18/3: Of poignant pauses and trammelled desires...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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When marimba rhythms start to play
Dance with me, make me sway
Like a lazy ocean hugs the shore
Hold me close, sway me more

Like a flower bending in the breeze
Bend with me, sway with ease
When we dance you have a way with me
Stay with me, sway with me

Other dancers may be on the floor
Dear, but my eyes will see only you
Only you have that magic technique
When we sway I go weak

I can hear the sounds of violins
Long before it begins
Make me thrill as only you know how
Sway me smooth, sway me now

Sway me, take me
Thrill me, hold me
Bend me, ease me
You have a way with me
Two souls, bleeding from the wounds of love, wounded by their hatred of each other, and, bound by the shackles of a hitherto onerous relationship, looking for a salve, seeking solace where they least expected to find it....
A hesitant Sid and an anxious Ridhima held together by an inexplicable thread spun of hope - tentative steps walking away from the ashes of their hatred, the timid hand stretched to catch a piece of sunshine, a fervent desire to hold on to a ray of hope, , an unspoken and inexplicable yearning!
A desire , a craving, a wish and a pine, a pain and a hope, a want, an anticipation and a disappointment, an excitement and a trepidation, a thrill and a fear, an exhilaration and a restraint, an impatience and a resignation, a desire evocative yet silent, felt yet not understood...
Much as I loved Armaan and Ridhima together, tonight Siddhanth and Ridhima were magic....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow !! That is so poignant......so beautifully described......each and every word holds so true for them.
Posted: 15 years ago
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very well written, beautifully expressed SR!!

thank you !!👏
Edited by Kai_Hiwatari - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I don't think any other serial has showed any

relationship more beautifully than how CVS have

managed to show SIDHIMA's.I really didn't expect

this from the Cvs


SR are so completely besotted with other


They just didnt want to leave each other's presence.


both of them....take one step away from each

other......then stop and take 2 steps back towards

each other


The awkwardness and attraction...uffffffffffffffffff


sid ridz get pulled 2wards each other the way

magnets do

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starry_night

Wow !! That is so poignant......so beautifully described......each and every word holds so true for them.

I am glad you liked it... after a long time, DMG recreate some of its old magic for me!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kai_Hiwatari

very well written, beautifully expressed SR!!

thank you !!👏

I guess tonight they inspired it...
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Originally posted by: aishu_25

beautifully written!!!! SR Magical!!!!

Thank you....the were so real tonight... so evocatively hesitant that you couldn't help feel for them...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvarti

I don't think any other serial has showed any

relationship more beautifully than how CVS have

managed to show SIDHIMA's.I really didn't expect

this from the Cvs


SR are so completely besotted with other


They just didnt want to leave each other's presence.


both of them....take one step away from each

other......then stop and take 2 steps back towards

each other


The awkwardness and attraction...uffffffffffffffffff


sid ridz get pulled 2wards each other the way

magnets do

I must admit Cinevistaas, when they put their mind to it, do a fabulous job of potraying romance.. they were simpy outstanding with Armaan Ridhima and created a magic which no one could deny and now once again, yesterday with Sidhanth and Ridhima they touched a cord in you...
For once, they deserve a bouquet after the amount of brickbats that they get!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I will be back to answer this one! 🤗

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Wow! I actually imagined a ballroom with Sid-Riddz and the emotions conveyed in that poem. Sigh!....Sway with me. Lovely!

I agree. SR were magical in that scene - the hesitance and the subtlety of the emotions that Sid-Rddz have for each-other is endearing and heartwarming indeed. 😳

Love and luck always,❤️

God bless you.
🤗
Edited by Pocahontas - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pocahontas

I will be back to answer this one! 🤗

*EDITED*

Wow! I actually imagined a ballroom with Sid-Riddz and the emotions conveyed in that poem. Sigh!....Sway with me. Lovely!

I agree. SR were magical in that scene - the hesitance and the subtlety of the emotions that Sid-Rddz have for each-other is endearing and heartwarming indeed. 😳

Love and luck always,❤️

God bless you.
🤗

I am glad that you liked it.. I couldn't help it - this song came to mind almost the moment the scene ended!

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