Desert Love(Mayur,AR,Sajan)-update part 4 page 30 - Page 18

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Part 3
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hey guys. i know it has been ages i update this ff. i m really very sorry 4 late update dear. thanx to Nidzy and tapoor . they pressurized me for updating this part. so i want to dedicate this part to them.

Part 4

Bhushan House:

Nupur: Jara apka chot dekhaiye- she placed her hand on his head. BY God aap thoda dekh ke nehi chal sakte the kiya?

She sat beside him & applied the ointment on mayanks forehead and this time she was very close to him so that Mayank could smell her aroma which make him uncomfortable but he don't know why he feels a weird and wonderful feelings for her.

(Mayank mumbled himself- beta Mayank tu ya kya kar raha hai- tujhe aisa kyon feel ho raha hai. Control control urself).

Nupur: Suniye aapko kya hogaya?Aap itna chup kyun hogaye?

Mayank: (Mayank jerk back from his feelings)Ji aap kuch keh rahi thi?

Nupur: Main ye keh rahi thi ki aapko thoda dekh kar chalna chaiye tha?

Mayank: Hello -dekhiye mein dekh kar he chalta hoon. Shayed aap bhul gayi hain ki galtiya mera nehi aap ki hain.

Nupur: ok ok, just forget it.vaise aap abhi tak ye nehi bataya aap yaha kyun ayi hain.

Mayank: ji mein wo.......

At the mean time Gunjan called nupur.

Gunjan: Di papa ka ph hain. wo apse baat karna chahte hain

Nupur: ok Gunjan I m coming. tu jara yaha beith kar baate kar main abhi aati hoon.

Gunjan: Thik hain di tum jao.

Tou bataye ap log kaun hain or kiski pass aye hain

Mayank: Ji wo main Arman

Gunjan: Kya aap Arman jiju hain?

Mayank:What?? Dekhye app galad'''''.

Gunjan: 1 minute main abhi aati hoon.

Mayank: dekheye jara suniye tou''''

Gunjan: main abhi aati hoon

(In Gunurs Room )

Nupur: Kya papa excel mein hamara admission hogaya hai.? Wow papa that's great. Haa papa thik hain. Ap jaldi a jayaga. Ok main rakhti hoon. Bye.

Gunjan : Di ,di !!

Nupur turns to Gunjan.

Nupur: Gunjan ek good news hai- excel main hamara admission hogaya.

Gunjan : Wow Di, Saachi!!!!

Nupur: mucchi.

Gunjan: wo di mein tumhe ek batane ayi hoon.

Nupur: ha gunjan bol,

Gunjan: Di wo jo log aye hain na wo sharma uncle ka beta hain. Or jisko chote laga hain wo wo ''..

Nupur: Ye tu kya wo wo laga rakhi hain. Kya baat hain.

Gunjan: wo Arman jiju hain.

Nupur: Kya??????????? Ye khadoos, sadu ladka armaan hai? Meri to band hi baj jayegi. Uporse meri vasaise usko chote laga. Agar ye papa ko bata diya to mujhe daat bhi padegi.

Gunjan: Di tum ek kam karo uske pass jao or acche tarase baate karo.

Nupur: mein, mein kyon jao. Or mein uss sadu se kya baate karungi.

Gunjan: Di jao na. Shuru karke to dekho

Nupur: nehi mein hargij nehi jaungi

Gunjan: Di tum meri baat nehi manoge

Nupur: Dekh gunjan mujhe emotionally black mail maat kar. thik hain thik hai main jaati hoon.

Gunjan: R a di aise jaogi kya? Tum yaha aoo main tumhe taayar kar deti hoon.

Nupur: kya???? Gunjan tu bilkul pagal hogayi. Aab main o sadu-akdu ke liye taayar bhi ho jaoon-kabhi nehi!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gunjan: Di!!!

Nupur: Accha baba thik hain,ab tu mujhe itna maat daat meri ma.

Bhushon's Drawing room

Samrat: Ajeb log hain. Ghar aye mehman ka koyi kadar hi nehi karta!!!!

Mayank: Sam, could u stop it pls.

Samrat: Kyon main chup karu???? Main thik hi tou keh raha hoon. Kab se beitha kar chali gayi. Abhitak kisiska koi ata-pata nehi hai.

Mayank: Sam ab tu apna muh band kar . wo log aa rahi hai.

Gunjan: sorry aap dono ko akela bethna para.

Gunjan pointed to Mayank, aap terrace par jaiye - waha di apke liye wait kar rahi hai.

Mayank: meri liye (he looked at samrat with deplorable face)?????. lekin kyun??????

Samrat looked at him with naughty smile in his face. He tried to control his laugh.

Samrat: Ha bhaia jao na.

Mayank: Sam!!!!

Gunjan: dekhiye jaldi jaiye, nehi tou di gussa ho jayegi. yaha se right ja kar left jana hoga.

Mayank: thik hai. Sam chal hum logo teraace chalet hai.

Samrat: kya bhai main waha ja kar kya karungi. Tum jao baate karke aao. main yaha tumhara wait karti hoon.

Mayunk: lekin Sam main akela ''''.

Samrat: aab jao na bhaia.

Mayank: (Take a long breath-ya kaha fass gaya )Thik hai tu yaha wait kar main abhi ja kar aata hoon.

Sam: ok bhaia.


Sajan in Drawing room:

(gunjan was about to go)

Samrat:Miss chashmish jara suniye.

Gunjan: ji!!!! Apk kisko bula rahi hai?

Samrat: mein bhooto ko bula rahi hoon

Gunjan:Ji!

Samrat(muttered himself) isko ji ki alwa or kuch ata bhi hai nehi

Gunjan: ap kuch keh raha hai kya

Samrat: ji mein ye kehna chahti hoon ki- yaha hamara alwa or koi nehi hai. To jahier si baat hai ki apiko bula rahi thi.

Gunjan: lekin ap muje chasmish kyon bula rahi hai .

Samrat: kya karu apne to apna nam nehi bataya tou kuch na kuch naam se bulana to parega na?

Gunjan: dekhiye meri nam gunjan hai

Samrat: wow cool name. waise chasmish bhi kharab nehi hai. Or ye naam apki face ki sath suit bhi karta hai. Kya main aapko chashmish bula sakti hoon????

Mayur in terrace

Nupur:Ye Gunjan ne mujhe terrace per kyon rehne ko kaha.

(Mayank came to the terrace)

Mayank: Excuse me. Kya ap mujhe yaha bulaya.

Nupur turns to mayank. she was wearing a white chudidar suit with blue pajama. She untied her hair and just looks like an angel. Mayank was enthralled by her beauty. Again Mayank starring at her.
Nupur: (ye aise kyun mujhe dekh rahi hai- kahi mera muh per koi pimple tou nehi agaya.). suniye aap mujhe aisa kyun dekh rahi hai? Meri face par koi pimple agaya hai kya(in a tensed tone )?

Mayank(coughing): nehi aisa koi baat nehi. Tou bataye apne mujhe yaha kyun bulaya?

Nupur: Dekhiye main apko kyon bulao?

Then she thinking herself , hmmmmmm mujhe lagta hai ye gunjan ka kaam hai.

Mayank: lekin mujhe to bataya gaya ki koi mujhe bula rahi hai

Nupur: (muttered herself-Khadus kahika. Mein tujhe kyun bulao).

Nupur: (muttered herself)-khadus kahika, main tujhe kyun bulao????

Then she told- -wo ha ha meini hi apko bulaya, ya asman dekhne ke liye, ye hawa khane ke liye. Ha kitna sundar hai na- nila nila sa asman, khili khli si thandi thandi hawa.

Mayank: (shocked)Ji aap mujhe asman dekhne k liya bulaya.

Nupur: aap khare kyon, beithiya na. hum log to beith kar bhi baat kar sakte hain- Right???

Mayank: wo actually mujhe nupurji se baat karni thi. Ab bata sakti hai ki wo kaha milegi

Nupur: (In a lower tone )R a sadu, akdu, stupid , gadhe kahika main he to Nupur bhushan hoon.

Mayank: apne kuch kaha?

Nupur: umm mein ye kaha ki mein hi Nupur hoon

Mayank: (Again making a shocking face ) aap Nupur hai?

Aap ki saath hi shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai.

Nupur: ha kyun. Main apko pasand nehi aya kya(in a delighting tone).

Mayank: nehi nehi! Kyon nehi pasand ayega. Or mera pasand se kya lena dena hai,pasand to bhai ko karna hai

Nupur(Slowly): khadus shaadi tu karega ya tera bhai.

Mayank: appne mujhe kuch kaha

Nupur: nahi meine kuch nahi kaha. Ap apka bhai ko bahut mante hai, hai na??????

Mayank: ha wo to hai.

Then both keep silent.

Nupur: Hmmmm accha apko cricket khelna kaise lagta hai

Mayank: mujhe cricket khelne se jaida dekhne main interest hai.

Nupur:Awwwwww(Sading tone). To ye khadus to mujhe shaddi ki baad cricket khelne hi nahi degi.

Mayank: ap kuch soch rahi hai kya

Nupur: ummmmmm main ye soch rahi hoon ki shadi ki baad ap mujhe cricket khelne dogi na.

Mayank: kya?(ye ladki pagal hai kya!) ummmm wo to bhai hi bata sakta hai ki apko.

Nupur: phir bhai!!!! By GOD - lagta hai iska bhai ne ispar jadu karke rakha hai. Kuch to karma parega!!!!!!!!

Ok guys ' I think its enough for today. Plz try to comment on it. Criticism are most welcome. And silent reader plz try to press the like button.

And a big sorry 4 any type of grammatical mistake.



Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow yaar luved the mn part..do pm me wen u update it......
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Posted: 15 years ago
look Fari...........update ok😡 buhat ho chuka ab..........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rose.mn

look Fari...........update ok😡 buhat ho chuka ab..........

great going rabii ji
sabko yahee dhamkee dete hai kya tuu 😆
fariaa jii , aap update kar rahhe hai yaa , hmm soch ke bataaongee , per update kar hi dijiyee ab naa 😉😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fariiiiiiiii

Thankyou sooo much for updating

You made my day

Mai kab se wait kar rahi thi iska

Thankyou sooo much for the update

LOved Mayur to the core

Nupur is hillarious Shadi ke baad cricket LOL............

I loved the ending

do continue soon hun...........mein bhi kya bol rahi hu

luv you

Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww Fari...........thank God u update..........opps sorry
Thanks to Nidzy and Tapu who made you update ..............thanks tapu, Nidzy.........

well i loved the update,
Nupur applying ointment at Mayank's injury done by her ball.........😆 loved that part......
gunaj n nupur misunderstood him as to be groom......wowwww
loved the last part yaar...........kitna kuch suna rahi thi nupur usse........

aur bar bar wo bhai wali line..............🤣 🤣 🤣 bhai se pochna parey ga..........😆 hehe great
loved the update completely..........

n now plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz updatenext soon..........
iss dafa kuch garh barr ki na.............to..........🤢 u will be dead.........ok😉😆😳
Edited by rose.mn - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: simi2

great going rabii ji
sabko yahee dhamkee dete hai kya tuu 😆
fariaa jii , aap update kar rahhe hai yaa , hmm soch ke bataaongee , per update kar hi dijiyee ab naa 😉😉

aur nahi to kya simi....yeh yehi deserve karti hai......
but finally iss ne update kar hi diya..........good fari.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Faria
ami shotti raag kori nai
ami raag korte parina faria
amar mon kharab hoi
r oshikar korbona je amar mon kharap hoise
ami onek ff e parleo 1st comment korina
wait kori age 2/1 jon karuk tarpor ami korbo
karon ami valo comment korte parina tai
kintu tomar baperta to alada taina
ami vabsilam je tomar ff e shob che beshi right amar
pari r na pari 1st comment ami i korbo
hoito ami amr limit cross korsi
faria ami to manush taina
so kisu komti to amar thakbei
manush amar komtita kei boro kore dekhe
amake na
ami khub hurt hoi faria
accha pls baad dao eishob
ami abaro boltesi ami raag korinai
ami tomake shotti valobashi
kosom

tomar update ta oshadharon valo hoise
shotti tomar mon rakhar jonno boltesina
amr khub valo lagse
nupur er kotha guli khubi mojar chilo
i just loved mayur's convo
kintu eto choto keno faria
porar agei shesh hoye gelo
eto din por tao choto
pls boro udpate koro
r tumi sajan ke keno anso
ora to MJHT te space pai r space er dorkar nai
ekhane shudhu mayur thakbe r keu na
bujhso fajil meye
pls tartari update koro
with lots of mayur scene
love u
Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow yaar nice update...and yaa thanks for ur pm.......will be waiting for the next 1 too....
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowow tht was soo nice part

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