Broken hearts:climax

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Broken hearts Part 1




Garv-Aashka:
Lecturers of the same college.Their love is very silent.

Armaan-Riddhima:They are the students in the same college.They fight and love each other.

Samar-Gauri:They are not a happy couple.Gauri tries her level best to save her marriage.

Kavya-Anjali:Destiny separated them in a cruel manner.

Sanjay-Kalpana:Their love is cute,but hidden.

Sujal-Aamna:Their's is a mistaken love.


Armaan runs to Riddhima.He is sweating.
R:What happened Armaan?Why are you sweating?
He is panting a lot.
A:A hot teacher has arrived.
She laughs.
R:You are crazy.You are telling your girlfriend about the new hot teacher?Disgusting.
A:Come on...take it easy.
R:No..i can't.Get lost...
A:Excuse me...why should i?This is my classroom also.
Riddhima is angry.She keeps silent.

The new teacher enters the class.All the guys are looking at her.
She is conscious of that.So she smiles:Why are you guys staring at me?You guys have no girlfriends?
The boys look down silently.
She:I'm sure that you have girlfriends.So look at your girlfriends and please don't look at me like this.I'm married.

Riddhima smiles in a funny manner looking at Armaan.He gets irritated.The guys are embarassed.

The teacher smiles:Hi...i'm Aashka.You new Physics lecturer.

Aashka knocks on the Principal's room:Sir...may i come in..?
P:Yes..sure..
She enters the room.
P:How was the class?
A:Fine sir.
P:What about the students?They are notorious.
She smiles:They are interesting.
There was a guy who was sitting there.
P:Mrs.Aashka...this is Garv Sachdev...from the Physics department.
Garv and Aashka look at each other.
G:Nice to meet you.
A:It's my pleasure.

Aashka is talking to someone.Garv wants to talk to her.He watches her talking.He decides to go back without talking to her.

Armaan goes to Riddhima.She pretends to be studying.
A:To show off you are studying?I know that you can't study seriously like this.Otherwise you would'nt have failed in the last semester.
She is embarassed.
A:Stop this fight and let's party.
R:Party?For what?To celebrate the arrival of the hot teacher.
Riddhima is irritated and she is about to hit him.Armaan runs away laughing.Riddhima runs after him.

Armaan and Riddhima are in the dance club dancing to the song,"it's the time for disco.." from 'Kal ho na ho..'
Armaan is staring at her eyes.Riddhima feels strange.He has'nt looked at her like this before.
R:Armaan...why are you looking at me like this?
Armaan keeps him arm in her lips:Don't say anything now....
He goes closer to her.

.......


Aamna gets out of the train with a smile.She thinks:Today i'm going to meet my pen lover.I have been waiting for this moment for a long time.He said he will wear a white shirt.
She looks around.She does'nt see anyone in a white shirt.She feels upset.She walks forward.Suddenly Aamna sees a man in a white shirt.She goes near him:Are you Raj?
He:Yes,i'm Raj.
She is overexcited:Hi...i'm Aamna.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks a lot for pm Dear I love To Read Great Start ..
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Wow....nice start!! Sujal n Aamna....mistaken love?? Thats interesting!! Pls continue soon.
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nice start.....................and sujal aamna mistaken love????????????????is this raj her pen friend or someone else????????????cont soon......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWESOME STORY DEAR
LUV THE AAMNA AND RAJ FIRST MEETING .HOPING KI YE MISTAKEN LUV TRUE LUV MEIN CHANGE HO JAYE.
PLS CONT SOON
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Hey nice one . Do cont soon .
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hey...nice one
continue soon
hope raj aamna mistaken love will change into true love soon
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Nice.....wanna know more abt SK !!
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Nice start...waiting to read further.
thanks for the PM....continue soon
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hey sweety.

how r u ?

amaing uodate.....really like the concept ......
AR are in love but alwayz fighting seems quits interesting.......
plzz doo conitinue soon n thnks for teh pm
btwn whts ur name?
love u
habs

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