An SG scene...sammy drunk!!!

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A big hug to all my mjht buddies out there…guys I just wrote a new sg scene.I know that we are not allowed to post one shots…as suggested by mods I will not post this one in parts…its just a single shot.So pls mods don't close this topic…as u must have seen even in the poll…majority of the members are in favour of allowing shots as separate topics.When u say shot…I have understood that means no prats…so since this one is just a single scene pls pls pls don't lock it.

Guys now I have tried to write a scene on sg…though it didn't turn out to be that well…so feel free to comment or even if u want to criticize.This scene starts from the point where the mahi ve song sequence has just ended.And guys bui's dialogues may appear a bit filmy but I had to do so to make things look realistic…so pls bear with me.
As the song ends…bui turns samrat who was till now dancing happily with gunjan n nupur …….holding his shervani tightly…….samrat is totally shocked to see this….and everyone in the hall is left surprised thinking whats bui doing….
Bui(pointing angrily towards samrat): ae ladke tujhe samajh nahin ata…mujhe sab pata hai…tu us Mayank ka hi dost hai na…tabhi to aisi nazaron se dekh raha hai meri bachiyon ko…kabhi dia ke saath to kabhi gunjan ke saath…tere mummy papa ne kuch sikhaya nahin hai kya tujhe…

Bui's words stabbed thru samrat….he exchanges a gaze with gunjan who was standing ust behind bui.Seeing samrat's eyes gunjan instantly understands how much bui's words had hurt him…she doesn't understand why bui always insults samrat like this………but before gunjan cud say anything to bui bui speaks again….
Bui:gunjan ki taraf kya dekh raha hai…mujhse baat kar……
As samrat sees around he realizes that everyone in the hall looked at him with suspicious eyes…seeing all this samrat moves his gaze down n bends his head in embarassement…….
Bui:are ab kyun sharam aa rahi hai tujhe…pehle jab ladkiyon ko ched raha tha tab to sharam nahin aayi…..par waise main tujhse ye sab pooch hi kyun rahi hoon….jiske mummy papa ko apne bte ki koi fikar hi nahin…beta bigad raha hai aur woh paris mein baith kar maze kar rahe hain…..to beta to aisa hi hoga na…bigada hua….isliye hi maine apni nupur ka rishta babloo se kiya hai…kitne achche sanskar diye hain uske papa aur dadi ne use…aur apni gunjan ke liye bhi aisa hi ladka dhoondhongi jiske mata-pita ne use achchi batein sikhai hon….tere jaisa bigada hua nahin…..
Now everyone was much more shocked than expected…….while nupur n dia were fuming in anger……suhani n gunjan just looked at samrat's face….he appeared as if will break any moment……..suhani feels frustrated…she doesn't understand why everyone hurts them for their parent's mistake…….n gunjan she is constantly looking at samrat n his bent head….when suddenly she notices a tear passing down samrat's cheek n he wipes it off quickly so that no one notices….gunjan's heart burnt at the sight…..she cudn't bear what all bui was doing to samrat n to everyone's dismay gunjan speaks up to bui………………
G:pls bui…ismein samrat ki kya galti hai….usne to kuch bhi nahin kiya….
Bui:achcha to ab nupur ki tarah tu bhi bolne lagi hai……
G:bui main sirf yeh kah rahi hoon ki…
But before gunjan cud complete samrat interrupts…..
"nahin chashmish….ismein….ismein bui ki koi galati nahin hai…I think mujhe jana chahiye……"
G:par samrat tum….
S:nahin chashmish…plsss…….
Saying so samrat walks out to leave…..dia uday n nupur are shocked to see that bauji didn't say anything to bui and didn't even try to stop samrat……….
But only then bauji speaks up….
"ruko samrat….tumhein kahin jane ki zaroorat nahin hai beta…..ratna ki taraf se main tumse maafi mangta hoon…………"
Samrat is shocked by bauji's words.
"pls bauji….aap…aap aisa mat kahiye….aapne mujhe maurena mein apna beta kaha tha….to phir maafi kaisi…..aur chashmish hi kehti hai bauji ki bachche kitne bhi bade ho jayein …par itne bade kabhi nahin hote ki apne badon ko maaf kar saken…..bauji nupur meri bahut achchi dost hai…..isliye main kabhi nahin chahonga ki meri wajah se uske sangeet mein koi……problem……I mean….."….the tears make it difficult for samrat to speak further….so touching bauji's feet samrat leaves from there…………
The sangeet ceremony proceeds….but no one did enjoy anything after samrat left….
At night everyone including benji,mayank uday,suhani,nupur,dia and gunjan are constantly trying to contact samrat but his phone is switched off….
(At the terrace of bhushan house)
D:oh god phir se same message…no guys Sammy ka phone nahin lag raha…pata nahin woh kahan hoga….I hope he is fine….
G:di mujhe bahut chinta ho rahi hai….pata nahin samrat kahan hoga ….use kaisa lag raha hoga….di maine pehli baar aaj samrat ko…samrat ko rote hue dekha…..pls di kuch karo...
pata nahin use kesa mahsoos ho raha hoga……
Su:bahut bura gunjan…main bhai ko bahut achchi tarah se janti hoon…jab bhi koi use mom aur dad ke bare mein kuch kehta hai to woh bahut upset ho jata hai…I hope woh jahan bhi hai theek hai………..
Suhani's words made gunjan even more restless……now she had to see samrat at any cost…
Only then nupur's cell starts ringing…its mayank…
M:nupur samrat college mein bhi nahin hai…ab sirf ek jagah bachti hai…uska farmhouse woh aksar wahan jata hai….nupur tum gunjan aur sabko neeche bhej do…hum use wahin dhoondhne jayenge………….
N:theek hai mayank….
Nupur disconnects the line and tells everyone what mayank said….now everyone except nupur who had to remain at home as its her wedding the next day go to samrat's farmhouse.
Reaching the farmhouse all of them begin to search samrat calling out his name when dia notices someone sitting near the poolside…….its samrat………………
D:hey guys….sammy yahan hai……
Listening to dia everyone comes running….seeing samrat fine gunjan finally breathes a sigh of releif …but much to her shock gunjan sees that samrat is drinking something……..that to everyone's surprise looked like alcohol…………..
D:ye Sammy pi kya raha hai……
Only then they notice a poolboy going towards samrat with two bottles of whisky…mayank strangles him on his way…………
M:tum ye bottles le kar kahan ja rahe ho….aur tumne samrat ko woh drink di hai???
"aap sab samrat baba ke dost hain na….to aap bhi aa jaiye…milkar unka dukh bante hain….unhoine kaha ki kisika phone aye to mana kardoon kyunki unhein kissi se baat nahin karni…main tabhi samajh gaya ki unka mood kharab hai….to maine socha ki aise mein is se achchi dawa to koi ho hi nahin sakta……isliye maine unke juice mein thodi si whisky mila di…"
Listening to his idiotic explainations mayank closes his fist to punch him…but uday n benji stop mayank midway…..
D:mayank pls use chod do….already nupur aur adhiraj ki shadi ka tension kya kam hai….aur upar se sammy bhi itna upset hai…..
B:upset hi nahin ab to drunk bhi…..
Listening to benji mayank moves towards samrat to talk to him when dia stops him by his wrist…
D:nahin mayank….is waqt Sammy ko….gunjan ki zaroorat hai…..
Saying so dia keeps her hand on gunjan's shoulder n asks her to go to samrat…..gunjan nods to her and moves forward.
For the first time in her life gunjan is not getting what shud she say to samrat….
Walking ahead she reaches near the the poolside chair where samrat is sitting…….
Gunjan slowly takes out her hand and keeps it on samrat's shoulder…..
G:samrat………….
Seeing a hand on his shoulder samrat turns his head back…as soon as he sees gunjan his face lits up n a cute innocent smile comes on his lips…..
S:chashhhhhhhhhhmishhhhhhhhhhh….tum yahaan????????????????...says samrat with wide opened eyes and still giggling softly….now gunjan was sure that he is drunk…..
Gunjan goes n sits near him…..
G:samrat tum yahan kyun chale aaye……hum sab…
But before gunjan cud complete samrat puts a finger on her lips…….he is still having the same innocent smile on his face………….
"chashmish tum kitniiiiiiiiiiii achchi ho…..meri sabse pyari chashmish……bilkul meri pyari si teacher jaisi……jo jo hamesha mera kitnaaaaaaaa khayal rakhti hai…u r the best chashmish…sachi sabse best"
Gunjan is surprised to see this side of samrat….he is just smiling innocently seeing her…
But only then samrat holds his ears and makes a cute innocent face……

S:chashmishhhhhhhhhhh….i am…I am solly chashhhhhhhmishhhhhhh….
G:sorry!!!!par kis liye samrat tumne to kuch bhi nahin kiya….

S:dekha chashmish tum kitniii shweet ho…tum to meri…meri galti pe mujhe danti bhi nahin…par chashmish sab aisa nahin sochte…isiliye to bui ne mujhe itna daanta….main bilkul bad boy hun na chashmish…….isliye hi to mom ne bhi mujhe nahin suhani ko apne paas rakha……main bilkul bhi achcha nahin hun chashmish…..isliye koi mujhse pyaar nahin karta….main sabko pareshan jo karta hoon……..sabko hurt karta hoon……main kabhi kisi ko happy nahin rakhta…isiliye to…isiliye to sab mujhe chod ke chale jate hain chashmish…bilkul akele chod kar…sab chale jaate hain..."
Samrat's words pierced thru gunjan's heart….she never knew samrat had hid in himself so much of pain….she always knew that samrat doesn't open himself in front of the world coz he doesn't want to bother others and not even in front of her coz he doesn't want to hurt her…but he had so much of painful fears inside him…gunjan never even imagined this…
S:chashmishhhhhhhhhhh tumhein pata hai tum na tum na mujhe bahut bahut bahut achchi lagti ho….college ki sab girls mujhse frndship karna chahti thi…par tum chashmish tum woh first girl thi jisko mujhme koi interest nahin tha….pata hai chashmish sari girls sochti thi ki exams nahin dena….fail hona…Samrat ka style hai…par chashmish tumhein pata hai tum woh pehli girl thi jisne mujhe daant ke padhai karwai….mujhe failure se good boy bana diya chashmish…….pata hai chashmish jab mein chota tha aur jab bhi hostel mein mujhe sardi hoti thi….to wahan koi mujhe tumhari tarah zabardasti dawai nahin pilata tha…tum to meri har cheez ka kitna dhyaan rakhti ho chashmish…dekho lets count…tum mere liye notes banati ho….mujhe padhati ho….jab bhi mujhe gussa ata hai to mujhe pyar se manati ho….meri doctor ki tarah mera dhyaan rakhti ho….mere liye gajar ka halwa…alloo ke parathe aur kitni yummie yummie dishes banati ho….aur…aur….tumhein to pata hai na chashmish tum…tum mera har kaam karti ho…to phir chashmish tum hi batao main tumhare bina kaise rahoonga???????? Samrat apni chashmish ke bina kya karega…woh to bilkul akela ho jayega na chashmish…main janta hoon chashmish ki main bilkul bhi gud boy nahin hoon……mere paas to adhiraj jaise achchi si family bhi nahin hai….mom…mom aur dad…mere paas to woh bhi nahin hain……"
Gunjan notices that as soon as samrat started talking abt his parents his eyes had tears in them…..now it was becoming difficult for gunjan to hold back her tears…how can anyone be so pure gunjan fails to understand…
"main bahut bura hoon na chashmish….i am sure bui tumhare liye koi mujhse bhi achcha ladka dhoondh lengi…phir main kya karoonga chashmish…………….."
Listening to samrat's words…gunjan feels a lump in her throat….so she keeps her hand on that of samrat…n softly wipes his tears off….
"nahin samrat….tum bure nahin balki tum to college ke sabse achche boy ho….sach mein….pata hai principal sir sabko tumhara example dete hain…isiliye hi to tumhare paas itne saare pyare pyare frnds hain…dia ,mayank.uday bhaiya,di,benji aur tum to itne achche ho samrat ki tumhare paas Suhani jaisi itni pyari behen hai…..aur jahan tak bui ka sawaal hai….to agar woh tumse achcha ladka dhondhne jayengi tab to bauji ke bahut sare paise waste ho jayenge…kyunki woh agar world tour bhi kar lengi na to bhi unhein mere samrat jaisa achcha ladka kahin nahin milega…………………."
"sachi chashmish…main itna achcha huun…….."
"hmmmm…aur nahin to kya…aur agar tumhein vishwaas nahin to kisi se bhi pooch lo…."
"to…iska matlab agar bui ko tumhare liye ek bahut achcha boy mil gaya…to bhi tum meri hi chashmish rahogi na…."
"haan samrat….i promise…aur phir tumhare alawa main kisi ki chashmish kaise ho sakti hoon…mere samrat jaisa koi ho sakta hai kya???"
Listening to gunjan's words samrat smiles innocently n bends his head down…..within
a few minutes samrat peacefully falls asleep in gunjan's lap…..while gunjan is just softly moving her fingers in his hair…..seeing him sleep so innocently….gunjan kisses his forehead…she is not able to understand that what had she actually done that god chose her to be loved by samrat…gunjan just raises her head towards sky in thankfulness that god made her so lucky to be loved by the purest person of this world…..n thinking so gunjan keeps her head on that of samrat's n she too falls asleep blissfully with her soulmate…her samrat<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
Thats it guys.If u like it pls pour in ur precious feedback.

*If this topic gets closed...i will be reposting this shot in the gallery.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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it ws awesomeeeee dear...
mindblowing...
luved it to d core...
totally fabulous..
keep it up... 👍🏼
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awesome one shot dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWESOME SCENE!!..👏👏.gosh you wrote it so beautifully...i loved it....you definitely have talent hon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey thats so cute... Nice one shot... Just think what the others in the gang do if they come and see both sleep... 😲 They might think that Gunjan too got drank.. haha.. Just kidding.. It was an awesome work done by you..
Keep writing yaar..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

it ws awesomeeeee dear...
mindblowing...
luved it to d core...
totally fabulous..
keep it up... 👍🏼



Thnx sooooooooooooooooooo much my frnd...u r the first one to comment...so happy to make u like it.I was a bit reluctant in posting as doubted if all of u will like it or not...but me so happy that u liked it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana866

awesome one shot dear



sana meri jaaaaaaaaan u always there to support me...thnx so much sana for always inspiring me to write more n giving so much of support.
Luv u ❤️

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: gina87

AWESOME SCENE!!..👏👏.gosh you wrote it so beautifully...i loved it....you definitely have talent hon!



gina...thnx so much for commenting dear...n thnx sooooooooooooooooo very much for the claps but i know u r very generous towards me.Thnx for reading n replying jaan...me so happy. 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
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This one shot is soooo gd!!! I was actually imagining dis while reading it is really awesome!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks, it was an awesome post ..........................too beautiful to express

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