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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy dear
lovely start
cont soon
n thx for pm
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Broken hearts part 2




Aamna:I can't wait anymore to confess my feelings.I love you Raj.
Raj is surprised.He thinks:A beautiful lady is proposing to me at the first sight.Nice chance.But how did she know my name?
R:What did you say?
A:You know me only as your pen friend or your e-mail friend..because now a days we send e-mails instead of writing letters.But for me..you are my love.
He thinks:Oh!So...she thinks that i'm her e-mail friend Raj.
He smiles;I also love you.
She is excited:Really?
He thinks:Who can't love a beautiful girl like you?

Riddhima can't concentrate on lecture classes.Armaan looks at her.She seems to be tired and gloomy.

Armaan sees her sitting under a tree.
A:Riddhima!
She cries and tries to walk away.He holds her hand.
A:Why are you crying?
R:You act as if you don't know anything.We both sinned yesterday...
Armaan smiles:Still you are sad about yesterday's incident?That was our love.
R:No...that was a mistake..no..it was a sin.
A:Why do you think so?Many lovers of our college have experienced it.
R:So what?I'm very conservative.I can't take it easy.It's my fault.I don't know how i surrendered to you.
She cries.
A:Anyways..we are getting married.So this so called sin will become a sweet truth.
He wipes her tears.


Garv goes near Aashka:Hi Aashka.I'm Garv Sachdev.
A:The principal had introduced you to me.So i remember your name and face very well.
G:You talk as if first time you are seeing me.Everyone in this college think so.But don't you know that....
A:Yes..i knew you before itself.
G:Atleast you agreed that.How are you?
Aashka feels upset:I'm ok..You?
She looks at his face.He hides his pain:You are fine.So i'm also happy.
Aashka looks at his eyes with pain.
A:Bye...
She moves away.Both are very upset.

......


Gauri is looking at her's and Samar's wedding snaps.She thinks:Everything was fine until he met his ex-girlfriend Ipshita.Now Samar hates me.He loves only Ipshita.He does'nt see my love.
Gauri cries.

Ipshita is on a photo shoot.She is fanous model.After the photoshoot she goes out of the room.She is shocked to see Samar there.
I:Samar!
He smiles:Ipshita!
I:Why are you after me now?You are always following me.
S:Ipshita...because...
I:I don't want to hear anything.Just leave me alone.
S:I can't think of a life without you.
Ipshita is stunned.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thats nice....Raj is sooo naughty....taking advantage of the chance....hehe. And others were gud as well....hope Samar realizes Gauri's love soon. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lol....Raj is mad...! I hope the real pen friend doesnt turn up !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey pooja how r u ....?????

hope u doing gr8...ok b4 i strt wid my banter let me tell u how much i like the part...
amna sujal
ok...so amna...has net seen sujal yet..n he thinks raj is sujal n she falls in love wid him ..love at fist sight wow tht gr8 but whn she gets to know thts he is not sujal n his raj then wht????
n lolzz rajjj hehe his bad......taking his chance.....i just hope...amna doesnt really falls in love wid him..if its a amna sujal story .....n if its not i just hope...raj...doesnt play wid her feelings
RIDHIMA ARMAAN MY FAV COUPLE
wow...so they have done it....the dance really brought them close to each other....
n wow tehy r gonna get married tht is soo sweeet...but ridhima thinks wht they have done is sin ..n in a way shes rite but ....armaaan wow he thinks tehy have not done anythung worng ..n he doesnt regrets tht means he trully loves her...yeaaaahhh
garv n aashka
wht happend btwn them...?y does the whle collegde behaven as if they dont know garv???
y is there love silent?wht pain was he hiding?
i just hope wht ever tehy r going thruse tehy over come it........
gauri n samar
oh my god pooor gauri....she loves samar so much n this stupid samar he loves some1 esle....tht stupid ipshita who i think doesnt even love him
i hope gauri ....gets her love sooon
hey sweety loved teh part it was outstanding.......n plzz do uodate as soon as possible
love u
habs
Edited by princess52 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part.................is this raj our hero raj???????????samar should think about gauri..................cont soon.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice part dear loved th AR one very much . Do cont soon and thanks for the pm .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Rajeev-Aamna fans....
U all r confused whether Raj is played Rajeev.Wait & c....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome part , I love to read next part ... you forget to pm me this time.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Raj is surprised to her Aamna's proposal. But then he is so impressed by her beauty that he does not clear her misunderstanding...but accepts her love as he does not want ot let her go. continue soon

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