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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

PART 1 & 2 on pg 30, PART 3 on PG 31

PART 4:

Mayank wanted to answer her question but he was unsure, what to say..

M..tumhe kaise bharosa dialon nupur?..tum batao?

N.. wada karo....

M..mujhe tumhari her muskurahat ki kasam hai..main tumhe kabhi chor ka nahi jaon ga..

Mayank felt that this somewhat spread a peace on her fac.
she wiped of all her tears and was turned towards the dressing table., where she took of her bangles,

Mayank expected that she would say something but e was happ that he somewhat saw a slight satisaction on her face.

mayank again held his file...Nupur was looking at mayank though the mirror, he was silently turning pages of the file

Nupur felt that she was responsible for all the problems of mayank, even after coming back she could nt give him teh happiness and love he deserved..

N..main tumhain bht tang karti hon na...

Mayank looked at her, she was standing facing the mirror and looking at him through the miror , he came to her and stood behind her,

now both of them were looking at each other through the miorror...

maynk bent sligthly towards her neck ....nupur closed her eyse in confusion, he inclined towards her ear and gently said..

M..nahi...tum mujhe bht pyar karti ho...

She immedieately opened her eyes,and turned her face towards mayank, he was smiling and nupur was lost into that magical love in his eyes......

M..acha ab agar asie hi ik dosre ko dekhte rahen gey tu subah ho jaye gi..

Nupur immedeitely turned her face away...

M..good night...

He went to the bed and picked up all his files and placed them on the table and went to sleep...

Maynk hadnt said anything to nupur abput sleeping bcz he wantd her to make her decision herself..he wanted her to decide where she was somfortable...near him or away from him..

he waited that whether she will leave the room or sleep with him on the same bed...He closed his eyes just to give the impression that he had slept...

Nupur was standing at the mirror and and the she turned towarda mayank, she was very confused what to do, whether to sleep on the couch or bed,

she headed towards the couch and sat on it, she was still looking at mayank..

maynk realised that she was giong to sleep on the couch, he didnt open his eyes at all..

For some time nupur kept staring, her mind was absouletely blank...she looked at him and then she got up and headed towards the bed, what feeling made her do that..she herself dint knew..

she cautiously lied down oppoisite to mayank, just not to disturb his sleep..

mayank was facing the other side, he realised that nupur ha come,,,he opend his eyes, just tilted his head a bit and saw that nupur was there with her eyes closed,

after sometime, when mayank was sure that she was asleep he turned his face towards her

he got his answer that nupur was comfortable NEAR HIM...

he kept on looking at her and brushing his fingers in her hair when he himself didnt realise when he went asleep.

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

I had missed part 2 :( read it! It was WOW!

and so was 4 th one..wow Mehak..ur thoughst and writing..so beautiful...:):) awww...Im so touched! Please do update soon! Im so loving this story line..Im sure we wont get to see all this on a show..but in fiction its atleast nice to think :)

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Lekha

@Echo.of.Hope

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Our ideas are amazing.
i just wish CVs will think of something like this

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Ansha

@lovelycactus

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

wowwwwwwww Mehak you are on a roll!!!!👏

awsum updates plxxxx continue😊

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

rest of my OS is in the following thread..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1490066&PID=34048529&#34048529

hope u all enjoy..😊

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459718

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

I wrote this scene for when ....Dhruv exits the lives of MN.

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Time Will Heal Everything <3

Pushing through the doors, she gasped as felt her husband, her companion for life hand slide up to her shoulders to comfort her. Strange she had been dying to be in his hold and now that she was within his grasp...all emotions from within were gone. She felt nothing....she was empty from inside.

Mayank glanced up to see the discomfort displaying on his dear wife's face, getting the hunch, he immediately took away his arm from her shoulder and smiled. Nupur grinned, walking inside with him trailing behind.

Everything was different....she felt different....she knew she was different., stopping in her tracks, Nupur found herself staring at their wedding picture. They looked so happy, and in love.....why did everything have to change? why did life have to be so painful?

Mayank placed his hand on her shoulder, turning her around to face him, he sighed, " i know its gonna take sometime....and i'm ready to give you as long as i can hold your hand and share your pain" Nupur looked within those eyes filled with endless love and smiled. She could do that for him, couldn't she? even if she wasn't in a place to communicate, she could let him know, she was okay and that having him by her side was enough for her to feel safe. But truthfully was it really enough? would she ever feel safe enough to share her sorrows with mayank? can she ever let go of the torture from within?....will her wounds ever heal?

Forcing herself to smile and she nodded and placed her hand within his, in hopes of making him calm and free of any worry.

They both walked upstairs and entered the bedroom. Nupur looked around quietly waiting for mayank to enter, but he stood still looking at her, " Nupur, this will be your room"

Instantly finding his face, she looked shock," but -- " she managed to say, Mayank smiled, " Its fine, I'm right next to you in this room" he said pointing towards the room opposite to hers.

"are you sure?" nupur asked unsure of his decision, " Yes"

Nupur walked inside and looked around, in the middle of the room lay a huge bed and above that hung a picture of her and mayank blissfully in love, tears engrossed her eyes but she managed to hide them as mayank walked inside.

"Mayank - " nupur said turning to face him, but he held her hand, through his eyes he told her, he knows and he is willing to do anything and everything..for her, " Nupur, I love you and I know you love me too but because....of some rough patches...you need time...and space to heal. And i'm happy to be there for you, even it means...just sitting beside you, while you fall a sleep. Nupur i want to give us a new beginning, i want to give our love a second try. I want you to feel you can share the burden of your shoulders with me. Trust me enough to let those tears fall infront of me. And i know that will take sometime. and i'm willing to wait"

"but how can a person wait?...everyone has a limit" nupur said sadly.

" i'm willing to wait my entire life.....if thats what you need" he responded with a comforting gaze.

Nupur couldn't believe her fate....she got an amazing person like mayank to share a her life with. Reaching out she grabbed his hand and entiwining it within hers, she smiled, " thank you...for understanding"

"Okay now get a goodnight sleep!" he stepped in to kiss her forehead, " goodnight" nupur replied closing her eyes.

Mayank walked to the door and looked back to catch a glismpe of her smiling face, he knew he would anything for that smile....even if meant having to wait for her. He would wait his entire life just to have his nupur back in his arms again.

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Silent withers filled the silence in the dark night, Mayank opened his door to check where the noise was coming from, only to realize it was coming from Nupurs room.

He slowly turned the knob and walked inside, the room was still dark. He could see her lying in the bed covered with a comforter, " nupur" he whispered slightly pulling off the comforter.

shocked out of his wits, he saw her sweating badly, and tears trailing down her innocense filled face. Instantly grabbing her hands he tried to comfort her but it was no use, those precious tears had no end to them.

" mayank don't ever leave me" she withered in her sleep." mayank muhje bacha lo, please...Mayank.....MAYANK" she yelled getting up.

Mayank instantly pulled her into a hug, running his hands up and down her back to sooth her nerves, " mayank you won't leave me na?...Mayank don't ever leave me.." her words were filled with fear and helplessness.

Mayank closed his wet eyes trying to comfort nupur to best he could,but it was getting harder and harder..just to see her like this and knowing he couldn't do anything but hold her hand was killing him from inside.....

Sooner of later nupur fell a sleep in grasp feeling safe, placing her down gently, mayank got up to leave only to feel her strong grasp on his arm. He smiled and sat down on the floor, after pulling the comforter over.

I love you Nupur" pushing a strand of her hair away from her beautiful eyes..Mayank smiled, he slowly closed his eyes in hopes that time would heal this distance between them.

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I hope you like it.

Cheers

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago