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Posted: 15 years ago
HAPPY NEW YEAR :D
I'm writing Sri's request, really good theme btw.
We meet, AGAIN!
Omg! Today was Rahul's wedding n he just woke up! Ugh! But he has an hour to reach there. He rushes out of bed and then looks at the time " 11:00" .
'Oh god, why do i sleep so late', he thought. He also had an hangover from yesterday night, which was SO not good!
He washes his face, grabs his towel and heads for a shower.
He comes out in 15 mins, his hair soaking wet n his body shivering due to the cold water.He quickly puts his clothes on and gets out.
He drives furiously towards the mandap but then damn, this traffic! He so could'nt afford to miss Rahul's wedding! He'll be damn crazy with him.
...
Muskaan is getting ready for the grand wedding. She was blushing like a perfect bride, though it was fake. She was in no mood for it, what was there to blush? But still, she had to look perfect in front of Rahul's relatives, so this was needed.
" muskaan, stop the blush!" Ridz commanded.
" Ridzi.. i dont want to..but these damn relatives!" she muttered furiously.
" noone's here muski" she reminded her.
" fine" she said and put on a straight face.
After some time, she was taken downstairs to the mandap.
...
Rahul looked around for Armaan and then checked his watch. Wow, trust Armaan to be late!
Just then, he saw a blushing Muskaan coming down. She came stood next to him, and smiled. He smirked at her, he knew that blushing and Muskaan dont suit. But she did manage to fake it well.
We were still waiting for a few guests. There was going to be some song-dance too before we tie the knot. Damn all this, he just could'nt wait to get hooked to Muskaan permenantly.
Then he sees a guy in a hot black sherwani with shades on. He rolls his eyes at him. He moves forward to meet him and Muskaan trails along.
" Armaan!..kaafi jaldi aa gaye..nahi?" he asks.
" sorry yaar rahul..traffic main phas gaya tha..aur i woke up a bit late.." he said embarassed.
" jaanta tha!" Rahul said knowingly.
" waise shades teri sherwani ke saat suit nahi karta!" Muskaan added.
" eh?" he said trying to touch his eyes, but then something blocked it. He then realized he had'nt removed his shades. God!
...
After he did with his apologising, Rahul and Muskaan got busy with the other guests.
He looked around for any familiar faces when he heard a chirpy laugh. He looked in that direction to see a very known face!
...
okay, thats all for now.
I'll continue this soon :)
n this is my 1st non one-shot bcuz i wantd to make it a bit more fun.
I know i messed up with the whole shaadi thing. Sorry about that.
btw sri, u did'nt mention that they were strangers, so i gave a different concept to it.
hope u like it :)
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: anu.happy4ever

Hey spln/NJ,

I'm sure I haven't read a story like this one!! You have this instinct to explain every element in such a detailed manner. This is the first time I've ever read about a couple whom I don't know at all, i.e. Angad and Kripa. But, now I'm glad I read it. You haven't re-read this!!! :-O You don't have to...I didn't find any typos. :-D

I noticed that this story doesn't have any specific title. What title would you give?? Or, rather, why didn't you give any title to this?

The song you provided with the four story is so beautiful that I've been listening to it continuously ever since I read the lyrics. I never knew such a song or the movie existed!!

Anu



hey anu!

glad you enjoyed reading as much :) and even more glad about that assurance of no typos :D

i never watched the show with AK either, as i mentioned, and everything was just out of my head... im uncertain as to how much, those who watched the couple, can relate with them as for the chars in this story... and the lack of a title is for one primitive reason alone, just that i couldn't think of one! i hear too often of how i sort of suck with naming my things and i think i;ve come to accept that fact... if i think of any, i shall go back and edit! :)

once again, thanks for the comment, its great to hear from new readers!


@sunaina: thanks for that wonderful pm hun, hope you have a wonderful new year!

cheers,
nj
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Posted: 15 years ago
HNY guys!

thanks for the lovely requests and the beautiful stories
bhoomi ,Misha ,nidha ,Huma ,aish,Aria,sookie ,nj, nij
cheers everyone !
and hope u all have a brilliant year !

luv
Hina

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aish_punk

HAPPY NEW YEAR :D 😊 same to u dear ,,,,😊

I'm writing Sri's request, really good theme😳 btw. thanks for taking up my request aish n thanks u liked the theme..
We meet, AGAIN! 😊😊😊 nice name..
Omg! Today was Rahul's wedding n he just woke up! Ugh! But he has an hour to reach there. He rushes out of bed and then looks at the time " 11:00" . 😆😆
'Oh god, why do i sleep so late', he thought. He also had an hangover from yesterday night, which was SO 😆not good!
He washes his face, grabs his towel and heads for a shower. 😆
He comes out in 15 mins, his hair soaking wet n his body shivering due to the cold water😳.He quickly puts his clothes on and gets out. 😊
He drives furiously towards the mandap but then damn, this traffic! He so could'nt afford to miss Rahul's wedding! He'll be damn crazy with him. 😆
...
Muskaan is getting ready for the grand wedding. She was blushing like a perfect bride, though it was fake.😆 She was in no mood for it, what was there to blush?😆 But still, she had to look perfect in front of Rahul's relatives, so this was needed.
" muskaan, stop the blush!"😆 Ridz commanded.
" Ridzi.. i dont want to..but these damn relatives!🤢" she muttered furiously.
" noone's here muski" she reminded her.😆
" fine" she said and put on a straight face.😊
After some time, she was taken downstairs to the mandap. 😊
...
Rahul looked around for Armaan and then checked his watch. Wow, trust Armaan to be late! 😆
Just then, he saw a blushing Muskaan coming down. She came stood next to him, and smiled. He smirked at her, he knew that blushing and Muskaan dont suit. 😆😆But she did manage to fake it well. 😆😆
We were still waiting for a few guests. There was going to be some song-dance😆 too before we tie the knot. Damn all this, he just could'nt wait to get hooked to Muskaan permenantly. 😆😆
Then he sees a guy in a hot black sherwani with shades on.😳 He rolls his eyes at him. He moves forward to meet him and Muskaan trails along.
" Armaan!..kaafi jaldi aa gaye..nahi?" he asks.😆
" sorry yaar rahul..traffic main phas gaya tha..aur i woke up a bit late.." he said embarassed.
" jaanta tha!" Rahul said knowingly.
" waise shades teri sherwani ke saat suit nahi karta!"😆 Muskaan added.
" eh?" he said trying to touch his eyes, but then something blocked it. He then realized he had'nt removed his shades. God!😆
...
After he did with his apologising, Rahul and Muskaan got busy with the other guests.
He looked around for any familiar faces when he heard a chirpy laugh.😳 He looked in that direction to see a very known face! 😊😳
...
okay, thats all for now.
I'll continue this soon :) will be waiting :)
n this is my 1st non one-shot bcuz i wantd to make it a bit more fun.its really funny n i am loving t
I know i messed up with the whole shaadi thing. Sorry about that. its really good..no sorry😃
btw sri, u did'nt mention that they were strangers..,ya ... so i gave a different concept to it.😊no probs i wanted something exactly like this..armaan n ridhs at their typical best!!!waiting for next one..i really didnt expect anyone to take it..its kind of boring i thought 😆😆
hope u like it :) love i really really loved it..thanku thanku!!!!😃
-aish

waiting for next!!😊
sri:-)
Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

HNY guys!

thanks for the lovely requests and the beautiful stories
bhoomi ,Misha ,nidha ,Huma ,aish,Aria,sookie ,nj, nij
cheers everyone !
and hope u all have a brilliant year !

luv
Hina

hey hina
happy new year!!!!😊
if u really dont mind can u please keep the links just below the requests so its easy to know which link is for which request n who wrote to whose request,,it would be easy to locate ..😃
hope u dont mind😃
good wishes..
sri:-)
Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

thanks for liking it sri, i really was'nt sure about that..n yeah i'll continue it soon..

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey hina
happy new year!!!!😊
if u really dont mind can u please keep the links just below the requests so its easy to know which link is for which request n who wrote to whose request,,it would be easy to locate ..😃
hope u dont mind😃
good wishes..
sri:-)



hey sri
i always had this in mind and seriously thot it wud be better if i had the story links below the requests ,
but honestly was lazy to club the two posts together ,also coz some stories weren't in response to any requests here,didnt want them to go un-noticed :)

will do now ,cheers !

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Posted: 15 years ago

We meet, AGAIN!

RECAP:
He looked around for any familiar faces when he heard a chirpy laugh. He looked in that direction to see a very known face!
PART 2
He smirked looking at her. She had'nt changed, eh? The same cute smile, the same petite figure and the same bubblyness. He saw her giving an HI-5 to one of her friends.
She looked to his side, still laughing about something. She caught my stare, and then recognized me. I saw her mouth open in an 'oh'.
" guys i'll be back.." she said and excused herself.
He sees her coming towards him and smiles sweetly. She gives a rather fake smile in return.
" hey..armaan" she says surprised.
" hi..tum yahan?" he asks.
" muskaan ki shaadi hai..she's my best friend.." she informed and looked at him questioningly for his answer.
" rahul ki shaadi hai..he's MY best friend.." he said it the same way she had.
" oh.." she said blankly.
She thought he still had'nt changed. His sense of humour was its best, and he still managed to look pretty hot -
" the red lehenga suits you.." he interrupted her train of thought.
" thanks.." she said thinking that he has'nt given up his flirting either.
" hows abhi?" he asked suddenly.
" abhi?" she said confused, trying to think who he was.
" ur BF!" he said surprised.
" oh.." she said remembering.
" u forgot about ur own BF?" he asked weirdly.
" no, no!..i just havent met him in a while..n i prefer calling him darling.." she said acting to blush.
" You have'nt met ur BF in a while?" he said shocked.
"yeah!..he's been out on a business trip for 2 months now.." she said angry.
" okay chill!" he said noticing her anger.
" and how's nikki?" she teased him now.
" nikki's still hot!" he winked.
She was expecting another answer, but just smiled.
" its been such a long time, and we still dont have anything to say!" he said amazed.
" yeah armaan, we were never meant to be...even friends" she completed.
" probably!"
" ATTENTION! ATTENTION! ATTENTION!"
They heard someone screeching on the mic, they looked towards him. It was the host for the wedding. He gave a grin to everyone which some returned.
" lets get the couple to dance? what say!" he announced.
" Wohoo!" everyone screamed.
Armaan smiled, Rahul and dancing, just dont match. He was sure to make a fool of himself there.
Both of them blushing were shaking their heads in a NO!
" Muski c'mon..we know what a great dancer you are..!" Ridz cheered her on.
" yeah..but not now ridzy.." she gave her a glare.
" c'mon muski" she teased her even more.
" well muskaan can dance..but i cant.." Rahul admitted.
" shutup Rahul!..we know ure the best.." Armaan lied through his teeth.
He got a really cold stare in return. Armaan just smirked evilly.
" hey..girls and guys..i think our couple is a bit too shy to dance alone..so we all should join..what say?" the host announced again.
Everyone replied in a yes, and some of the couples including RM got onto the dance floor.
"so riddhima..dance?" he asked her.
" sure armaan" she said reluctantly.

Hooooo yeah..
Ho ohh…
tu ru tu tu..

Saath hai khushi aur gum
Jaise hai coke aur rum
Like the apple on a mac
Just like jill and jack
Kaash hotey yun hi saath saath
We will be together, forever and ever

He took her hand and started pulling her close.She felt weird
You and me, me and you
Kabhi hoga nahi
But all I really want is you
You and me, me and you
Kabhi hoga nahi
But you can only wish that is true
She moved away from him, showing him her tongue. He looked at her interested.

Pyaar impossible, impossible hai pyaar
Oh baby its love…
Pyaar impossible, impossible hai pyaar

They all danced to the tune, and Armaan was following Ridz wherever she was moving on the dance floor.
Din mein ho chandni, aisa hota nahi
It's just not meant to be

Hoo hu hooo..
Main pal tum saal ho, aisa kamaal ho
If you could be with me
Be with me, be with me

He held her hand when she was moving away, and pulled her really close and whispered in her ear.
Hoohho mil bhi jaaye jo meri nazar
Miley na jaise sab ki dagar

Kabhi toh aise hi yuhi agar
Jaanu na kaise hoga magar

Ohh hoo ohh..
Kaash hotey yun hi saath saath
We will be together, forever and ever

He suddenly lifted her up, and she was totally surprised. He twirled her around and fast, to which she laughed.
You and me, me and you
Kabhi hoga nahi
But all I really want is you
He put her down and lightly kissed her on the cheek. She was'nt sure what he was doing, has Armaan seriously gone crazy?!

You and me, me and you
Kabhi hoga nahi
But you can only wish that is true
She got away from him, and shook her finger in a NO.

Huuu hu huuu
All I want is you
Huuu hu huuu
(this is it yeah)
All I want is you

He kept coming forward, and she kept moving backward. She finally hit a wall, and he pinned her there. She looked sideways not able to take his stare.
And you think I'm so cool
And you think I'm so fine
What you know you really know
It's kind a true
I don't think I'm the one for you
Hope its good, it gets you going
Dreams come true without even knowing
I'm not yours for the taking
So don't keep your heart, your heart are breaking
He got away from her, realizing she aldready has BF, and can never love him. She was surprised by his move, but was releived too.

Kuch dil milte nahi, daage silte nahi
It's just not meant to be

He had a hurt expression, which she noticed and wondered why it was there. He had a GF, hello!
Hoo hu ohhhh
Tu mere saath ho, gup shup ki raat ho
If you could be with me
Be with me…
He looked at her dreaming of the stuff that could never be. He regretted having lied about it, and not proposing to her before Abhi.

Ho jaise ho khwaab raat, hai ye dil aur dil ki baat
Sang mein hai geet aur saaz, saanson mein teri saans

They got together again, and danced reluctantly.
Kaash hotey yun hi saath saath
We will be together, forever and ever
They both looked into each others eyes with hope of them being together. Ridz had also felt that after what all he tried to do.

You and me, me and you
Kabhi hoga nahi
But you can only wish that is true
You and me, me and you
Kabhi hoga nahi
But all I really want is you

They parted ways realizing it can never happen. They moved in the opposite direction not looking at each other.
Pyaar impossible… impossible hai pyaar
Impossible hai yaar
Armaan came and stood next to Rahul smiling in a fake way. Ridz came and stood next to Muskaan on the other side. He looked at her when she was looking down, and she did the same .
" pyaar impossible yaar..." Armaan muttered which Rahul caught.
" its possible Armaan..look at me and Muskaan.." he said smiling.
He smiled back at him. He was happy that atleast he found Muskaan!
Ridz looked at Armaan smiling at Rahul. She was mesmerized by that smile, damn his GF!
...
that was one part :)
i had fun writing it, hope u like reading it.
i'm not sure wether i should leave it here or continue. So u decide.
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey all

before I unsticky the thread,just thot of re-posting the few requests that still havent been responded to
(one-shots ,verses,anything wud do )
cheers :)
Hina




DMG4EVER/ Misha :

Theme: Prom
Genre : Love [&+] Mystery
Couple: Edwardbella [+&] ArmaanRiddhima


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spln/nj:


theme: cross identities

(say each char pretending to be someone they are not...)

genre: witty conversation... can hint into a spark of a meeting!
preferred couple: nupur-mayank! :)

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-Edelweiss- /Huma:


Theme: Encounter in a comedy club
Genre: Reflection and retrospection
Couple: Anyone you can depict best.


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aish-punk/aishwarya:



Theme : college or a hang-out place
Genre: Pure fun and masti
Couple : SaNu ( Samrat n Nupur)


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DMG4EVER/Misha:


Theme: Food Fight
Genre: I am not fussy... Ya'll choose
Couple: Armaan [+] Riddhima

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Sumedha:


theme: mistaken identities
Genre: romantic comedy
Couple: rahul muskaan or armaan riddhima



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Edited by hinanaziri - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

This is a response to second request by NJ.

Celestial Navigation

"Mayank, please do this for me." Samrat pleaded with his friend.

"Why should I do it Sammy? I mean what am I going to get out of it?" Mayank asked his friend, idly flipping through a magazine.

"You are going to get my unadulterated appreciation from bottom of my heart", Sammy replied.

"Why should I go? You are a lawyer and you want her case. Why should I be the one to sweat?" Mayank was seriously puzzled.

"She works in a tarot place man. Just thinking about it gives me the creeps." Samrat involuntarily shivered.

"What do you want me to do?" Mayank asked finally resigning to his friend's wishes.

"Be her client and worm your way to her mind and get her talking. Find out if her concern is genuine or she is being a flake."

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"Nupur, you got to help me here", Diya moaned in misery. "My owner is trying to throw me out of this shop because I refused to pay the hike in rent."

"Wasn't the hike agreed as a part of your contract?"

"No. It was not. I read it many times. I even talked to a lawyer guy to make myself sure."

"What was his advice for you when he saw the contract?"

"When I emailed him the contract, he said it was pretty air tight but there might be some clauses which might be used to put me into trouble."

"Have you made any statements to your owner which might incriminate you?" Nupur was surprised.

"Maybe, I have." Diya muttered slowly. Nupur sighed.

"Diya. You very well know how people are. They are just waiting for someone like you to make mistake so that they can make money out of it."

"I am thinking it's a way the owner of my shop is trying to kick me out and not just to get more rent money."

"I thought he liked you and believed in Tarot card reading?" Nupur questioned.

"I thought so too. Do you think there is something in our constitution for this charge?"

"You mean IPC", Nupur corrected.

"What's an IPC?" Diya questioned seriously.

"Never mind. Have you been summoned?"

"By who? Oh, you mean by the gang, for lunch? No, not yet." Diya answered stacking her Tarot cards and fixing her appearance. Nupur stared blankly at her friend.

"By the way, I have a client coming in today. He said he will be here at noon. But I already have a dentist appointment at the same time which I forgot when I made that appointment. I tried contacting him to cancel my meeting but was not able to get him. Can you please stay here and talk to him if at all he arrives? I should be back soon." Diya trilled and walked out of the shop. Nupur was still staring at the trail left by her friend blankly.

She wasn't in any circumstance a tarot card reader. Hell, she wasn't even a believer of the trade. She supported Diya in all her idiosyncrasies as her friend and that's that. When Diya gave her free readings, she had mostly zoned out and thought about something else. Diya had made her read a book about tarots and stuff and she had read for her friend's sake. Diya wasn't an idiot. She had quizzed her friend after Nupur said she had finished reading.

There was a distinct "ding" at the door marking arrival of a client. She decided to be the tarot card reader and send client away giving the excuse of prior engagement. And once he comes back he might not remember her face and might talk to Diya without any hesitation. But there was no way in hell she would actually give him a reading.

Mayank looked at the place and thought that he had suddenly stepped into some fantasy land. There were many bead curtains and the ceiling had eerie turquoise blue paintings. There were lots of merchandise on sale and a heavily beaded curtain separated the hall to two sections.

A woman dressed in casual shirt and jeans came out. He was surprised at her simple attire. He was expecting a heavy set woman in late thirties with heavy makeup, eccentric clothes and a weird attitude.

"Sir, I apologize for the inconvenience but your meeting is cancelled." Nupur spelled out clearly. She prayed he would come back later.

"Why?"

"I remembered I had a prior appointment this morning and called you several times. I even left you a message at your office." She frowned.

"Morning? That's a little too late to cancel an appointment, lady." He thought it would be fun to pull her leg a little. He had come to the place on whim after Samrat managed to convince him to go there as a customer and not as a lawyer. The girl was obviously mistook him for someone else. Not that he cared.

"I tried contacting you with all possible means but could not get a hold of you." She tried to be polite.

"By 'all possible means' you mean psychics, crystal ball and telepathy?" He snickered. Her cheeks turned red.

"Do not mock me. I am a professional." She hissed. He held up his hands in surrender.

"Then give me my damn reading."

"Fine." She snapped. "Please take your seat."

"Aren't you going to light candles, incense sticks and dim the artificial lighting and perhaps dress up a bit for your role?" He asked her. He had seen it in many movies where tarot card readers had a totally whacky set up. When Samrat had asked him to visit a tarot reader, he had done his research but unfortunately all the websites he had landed on were pretty cheesy ones. He was kind of hooked on the lady sitting opposite to her who was opening a deck of cards.

"We are doing a tarot card reading mister not performing exorcism." She replied waspishly.

"You do that too?"He asked her genuinely surprised.

"No we don't." She sighed.

"Okay. What else do you do here?" He was prying, obviously. He needed all the intel he could get on this woman.

"Just tarot reading."

"No palmistry?"

"No."

"Numerology?"

"No."

"Horoscoping?"

"'Horoscoping' is not a word but I get your point and no, we don't do that either."

"Any other thing which doesn't involve rationality or logic in its methodology?" She was sure that he was teasing her now.

"This is a tarot reading parlor and that's it. Do you have any more small talks lined up or should we just get this thing done and over with?"

"Let's begin", he clapped his hands like a little child and waited for her to do her thing.

She shuffled the cards and spread it out on the mat in between them on the table.

"Pick a card", she ordered and silently prayed that he would pull one of which she could actually recognize and if she did, remember a thing or two about it. The man sitting in front of her did not look like an idiot and that could pose some problem for her. He picked a card and placed it in front of her.

"The Fool", she declared.

"Is it a good card?" He asked her. She summoned her sage and nasal voice which sounded more like haunting and began to give him a reading of his life.

"It shows that you are taking a big risk at this moment and doing something which you are not supposed to do."

"I can see that on the card. The man is walking on the edge of a cliff. So it is a bad card." He sighed. Nupur thought that Mayank was slightly scared at his predicament.

"There is no such thing as a good card or a bad card. They just give out variation in meanings. The card which you have now drawn can also mean that you are taking a very unique step in your life and doing something that you normally would not do." She raked her brain hard to remember any more information and hoped that the client would not ask her any further question.

"So this is my present, which you are telling me?"

"Yes."

"But the information which you are giving me is very vague. All of us are always doing something or the other and look at me", at which she really did take a good look without any guilt, "I am at the peak of my youth and judging by my attire and the way I talk, you can make out that I have a good job and with my age, getting chances and opportunities are very high. Give me something unique which cannot be generalized." She huffed at his indignation.

"Mister..."

"Mayank", he added.

"Mister Mayank, I am here to give a tarot reading. Do you understand the meaning of it?"

"It means that if you are really good at your job then you can tell me the color of the underwear I am wearing." He smirked. She took deep breaths to relieve her anger and told herself constantly that killing him would make her go to prison for a very long time and that would hamper her plans in a very big way.

"It means I can tell you the paths you have chosen and what are the probable paths available for you."

"So basically you cannot give me anything concrete but give me a vague and wooly answer which I can interpret in at least a million ways which gives you an instant leeway in future to tell me – 'I told you so' even though you never really had that information with you in the first place." He summarized in one breath.

"That sounds about right."

"That's cheating."

"That's life buddy. Pick another card." He shook his head in amazement. Who in their right mind would tell their client that they are lying? The girl opposite to him did and it threw him off his balance. He was expecting a nave girl trying to impress people with fancy words with falsetto deeper meanings but the girl giving him a reading was blunt and even rude. It tickled him immensely.

"The Devil", she muttered. She was little surprised at the card she had picked up. It was the most misjudged card on the deck and people automatically thought it was a negative card.

"It's your past", she added to his benefit. He looked mildly horrified.

"This is exactly the reason why I think that the whole thing is flaky. I was not a devil." He declared. He didn't know why he was getting worked up.

"I never said you were." She smirked.

"What does this mean then?"

"You were not in control of your life or your actions. Circumstances and situations were the ones which drove you to be what you are today. It also tells you that allow yourself to come in front of the light."

"Okay. The last line was spooky and the first ones were cheesy. How did you manage to combine them?" Mayank declared. She glared at him.

"Whatever. Pick another. Do it wisely. This is your last one." She said this in a really eerie voice and chuckled. He could not help but to smile back.

"Justice" She frowned. For her, personally, it was all a joke. She did not take the reading seriously and she thought she could derive any kind of meanings she wanted out of the probably explanation. But the cards which she had drawn for him kind of made sense as a whole.

"I would be judged?" His voice broke her from her reverie.

"In a way, you are right. It's mostly righting the wrongs from your present."

"I see. Summarizing my past, present and future cards, I had a rocky past, my present is full of chances and I would also have to atone for my mistakes, correct?"

"That is correct", she replied stacking up the cards.

"You know you just gave a reading for almost half of the world's population?"

"That's genius of me, is it not?"

"It's cheating."

"You said that."

"I don't believe your reading."

"I never asked you to."

"I am not paying."

"Why not?"

"I am not satisfied with the service." He gave a Cheshire-the-Cat grin.

"You think we have some sort of 'Get your money back if you are not satisfied' line here? I gave a reading based on the cards which you picked so it was your decision all the way. You are stuck with your life mister. Learn to deal with it and pay me my damn money." She looked murderous. He was surprised at her attitude. His friend had told him that the girl was pretty meek and little airy.

"Nupur, are you in there?" Diya trilled from the door.

"You are not Diya, the reader, as it says on the board outside?" He asked her. She wondered how in hell Diya came back so back quickly.

"In here", she yelled. She decided not to reply him and if things got out of hands maybe even apologize.

"Why didn't you tell me that you are not Diya?" He reiterated.

"There you are Nupur. Oh, hello. I am sorry but I had cancelled this appointment this morning. Sorry again for making you wait." Diya said it all in one breath simultaneously smiling at Mayank. Nupur rolled her eyes.

"It's alright Diya. Your assistant gave me a reading for free. And I wasn't the one who made an appointment with you." He grinned at both the women. Diya gave him a cheery smile back while Nupur an embarrassed one.

"But I am no miser and I believe that time well spent has to be rewarded." He took out cash from his pocket and his business card, took Nupur's hand and closed her fist.

"I will call you soon", he told her and walked away with a smile leaving behind two stunned females.

Once he was out of the shop, he could hear a trilling voice saying "Who was the hunk" and "Tell me everything" to which he could hear a soft voice explaining everything.

Sookie

Edited by Sookie* - 15 years ago

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