Laaga Chunri Mein Daag (MN) LAST PART PG-71 25/06

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Hiiiiiiii everyone...............I'm starting with another ff.Well actually I'm digging one of my previous ff & rewriting it for all my mayur fans & friends.....I'm posting the concept of this ff.If you like the concept & the introduction part let me know but i'll continue only if I get a good response.😊

CONCEPT:

As the name suggests in this ff nupur will be a prostitute.Well not actually a prostitue.She is a mere bar dancer stuck in a locality of prostitutes.She lives in a total different world.She dreams about her prince charming like a normal girl.And one day she meets her soulmate mayank & life completely changes for her........She just doesnt know what way she should chose in life.

INTRODUCTION:

Dr.Shashank Bhushan:

Dean of sanjeevani.Has only one daughter Dia Bhushan.His wife Dr.Simran died when dia was 6 years.Loves his daughter alot.

Dr.Dia Bhushan:

She is 25 years old.Only daughter of shashank bhushan.Sweet & down to earth.She is in love with Dr.Ranvijay Sharma & very soon she'll be married.

SHARMA HOUSE:

Dr.Surya Sharma:

Best friend of shashank bhushan.Married to Shilpa.He is very loving & caring.Loves his family.

Dr.Shilpa Sharma:

Wife of surya & mother of 3 sons:Samrat,RV & Mayank.She also loves her family & sons alot.She had left sanjeevani so that she could take care of her children but now they are grown up & so she rejoined.

Dr.Samrat Sharma:

Eldest among the 3 brothers.He is a great surgeon.He is married to his female love Gunjan.Loves his brothers alot & always saves them.

Dr.Gunjan Sharma:

Wife of Dr.Samrat.Loves her husband & her two brother-in-laws RV & mayank.Has taken good care of house.She & shilpa share a mother-daughter relation.

Dr.Ranvijay Sharma:

Everyone calls him RV.He is a great doctor.Sweet & down to earth like dia.He is all set to marry his lady love Dia.

Dr.Mayank Sharma:

Cutest & sweetest person being youngest in Sharma family.He is very happy to have such a beautiful family.He is around 24 years.He is very serious about his work.Everyone are after him to select a girl because once RV is married it'll be his turn but he always says he is not interested in marriage.He never looks at a girl with prospect of marriage.He tells his family he'll marry only after he falls in love a girl.But the real reason is he is afraid that if he brings a wrong girl in the house she can destroy his entire family & he doesnt want his family to ever suffer for him.Undoubtedly he is the hero.

Nupur:

An orphan who leaves with a gang of girls under the care of shehnaz bi.Yes she is a bar dancer & leaves in a area which according to outside world is the area of hell.She is youngest among all the girls.Shehnaz bi always had a soft corner for her & never wanted her to become like other girls but the enviroment in which she grew up it was obvious for her to turn like others.Yet she is different than others in many aspects..She is special.She is very outspoken because she has to talk to customers & handle them in such a way.She has never seen outside world but has always heard from others that outside world is not meant to be for them for outside people are always harsh to them & dont understand why they have to do this in life.However she never stops dreaming about her prince charming.She is waiting for him although somewhere she knows that the place where in she lives its impossible to find her prince charming.


If you wish me to go ahead with this ff then please let me know.........😊

INDEX:

PART-1 : PG-7

PART-2 : PG-14

PART-3: PG-21

PART-4: PG-26

PART-5: PG-33

PART-6: PG-43

PART-7: PG-50

PART-8: PG-56

PART-9: PG-60

PART-10, 11, 12: PG-64

PART-13, 14, 15: PG-67

LAST PART: PG-71

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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely concept
add me into ur pm list
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
love
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hey
lovely concept
cont soon
thx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi pinkey ,
Awesome and lovely concept.
it looks really very interesting and different one.
there is no doubt that u should continue it.
All the best from me and Adi.



Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it

do continue it soon...........
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loving the concept dude !!
Do continue n let me knw when u do so ok !!
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different storyline. pls add me ur pm list
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intresting dear.....well me ready for reading..when u gonna upd???me waiting buddy.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hii pinky..!
I would love to read another FF by you anyday yaar..!!
and once again this is such a different concept..! I'm really looking forward to seeing Mayur in this..!
Do continue soon..!
and add me to the PM list..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Pinky!!!

WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY AND A PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR!!!!

O M G!!! What a concept dear!!! I really really really wanna read the story. I mean naam se to pata hi chal gaya ki yeh kya hoga, but the family part was very adorable & mayank being the youngest is amazing yaar!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue asap.

loads of love
vinu

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