani hai...'.

M-Nupur tumhare aansu aur paani mein mujhe fark pata hai'..he said rubbing off her tears'.

He cupped her face & brought his face close to hers Nupur closed her eyes feeling the raindrops on her face he leaned closer & kissed her forehead'.

Ab ghar chalein'..he wrapped his arm around her shoulder & she felt safe in his embrace both went back home''.

As they entered

Achooo'!!! Mayank sneezed

M-Dekha tumhari waje se mujhe thand lag gayi

N-Kya??? Meri waja se maine kya kiya ????

M-kya zurat thi tumhe itni raat ko bahar Barish mein bheegne ki

N-Tumhari waja se'.Hawww'..haaa'Achooo''

M- lo khud bhi shuru ha gayi

N-Maya'........Achoo'.

Mayank brings a towel and gives it to her

M-apni bak bak bandh karo aur baal pooch

N- mai bak bak kar rahi thi

M-jo bhi ho'he goes from there

N-Isse tou mai Achoo'.

Mayank went to the kitchen to make adrak wali chai for her

N-aane dou usse abhi baata ti hu......

Mayank made the tea'.& placed it infront of her

M-Biwi aap ke liye adrak wali chai'

Nupur was very happy

N-wah patidev aapne mere liye adrak waali chai banayi'.

M-waise tou mai world ki best coffee banata hu '.chai maine first time banayi hai'ab yeh melodrama band karo aur chai pi lo tumhe thad lag jaayegi'.he said sitting on the bed beside her .............

As Nupur was drinking the tea Mayank sneezed again'.

N-tum bhi na Mayank mujhe tou towel de diya par apne baal nai sukhaye'.

She took the towel & sat on her knees on the bed behind him & started drying his hair

N-Thanks Mayank

M-kis liye

N-for everything tum na world ke best pati ho'..she said ruffling his hair.....

M-acha... tum tou aise keh rahi ho jaise tumhare bohot saare pathi hai'...........

N-Mayank tum'.she said pinching him

M-Ouch!!!!!!...kya Nupur mai tou mazak kar raha tha'.he said making a face'

N-mujhe pata hai sweetu'. she wrapped her arms around his neck from behind....& gave a soft peck on his cheek.....


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Posted: 15 years ago
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The baby's parents were found and she was safely home......the entire fiasco has ended in a joke.

Life was getting back to normal for all, except Mayank and Nupur. Irrelevant of the way he behaved during the entire fiasco, Mayank was extremely hurt that Nupur didnt trust him.Apart from this, there were other things annoying him.His self respect and values his mother ingrained in him, were most important to him, and he realised thet somewhere , he just lost his true self with the gang. He acted the way he wudnt have and mostly forgot his responsibilities.

Nupur, on the other hand was feeling extremely guilty. She knew she has crossed all her limits this time, and acted like a hitler with her husband. Maybe the whole Bauji and Gunjna thing has made her less trusting about people in her life, but still that was no excuse. She knew Mayank was hurt ,and she didnt know what to do.Usually they fought and shouted at each other, and then things would be ok, but now Mayank wasnt responding at all.

She sat looking at him studying. He had woken up early and made coffee for her as a routine and then went back to his books. As she sipped world's best coffee, she tried thinking of ways to get her husband come around.Suddenly she got up with a smile, and went to freshen up. She came out of the bathroom, with her wet hair tied in a towel.
She stood very close to Mayank and started drying her hair, making sure that a few drops fall on him. She knew that would irritate him, but Mayank just got up and said " main nahane jaa raha hoon".....
Nupur looked at his retreating back, but she hadnt given up yet. She will make him angry so that he can vent out his frustration.
She took out several dresses of hers and dumped them on the bed. she also threw her wet towel carelessly on the bed, as she knew that her cleanliness freak husband, didnt like mess, especially on bed.

Mayank came out of the bathroom, all dressed and saw the mess on bed, while Nupur waited for an outburst.But he just retrieved his mobile from the mess and turned to walk out of the door.
Nupur was about to call out to him, when he turned back and came. She started smiling, which was soon replaced by a frown when he said "Nupur, mujhe library mein kaam hai, isiliye main jaldi jaa raha hoon. Tumhe time lagega tum baad mein aa jana, aur haan, maine breakfast bana diya tha, kar lena"...........

Nupur just kept looking as he went out of the door, she knew it was all her fault. She has hurt him and badly. Sadly she cleaned the house and went to college.

She didnt see Mayank the wholde day, as he was busy with work, or maybe avoiding her. She didnt know. She was hurt, upset and angry at herself for doing this to the person who loved her most in this world.

Gunjan saw her sullen face , and asked whats wrong. She was about to tell, but then just shook her head and walked away. She had decided, that from now onwards, everything between her and Mayank, will be their personal matter.

She came back home, all dejected and was thinking what to cook, when an idea struck her. Quickly she dialed a number and waited impatiently while the person at the other end, take the call.

"hello, Nupur"......came a motherly voice........"maa, kaisi hain aap"......Nupur asked Mayank's momand now hers too......"main to thik hun, aur tum.....? Mayu zyada pareshan to nahi karta na, tum uski shikayat mujhe kar sakti ho....."---Shilpa Sharma adoringly told her lovely daughter in law.
Nupur bit her lips to stop from crying and said "Nahin maa, Mayank nahin, main use pareshan karti hun, mujhe aap se uski favorite karele ki sabzi ki recipe puchni thi".....
Shilpa smiled and told her the recipe. After noting down the recipe and a little more teasing from her Maa, Nupur kept the phone down, and got on with work.

Mayank came back, pretty late at night, he had been studying in library lately. He knew he has been avoiding Nupur, but he needed time, to let his wounds heal.He walked in to see, his wife, watching something on TV. She looked up as he walked in, and quickly switched off the TV, which surprised him, but he kept quiet."Mayank, tum aa gaye,jaldi se fresh ho jao , main khana laga deti hun" Nupur happily told him, to which he replied with a nod.

They sat down for dinner, and Mayank was suprised to see karela. He took a bite, and immediately knew, whose recipe it was. He turned to Nupur and asked......"tumne maa se baat ki thi?" She replied "haan, unse ye recipe li, tumhe pasand hai na? kaisi hai"He smiled a bit, but then said " thik hai" and resumed eating quietly. Nupur was totally shaken, she didnt knw what to do as they ate in silence.

Later on Nupur was clearing the table,while Mayank did dishes in kitchen. It was their everyday ritual, he helped her in everyway in household work. He was the best husband any girl can ask for, and it was killing her to think that she treated him so badly.She was lost in her thoughts and didnt realsie where she is walking, as the corner of the table scraped her arm. "ouch" she shouted......and Mayank came running from the kitchen. ......"kya hua Nupur"..........he took her hand in his and scolded her......"tum koi kaam dekh ke nahi kar sakti kya?".........Tears welled up in her eyes, not coz of pain, but coz of the anguish she felt on herself.........he looked at her and asked as he blowed on it......"dard ho raha hai kya, tum ruko main first-aid box lata hun".......

But she hugged him, before he turned and said " i m sorry Mayank, please mujhe maaf kar do, i m really sorry".........He held her back, the distant look was back in his eyes...he left her and went to get the first aid box. He made her sit down and started cleaning her wound.
She said " Mayank, kya tum mujhse baat nahi karoge, i m sorry , main jaanti hun meri galti...........""Nahi Nupur" he cut her off......."galti to meri hai,main tumhare layak hi nahin hun, tumhare Bauji sahi the"......

Nupur starts off......." nahi May..........."

But he again cuts her off and said " Nupur, jab tumhe hi mujhpe trust nahi hai to , Bauji kaise karenge. "

Nupur looked at him and said ......"Mayank aisa nahi hai, wo halat hi kuch aise the, main jaanti hun ki main galat thi, par tumhe bhi to ek baar laga ki tumne galti ki hai"....

Mayank looked at her and said "nahin, mujhe aisa nahin laga. holi wali baat par mujhe kuch yaad nahin tha, main jaanta tha ki maine aisa kuch galat nahi kiya hoga, par phir bhi anjane mein bhi main tumhe dhoka nahin dena chahta tha, isiliye main chup raha. par mujhe Uday ki baat par bhi yakeen nahi tha. Aur jahan baat hai Riya ki, to tab tum meri zindagi mein nahin thi, aur sach kahun to main khud bhi us baat ko bhul chuka tha, jab Riya ko dekha tab yaad ayaa. Maine har baat clear ki, taki hamare beech koi misunderstanding na ho, par shayad main tumhara Raj nahin ban paya"...........

Nupur looked distressed, she held his hands, and said......." please Mayank, main jaanti hun, maine galat kiya, par hamari shaadi ke baat jo bhi Bauji aur Gunjan ke saath hua, usse mujhe dar lagne laga, apno ko kho dene ka aur mujhe Raj nahi chahiye, sirf aur sirf Mayank, kyunki wo mere liye perfect hai.........."

Mayanak held her hand tightly and said " Main tumhe chod ke kahin nahin jaunga Nupur, meri mein tumhare aur Maa ke siwa hai hi kaun"............

To this Nupur smiled and said......." I m sory Mayank " and then thinking something added, " dil se sorry, duniya mein jitne sorry hain, saare sorry".........

He smiled widely and took her in his arms, and said " I love u Nupur"..............and she just smiled blissfully.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
CVs---- these are the kind of scenes we want !!!
a-little-hope thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Nidzy, Annie..... awesome OS...
CVs... please pick any one of the above scenes.... we want this for MN as soon as the baby track ends... one emotional scene that would clear their minds from all this mess that you have created in MN life...

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