AR FF: ..Haadsa.. SUPRISE NOTE pg32 4/2/11

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 15 years ago

Introduction:

Gupta Family-

Shashank Gupta- The head of the family, an army officer who follows a set of rules for living life...

Padma Gupta- Shashank's wife.A fashion-freak and crazy streak, who is hard hit by glamor life.Life, to her, means dressing up and showing off!!

Riddhima Gupta- A bubbly girl, dreaming to be a doctor.She's tired of her family and wants to run away from her home.A very bright girl but ,a bit bossy.

Abhimanyu Gupta- Riddhima's affectionate, protective brother, who's a friend cum brother to her.He's a Captain in Army and understands Riddhima's pain..

Mallik Household-

Billy Mallik-He is the patron of Mallik family, a reputed industrialist of Mumbai.His life revolves around his family.

Ananya Mallik-She is a God-fearing and understanding lady, living a life dedicated to her husband and sons.

Rahul Mallik-The elder son of the Mallik's.He assists his father in business.His aim in life is to help his father achieve his goals.

Armaan Mallik-The younger son of the Malliks.A handsome hunk but a bookworm who aims to become a doctor.He is always supported by his family to achieve whatever he wants to.Though girls drool over him, he seldom has time to move his head out of his books!!

Edited by IsabellaCullen - 14 years ago

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@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 15 years ago

Index:

Intro ~ Page 1

Part 1~ Page 1

Part 2~ Page 5

Part 3~ Page 7

Edited by Sonalihutifan - 15 years ago

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part~1

Riddhima Gupta, has always been one miserable girl at home! Like any other day, she's being "persuaded" by her Mom to stop blabbering about her passion in life!

Riddhima: ..my life has been a hell with you two mama-papa..and I, am going to leave the house..

Shashank-Riddhima, you are NOT going to Australia for studies and it's my decision...I won't let my girl be on her own in an alien country!

Padma-why is this girl so obsessed with the medicine thing?..You have good looks, why don't you join the fashion world?..I have an approach..

Riddhima-Mom!!..Dad!!..Please give me a break..you can't always pressurize me ..I have my own life..and I AM going to Australia, by tomorrow's flight only..

She leaves the room in anger...
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Armaan-maa..main khud pack kar loonga..aapka BP high hai aap kyun pareshaan ho rahi hain..

Ananya-sab pata hai mujhe ...tu wo blue wali jeans they mujhe...

Armaan continues passing things to her, when Rahul enters..

Rahul-Armaan..ye le flight tickets aur ye tere ghar ki chaabhi..

He hands over the keys to him...

Armaan-bro you too?...aapko maine room ke liye kaha tha..aapne poora ghar le liya..?..aur main khud rakh sakta hun apna saaman..

Rahul-tu abhi chota hai baby...apni kitaabon se sar uthayega tab toh kuch karna seekhega...har samay kitabi keeda bana rehta hai..

Arman-bhaiyya..padhta nahin na..toh kabhie selection nahin hota scholarship ke liye...

Rahul-accha....but, you should have a pratical approach in life too yaar, I mean..

Ananya is enjoying their conversation...

Armaan-nah!..aap sab ho...mera bhai kar lega sab practical kaam..main theoritical insaan hi theek hun...waise idhar aao..

He speaks in his ears,"wo..Muskaan Chaddha ki baat kahaan tak pahunchi?.."

Rahul-Armaan tu !!!..

Armaan runs as Rahul is behind him, ready to spank him with a flowerpot !..Ananya enjoys their hearty talks and the cute brother bonding between them..!!!

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There's a huge commotion at Gupta household.As expected, their daughter is found out to be missing from the house..

Shashank-agar Riddhima Australia gayi hai...aise bina bataye..toh main ab kabhie uski shakl bhi nahin dekhunga..marr gayi hai wo mere liye..

Padma-aapko sirf apni fikr hai..meri bacchi..kahaan hogi...kaisi hogi bechaari..

Abhimanyu had come from by the first flight all the way from Chennai...

Abhimanyu-papa..Riddhima

Shashank-No one is going to mention her name again in the house...

And he leaves the place.Her mother is left crying supported by his brother..

Abhimanyu receives a call and making a lame excuse, within no time, moves out of the house..

Abhimanyu-ladli?..kahaan pahunchi?..

Riddhima-bhaiyya?..aap aa gaye?..main ab bhi nikita ke ghar par hun..bas abhi flight ke liye nikal rahi hun...aap airport aa rahe ho na?..

Abhimanyu-bilkul aa raha hoon..infact, am just leaving for airport..

Riddhima-ok..toh main pahunch kar call karti hun...bye..
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Riddhima runs to Abhimanyu and hugs him tightly..

Riddhima-bhaiyyaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!

Abhimanyu hugs her back..."kaisi hai?.."

Riddhima-bilkul fit and fine..like you..

Abhimanyu-Riddhima..flight ka time ho raha hai..tune packing theek se ki hai na?..kuch bhooli toh nahin thi?.

Riddhima-nope..!!sab rakh liye hai..

Abhimanyu-ab bhi ghar ki problem solve nahin hui..tune kuch pata lagaya..?..any place for staying?..

Riddhima-bhaiyya..uski fikr mat karo..wo kar loongi main..

Abhimanyu-toh..ye paise rakh le..

Riddhima-bhaiyya?..ye?..aap?..

Abhimanyu-tu rakh na...ye tere liye hi save kiye they...

Riddhima keeps the money with her..

Abhimanyu-dekh..Riddhima..meri salary sirf 22,650 hai..toh main tere liye zyaada paise toh abhi nahin bhej sakoonga..phir bhi tujhe 300 dollars toh per month bhej hi doonga..kuch PPF se toh kuch shares se..maine investement shuru kar diya hai..

Riddhima hugs him ..."sorry..mama papa naraaz honge na?..kya kaha unhone?. "

Abhimanyu-jo bhi kaha..tumhe unhe galat prove karna hai..u'll be making us proud..main jaanta hun ye...toh ab ghar ki fikr chod de..

Riddhima-main aapko roz call karungi...

Abhimanyu-tu nahin..main karunga..hmm?..apna khayaal rakhna..

Riddhima-(in tears)..bhaiyya..I'll miss u a lot..

Abhimanyu-I'll miss u too..par ro mat ..hum jaldi hi milenge na?..

Riddhima-hmm..

They hear an announcement summoning the passengers...

Abhimanyu-chalo..bye..and take care..

Riddhima-bye..

Abhimanyu kisses her forehead affectionately..

They are distracted by a couple of people running together...

Armaan-papa..der ho gayi...

Ananya-Armaan...tu kaun se raaste se lekar aaya..

Rahul-mom..aap jaante ho naa..iske raaste unique hote hain..ab tu jayega bhi..yaa nahin?..

Riddhima is amused at the site..She lets out a giggle, watching Armaan..Armaan gives him a disgusting look and she frowns...

Abhimanyu-chalo..ab jao..aapko bhi der ho rahi hai..

Hurriedly, both of them bid adieu to their families..

Hi guys!...

This fic has been written by me some 2 years ago, so please don't expect any mature stuff here!...Its been written by a 15 year old, who had just started writing!I personally don't like writing in dialogue form, but in running form, but do tell me, if you want me to convert in into latter!

And yes, an important promise: I PROMISE TO POST ONE PART A DAY !As I have the script complete and ready in my hands, I will post a part a day!...

Please do comment and press the "thankyou" button!

Edited by Sonalihutifan - 15 years ago

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey sonali

gr8 intro

loved it

i hope u r updating ur first part today...

when r u gona updat ur other FF's

i am egerly w8ing for them

do pm me when u updat...

love

nruti

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Dhruvika

@dhruvikaluvsKSG

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

heyy dear

nice intro

cont soon

n do pm me whenever u update

dhruvika

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

woah Sonali its really awesome and sweet sound interesting cool plz continue it soon & plz add me in ur pm list

From Ridhima "Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Chahe mera Pass nahi hai woh,
Fir bhi mera Saath hai woh,
Chahe main uski khwahish nahi ,
Fir bhi mera Jeena ki Aas hai woh.....

Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Chahe mujhse Door hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Rooh hai woh,
Chahai meri dhakhan nahi hai woh ,
Fir bhi mera jeevan hai woh,
chahe mera humsafar nahin hai woh,
phir be har lamha saath hai woh....

Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Bas mera dil ka ek Armaan hai woh,
Bas meri Jaan hai woh....." To Armaan

Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

"Sending you a JUMBO-SIZED
Congratulations Sonali!
On ur New FF!"

"To the one that in my life came
And in my heart so special she became.
Tomorrow things will not be the same
And life will stop being a game
For there is a future you have to aim,
A shining star you have to claim,
And a destiny to make with no one to blame,
With head always up and never feel any shame...
I'm so proud of you, much more then I can acclaim
From all my soul I wish you joy, success and fame."

Nidha