Potential Future MAYUR Scenes-Ideas,OS & Songs

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Dear MN fans ,
We love mayur so much and we seem to be missing them awful lot. And our emotions lead us to write some of the most wonderful future scenes for Mayur. Unfortunately they are spread every where in the forum and FF section. This is our sincere effort to consolidate all the wonderful ideas the young and brilliant writers can pen down. This will help CVs to reach out to the ideas and understandings of what viewers intend to see in their favorite MN track. Lets be positive and get working .😊

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Since many of us feel that we need to encourage discussion on MN scenes we are changing this thread to discussion thread. Please put forward your opinions , not just awesome or great idea...
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This thread is for Future MAYUR Scenes only

Ideas, OS and Short scenes all are welcome
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  • Think scenes with a future and career in mind involving everyday college and life events.
Please don't tell me I am wasting my time or MJHT is lost. May be so for you. If you want to critique use the other thread for it posted by Mods. You can help us by posting more relevant scenes. You can encourage by liking the scenes. We are working at multiple levels to bring back what has been lost or seem to have been misplaced.Feel free to PM us if you have any questions.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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"It was quite an exhausting day. What happened to my life? Why am I being tested? I need to take a bath."
Nupur went in to the bath room to take a shower and came back.Her hair little wet and she wore her white pajamas. She started to ponder what had happened. Everything was happening so fast....

She sat down in the balcony chair...drying her hair. "Last two days were a roller coaster." she said to her self. The towel's thread got stuck in the chain...she gently untangled the towel from the chain. Her hand ran over the chain. Her lips smiled. "I love you Mayank." she said. She remembered how she ran after the bus. She shook her head in disbelief. She remembered the confession and the hug. Her cheeks turned pink. "tum itna blush kyoun kar rahi ho Nupur" she thought she heard his voice."Mein.. Mein kahaan blush kar rahin hoon Mayank" she answered turning her head. There was no one. She remembers him pulling her cheeks ...her hands ran over her cheeks. She closed her eyes. She remembered him whispering I love you Nupur. The memories started gushing in...The game, the dance, the hug and the kiss. She folded her knees and hugged them . She was lost. The time they spent in the barn left her warm and beautiful feelings.

Suddenly there was pang of pain and despair that stirred inside her belly. "How can I tell you how much I miss you." she thought. "Not even a minute has passed I haven't thought about you. How I wish we are together and me safe in your arms. How I wish you are here so that you can help me deal with the new problem in my life. You are my friend, my lover and my strength. I want to tell you everything that is going on....part of me knows that you don't approve...but I don't know what to do either...." she muttered to self. Her mind went over the plan one more time. "What am I doing? Is this right?" she questioned herself. "What would you say and do , if you were here? Mayank. I don't know what hurts more, that you are not here or that I didn't tell you that Bui sent Babloo for me. And he is has our life complicated."

She stated pacing, fiddling with her fingers. She stubbed her self against the chair and tripped. She extended her arm , held on the chair railing and managed not to fall..The memories rushed again. "Agar tum hote kabhi mujhe girne nahin dete Mayank." Eyes welled up and tears started rolling.

Phone rang…Nupur startled..This late she thought…She was walked up slowly picked up the phone. "Hello" she heard familiar voice . Now the tears started to compete to come out and her voice choked. "Hmm…" she said. "Ro rahin ho…." he asked, noticing the melancholy and she didn't jump and say Hi Mayank. "Nahin…" she barely spoke….He sat up straight. "Kya hua..?" His eyes are now worried and pain crept up. She didn't answer…"Nupur" he said Softly "Kya hua…Miss kar rahin thi" "Hmm.." she answered again, ready to break down. "I miss you too Nupur. Lekin koi aur baat hain tumhe pareshaan kar rahin hain. Hain na Nupur." he asked. She smiled. Wiping her tears "tumhe kaise pataa ?" "Koi baat tumhe pareshhan karein mujhe na pataa ho aisa ho hi nahin sakta. Hain na Nupur" He answered looking at the picture she gave him and touching her face. She smiled "Pataa hain". Bataao kya hua he asked again.

She started talking and explained everything to him, including the plan. He was listening to her intently and asked couple of questions here and there. He was not going to rush her or jump at her. "Mujhe usske poori baat sunne hain ." he thought to himself. Nupur on the other hand felt so relieved telling him everything. "Mayank.." She called out.."Haan Nupur…" he said. "Gusse mein ho?" She asked. "Nahin Nupur.I understand. But why this elaborate plan . Tum Complicate kyoun kar rahin ho. Tum use jaante tak nahin ho. Jao aur usse baat karo. Shayad who Samajh jaayein. Koi bhi ladka zabbardasti se koi ladki ko shaadi nahin karna chahega . Mujhe jhoot bilkul pasand nahin hain Nupur aur yeh baat tim jaante ho. Aur Zaraa Socho issme woh babloo ki kya galti hain." He answered. "Par Bui Mayank." She sounded scared. "Haan Bui ko toh Pataa chal jayega. Ab saari duniya ko pataa hain Nupur , toh Bui Ko toh bataana hi padega. Aur bahetaar yahin hoga ki who tumse pehale sune koi aur se nahin. Lekin woh hum baad mein dekhenge." He explained patiently. "Mein tumhaare saath hoon Nupur har kadam mein. Bui ke paas hum donon jaayenge. Tumhe akela nahin karne doonga Nupur. Mein baat karoonga Bui aur Bauji se. Who donon tumse bohot pyaar karte hain Nupur , tumhaari bhalayi chahatein hain. Humein Usse samjhna chaheye Nupur." Nupur smiled " tum kitne acche ho mayank, tum logon ko kitne acche samajhte ho. Mein Bohot pareshaan thi, leking ab nahin. Tum jo ho mere saath."

"Ab haso. Mujhe tumhaari smile dekhni hain." he said smilingly. "Tum Phone pe dekh bhi sakte ho Mayank." She teased him. "Tumhe dekhne ke liye mujhe bas apni ankhein band karni hain Nupur." He said longingly. That struck a chord. "I love you Mayank" she said. "I love you too Nupur. Ab so jaao. Good night." He said his smile widened. "Good night Mayank". She turned in for the night and slept peacefully knowing her love is always by her side even though it is miles away physically. She never felt so safe and comfortable ever before that love will give her strength to deal with the problems that will come her way.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nupur was sleeping ,dreams were dominating her subconscious. She is probably having a pleasant dream and it resulted in a faint smile lingering her lips. Phone rang in the house. No one picked up as it is early, other than Gunjan no one is up , and she already is out with Samrat. Phone rang again, this time Dia got irritated and picked up the phone. "Hello?"she said half asleep."Sorry Dia, I had to wake you up" said Mayank apologetically. "No problem Mayank. Bataao kya baat hain." She said, fully waking up. Mayank was talking on the other side and Dia's lips turned into wide grin and she said "Done."excitedly. "Thank you Dia." said Mayank happily. His palms rested in each other and thumb together. His face is gleaming with huge smile and his eyes are full of love and naughtiness.

A soft breeze swept across Nupur's face displacing her hair. She gently opened her eyes. One could see eyes full of dreams and her lips proudly displayed her content. She woke up and went to the bathroom. She came out wiping her face and suddenly something caught her eye. There a Red rose on the bed with a note with it. She ran to pick it. "Good Morning Miss Morena. Your smiles gave away that you dreamt something pleasant. Care to share?" Her face lit up. "Mayank.." she said. Her eyes looked everywhere. She couldn't find him anywhere. "May be Dia was trying to cheer me up." she thought to herself. Her heart kept on telling her it was Mayank. Her mind refuted.

She picked up a white dress inadvertently, maybe not. Once she finished her bath she dried her hair and loosely combed her hair leaving it open. A pair of eyes seems to admire and adore her every move. She looked in the direction the familiar gaze. Still she didn't find anyone.She shook her head. "Nupur paagal mat ban. Mayank Bangalore mein hain. Yahaan nahin."

She walked down stairs. She saw two roses crossed with a tray of coffee pot and couple cups. And a note with it. "World key sab se best coffee, world ki sab se khubsoorat ladki ke liye."? Now she is sure?"Mayank tang mat karo . Baahar aao." She looked everywhere in kitchen, dining room including cupboards. She didn't see him. "Woh Baccha thodi na hain Nupur jo table ke neeche chupega. Tera dimaag bhi na Nupur, daat dene padegi?" She poured coffee; she didn't feel like drinking alone. She went to make sandwich. Her mind went back, the very first time Mayank came to rehearse with me. The night on the terrace. She tore her dress and Mayank's respect and love for her. Her eyes welling up, tears escaped her lashes. She remembered how she felt that night, the very first time re realized she is in love. She looked at the Roses and remembered the rehearsal day he brought her Roses the first time. She remembered how gently he told her she is the only girl in his life. She remembered how she couldn't resist hugging him on the stage. The very first time he heard him say "Haan main tum se pyaar kartaa houn." She remembered her heart singing thousand violins.

She was so lost in her past...it was late by the time she realized the sandwich was burning. Hurriedly she tried to pull it?and she burnt her hand?"Ouch?"she cried?.Suddenly a person ran towards her he held her hand and started blowing ?"Dhyaan se kaam karna chahiye na Nupur . Ab dekho? "Said the voice. Her eyes widened. "Mayank..." She said with disbelief. "Haan Mayank .kahaan kho jaati ho tum Nupur Dekho haath jalgaya na. Takleef ho rahin hain?."His voice had mixture of anger, love , concern and utmost care in it. As he continued ti blow her lips smiled gladly .her left hand touched his face gently just to make sure she is not dreaming again and it is indeed Mayank. He stopped blowing and lifted his head. His hand covered her hand on his face. Her eyes now are showering tears?a soft sob let out from her. Mayank she said. His eyes looked at her?there was immense love and pain in them and she got lost again. Suddenly both remembered that they have been away from each other. It wasn't clear whether he pulled her or she rushed, but they hugged each other tightly never to let go. His arms were wound around her back and hers around his neck"I missed you"both said at the same time both chuckled "I Love you." Both said at the same time. And then both were quite .he tried to pull away from hug?she didn't let go"nahin" she said like a small girl"Mujhe yahin rehnaa hain. aisse hi rehnaa hain." She insisted. "Mujhe tumhaari smile dekkhne hain Nupur." he said softly.. He pulled her away... saw her tears and wiped them gently"Ab haso." "nahin.." she said stubbornly "Are you sure " he enquired . " Haan" answered Nupur "Aankhein band karo"She opened her eyes widely he ran his left palm over her eyes, closing them gently. After few seconds.."ab kholo.." he said .she opened her eyes .There are bunch of roses , chocolates and a card in his hands.Her face was beamed and her lips widely grinning .She took them "mere liye." He nodded."Tumhaara raj hoon toh karnaa padega na Nupur"he answered. "Padhoon ."She asked showing card.. "Haan padho"

"Tumne Likkha.." she asked "Nupur nahin Kissi aur ka hain, Mujhe accha laga" he answered.

Her eyes read through

EE Cummings - I carry your heart

I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart)

I am never without it (anywhere
I go you go, my dear; and whatever is done
By only me is your doing, my darling)
I fear no fate (for you are my fate, my sweet)
I want no world (for beautiful you are my world, my true)
And it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
And whatever a sun will always sing is you
Here is the deepest secret nobody knows
Here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
And the sky of the sky of a tree called life;
Which grows higher than soul can hope or mind can hide
And this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
I carry your heart (I carry it in my heart)

She lifted her eyes.they were showering him with so much Love He couldn't resist, he pulled her in to a hug. She Hugged him back so tightly..She muttered "Mein ne kahaa tha na . Yahi theek hain.." He chuckled"Agar mera bas chale toh tumhe khud se alag kabhi nahin hone deta Nupur ." He answered. She sighed and rested on his shoulder. A strange peace and happiness enveloped both of them . Time stood still to enjoy the wonderful sight of a rare beauty of young love. So pure, so passionate and so endearing. Time cursed itself"Am I this cruel that I separated them" It said "Love I bow down to thee. And may god bless these because they are one of a kind."

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I wish we get to see something like this in flashback because there's no doubt that barn scene was very nicely done but, in my opinion it lacked a proper ending....



He slowly kisses her. It was their first kiss and as magical as it was for both of them it also had a sadness to it. He was extremely close to her. She had become a part of him. And a sudden flash of reality that this closeness will become miles of distance tomorrow morning was making him uncomfortable. As much as he wanted to not let go of the moment he pulls back and sits with his back facing her. She is surprised at him but immediately understands the reason for his discomfort. She sits up and rests her head on his back.

N – Kya hua mayank?

Mayank avoiding looking at her does not reply as he couldn't speak a word. He was chocked up. Nupur notices a tear from the corner of his eye. She holds her tear back and smiles.

N- "Mayank Sharma ki aankhon mein maine sirf do baar aansoon dekhe hain. "

She takes a pause hoping he would look at her. But he doesn't so she continues.

" Ek baar tab jab tumhe mujhe paane ki khushi thi aur ek baar aaj jab tumhe mujhe khone ka darr hai"

Mayank finally looks at her. His eyes are filled with tears. He notices how hard she was trying to control her emotions and act strong for him. He could feel her pain and his own pain was getting unbearable for him. He thought to himself. " if there was anything in the world I could give up to make things right I will give up and be with her forever ."

He breaks his silence as he knew she was equally heartbroken and his looking shattered is causing her more pain. He holds her hand. Looks into her eyes and says –

" Nupur main nahi jaanta aage kya hone waala hai, main nahi jaanta ki hamari kismat mein kya likha hai par main ye zaroor jaanta hoon ki main tumse itna pyaar karta hoon ki koi bhi problem ya circumstance ho tum mere jitne kareeb is samay ho utne hi kareeb hamesha rahogi. Ye ehsaas kabhi door nahi hoga. "

He smiles and continues –

" Tumhari woh saari filmy, nonstop baatein mujhe wahan bhi padte hue waise hi distract karengi."

He gives her a naughty smile. She laughs and replies –

" Aur tum mujhe gusse se kahoge - nupur bahot ho gaya ab thodi der chup baitho mujhe padne do"

Mayank's smile fades and suddenly he feels something breaking in him. Unable to control his tears any longer he takes nupur in his arms and holds her tightly. She who has been acting strong till now holds him back and starts crying like a baby. They both just tighten their grip not wanting to let go of the other. After some time she moves her head slowly from his shoulder and burries it in his chest. She still couldn't stop crying. He hates himself for doing this to her. He hates himself for being so helpless and for the first time he hates god for doing this to both of them. After hours of crying she finally falls asleep in his arms. He noticing that sits back slowly and rests her head on his lap very carefully making sure he doesn't wake her. He was happy that she slept as her crying was killing him. He wipes off the tears still resting on her cheeks. Then slowly moves his finger through her hair. He wanted to memorize the feel of touching her hair, her skin so he could feel her presence even when she'll not be around him. It was as if he was gathering all the memories he could that would help him survive there without her.
He looks at her and questions himself – " How will I live without you?"

She was holding his hand tightly even while sleeping. He notices it and says in a very low tone – " aaj neend mein jis haath ko tum chodna nahi chahti who subah tumhare uthte hi tumhe chodna hoga. Aur main woh dard tumhari aankhon mein dekh nahi paunga."

He continues –

" I promise you nupur main jaldi wapis aaunga. Pehle main sirf ma ke liye life mein kuch banna chahta tha ab mere liye woh sab achieve karna aur bhi zyada zaroori ho gaya hai……tumhare liye, hamare liye"

And he keeps looking at her all night praying and wishing for them to be back together soon.
Edited by muskan19 - 15 years ago
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Mayank & Nupur - The Rain

It was their first weekend apart, Nupur was missing him, she was hating every moment of being away from him. she thought of the irony of it all, when they were together they hardly spent enough time together and they were always fighting. Now when they were closer in their hearts they were forced to be apart..She looked out of the window, it was raining. She smiled lightly, she loved the rain, she always did, but now, she loved it even more as it reminded her of the times she really enjoyed herself in the rain.. with Mayank. The sadu akdu ladka had danced in the rain with her on valentine's night..she thought of this and smiled, how could I have not known then?? Then she thought of the day they had confessed to each other, he had walked her home, and it had rained that day..she had run for cover then, while he got wet. Then they had played in the rain. She thought of the last day he was in Mumbai, they had been caught in heavy rains then as well. She smiled again, then a tear lurked around her eyes, she blinked it away...she couldnt help it, she was missing him. She felt like something melancholy had taken over her heart..She decided to get wet in the rain, that always made her feel better. She walked up to the terrace...she dint run into the rain like she usually did, she stood along the side wall, again.. watching the rain.. The terrace, also brought her memories of the one person she missed the most...The day she had felt something like love for him...the day he made the world's best coffee..She thought of Uday bhaiyya's birthday, she had gotten ready especially for him and she smiled thinking how she was unable to say I love you to him...They were together with each other and she couldnt say it..But now....She said to the rain...I love you Mayank...!
I love you too Nupur ! Her heart turned into a mangled mess as she tried to believe her ears, she turned around in shock and surprise as she saw him standing there watching her. She was rooted to her spot, he walked forward...and hugged her..! I missed you Nupur , she just held on to him, the elusive tear threatening to make way to to her flushed cheeks. He pulled her into the rain....they stood there holding hands and enjoying the rain as it cleansed their hearts off all the unhappiness they had felt during the week they had been away from each other.

After which they talked about what transpired in their lives in the week away from each other, the babloo, the plan, the project, the poem..but these were mere words, their happiness was in being with each other ..sitting side by side knowing that they were meant to be.

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FUTURE SCENE by ANNIE07
As classes got over for the day..........Nupur walked towards library........she went there everyday......not to study.......nah, but to feel the presence of the one person, she missed every second of her life.........Mayank has been gone for a month now, and though they spoke on phone everyday, she missed seeing him..........his eyes that used to light up, whenever he looked at her, his smile which made her heart swoon, the way he held her in his arms, the way he pushed back hair from her face, the way he made faces at her silly jokes and laugh after that, and the way he looked so cute wen angry at her...........she missed him like crazy, and thats y she tried to spend as much time as possible in college. Here she could feel him around her.......she had never broken down, neither infront of others, and certainly not infront of him, except for that one night, they were together, before he went.........thinking abt that, a blush crept up her cheeks, and a smile played on her lips..........they had shared their first kiss that night, and he was so gentle with her...........he showered her with love and care, and she broke down........crying in his arms............

She went and sat down in the library, closed her eyes, and remembered, all those moments she had spent with him........She saw Adhiraj and Suhani quarelling over smething and smiled.........she had set them up to get Bablu off her back, but now she was happy for them.........She wished they stayed happy together, like Samrat and Gunjan..........She was so lost that she didnt notice when the library was empty, suddenly the librarian voice brought her out of her stance........he asked her to leave........

She got up, and made her way out........the college ahd such a deserted look, so forlorn, just like her heart........Gosh, if she could give up one thing to be with him, she would have done that happily, but that wasnt meant to be.......the strong Nupur Bhushan was fading away, she was loosing the tough exterior she had around, ever since her mother left her..........yes, she was so scared to be hurt again.........and now its the second time, she lost someone she loved........she know he loves her, but when will she see him again, will they be together again...she didnt knw, and was scared to look for an answer.........

All these thoughts broke her, the pain that had bulit inside during the last month, came out in her tears......she rushed to the garden and broke down............crying loudly........cursing her fate........she didnt hear someone's footsteps behind her....and was shocked when she felt someone's hand on her shoulder.........she looked up to see a familiar pair of eyes looking down, the same eyes in which she can drown herself, she whispered - Mayank?

He picked her up, and held her close.........she thought it was her imagination, a dream, and was happily living in it.....she didnt wasnt it to break......she hid her face in his chest..........After a while he shook her, Nupur?.......she looked up, he was for real, not a dream...........she smiled in her tears........"Mayank, Mayank tum.........tum......hi ho na......."

Mayank - Nupur main hi hun.........Nupur, mein vaapis aa gaya hun, hamesha ke liye.......she looked at him questioningly.....he replied, maa ki transfer mumbai ho gayi, tumhe nahi bataya, kyunki mein tumhe surprise dena chahta tha.......par i m sorry, i think mujhe bata dena chahiye tha........

Nupur was in shock for sometime, he was back, her Mayank was back, she hugged him tight, never to let go again and he obliged, they pulled apart after a while, he smiled, and took out a rose,and said "happy birthday, Nupur".........

She smiled shcked, she had forgotten her own birthday.......Mayank continued........Nupur, mujhe to laga tha ki Nupur Bhushan apne bday ke liye khoob excited hoti hogi.......acha ab batao, tumhe kya gift chahiye......

Nupur - Mujhe jo chahiye tha, mil gaya...........tum.........

He smiled and pulled her in for another hug..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nups cooking for Mayu

Mayank had given her a surprise by coming down for the weekend..........Nupur has not been so happy for a long time....they had spent two days well.......and he had cleared up the mess in her life due to Bablu..........now he was going back tomorrow........she was sad about it, but then she wanted to make it special for him..........she wanted to surprise him too, and so she was cooking dinner for him........

She had bugged Gunjan all morning to teach her how to make karela, mayank's favourirte.........and now she was herself preparing it.

Gunjan entered kitchen to see Nupur smiling to herself....."Di, kya kar rahi ho? dekho main ab bhi keh rahi hun, mujhe banane do......."

Nupur "Nahin Gunjan, aaj to khana main hi banaugi.......Mayank ki pasand ka........"

Di.......are Gunjan ab tu jaa na, aur haan ab kitchen mein mat aana......Nupur said...........shoving her away........

Chal Nupur Bhushan. ........shuru ho ja, are ye khana banana kaunsa mushkil kaam hai........", and she started peeling karela

After about 2 hrs of hard work, and a mess of kitchen, Nupur had finally made food.........she smiled happily......." are wah aaj to main bhi sarv gun sampann ho gayi, shabash nupur...." and she went to get ready.....

Mayank came in at exact time, and Gunjan opened the door for him.......she smiled saying....."di taiyar ho rahi hai.......tum baitho.......mujhe Samrat ke saath bahar jaana hai"......

Mayank nods smilingly........and moves towards hall...just then Nupur comes there.......and he gets up and hugs her......"Nupur, tum bahut achi lag rahi ho...." Nupur replies...pata hai mujhe........ab chalo aakhen band karo.......

Mayank is surprised........Kyun he asks..........Nupur says ...Kyunki main keh rahi hun...........by god Mayank, har baar question karna zaroori hai....."

Mayank shrugs and closes his eyes.........Nupur takes him to the dining table well set, and says now open ur eyes....

And she takes off the lid from over the karele ka sabzi..............

Mayank laughs........".ye hai tumhara surprise.........karela...."

Nupur nods happily.........haan tumhe pasand hai na.....Mayank continues laughing.......pasand hai par.....

Nupur looks disturbed, she asks par kya? mujhe laga tumhe acha lagega...isisliye maine banaya.........NowMayank stops laughing and says......"matlab ye tumne banaya.......mere liye.....he holds her hand in his and says ...........thanx Nupur.....par ye sab......."

Nupur cuts him off........."oho Mayank ab lecture mat do......chalo kha ke batao kaisa hai......."

And they sit down for dinner, as Mayank takes the first morsel in his mouth........Nupur looks at him expectantly...and asks "kaisa hai"..........Mayank replies "bahut acha, bilkul tumhari tarah.......par tumne ye kab sikha"

Nupur " aaj hi........ab Mayank thoda bahut to aana chahiye na, monday, wednesday, friday main banungi, aur tuesday, thurs, and sat tum..........aunty ko pareshan nahin karenege..."

Mayank laughs at her planning, and says "by god Nupur, tum sach mein ek hi piece ho is duniya mein, par sabse best...."

and they continue eating while having some cute talks.......

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Mayank comes to surprise Nupur, sorts out the babloo thing, he now has to go back to Bangalore….

At the train station…..
Mayank: To main chalun Nupur…..
Nupur : Haan.Kaash main tumhe rok paati lekin aunty ko bhi to tumhari zaroorat hai.
Mayank: Haan Nupur,but don't worry.main jaate hi phone karunga… aur yaad rakhna jab bhi meri zaroorat ho to mujhe phone kar dena main aa jaunga.
Nupur: Chalo abhi chado train main…
Mayank: Abhi time hai Nupur….
Nupur: Nahi abhi chadho…. Train start hogayi to….
Mayank: To…..
Nupur: To tum gir sakte ho, tumhe chot aa sakti hai…..her expressions keep changing as if shes watching a movie scene……
Mayank: Nupur ye train hai koi rocket nahi to start hote hi speed se nikal jaayegi….. but in his heart thinking "Kitni filmy GF mili hau mujhe…….. but kitna pyaar karti hai mujhse"…
N: Ok tum apna khayal rakhna … aur aunty ka bhi…..
Mayank gives a hug a quick hug and says tum bhi…….

Nupur comes back home. She keep thinking about mayank and how similar he is to her dream man. and as the night goes on. shes just lost in her thoughts and sleeps.

Next day morning …… College..

Benji: nupur mayank kal chala gaya.
Nupur: Haan benji… main station gayi thi chodne.
Samrat: Tum akeli gayi thi… hum bhi chalte na saath.
Diya: Sammy, please tumne suna nahi kabhi ki threes a crowd

Suddenly there is an announcement……sab log assembly hall main aa jaaiye. Principal sir koi announcement karma chahte hain…

In the hall…….

Principal: Students,is saal hum logon ne decide kiya hai kit um sab log pehle ek pre final doge aur us pre final ke results decide karenge ki final kon dega. Everyone shocked. Uday almost faints at the thought of another exam.
Assembly finishes…

Suddenly Nupurs phone rings Mayank calls….

Mayank: Hello
Nupur: Hello mayank.
Mayank: Kya hua nupur sab theekh to hai na. ye aas pass itna shor kaise.
Nupur: Arey vo abhi principal sir ne bola ki exam se pehle pre final hoga.
Mayank: Aur isliye sab dar gaye hoge.
Nupur: Mere siva.
Mayank: Acha………tumhe kabse kitabon se pyaar hogaya….mujhe to lagta tha ki tumhe to sirf SRK dikhta hai…..
Nupur: Sir jee. Aap agar bhool gaye to main yaad diladun ki main Excel college ke topper ko challenge kiya tha……
Mayank: Acha baba. theekh hai……to ab kya plan hai…. kahan ho…library jao aur padhai karo..
Nupur: Mayank main jaanti hun kya karna hai…tension mat lo…is baar excel ki topper banegi Ms.Nupur Bhushan….
Mayank: Nupur……Sab theekh to hai na…kya hua……tum aur filmein chodkar padhai ki baatein kar rahi ho…
Nupur: Mayank...mujhe bhi to zindagi main kuch banna hai na..... tabhi to hum dono khush reh payenge....
Mayank is very impressed and is a little shocked to speak ...... this Nupur sounded different from the one he knew….. he fell in love with this Nupur too almost instantly…because this part of her had a goal in life….. just like him…
Mayank: That's my girl…… bas tum koshish karo baaki sab apne aap theekh ho jaayega…. Tumhe kabhi bhi meri zaroorat pade na to mujhe call karna ok…

Before Nupur can answer,Mayank says…nupur jaana padega…class start hogayi hai…Ok baad main baad karta hun…
Nupur:Bye…
Mayank:bye….

Nupur thinking ….. now a little relaxed after talking to Mayank….. suddenly remembers the exams…… Nupur chal lag jaa padhaayi karne…..is baar tumhe top karna hi hai…. apne liye…Mayank ke liye….

Suddenly her phone vibrates and she sees a message from mayank….
Nupur … chinta mat karo…. tum apni taraf se poori koshish karo…and I am sure ki you will do great……. I love you…..

She smiles and is now determined to do well in the exams.......

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Mayank is studying in his room when the doorbell rings. He opens the door and it's his mom. She looked tired and stressed.
Mayank gets really concerned. He gets her sum water and asks her -
Mayank - "Ma sab theek to hai na..".
Ma - "Sab theek hai beta. just a tough day at office. Yahan kaam ka stress bahot zyada hai, uspar sab naye log ho to adjust hone mein time lagta hai."
Mayank - "I know ma nayi jagah par adjust karna thoda mushkil hai. Tum chinta mat karo bas kuch waqt aur fir main tumhe kabhi koi pareshaani nahi hone doonga."
Ma - "looks at him and smiles.....jaanti hun beta" and kisses him on his forehead.
She gets up and walks to her room.
Mayank is deeply affected looking at her mother this way. It was heartbreaking for him to see her mother going through all this alone.
Suddenly the phone rings. Mayank picks up the phone after few rings. It's nupur.
Mayank - "haan nupur"
Nupur - Realising that something was wrong from his tone she asks him...."Mayank kya hua tum theek to ho na?"
Mayank - "haan main theek hoon"
Nupur - "tum theek nahi lag rahe mayank. Plz mujhe batao kya hua."
Mayank - "kuch nahi nupur" (trying hard to control his emotions)
Nupur - "hum itne duur bhi nahi hain mayank ki tum mujhse apne dil ki baat na kah sako..."

Listening to this mayank gives in. He just had to let it all out now.

Mayank - "Ma ko lekar thoda pareshan hoon"
Nupur - "Ma?? kya hua aunty ko ? woh theek hai na?"
Mayank - ( in a frustrated tone) "kabhi kabhi khud ko bahot helpless mehsoos karta hoon Nupur. Bahot gussa aata hai khud par ye dekhkar ki mere hote hue bhi ma ko itna kaam karna padta hai, ghar ki sab responsibilities unpar hain. Unko is tarah stressed nahi dekh paata."
Nupur - "Mayank tum unko in sab tensions se free karne ke liye hi itni mehnat se pad rahe ho na. Dekhna bahot jaldi tum unhe unki sab resposibilities se free kar doge."
Mayank - "par abhi....(and he just couldn't complete the sentence)
Nupur - "Main samajhti hoon mayank. Tum himmat mat haaro main hamesha tumhare saath hoon. Tum bas ma ka khayal rakho. Unhone khana khaya?"
Mayank - "Nahi"
Nupur - "to tum jao aur unhe khana khilao. Hum baad mein baat karenge."
Mayank - "I love you nupur"
Nupur - "love you too mayank good night. Apna khayal rakhna aur aunty ka bhi."

Mayank felt extremely relieved. For the first time he had opened up and let someone in to his vulnerable side. He now had someone he could share his fears, happiness, sorrows with. He felt a new energy rushing down his body making him more committed towards achieving his goals than ever.

Nupur on the other hand feels sad for mayank and aunty. She stands by the window looks up, closes her eyes and prays for both of them. She couldn't help but think why was life being so tough on them. Why are they separated from each other? why can't she hold his hand and tell him that everything will be alright? Why can't she be there for him when he needs her the most?
She remembers the first day she met mayank's mom. How impressed she was by her. This made her more sad thinking about all the tough times she is going through. Her heart goes out to both of them imagining their struggles just to make ends meet.

She is trying to fall asleep when suddenly she remembers about a project that is due the next day. She feels really tired but pulls herself up to do it. She opens her book but couldn't take her mind off Mayank. She looks at the book and wishes - "tum yahan hote to hum ye saath mein finish karte. Tumhare saath discuss karte karte kab project ban jaata pata bhi nahi chalta. Par is samay sabse zyada zaroori ye hai ki tum aur aunty theek ho"
As always her mind starts to jump from one thought to another. She starts to feel helpless. She starts thinking about their situation and also truly understands why mayank is so serious about his studies and career. How he wants to be there for his mother and give her all the comfort he can. She starts to respect him all the more. She smiles thinking about her being part of his life.

Then a thought takes over her. She says to herself " i'm a part of Mayank's life now. Uski problems ab hamari problems hain. Uski struggles hamari struggles hain. I have to be there for him. I have to help him in making our lives better." She suddenly feels challenged and gets a sense of responsibility. "I need to work hard now, towards my career as I wanna stand by him during thick and thin. I have to do this for us and our lives together."

This was a new awakening for Nupur. She was not just imagining their lives together but also thinking about the reality of making it happen. She was slowly starting to think like mayank. Love and it's miracles!

She gets up makes herself some coffee exactly the way mayank makes. She starts to work on the project. It takes her all night to finish it but she was determined. More than ever.

Next day in college -
Nupur submits her project file to Deodhar sir. After looking at it he is thoroughly impressed. He says - " Nupur lagta hai tum is college ke topper mayank ki kami poori kar dogi.... I'm proud of you"
Listening to this and without realising that she is standing in the middle of a class full of students she responds almost immediately - " mayank ki kami to koi bhi poori nahi kar sakta"
She gets lost and feels sad. CJ holds her hand and makes her sit. Though missing him dearly she still feels a gush of new energy rushing through her veins. It was as if she had found a purpose in life. She felt challenged the same way she did when she was competing with mayank during exams. She was slowly gaining maturity in this relationship.

She was very excited about the project so she calls up mayank to share her joy. Before she could say anything he said - " I'm proud of you nupur....congratulations."
Nupur is stunned.
Nupur - "mayank tum?...tumhe kaise?"
Mayank - "kaha tha na tumse dur nahi hun...Main bahot khush hoon nupur. Jaanta hun is project ke liye tumne kitni mehnat ki hogi aur kyon ye bhi samajhta hoon. I love you nupur"
Nupur- unable to control her tears of joy that he cares for her so much and of sadness that he is not here with her starts to roll down her cheeks. She was touched by his words and by the fact that he knew everything about her. She didn't wanted to know how he knew anymore as she was feeling blessed to have him in her life.
Mayank - "aur haan nupur sirf tum hi ho jo excel college mein meri kami poori kar sakti ho..."
Nupur is quite still trying to gather herself ....
Mayank - aur sirf main hi hoon jo tumhe chup kara sakta hoon.....
they both laugh....

If you all are wondering how did he know it was through CJ....
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Nupur ran around the college spying on Adhiraj and Nupur 2 . She figured they are in love. She wanted to find out more. While returning to class she was spotted by Principal'.

"Nupur this is too much. You have repeatedly violated the college rules. Go and report to Deodhar sir. He has a punishment for you."m said Principal Saxena.

Nupur's face became pale. "Ye lo ek museebat tali nahin , doosari aapadi." She shook her head in disbelief. She reported to teachers lounge. She waited for Deodhar sir with baited breath. Finally he walked in. She followed him. "Nupur yeh sab kya hain? Do you have any future career plans? Why do you have a tough time following rules? I was impressed by you in the past but lately I am wondering." He said in a rather stern voice. Anger in his voice made Nupur shiver and she bowed her head. "Well, since you seem to have no answers for any of the questions, here is something I want you to do. Our college has several media projects one of which once actually done by you and Mayank. I want you to catalogue them all and bring it back to me." she nodded her head and said "Haan sir kardoongi." "Good. You have 2 weeks." he said. "Kya??" said Nupur. "Kyun' koi problem." asked Deodhar sir. "Nahin sir koi problem nahin. Sab theek hain." "Very well then" replied Deodhar sir' "aur haan agar tumhe koi help chahiye toh aur ek student ki madad le sakti ho." he said. Nupur's mind started racing. "Kissi ko bhi sir'" she asked thoughtfully. "Haan , you have someone in mind?? " he asked. "Sir mein Nupur 2 ki help lesakti hoon." she quickly replied. "Sure.." he said. "I will inform her to work with you." A wide grin appeared on the face. "Yeh toh accha hua Nupur. Mujhe corridor ke chakkar nahin lagaana padega, Nupur 2 ko apni saath mein rakhoongi aur Nupur 2 ke mann mein Raj ke liye koi pyaar hone nahin dungi." Although the thought of working on a project was repulsive she felt like she succeeded.

She took the project reports home and asked Nupur 2 to meet at her house. She wanted to avert a potential date between Raj and Nupur 2. She was actually proud of herself. She sat with the projects 'her thoughts wandering she couldn't get anything done. Mayank ko pooch leti hoon. She said to her self. She called B'lore. To her surprise Shilpa Aunty picked up the phone. "Hi Aunty" said Nupur sitting straight. "Hi beta." replied Shilpa Aunty. "Mayank abhi library gaya hain beta .Thodi hi der mein aagayega." She said knowing why she called. "That's okay Aunty mein phir se call karti hoon. Project mein kuch help chahiye thi toh madad maange ne call kiya." "Mein kuch help karoon." asked Shilpa Aunty. Nupur hesitated to ask. "It's okay aunty. Yeh bekaar ki project hain itna khaas nahin." Shilpa aunty decided to talk to Nupur as she noticed her cavalier attitude towards studies. "Nupur , Mein ek baat kahoon. Buraa mat manna..maa jaise hoon isiliye bol rahin hoon. Koi bhi project bekaar nahin hota. Apne dekhne ka nazariyaa per depend karta hain. Tum samajhdaar ho aur accha mauka bhi aaya hain taaki apne aap ko prove kar sako. Tumhe apne life mein goal rakhni hain Nupur. Aur uss goal ko achieve karne ki focus bhi tumhe seekhna padega. Koi bhi insaan sanpney dekhne se bada nahin ban jaata. Sapney ko saakar karne ki mehnat bhi karni padti hain. Aur Har mehant ka phal meetha hota hain Nupur. Har koi story fairy tale nahin hoti'lekin agar tum chaho to apni story fairly tale mein badal sakti ho . lekin ek shart par, focus and dedication. Nupur tum meri beti ho, mere liye tumhara future aur career bhi itna hi important hain jitna ki Mayank ka. Focus beta. I am sure you can do it bina Mayank ke help ka." She concluded. Nupur was listening quietly. For the first time in her life she realized as a girl she could be a lot more and actually there is another person in this world who wants and needs her to succeed other than Mayank. Shilpa Aunty got worried and said "Beta I am sorry if I hurt you." Nahin Aunty." said Nupur quickly. "Aap aisa mat kahiye. Aap theek kaharahin hain. Aaj tak mere upar mayank ke alaawa kisi ne bhi itne ummeedein nahin rakhin hain. Mujhe accha lagaa ki aap mere bare mein itna sochti hain . Mein vaada karti hoon Aunty. Mein bohot mehnat karungi aur yeh project acche se karungi. Aur Aunty , thank you."

Nupur started working'she was having a hard time'."yeh Nupur 2 abhi tak nahin aayi'" she muttered. "Phone lagaati hoon." She called Nupur 2 and Nupur 2 had told her she is running a bit late and she will be there in an hour. Nupur was having a hard time with the project and she realized she completely got wrapped in the fights and marriage dreams she forgot to live reality. As she was trying to focus phone rang. "It better be Nupur 2..aati hoon" she yelled at phone' she picked up the phone.. "Nupur 2 tumhe aane mein itne der kyoun ho rahin hain'.." And she was about to continue'"Shaanti Nupur mein Mayank bol rahaan hoon." "Hi mayank" she said. "Kya baat hai sirf hi Mayank. Aur kuch nahin. Sab theek hain" he enquired . "Haan sab theek hain. Kyun mujhe kya hona tha ?" she asked. "Nahin maa bol rahin thi ki tum ne phone kiya'project ke liye kuch help chahiye thi . Toh mein ne socha help kardoon. Tum toh mere bina project nahin kar sakti ." Accha apne muh miyya mittu.. Aise koi baat nahin, Mein bil kul kar sakti hoon , who bhi tumhaare bina. She replied haughtily. "Lekin mein tumhare bina koi project karnaa bhi nahin chahataa Nupur. Tum meri partner thi aur hamesha rohoge." answered Mayank softly. The tenderness and the longingness in his voice swept her off of her feet. All she could muster up to say was I love you mayank. He chuckled and said "I love you Nupur."

"Accha ab bataao kya baat hain." He asked. She stared to explain. Mayank was listening and making some points to help her out. "Tough project hain Nupur . lekin mujhe poora yakeen hain tum yeh bohot acche se karonge. Accha ab suno, jab bhi mein project karta hoon toh pehle project ka outline bannata hoon , usske baad plan, prioritize and execute. Bhool na mat. No shortcuts. Apne tareeke se socho. Ek baat dhyaan mein rakhna Nupur , tumhara poora ka poora dhyaan project pe lagaana. Jaanta hoon tumhaare liye thodi mushkil hain, lekin koshish karna." He concluded. "Aunty bhi yahin kaha rahin thi'"Nupur said excitedly' "Tumne maa se baat ki, who bhi project ke bare mein.." he was surprised'Nupur explained the conversation between Shilpa aunty and herself. He was quite'Nupur continued' "Mere maa nahin hain na Mayank agar hoti toh yahi kahati naa. Mujhe pyaar se zindagi ke tour tareeke samjhati . Aaj pehlibaar mein ne apne aap ke liye sapna dekha hain Mayank . iss baar mein ne ek naya rasta dekha hain jisme tum aur mein dono apni zindagi mein kuch banenge . Hamesha ek doosreke saath denge." she was about to say something and the door bell rang.....Ek minute Mayank..she put the phone to the side and Yelled "GUJAN darwaaza Kholna'" "Nupur chillao mat..said Mayank "yeh ladki bhi na'" "haan toh mein keh rahin thi ." And she heard Nupur 2 say "Hi Nupur'" Nupur replied "Hi Nupur 2'." "Ek minute Ek minute Nupur 2 tumhare ghar mein '???" He asked bells went off in his mind. "Nupur'.." He said warningly.. "mein tumse baad mein baat karti hoon. Bye Mayank." She put the phone down. He knew this girl was up to something but he decided to deal with it later because she needs her concentration right now'.Nupur for the time being forgot about why she invited Nupur 2 and started discussing the project with her. She did as adviced by Mayank but used her ways to come up with a plan that made the rest of the steps easy. She thought to herself " Deodhar sir, iss tarah ki project koi kiya hi nahin hoga. Aap impress hogaaoge." She realized what a wonderful feeling it is and started to wonder about her future career. "Mujhe Deodhar Sir se aur Mayank se baat karne padege." She slept peacefully that night and her dreams for a change included a house , a cook , a driver who drove her to work and More over her prince Charming Mayank who held her hand every step of the way to reach that dream.

Edited by aj_observer - 15 years ago

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