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Posted: 15 years ago
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Congrats!!!! Please continue the new thread soon.Make Sajan part longer please.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wen r u updating next sweetheart?
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Scene: Samrat's Cottage

Its morning time…….

Samrat has just got up and sees Gunjan is sleeping beside him with her head near Samrat's shoulder and her arm over his chest…..He smiles seeing her…..he slowly tries to get up not disturbing Gunjan……he removes her hand slowly but in the sleep…..she pulls Samrat close to her and sleeps over his hand thinking it to be the pillow……Samrat was too admired by her innocence and kept looking at her….He then slowly tries to remove his hand…..and picks his cell phone and dials the number of Sehgal House…..

A servant (X) picked up the phone……

S: Mom ko phone do……

X: Samrat baba…..memsahab aur sahab hospital mein hain…….

S (shocked to hear that): Kyun kya hua……sab theek toh hai…..kab kaise……

With Samrat's loud voice Gunjan woke up……

X: Pata nahin baba….. sahab ko attack pada….to unhe hospital le gayye hain…….

S: Accha theek hai hum nikalte hain yahaah se……

He turns and tells Gunjan that they will have to leave from here……

They pack up their bags and leave for the airport……

In the plane……

Samart is too tensed……he is sitting on the seat with his forehead cupped under his hands…..

Gunjan puts her hand over Samrat's shoulders…..

G: Samrat….sab theek ho jaayega aap pareshaan mat hoiye……hum abhi thodi der mein Mumbai pohonch jaayenge……aap ko himmat rakhni hogi….wahaan maa to bilkul akeli hain na….. aap aise himmat nahin haar sakte……

He then removes his forehead from his hands and puts his head over Gunjan's shoulders and the plane leaves for Mumbai……

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Mayank and Anjali are sitting on the dining table……

Anjali speaks small small words enough for others to understand…..

A: Happa…..Happa….Happa….

Nupur was in the kitchen preparing breakfast……

N (she was a bit mingled up with the household job and was speaking this in anger): Mere ghar mein toh bhuke rakshas rehte hain…..kisi ko nahin dikhta main subah se kaam kar rahi hoon….Happa happa….arre nashta bana rahi hoon….tabhi toh laaungi…..

Firstly Mayank was sitting quietly…reading the newspaper……and when he hears Nupur's voice…..with Anjali…..he too started….

M: Happa…Happa……

Now Nupur bursted out…….

N: Itni bhook lag rahi hai to chup baitho…….kisi hotel mein bhi jaaoge to 20 min mein khana serve hota hai…… yahaan toh fauran chahiye…..

Now she prepared the breakfast and brought it……

N: Mayank….wo toh choti hai aur tum bhi shuru ho gayye isske saath……

Aur paraathe Mayank ki plate mein aise land hote hain jaise World war 3 shuru hone ke liye pehla bomb Nupur ko hi phenkna tha……

Mayank ko pata hai agar wo aage kuch aur bola…….toh wo usske aage kuch aur bolne laayak nahin bachega……chup chap sunta ja raha hai aur kha raha hai……

Nupur sits beside Anjali and was feeding her with spoon……

M: Waah Nupur…..aaj tumhaare haath ke paraathe kha kar mazaa aa gaya……Kya swaad hai tumhaare haathon mein……

N: Aaj achaanak tareefon ki barsaat….. koi kaam hai….. kapde saare press hain…. Kisi shirt ka koi bhi button nahin toota hai……. to aaj kya baat hai…..

M: Kyun main tumhaari taareef nahin kar sakta…..

Nupur was looking at Mayank and feeding Anjali…..

N: Haan ab toh Mayank film banayenge Main Aur Mrs. Sharma……

M: Nahin Nupur….par wo…..

N: Kya…..mera dhyaan bataane ki koshish mat karo……

M: Arre par wo…….

Nupur turns and sees……Anjali was playing with the food…..her small hands were drenched with the cereal and the whole face fully covered with cereal……..

Mayank starts laughing……….and firstly Nupur was angry and then she too starts laughing……

N: Mere ghar ke rakshas….rakshas hi rahenge…..aur mujhe aise hi acche lagte hain…….

Scene: Adhiraj's House

Dia: Bro main office ja rahi hoon……mujhe ye address bata do…..

A: Do minute ruk….main chod doonga tujhe…..ussi tarf ja raha hoon……

Scene: Outside the office of Sehgal's

Dia stepped down from the car…..

A: Ok Dia best of luck…..

D: Luck….wo toh mere saath humesha hi rehta hai….. accha ab main chalti hoon…..

And he sees Mayank going from there……she calls him…..

D: Mr. Sharma…..

Adhiraj sees that it is none other than Mayank……he turns his face so that he could not see him…wears his googles….

Mayank looks towards the car…..and Adhiraj winds up the mirror of the window and leaves from there……

Adhiraj (thinking): Mere liye yahi accha rahega ki main Mayank Nupur ki zindagi se door rahoon……wo apni zindagi mein khush hain aur main apni zindagi mein……. Shayad……

D: Hello Mr. Sharma……

M: Hello Ms. Dia….welcome koi problem toh nahin hui aane mein ?

D: No….not at all….

Inside the office…..

Mayank takes her to the designing department…..

M: Indu…..yahaan saara kaam dekh kar mujhe inform karna…tab tak main baki ki meetings check karta hoon….aur Ms. Dia ab se humaare naye brand ke liye shoot karengi…..

D: Thanks Mr. Sharma….

After sometime…..Samrat Gunjan landed in Mumbai…..They directly reached the hospital from there…..

S: Mom…..Dad kaise hain ab ?

SM: Arre beta tum log yahaan kaise? Tumhe kisne bataya….

S: Pehle ye bataao Dad kaise hain…..

SM: Theek hain beta……minor attack tha…..doctor ne kaha hai hum inhein ghar le jaa sakte hain…. Par tum log yahaan kya kar rahe ho?

S: Aap ne socha aap mujhe nahin bataayengi toh mujhe pata nahin chalega….maine ghar phone kiya that oh pata chala ki Dad hospital mein hain…..

SM: Ab aise attack to inhe kabhi bhi aa jaate hain……..tu toh jaanta hai….

Nurse comes and tells: Aap ke saath jo patient hain unhe aap log le jaa sakte hain….

Samrat's Dad: Sab kyun pareshaan ho rahe hain…main theek hoon….dekho bilkul theek……ab toh meri bahu bhi aa gayi hai……ab mujhe koi pareshaani nahin hai…..aur Samrat tu…..aaram karke phir office jaana…… Mayank ne office mein saara kaam sambhaala hua hai….. tere sign ki wajah se bohot kaam ruke huye hain…..you cannot neglect your work beta…..

S: Haan Dad…..mujhe pata hai….ab hum ghar chalein…..

Thats small.....but main exams ke beech mein itna hi update kar paayi......
Maine apna kaam kar diya.....ab aapka kaam hai.....kya nahin pata.....arre comment karna boss......tabhi toh mujhe pata chalega sab kuch theek hai ya nahin.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Wow Daksha

Amazing update

Loved Mayur especially Anjali ..Happa ...happa.....😆

What is the mystery behind Adha.....

do cont soon

luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

shit yaar sam ka dad ki wajah sa sajan missed their cute honey moon scene after the first night

anyways loved the sweet convo of mayur and anjili
an awesome fantastic miondblasting update dear
plz plz plzzzzzzzzzz try to continue it soon
n thanx for the pm dear
love
sana😊
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Very cute update
do continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Too good
Rakash hi raheneg
badiya hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Aww too cute the update loved the angil happa happa haha..............
Do Con Sooon..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
hey daksha superb part loved it can't wait for next update do continue soon and best of luck for your exams and thanks for pm

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