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chapter---3
unke rang rangungi
sang sang chalungi
har gam ko sahungi
har pal saath dungi
aur kahungi...........
sangini sangini...piya ki main banungi
sangini sangini....piya ki main banungi
pratigya played with her mobile,lying on her bed.. she had returned frm her date a few hours ago,a remarkable date,extraordinary.. she had nvr had such a date in her life before..and she nvr wished to....
nitin was ridiculous....
wo mere saath aisa kaise behave kar sakta hain wo bhi public place mein?--thot pratigya. she knew that she had been late bt it was nt her fault. at frst she hurt her ankle and limped her way downstairs and after that she almost had an accident due to her dupatta and wen she reaches at last then wat does she get in return?---a sulky face and some insulting remarks frm her boyfrnd..hw disgusting!!!
pratigya twisted her face in irritation. she wanted to throw her mobile away bt restrained and controlled herself.
nitin had walked away after insulting her. he said that he wud meet her only wen she wud understand the value of time.. pratigya kept standing there,for sometime,unable to digest the insult. then she slowly came back home...
nitin had nt been like this before. he had nvr behaved with her in such a manner before.. he had become quite proud after getting the employment in the industril agency as assistant general manager..and had started behaving like a typical businessman. pratigya thot---agr wo mujhse istarah behave karta rahe to main usse sare nate tod dungi..aisa kaise kar sakta hain wo? uske liye kya meri koi izzat hi nhi hain? agr abhi aisa hain to shaadi ke baad kaisa hoga?
as soon as the thot came to her mind,she got up straight. pratigya thot--kahin use haan kehkar maine koi galati to nhi ki? kya main nitin jaisa nakchade insan ke saath zindagi bhar reh paungi?
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krishna was in his shop with ayan and chandu. ayan and chandu sat in the counter attending the customers while krishna sat on a chair outside,smoking a cigarette,carelessly.....
the face of pratigya had filled up his mind cmpletely...he cud nt get her out of his mind...her wide,button like eyes full of anger wen she was shouting at him had impressed him truly and wen her expression suddenly changed and she was all embarressed and red in her face,krishna had instantly realized that perhaps she was the most beautiful grl he evr saw..nt in her features,they werent so sharp or extraordinary bt in her way of looking,her attitude,the air of pride surrounding her,and evry single thng abt her,he felt, was wonderful....
bhaiya....e bhaiya.....kya kar rahe ho aap,khana nhi khana hain ka?---krishna's trance broke due to chandu's wrds. he got up frm his seat after disposing the unfinished cigarette. chandu and ayan were having their tiffin as it was almost noon. krishna walked up to thme and chandu handed him a plate. there were some rotis and a little vegetable in it..
krishna put the plate down and said---nhi yar hume bhuk nahi hain...
chnadu and ayan stopped eating and exchanged glances...
ayan---ka bole bhaiya? aapko bhuk nahi hain? ee baat to hum aapke muh se pehli baar sun rahe hain....ka hua aapko? tabiyat to thk hain na?
krishna smiled casually and turned away... ayan was nt ready to let go so easily. he walked up to him and asked agen---ka hua hain bhaiya? firse kono pareshnai/ are aap nam to batao us pareshani ka...zinbda gar denge usko.....
chandu said frm behind---ha bhaiya batao na kya baat hain...
krishna at last broke the suspense. he too cudnt stay quiet for long and also cud nvr imagine of keeping secrets frm these two jewels of him,chandu and ayan..
he smiled and said--are kya kar loge sun kar...aur waise bhi sabse bari pareshani to yehi hain ki hume us pareshani ka naam hi nhi pata....
sirf chehra yaad hain aur us chehre ne aisa jadoo kar diya hain ki uske siva aur kachu nazar hi nahi aata.....aab batao kya kar loge tumlog? kuch kar sakte ho ka?
ayan and chandu clapped their hands together and shouted---ooohhoo bhaiya....to aapke zindagi mein bhi filmy wali kahani ho hi gayi.....aapko bhi pyaar ho hi gaya kisi anjaani khubsurat bala se haan? kya baat hain.....
krishna smiled cutely.....
ayan started to sing in delight---
oooo ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
jaise khilta gulab jaise shayar ka khwab jaise ujli kiran jaise....
chandu put his palm on ayan's mouth to stop him at once..he had a terrible voice...
then he turned to krishna and said---abe ee kaise bol diya aapne bhaiya ki hum kachu nhi kar sakte? aab hume sirf ee batao ki woh ladki rehti kaha hain...yun jayenge aur jhat se uska nam jankar ayenge.....
krishna slapped him gently on his back and said--gadhe ke gadhe hi rahoge tumlog...agr hume ye pata hota ki wo kahan rehti hain to kya hum khud uska naam pata nhi kar lete....?
then he turned away and said to himself---agr kismat ne humko usse milwaya hain to aab kismat hi faisla karega hum dono ke kismat ki........
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sahi ja rahe ho beta! 😊
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Great Yaar! Just Got Over One Of Your Fan Fic And Now This! Amazing! Please Post Soon =)
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chapter---4

the party was a really grand one,no doubt.. there were all kinds of entertainment provided for the guests..there were drinks,food,games,gambles,sizzling grls,hot guys,evrythng wich one cn desire... the hosts had taken a great care in making all the arrangements perfect so that noone cud get bored..and none did...except for one---pratigya...

she did nvr like these kind of professional parties,in fact she hated them...bt still she came..she came for nitin,her boyfrnd...the love of her life... nitin had called her up that evening itself and had apologised to her for his misbehaviour. he wanted to invite her for his promotion party as his frnds had requested him to do so... they wanted to meet his going-to-be wife. nitin did nt have to work hard on pratigya,she was happy abt the fact that he was sorry and hence agreed to his proposal...

nitin escorted her to the party wich was held in a five star hotel... he introduced her to his frnds and they praised her a lot being "such a beautiful grl".... they conversed with her for sometime and entertained her by bringing her drinks and little nicknacks and she was vry gentle with them all.. bt after some time they became busy with themselves laughing,joking,pulling each others legs,drooling over the dancers in the party and nitin joined them too. thus after few minutes pratigya started to feel extreamely left out and lonely and wondered wat to do...

she roamed abt the party hall by herself and tried to find something interesting to do bt nothing actually caught her attention.evrythng seemed so fake,so artificial,evn the smiles on the lips of the people were so full of attitude and so untrue....as if they were grudging inside....

she walked to the bar to have a drink wen suddenly nitin called out to her frm behind---pratigya...jaldi aao idhar....

she took her drink and hurried up to him. he took the glass frm her hands and placed it on a nearby table.. then he pulled her towards the dance floor,holding her hand.. she tried to object to it bt he was nt in such a state to listen to her.. once they reached the dance floor,nitin clutched her waist tightly and pulled her towards himself....she felt herself crushed against him..enough to feel uncomfortable... she tried to push him away bt he seemed to be drowned in his own passion...he did nt alter to it... she looked around and found other couples too,stuck with each other on the dance floor...the way they behaved with each other and wat they intended to do made her nausseate, she turned away frm them....

in the 3 long years of her relationship with nitin,she had nvr felt free with him in this field,she was nt quite comfortable with physical intimacy...she was still too immature for that. a soft,gentle kiss on the lips had always been enough for her.. nitin knew it too and he had nvr forced himself on her before...till that night.....

pratigya looked at him,his eyes were almost blood red in colour and he cud nt evn stand properly,so drunk he was. she felt her legs trembling as she seemed to recognize the expression in his eyes'it was devouring.. she cudnt help herself wen all of a sudden he placed his lips on hers greedily.... she punched her fists hard on his chest bt he didn't move away..she felt as if she wud suffocate,her mouth was fully covered with his devouring mouth.....

NOOO!!---she tried to shout'U CNT DO THIS TO ME!!! NOO PLZ

the movement of her lips gave him the false notion of her response and he became more urgent and passionate.... to her utmost horror pratigya found his free hands travelling all over her body.... she cudnt take it any more... irritation and disgust filled her frm top to toe. she gathered her strength and kicked him hard on his leg.. he pulled himself away frm her instantly,groaning in pain..

pratigya coughed and gasped for breath...she had almost died of suffocation.. before she cud do anything eolse,nitin hurried towards her and spun her around by the arm. his eyes were burning with rage... he hissed----HW DARE U PRATIGYA? tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujhe kick karne ki? mujhe?NITIN MEHRA ko?

pratigya was nt to be put down either. she shouted---to kya karti main? jo ho raha tha use hone deti? kabhi nhi.....

nitin looked around him.. some people had stopped dancing and were enjoying their scene. he lowered down his voice a little and then said---pratigya awaz niche karo...chillao mat....ye tumhara ghar nhi hain...ye mere izzat ka sawal hain..shut up and dnt create a scene here...

his wrds pricked her like needles.. she felt tears welling up in her eyes bt she hated to show him her weakness. she controlled herself and took a deep breath.. then she walked up to him and placed a hard slap across his face...

he was so shocked that he cud nt manage to say anything..he nvr had the slightest notion that pratigya cud be so desparate...she had always been a gentle and nice grl.....

pratigya said to him,in a firm tone---shayad ye thappar tumhe meri baat acchi tarah se samjha diya hoga...

with that she left the party and walked outside.....

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it was a Saturday night and as usual Krishna,ayan and chandu had gone to the wine shop to fill up their tanks.. they had always done that together and till date there had been no exception.. hence it was a shock for ayan and chandu wen Krishna suddenly said----ee chandu,ayan aaj hume peene ka bilkul man nhi kar raha hain,tumlog enjoy karo...

ayan almost choked on his drink at his wrds. he turned towards Krishna,shocked and trying to make out wat he was saying,chandu had the same expression on his face..

ayan'kya kaha aapne bhaiya?aap nhi peeyenge? ee chandu...lagta hain hamara Krishna bhaiya sachmuch pagla gaye hain..... he laughed out loudly...

chandu'kyu bhaiya? aaj is berukhi ki koi wajah?

Krishna wondered whether to tell them or not then finally he opened his mouth---pata nhi yar.....hume aaj aisa kyu lag raha hain ki kisiko hamari sakht zaroorat hain...koi musibat mein hain...pata nhi kyun ye dil tab se dhad dhadaye ja raha hain bas....

chandu giggled---ee ayan tu sach bol raha hain...bhaiya pagla gaye hain,eenko aab ajeeb ajeeb awaze bhi sunayi de rahi hain.....

both of them laughed at their own joke.. Krishna realised that they were nt in such a state to consider his wrds seriously... he himself cudnt.

he thot---ye kya ho raha hain humko? aur kyu?

after sitting quietly for sometime,he suddenly got up and grabbed his bike keys frm the table in frnt of him. then he said to his frnds---hum chalet hain..tumlogo se baad mein milenge... with that he walked out of the wine shop....

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pratigya felt terribly helpless..she had been searching for a taxi frantically for the last hal;f an hour bt didn't get one....it was almost 2 0'clock at nite and she became horribly worried. she had said to her parents that she wud be home by mid night as she had come to a frnd's birthday party.. she had to lie to them,although she hated it...as she did nt intend to tell them abt nitin,nt then,and now NVR..

her jaws hardened as she made her confident decision----main usse aab koi rishta nhi rakhungi...sabkuch khatam ho gaya hain,sabkuch........

suddenly a faint sound of engine caught her attention. she turned around to see a single bright light ripping through the darkness of the night. her heart leaped up in excitement and she raised her hand to stop it,watevr it was...

it happened to be a motorbike.. she shouted for it to stop and it obeyed. the motorbike screeched to a halt in frnt of her... the rider took of his helmet and looked at her,his eyes full of overwhelming surprise...it was KRISHNA.....

pratigya hurried to him and said---plz meri madat kijiye...mujhe ghar pahuchnqa hain...bht der ho chuki hain....mujhe ek bhi taxi nhi mil rahi hain......plz meri madat kijiye...main yahan buri tarah se fas gayi hun...plz....

Krishna cud nt help himself frm saying----aap? aap yahan itni raat ko kya kar rahi hain?

as pratigya gazed at the stranger,startled by his wrds,she felt as if she knew him...as if they had met before....she strained her brains bt cudnt remember where....his face seemed so familiar to her....

Krishna said to her----baith jaiye....hum aapko ghar chod dete hain...

an illuminating smile spread across pratigya's face as she gathered the folds of her dress in a suitable manner and got up behind him. it took her a few more seconds to settle herslf.

before putting on his helmet Krishna turned his head and said to her----gir jayengi,hume pakad lijiye...

at frst pratigya felt a little uneasy bt then she shoved away her discomfort and grabbed his waist tightly.. she was,in fact,vry afraid of bike rides....bt now she did nt hve any other way....

Krishna put on his helmet and kicked his bike to a start....they disappeared into the dark night...

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hey...ruko.....hum pahuch gaye hain---pratigya cried out...

it had taken them about twenty minutes and pratigya was pretty scared this whole span of time...

she detested bike rides,bt this one was more dangerous,Krishna rode it in a really rough way.....

pratigya got down frm the bike and smiled at him---thnk u so much...aaj agr aap nhi hote to main shayad waqt par ghar nhi pahuch pati...waise late to gaya hain lekin aur late ho jata to shayad papa police mein complain karne nikal padte.....

she laughed at her own joke and a smile also appeared on krishna's lips....

pratigya stretched out her hand to him---hi,am pratigya....tumhara nam?

Krishna did nt shake hands with her. he just said flatly---naam jankar kya karenge...apko ko chehre bhi thk se yaad nhi rahte....

pratigya---matlab?

as a reply to her question,he put on his helmet,started his bike and sped away,leaving pratigya,all confused and puzzled at his strange behaviour....

on her way towards the entrance,suddenly,as if someone put it into her mind,she remembered where she had met him....

oh my god!!!! ye to wohi ladka hain jisne usdin hamari jaan bachayi thi....woh dupatta wala incident.........!!!

she slapped herself on her forehead----oh main kaise bhul gayi...usne aaj bhi hamari madat ki aur maine...? kya soch raha hoga woh.........plz bhagwan agr ek bar aur mil jaye woh mujhe to main usse mafi mang lungi...aaj agr woh nhi hota......

she shuddered at the thot of wat wud hve happened to her if he wud nt hve been there....

she didn't know that probably her destiny was smiling at her,only he knew that meeting Krishna so many times...was nt just a coincidence...............................................

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sangini...sangini...piya ki main banungi.................

sangini.....sangini....piya ki main banungi..............

Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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Fab!! Was Smiling All The Way! Good Work :D
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Eeeewww!!I hate Nitin's character in this.Gud thing she slapped him. 😊 Krishna's character in this is very sweet.I like it.Plz continue soon. 😊
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chapter---5
tumhe kuch bhi karke is shaadi ko rokna hain pratigya----said sheetal(jennifer winget),her frnd-- tum mano ya na mano,tum aaj bhi nitin se hi pyaar karti ho.....
pratigya did nt reply....they were sitting in a busy restaurant,having a talk over lunch.... pratigya's parents had decided to get her married soon and they had chosen a guy for her,arjun malhotra(karan singh grover). she had met him the previous day and he was nice bt pratigya cud nt get nitin out of her mind. she knew vry well that wat he had done that day was nasty and indecent bt he had been cntinuously apologising after that..... for and a sensitive and emotional grl like pratigya,it was enough to forgive someone. bt before she cud meet him and clear all the misunderstandings she had to go and meet this arjun guy and he had told her father that he liked her.. now both the families are planning for their marriage soon enough..and therefore pratigya came to meet her bst frnd sheetal to discuss thngs with her....
sheeta put her fork down on the plate and said to her---dekho pratigya usdin nitin nashe ki halat mein tha isiliye tumhare saath wo sab kuch kiya...lekin tum to normal halat mein thi na? fir tumne use thappar mara? hw cud u pratigya? woh tumhara boyfrnd hain,3 saal ka relationship hain tumdono ka...agr usne tumhe kiss bhi kiya to ismein galat kya hain yehi to meri samajh mein nhi aa rahi hain....aur sabse badi baat ye hain ki tum aab bhi nitin se hi pyaar karti ho....ha ya na?
pratigya nodded.. she agreed that she loved him still although she cud nvr thnk that wat he did that nyt was ryt...it was wrong no doubt bt she needed to be a little patient with the matter.....
foolish grl,she didnt evn thnk that nitin was so selfish and an indecent guy....love makes evryone blind....she loved him therefore she did nt see his flaws.....
sheetal-----suno pratigya nitin ne tumhe mana kiya hain abhi tumhare gharwalo ko kuch batane ke liye tum dono ke rishte ke bare mein thk hain...to mat batao na...bas itan bata do ki tum kisise pyaar karti ho aur sirf usise shaadi karogi....,naam batana zaroori hain kya? aur main ye guarantwee to le hi sakti hu ki jab tumhare mummy papa is baat ko sunenge itna shocked ho jayenge ki ladke ka naam bhi poochna bhul jayenge....
she laughed out loudly at her own joke.....
pratigya smiled too---thk hain main dekhti hun kya kiya jaye......
she called the waiter and asked him for the bill. sheeta got up and took her purse...she was in a hurry thats why she bid her frnd a short goodbye and left.. pratigya came out slowly,she was in no hurry....she walked across the road and towards her home as it was a small distance and she preferred walking becoz she wont get time to thnk properly once she was at home....
she had gone a few distance wen suddenly she heard quick footsteps behind her,as if someone was running. she turned back and instantly collided with a man,whu ran into her,knocking her down.. she was disgusted. she shouted out----wat the hell...istarah koi dhakka marta hain kya?
the man was so petrified abt somethng that he did nt pay any attention to her abuses,got up on his feet and ran for his life. pratigya stood up,dusting herself wen she heard a big chaos followed by the sound of several motorbikes.. she immidiately moved towards the side of the road to save herself as she saw four motorbikes hurrying towards her.. many people had gathered around the place to find out wat was going on and pratigya was one amonbg them. the motorbikes crossed her and seemed to chase the man whu had collided with her.. one of the motorbikes blocked his way and halted.. the rider got down quickly and took off his helmet.. pratigya recognized him at once---KRISHNA...though she did nt know his name still she recognized him..as the guy whu had helped her two times.. before she cud thnk anythng more... krishna took that man by the collar and started beating him black and blue..while his frnds watched in delight... the man kept on apologising bt he seemed to pay a deaf ear to his cries...he cntinued to beat him.. blood spurted out of his nose bt still he didnt stop....at last the man slowly became too weak to protest,he closed his eyes and surrendered to krishna...that was only wen krishna let him go.. he fell down on the ground,unable to get up,unable to move,totally broken.... krishna stared at him piteously and spat on his face... then he wiped his hands behind his jeansd and said to his companions---saala!!! bht uchal raha tha.....aab iska akal thikane aa gaya hoga......
the crowd slowly broke away as then the climax was over and evryone returned to their own work except one,pratigya.... she kept on standing there,staring at the injured man,with a horrified expression on her face.... she cudnt believe wat she just saw.. hw cn someone be so cruel? so nasty? so pathetic? and that also someone whu had saved her life nt once bt twice... she had nvr expected krishna to be like that....
krishna was abt to get back on his motorbike wen suddenly he heard frm behind---kyu kiya aapne aisa? akhir iski galati kya thi?
he turned around at once to see whu had the guts to ask her questions and froze as soon as he saw that face wich had made him dream again...no appropiate reply came to his mouth...
pratigya was too angry to realise wat she was saying---maine aapse kabhi ye umeed nhi ki thi...main to soch rahi thi ki aap ek acche insaan hain,dusro ki madat karte hain..usdin traffic mein aapne jistarah meri jaan bachayi aur fir us raat ko mujhe ghar tak drop kiya..main aapki bht izzat karne lagi thi...lekin aap aise nikle? gunde? mawali? jiske andar insaniyat bhi nhi hain...are aap to jaanwaro se bhi badtar sulookh kiya hain iske saath...kyu? kya kiya tha isne? kuch nhi hain na? bas aapko shayad kuch sahi baat bol diya hoga isiliye aapko bura lag gaya to aapne ise mara...thk hain par kitne logo ko aap markar unka muh band karenge? main bhi kahoongi ki aap gunde ho,mawali ho,samaj mein rehne ke layak nhi ho.....to aab khade kyu hain mariye mujhe...mere saath bhi aisa hi sulook kijiye?....chee!!
she twisted her face in disgust....
ayan got down frm his bike and came towards her. he cudnt tolerate krishna's insult. he said to her---e ladki kya bole ja rahi ho ha? tum jaanti ho krishna bhiya ko? nhi janti....woh kabhi galat nhi hota....woh....
krishna raised his hand to stop him. he nvr liked to explain thngs to anyone and nor did he like anyone explaining his actions to anybody....
he turned back and walked towards his motorbike,without evn saying a wrd. after starting it,he put on his helmet and sped away..
after he had gone out of sight,pratigya was abt to go too wen ayan stopped her by blocking her way.
pratigya---kya badtameezi hain ye..
ayan---aapko hamari baat pura sunkar hi jana hoga...chahe bhaiya ko ye pasand ho ya na ho....
pratigya---mujhe tumhare bhaiya ke bare mein kuch nhi sunna hain...wo kya hain ye main dekh chuki hun aur jan chuki hun...mera raasta chodo...
ayan---aapko to sunna hi padega.....kuch nhhi janti aap.. ye saala jo yahan pada hain...woh hamare kiraydar ke beti ko har roz chedta tha....us 15 saal ki bacchi ke saath badtameezi karta tha..woh scul bhi nhi ja pati iske darr se.....samjhi? isiliye bhaioya ne use sabaq sikhayi hain....aab wo bacchi bine darr ke scul ja payegi.....
pratigya felt as if she had committed a murder..... she was shocked... she had agen hurt that person whu was,in reality, a nice guy....rather a wonderful person...
pratigya thot--o no...ye maine kya kar diya...main to usse mafi mangnewali thi.....aur maine firse uska dil dukha diya?
seeing her face,ayan cud guess wat was going on in her mind. he felt his anger calm down a little. he shrugged his shoulders and said---bhaiya aise insaan nhi hain,manta hun uski tarika aplogo ki nazro mein galat hain lekin woh khud ek bht acche insaan hain....
pratigya managed to say----woh mujhe kahan milenge?
ayan---kya?
pratigya repeated---woh mujhe lkahan milenge? mujhe unse mafi mangni hain..plz mujhe bataiye.....
ayan smiled at her---age aap unse maafi mangna chahti hain to thk hain,chaliye hamare saath, hum aapko unke paas le chalte hain....
pratigya got on behind him on his bike and he rode it to the direction of krishna's house............
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ye lijiye,ye aa gaya krishna bhaiya ka ghar... pratigya got down frm the bike,lokking around herself.....she had nvr come across this place,it was some kind of a CHAWL....a totally different environment frm where she had grown up and lived her life..... she was surprised to see the people working so hard to earn their living..
evryone stared at her as she walked beside ayan towards the stairs..all the ladies stared at her with suspicious eyes,as if she was an intruder..she kept her eyes low,fixed on her ground. she heard someone ask somethng to ayan for wich he replied-----are nhi yar,madamji hain ek.....krishna bhaiya se milne aayi hain... immidiately some mumers were spread on evryone's lips----ek sundar padi likhi ladki aayi hain krishna se milne.....
pratigya shoved of her uneasiness and tried to be smart..after all she had come to the place for some concrete purpose......and was confident abt it....
bhaiya!!! bhaiya!!! dekhiye to sahi kaun aya hain apse milne?---ayan knocked at a door..
a voice was heard frm inside---hume kisise baat nhi karni hain...
pratigya realised that she had really hurt him a lot. she knocked on the door herself and said----krishna...main pratigya......aapse baat karni hain....darwaza kholiye plz...........
the door opened with a loud creak,after few seconds..krishna was stunned to see her-----aap?
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Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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ah, if only in the show also, they had cleared up misunderstandings between Kriya so easily, it would have been so good! 😍
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Phirse misunderstanding!! 😆 But it's kinda cute.Pratigya always misunderstands him before even listening to the whole thing. 😆 Nice chp.Plz continue.
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chapter---6

aap yahan?'krishna looked shocked....

he looked at ayan,he was trying to hide his smile. he raised his hand and slapped him hard on his back...

ayan---aa bhaiya hume kyun mar rahe hain...isne khud kahan ki ye aapse milna chahti hain....

Krishna cntinued beating him----saale iska matlab tu ise lekar chawl mein aa jayega....tera akal kahi ghas khane gaya hain ka?

pratigya tried to save ayan... she came in between them and said to Krishna---ek min ek min ruko..... maine hi kaha tha isse ki main aapse milna chahti hu....ismein iski koi galti nhi hain..ise mat maro plz....

Krishna stopped immediately. ayan looked really angry---oho ho bhaiya hum kehrahe the to yakeen nhi aya hamari baat par aur is madam ne ek baar keh diya aur aap jhat se man gaye...wah re wah!!!

Krishna walked towards him and whispered---saale chup ho ja..kya bole jar aha hain...

then he turned at pratigya----to bataiye pratigya ji....aapko hum jaise gunde se kya kehna hain?

pratigya's cheeks became red at once...she lowered her eyes and tried to say---wo main....wo......aapko............main.......wo....

Krishna stopped her in between and said-----bas bas...thk hain...main samajh gaya...aapko apni galti ka ehsas hain aur aap....u kya kehte hain...haan........sooori hain...hain na?

pratigya cudnt help smiling at his pronunciation of the wrd "SORRY".... she said---kya aap mujhe ek glass pani bhi nhi puchenge...main apki mehman hun.....

the same shocked and puzzled expression appeared on his face. he didn't know wat to say wen suddenly ayan said to her-----haan haan zaroor....bhaiya.....kya karte hain aap..ghar aye mehman ko bahar khada karke baat karenge kya? pratigya ji ko andar to bithayi ye...aur hum kuch thanda wanda lekar ate hain... he ran down..

Krishna scratched his head and said to her----chaliye...andar chaliye....

pratigya stepped inside his room...it was small,no doubt and untidy too... well it was a bachelor's room and that also in a chawl...so one shudnt expect better....

Krishna pointed to the bed and told her to sit down.. then he himself pulled a wooden chair to her and sat down in frnt of her... she was looking around the room...it was so simple with almost nothing that cud catch her attention.... Krishna watched her calmly and said----kya dekh rahi hain...yehi hamara ghar hain....kya kare isse zyaada afford to nhi kar sakte.....

pratigya tried to say something bt Krishna interrupted her---bataiye....kya kehna hain aapko....

pratigya beginned with the most cutest smile of hers..she said---dekhiye...dekho...i min...dekhiye....

Krishna----aap hume TUM keh sakti hain....koi prime minister nhi hain hum jo hume AAP kehna padega....

pratigya---dekho...humne tumhe hamesha galat samjha hain aur tum kuch aur hi nikle ho....tum acche insaan ho,dusro ki madat karte ho bina swarth ke...aur mujhe ye baat bht pasand hain...tumne meri bhi madat kiya hain do bar....aur main kabhi nhi bhulungi is baat ko....main hamesha tumhe galat bol deti hun kyunki ye meri aadat hain..poori baat jane hi main hamesha kisi natije par pahuch jaati hun aur ulta sidha bol deti hun...isiliye mujhe kabhi kabhi apne aap par bhi bht gussa aati hain...jaise ki kuch der pehgle aa rahi thi.... main aapse...TUMSE mafi mangna chahti hun agar meri baton se tumhe bura laga hain then am really sorry Krishna.....

Krishna listened to her quietly.without a single wrd. wen she finished,he smiled and said---koi baat nhi hain pratigya ji...hume glata samajhne ke liye koi aapko fasi nhi denewala tha jo aap hamare ghar par chali aayi mafi mangne ke liye...

pratigya---nhi Krishna...tum aab mujhe galat samajh rahe ho......main yahan kisi se darke ya kisiko dikhane ke liye tumse mafi mangne nhi aayi hun.....main yahan apni marzi se aayi hun.....

pratigya ji ye lijiye aapka cold drink....... Krishna and pratigya turned around to see ayan standing at the door with a cold drink and two samosas...he handed them to pratigya whu thnked him with a smile...

then ayan said to Krishna---bhaiya hum dukan par ja rahe hain aap bhi aa jaiyega.. he left

Krishna turned to pratigya agen whu had started nibbling at one samosa.... he smiled at the way she ate it,so childishly.....

after she had finished with the samosas,she got up and said to him---aab main chalti hu.....bye!!

Krishna nodded. she had just walked a few steps wen suddenly she turned and walked back. she stretched out her hand at Krishna----usdin apne apna nam bhi bataya tha aur humse haath bhi nhi milaya tha.....lekin aaj apko mujhse dosti to karna hi padega...krishna kya tum mere dost banoge?

Krishna was totally confused abt wat he shud do.. in frnt of him,stood the grl whum he loved,he dreamt of,he desired for bt still he cud nt make up his mind to take this step in her direction becoz he wud nt be able to check himself in falling for her more. bt she seemed to be a vry determined grl and this time she was determined to make him her frnd...... he touched her hand and shook it lightly.... he smiled..

pratigya's smile was wider than him---okay to aab....TUM mere dost ho....aur iska matlab aaj se tumhara har prblm main solve karne ki koshish karungi aur meri har prb tum solve karne ki koshish karoge thk hain?

Krishna----tum sirf koshish karogi?hum to tumhara koi bhi prblm chutki mein solve kar denge...

pratigya---accha? dekhenge.....par aab mujhe jana hi hoga..bye Krishna...fir milenge.....

Krishna waved at her wen she waved at him,while descending the stairs.... he didn't know why his heart seemed to feel so light,he felt as if he wud float.............

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kya bat kar rahe hain aap bhaiya? yehi woh ladki hain jiska khayal aapko din raat satata hain?---ayan was shocked...

Krishna nodded---haan....pratigya ji hi hamari mohabbta hain......hum usse bht pyaar karte hain.....

chandu said to ayan---yar tumlog bht kamine ho...hume hamari bhabi ka jhalak tak nhi mila...kisine humko tab khabar kyu nhi diya,hum bhi daude daude chale aate use dekhne ke liye jisne hamare bhaiya ko pagal kar diya hain?

Krishna raised his hand to slap him bt he moved his head away at the ryt moment thereby escaping it..

Krishna----kya batate tumko? ee chandu jaldi aa jao tumhari bhabi aayi hain haan? yehi batate tumko?

chandu---haan,aur kya?

Krishna---accha? aur u kya sochti hamare bare mein? are use thodi na pata hain ki hum usse pyaar karte hain?

chandu---are pata nhi to pata ho jata.....waise ek na ek din to batane hi hain ya fir zindagi bhar uska intezaar karenge aap ki kab u khud aakar aapko bole? dekhiye bhaiye kahi ye pehle tum pehle tum ke chakkar mein train chut na jaye....

Krishna laid down on his bed,hends behing his head----are yar aab ye train kabhi nahi chutegi...disti to ho gaya hain aab dheere dheere wo hamare bavnao ko samajhne lagengi aur humse pyaar bhi karengi...dekhna tumlog......

he closed his eyes and began to dream abt pratigya....................

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pratigya thot of nitin,the love of her life....hw cute he looked wen he smiled,hw nicely he behaved with her during the college days,everyone used to tease him as he was vry simple...they used to call him LANGOOR....one day she had slapped a person herself for calling him that name....she remembered it all....maybe nitin had changed a little with time and his innocence had disappeared bt his feelings hadn't..he still loved her..she knew it and she loved him too.......

pratigya promised to herself----main kabhi nitin ko bina kuch soche samjhe istarah galat nhi samjhungi...chahe uske liye mujhe kitna bhi zalil hona pade...lekin main apne pyaar ko apni zindagi se nhi jaane dungi......

her phone rang,disturbing her thots....it was the song sangini by kailash kher...she was a huge fan of this song and her thots vry nicely matched with the lyrics of this song....she picked it up,it was nitin...

pratigya ----hello?

nitin---kya kar rahi thi jaan?

pratigya didn't reply bt her face blushed instantly..

nitin---aab itna bhi blush mat karo...mujhe yahan se saaf dikhayi de rahi hain...

in reply she laughed out cheerfully....

nitin---khair chodo suno...tumhare liye ek good news hain.......main london jar aha hun ek project ke liye....chay mahine ke liye aur wahan se aate hi hum shaadi kar lenge....aab tumhe 3 saal nhi balki sirf 6 mahine intezaar karna hoga.....

pratigya didn't know whether to feel happy or sad abt it.....it was good news that they wud be getting married in just 6 mnths...bt it was bad news becoz he wud be out of her sight for these six long mnths............

nitin---hello? prats tum sun rahi ho na?

pratigya'haan nitin....congratulations...par nitin yahan mere parents ne mere liye ladka dekh liya hain....aur shaadi ki baat bhi chal rahi hain kyunki ladke walo ne haan kar diya hain......

nitin---of ho prats kya tum ye sab 6 mahine tak tal nhi paogi...dnt tell me that.......

pratigya---nhi.....aisi baat nhi hain........thk hain tum fikar mat karo...main kuch na kuch zaroor kar lungi......tum jao.......aur jaldi wapas aana.........

nitin---ye hui na baat...love u swthert...main tumhe fon karta rahunga...bye...........

pratigya thot abt the matter carefully after she had put down the phone.....wat wud she do? she needed to stop this wedding bt how?

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Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago

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