~*' PriDa Writers Scene Thead 2 '*~

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Ivy speaks ...
Welcome, writers and readers, to the beautiful world of Prithvi Saxena & Damini Gujral!

Many members tend to write short scenes (mini fanfics), poems, and even caption stories on Prida and even more enjoy reading them. Since it becomes hard to locate these beautifully created pieces it was thought that perhaps they could all be posted on one thread. So everyone, please, make sure that if you write any type of fictional piece on PRIDA, be it fanfic, mini-dialogue, poem, or even a captions story, that all of you post them HERE so it is easier to find them!!

This thread brings you the brilliant opportunity to create and share your own scenes for our beloved pair of Prithvi & Damini filled with lots of love, emotions, drama, action, suspense, etc.

So let's start creating the best scenes possible and make it enjoyable for everyone.
-- Ivy
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Rach speaks ...
The scene writers take great pains to come up with a scene idea, pen it down and then give an essence to it. Its really disheartening to see that we just sit down in front our screen and pass mere comments in our minds thereby disappointing the particular writer and his painstaking efforts
My humble request to all my fella Prida buddies is to acknowledge their efforts either by commenting on their piece or by showing you appreciation by clicking the 'LIKE' button .
This can only help the writer have an idea of his/her work and improvise further based on your valued suggestions. I sincerely hope that you all will pay heed to my request and follow the same in action.
Also, I will be incharge of this thread now .. so if you want you entries to be written on the index or you fanfics to be listed, kindly pm me your entry along with your name to me (rachel.fds) and I will make sure that your name is added caz I'll be regularly updating this thread !
Yours optimistically
-- Rachel
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~Prida Up-to-Date Storyline~

-> All credit and thanks for the summary goes to Who-I-Used-2-Be (Sarah)

Is it a fairytale? Is it a beautiful dream? PriDa's story is simply mesmerizing, and it has gripped countless hearts around the globe, cast a spell on so many people, and made them live, sleep and breathe these characters. We are so into their journey that it feels like its our own tale, our personal story. We dream their dreams, fear their fears, are angry during their rages, think their thoughts, feel their feelings, and fall in love with them and love every time we see them weaving magic with the poetry in motion these two create together . PriDa are no more just two fictional characters to many of us, they're like real people, and we care about them to such an extent that sometimes we scare ourselves. PriDa and time are out to charm us with this tale which has come to life with GauCha's wonderful portrayal of these two characters with so much spunk.

Fate brought these two face to face when his brother was about to kidnap her sister. Their first encounter set the perfect stage for a love story to cherish in the days to come, and their chemistry crackled, burned and sizzled. Half of his face was hidden, they just looked at each other, and there was nothing there, no emotion, because they had just met, and that too in the most bizarre of situations, but the moment was enthralling and the air trembled. Then their first proper meeting happened, and nobody could miss seeing the admiration for each other on Prithvi and Damini's faces initially during their first official meeting, but they stayed true to their characters, and their pride and ego won the race. There started a battle of wits, which saw them mostly at loggerheads, then and afterwards, both of them trying to outplay the other, trying to come out as the winner of every argument and situation .There were sparks, there were mad rages, there was fire, and the atmosphere burned with their chemistry. The attraction they felt for each other was undeniable, but they hated each other's guts and the thick veil of anger, ego, and hate kept their attraction and the remains of their former minute-long admiration for each other buried deep.

Then a stage called 'The knight in shining armour, and the falling princess' made an appearance. This phase involved the hand of fate and some beautiful and mysterious incidents trying to bring these two closer in spite of their own plans. The princess couldn't help but trip or end up being in awkward situations in his presence, and the knight was always there to lend a helping hand, to save her from falling and other disasters. But she still hated him apparently, and he seemed to be softening towards her, though he didn't let go of the tough exterior. The next stage was the start of a sense of companionship between these two. He started to feel her pain when her fianc hurt her, and he admitted his confusion to himself and asked the question why he couldn't help but stare at her. She began warming up to him too because he had been there for her in her tough times, and he became a kind of companion to her. They shared an awkward phone call, which clearly showed the tension between them, and how two people act when they are starting to put their initial resentment aside and suddenly find themselves softening towards someone they have mostly had a difference of opinion with.

But the death of his father changed everything, and he embarked on a journey of destroying her mother to avenge the death, because he held her responsible for it. He was all set to hurt her in order to hurt her mother. He suppressed his feelings for her, and vengeance shadowed and hid his budding affection. He came back in her life with a dark purpose, but he should have known better. He started acting according to his vengeful plan, but he could not stay businesslike and hard when she was involved in the equation, and when his plan began hurting her, he felt her pain too. They shared their first hug; He got to witness her vulnerable side, her tears and her pain. He couldn't help it and tried to comfort her. She was sad, broken and emotionally shattered because of her fiance, and he was confused about his feelings and his plans, and suffered with her when she was suffering. This established his battle within himself, a battle he would have to fight no matter what. He took a bullet for her too in the process. She started feeling the distant footsteps of the first stages of the thing called love. The following days saw Damini Gujral softening towards him, attending to his wounds, and him not being able to resist her softer side. He had come back with plans to destroy her emotionally, but he couldn't help caring about this girl. She was falling more and more for him, and he was getting impressed with her guts, was starting to admire her strength, and couldn't help getting lost in the feeling and gazing at her. She made him forget all about his revenge plans whenever she was in the same vicinity, and he couldn't help but lose himself. They shared a fairytale ride on Toofan, their cupid, which only made it clearer how happy his presence made her feel, and how he couldn't remain himself, and stay true to his plan, when she was in close proximity.

One fine day, her mom sent them on a date. They had their first date and bonded. Even though he remained mysterious and she was the one who mostly opened up, but he still couldn't help getting involved and living the moment, and showed his jealous and possessive side when someone else tried to dance with her . They shared their first dance and some moments where they got lost into each other's eyes, but in the end he remembered his mission and freaked out. A heated argument brought them back to square one, and on the surface, they again became an employer and an employee. In the following days, they went back in their shells, and some lines were redrawn. Formality and distance entered their relationship again, though deep inside, both of them knew that they had never been an employer and her employee. And then there was time for some awkwardness, and they started behaving like teenagers in love around each other.

Her mom had other plans, and she asked Prithvi if he would like to marry her daughter, Prithvi couldn't believe his ears and his stars and left. PriDa had a battle of wits again and were back to their old snarky selves. Then he saved her life again from the horse on the loose, they had their silent moment when the songs of silence told tales and time stopped when they got lost into each other's eyes. She took care of his wound again, and they exchanged some meaningful lines. The time that followed witnessed the best of PriDa ever. There was cuteness, there was awkwardness and there were these two proud people, in a beautifully uncomfortable situation which left them tongue-tied at times..They had a marriage talk where she questioned him about the proposal, and they couldn't even dare look at each other. He emotionally supported her when the news of her mom's illness shook her, and they shared some poignant moments when he promised her he would always be there for her. They found comfort with each other and then they both said 'yes' to the wedding in front of her 'mom'..One more milestone in their relationship was achieved when she wanted him to drop the 'Aap' and start calling her 'Tum.'

One month passed which the world didn't get to witness. In that one month they have come closer than ever, he isn't sure whether he is going into this marriage for love or for revenge, but he deeply cares about her and respects her, and is touched by her concern for his family..Damini Gujral has come a long way from where she started. She seems like a lady in love, and is positively glowing these days. She respects him and seems like she (almost) loves him. He is still fighting a battle within, between duty and his feelings for her. And they are about to get bonded in holy matrimony.

They got married, but circumstances didn't allow them to be much with wach other. It was fate's own plan to keep them close, yet far apart, and one after another, things came up.

Her feelings for him knew no bounds, and she was all in. Her marriage to her beau made Damini look more beautiful than ever, and nobody could miss the glow of love Prithvi's presence added to Damini's face. But Prithvi's demons didn't let Prithvi come close to his wife, and he did everything possible to resist her, despite yearning for her, despite caring about her, and loving her.


One fateful night, Prithvi could no longer keep playing 'resistance-resistance' and he surrendered to his feelings. PriDa came quite close to becoming one, but Prithvi's demons came back to haunt him and he pulled away before they could go all the way.


He decided that he couldn't let this happen again because of the complications surrounding them, and that he would drive her away from her. Hurting her pained him too, but he thought he was acting in her best interests.


Damini's love for Prithvi didn't let her see and investigate the real reason why her husband was acting strange, and she came up with one excuse after another to justify his actions. She was hurt by his indifference, but did everything to please him and even started changing herself, or rather trying things she never imagined she would try for the sake of love..


Prithvi came to know about his mother-in-law's innocence, and this realization changed everything. Finally, it was time for him to repent and make up for the lost moments. But by that time, Damini had decided to leave him.


He tried to win her back, and PriDa finally admitted their love for each other and became one. He decided that he would tell her the whole truth.


~To be continued~


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Edited by rachel.fds - 15 years ago
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thaks rachie can i say to u that i love u 🤗
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Link to the previous thread :

~ Index writings ~

-Sid- - Pages 2
desigirl_18 aka Fatima : Pages 5


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~Rules & Notes to the Viewers/Readers~
  • Please be respectful of others. No bashing allowed. Leave only constructive and polite comments.
  • Please don't quote scenes because it takes longer for the page to load and makes things confusing.
  • If you know of any links that you feel should be added under the Fanfics/Poetry/Etc. Links Section then please PM them to rachel.fds
  • If you wish to post a mini fanfic then please follow the following format: your piece must say at the top "Fiction written by (profile name)" and underneath it indicate which Fiction number this is for you. Numbering is done by how many written pieces you've posted. If the pieces are part of a series then the entire series is counted as 1 piece for your overall count and you may number the parts within the series however you wish...
  • If u are adding the next part to a piece you've already posted then go back to the post with the piece and add your continuation to it by editing it. Then make a new post titled "Note to the Viewers:" informing readers which page the update is on.
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Edited by rachel.fds - 15 years ago
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~Scene Ideas~
  • (Credit goes to Diya) PriDa are on a business trip when their car gets a flat on the way and so they have to stop in the middle of nowhere. Prithvi attempts to change the tire, while Damini is yelling at him the whole time...
  • (Credit goes to Krups) Prida-Rosh irritating Damini scene where Rosh sides with prithvi and almost calls him jeej!!!! and Prithvi supports Rosh's naiviety to irritate damini...
  • (Credit goes to Ekta) Prida play some sort of game, either Anktakshri or Truth & Dare and reveal their feelings for each other during the course of the game...
  • (Credit goes to coolfire) Write a scene where Roshni raves about Prithvi's looks in front of Damini...
  • Pick a holiday no matter how remote or unheard of and write a scene for Prida relating somehow to the holiday. The holiday can be a prominent part of the story or just mentioned slightly. The whole point is to write a scene where Prithvi and Damini are celebrating the said holiday in some sort of way. Here is a list of holiday you could write about or you could go to the Official Holidays Site for ideas.
    Profess your love day-June 9th
    June 14th --- Loving day
    June 18th --- reccess at work day
    June 21st --- father's day
    "Unique names day"
    Recesses @ Work Day
    First Nights Day - Dec 31
    "Lips appreciation Day" is on March 16th "Awkward Moments Day" on March 18th. proposal day March 29th "make up your own holiday day march 26th national she's funny that way day march 31st National fun at work day-april 1st poetry and the creative mind day-april 1st reconcilation day-april 2nd that sucks day-april 15th blah! blah! Blah! day-april 17th national dance day-april 29th
  • Decide to be Married Day on June 27th
Baby Soho's corner put up on the 2nd page !! ( Will edit soon 😉 )
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THE PRIDA PLEDGE FOLLOWED BY PRITHVI AND DAMINI'S PLEDGES ! 😉 😛

#1 : Pledge for PriDa

This day we PriDa take a pledge
that we shall be ever loving to each other
that we shall continue our nok-jhok as long as our fans like it
that we shall continue our hiii hogaas
that we shall ride together on toofan every saturday
that we shall go to office saath saath everyday
that we shall change our wardrobes every sunday
so that we look hatke each day
that we shall shall feed each other aloo parathas every monday
so that we dont forget veggie's favourite recipie
that we shall visit veggie mama every tuesday
and watch her stare at the ceiling happy and gay
that we shall go to manali alone every wednesday
without ballu ki tasveer ya veggie ki light bulb jaisi aank
that we shall go to the restaurant we first went together every thursday
and dance on a romantic song full-on without any rush
that we shall ....
oh no!
FRIDAY is the day we meet our dear fans who love us without any LIMITS
and take them shopping with us for our WARDROBES and buy queenie new earrings!
THAT will now be our new MAKSAD....😆
arrey wait....maksads abhi baaki hai mere dost!
Moving to our weekly maksads....
#1 week : MK ke haathon ghar ki saaf-safaii zabardasti karwana
aur uske saare udhar lautana
#2 week : TOTAL UPGRADATION of GM security
first the lalluram detective, then the toy guns, uske baad GI ka naya logo
#3 week : Inder ki weekly pitaii
hook him with that PPT ya matakalli jo bhi ho uska naam
karde woh inder bandar ko behad pareshan!!
#4 week : Hamare aapsi teen ki sabhas
with an award titles 'the most successfull sabha providing best solutions



Kingie's pledge!
Today....this morning i Prithvi Balraj Saxena
solemnly pledge that
i shall be loyal to my queenie
that i shall dedicate my self to the service of my queenie
that i shall preserve her tagline 'mein aazad hoon' par make her bandhi hui to me
that i shall work for our prosperity and aabadi! 😉
that i shall strive for peace in the kitchen and eat her haath se bana hua 'jo bhi' khaana without a fuss..
that is shall always take time out for her without fail
that i shall always follow her orders!
that i shall reply to her 100 questions! 😳
that i will make sure i will change that gossip girl GI logo!
that i will take damz with me and move into a new house by the end of this year....jahaan sirf mein aur meri queenie! 😉
that i shall allow her to nurse my wounds and keep my mouth shut and eyes working!
that i shall say goodmorning to her when i get up from sleep!
that i shall keep her away from that masakalli and get him hooked with that matakalli
that i shall not take nautanki ya chotte's help for more ideas on romance!
that i will buy for her new earrings everyday! 😆
that i will make sure CV's cover a song on us everyweek for our pridalicious fans!
that i will use only positive hiii hogaass
that i will stop my faltu ki teen ki sabha and join my wife's sabha!
that i will NEVER allow toofan to hurt my queenie!
that i will never bring veggie or ballu in mind when im with my queenie!
that i will not wear those tight fitting muscle revealing t-shirts
that i will not allow toy guns in GM
that i will use GI money fruitfully and not waste them on veggie's treatment or her on the spot beauty treatments !
that i will bring illa mumma a new detective without that lalluram avatar!
that i will forget all my limits when im with my queenie!
that i will not allow my shaadi ka pic to be photoshopped for that stupid chaitanya oops my bewda sasurjee!
that i will make queenie tie my tie only!
and LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST!
THAT I WILL FOLLOW EVERYTHING WHAT I HAVE SAID JUST NOW! 😆



Queenie's pledge



I Damini Prithvi Saxena solemnly pledge
that i will not be a full time service wife to my kingie
that i will be aazad in front of others but bandhi hui to my kingie only 😳
that i will stop using the word 'damn' in future!
that i fill find that dupatta which my kingie lovingly caught when it was doing the 'hawa mein udtha jaye mera laal dupatta' act
that i will nurse his wounds regularly, properly and slowly
that i will ask not 100 but 200 questions
that i will hide my earrings...arrey what is the point in wearing them when my kingie takes it off and throws it anywhere...
that i will make only aloo ke parathas for him!
that i will not allow kingie to poke fun on my rosh's fusion mgmt c/o GI logo!
that i will love him more and more and never be seperated from him
that i will slap those reporters who make fun of my kingie and call him just employee...arrey tumhein pata nahin maine pehle hi kaha na....we never had an employer-employee relationship! 😉
that i will change that 'G' for gossip girl icon
that i will wear other colours well
that i will not allow my kingie to wear that hideous suhag raath wala t-shirt!😡
that i will hold his hand regularly!
that i will purposely come in front of toofan so that my kingie saves me!
that i will sue my bewda papa for slapping my rockstar jaisi mom!
that i will visit veggie mama every tuesday and start my day with her darawni surat! 😭
that i will make sure my cabin is right opposite to his!
that i will talk to my forum fans once in every week and give them a GauCha interview once in a month!
that next time i will hold him tightly for our next song sequence
that i will stop his faltu ki teen ka tadka which always turns out to be kadwa
that i will find one 'aandhi' for our lovestruck toofan!
AN LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST
KINGIE KO MERA JORU KA GHULAM BANANAA HI HOOGAAA!


-- This is written by rachel.fds aka Rachel !
Edited by rachel.fds - 15 years ago
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WeLcOmE oUr BaBy GaL SoHiNi aKa SoHo's FANCLUB !!!
This is me ....
Hey my mama-dada's fans ... This is your very own Soho ... I'll be blogging in this thread very soon !
DO check them out while I leave you inside information about my mum-dad's romance !! 😛
For now ... Im leaving you with a picture of my darling parents and your favourite couple ! My lovely mama Damini Saxena and my muscular papa Prithvi Saxena ...
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Edited by rachel.fds - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pridafan

thaks rachie can i say to u that i love u 🤗

Aww ... anytime Sonikins !
I love ya too ! 😉 🤗

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