Sailing in the same boat*muskaan comeback one shot

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey this is prajna with a one shot ff....(quite short one though)
its not about love,but about friendship!
i was thinking how it would be....if muskaan was back in DMG now!!!im trying to describe muskaan's feelings.....and GANG reuninon scene here....at the end wanna say that ridhima and muskaan totally understand each other because they both are away from their lved ones.......hope still contiues

Location:sanjeevinin terrace..

It was the day she returned to sanjeevini

Muskaan,was standing there with rahul's photo in her hand..tears flowing uncontrollably..its more difficult than she had thought..the locker room, cafeteria, the terrace, each and every nook and corner of sanjeevini reminded her of rahul..

Why did you do this to me rahul? she asked in a choked voice..

she knew it very well after their break up..there is no chance of them being together.BUT STILL her heart is stubborn..its still hoping to see him

you are an idiot muskaan?.she whispered

you are such an idiot...cant you get over the fact?he is NOT going to come back....

he probably would have found a girl...better than me..she thought

even imagining rahul with another girl made her heart ache...

muskaan..your happiness is in his happiness... she concluded

From how much time she had been standing there..from how long she had been crying.she had no idea..greif had taken her away from the surroundings..

Her eyes where red, slightly swollen

'MUSKAAN' she herd a voice

It was atul beaming with happiness..anjali and atul gave her an affectionate hug..

'i missed you all soo much'muskaan said in a choked voice hugged back

anjali :'Awwww muski,we missed you too'

muski:'anjie,where's armaan and ridzi?'

hearing this AA's face lost its colour.how could they tell her what happened to ridz..

ridhima came..panting..she was soo exited to meet muski.she had come running aal they way..

ridhimas's face beemed with delight

muski and ridz gave a quik hug.a lone tear rolled from ridz eyes..before thy could start a conversation

AA's pager rings.

anjali:will catch you later

atul:mujhe jaana hoga yaar,senior doctors hi nahi jayenge toh hum interns ko kya kahenge?(he says with a smile)

AA leave

Muskaan smiled...WOW she was back with her frnds..but something was priking her..something has changed?she glanced ridhima's face..

Ridhima smiled ate her affectionately..

what happened to her?Dint she just see pain her eyes.. WAIT...WHERE THE HELL IS ARMAAN???

Muski:ridzi armaan kaha hein?

She cold sense the tension..she could see the pain in ridhima's face

Ridhima:armaan ab humare zindagi mein nahi raha..tears came from ridhima's eyes as she forced these words to come out

Muskaan was shocked...ok armaan was not in contact with her...BUT how can he not talk to ridzi???

Ridz:sub kuch kathamb hogaya he muski...sub kuch..mein kya karon...mujhe samaj mein nahi aara ha he

(Note:here sid-ridz marriage dint happen...dont ask me how)

She hugged muskaan for support...both where sobbing

Muskaan could understand the feeling of helplessness,dejection,pain,false hope...after aal they where SAILING IN THE SAME BOAT!!
**hope continues...one or the other day...they will reunite with their loved ones.....yeh zindagi bahut lambhi he...picture abhi baki he mere dost....picture abhi baki he**
will be waiting for comments....plz press the like button if you liked it😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome one shot prajna👍🏼 ....loved it ....it was simple and beautiful .⭐️🤗
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Prajna,

awesome one shot.......
how beautifully u expressed their emotions......i luved it!!!❤️
nd i loved ur last words most-**hope continues...one or the other day...they will reunite with their loved ones.....yeh zindagi bahut lambhi he...picture abhi baki he mere dost....picture abhi baki he**



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: frndshp_luv_dmg

hey Prajna,

awesome one shot.......
how beautifully u expressed their emotions......i luved it!!!❤️
nd i loved ur last words most-**hope continues...one or the other day...they will reunite with their loved ones.....yeh zindagi bahut lambhi he...picture abhi baki he mere dost....picture abhi baki he**



thans for that lovely comment.😳...it realy made me happy🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Awesome one shot prajna👍🏼 ....loved it ....it was simple and beautiful .⭐️🤗

thanks for the PM

thans saba....glad you liked it😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey thanks😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey prajna..nice OS..how i wish Muski came back!
Muskaan was missing Rahul..when AA came n hugged her..Riddhima too came happily..but she was concerned about Armaan..n then she got to know that even she is in the same state as her..aww..thats so sad..
do write more
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Prajna....u should continue this story.....thts wht i feel.....!!!!🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey prajna..nice OS..how i wish Muski came back!

Muskaan was missing Rahul..when AA came n hugged her..Riddhima too came happily..but she was concerned about Armaan..n then she got to know that even she is in the same state as her..aww..thats so sad..
do write more
-aish

aish even i wish...she could be back yaar....thanks for liking this OS😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: frndshp_luv_dmg

hey Prajna....u should continue this story.....thts wht i feel.....!!!!🤗

thats really sweet😳🤗

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