TRUE LOVE-updated part 3-Please Comment

Hi Guys!!!!

I am back after long time

Do u remember me

Do u remember you had read one fanfic story "Veer Shera 'Love Story-Vivahtak) I know it was very poor and got few responses

 

But I am again going to bore u guys

 

Here is my new fanfic. Please read n comment if should I continue or not? Be prompt and tell me if anyone doesn't like it at any moment I will discontinue it and will not feel bad about it (cause I know I am not that good writer).

 

So please read n comment.

Edited by RTMCFAN - 14 years ago

Characters

Rajat

 He is simple n studious boy of good nature. Learning in college

Mugdha

She is mugdha cute n nice girl but reserved newly entered in college and living with her uncle

Vikrant aka vikky

He is happy going boy and best friend of rajat. Learnig in same college with rajat. Vikky and rajjy are friends from childhood.

 

Sia

She is perfect girl for vikky his childhood friend and girlfriend now.

 

Agni

He is not bad but troublesome boy. Gets everyone in trouble.

 [size=15pt]Mehul[/size]



[size=15pt]He is simple n studious boy of good nature, cool & calm. Learning in college[/size]


[size=15pt]Maaya[/size]


[size=15pt]She is mugdha's good friend. Nice girl but reserved[/size]

He is businessman n father of vikky

 

Mrinalini

Edited by RTMCFAN - 14 years ago

Part 1

In College

Rajat and vikky use to go together in college. As usual the boring lecture is going on and all were waiting for lecture to over but some studiouse are attending it seriously. Agni agar woh seriously lecture attend kaise kare so he started throwing paper arrow when professor turn towards blackbord. Dharam also fed up of this was talking in between with rajat. But luck is not always goes with u so when agni aimed on professor arrow hit him when he turn n same time dharam caught attention of professor so he thought it is vikky who threw the arrow. He made him stand up and scolded him

vikky tried to prove his innocence

"Sir I done nothing"

but as sir was furious he told him "get out of my class"

Vikky left the classroom and was standing in corridor and doing something with his cell. After some time he saw rajat is coming.

Vikky "kya hua"

Rajat "hona kya tha maine sir ko samzane ki koshish ki lekin kuchh fayda nahi hua, har waqt yeh agni ke wajah se koi na koi phas jaata hai"

Vikky "haa aur uska luck bohot achha hai hamesha woh karta hai aur bhugatna kisi aur ko padta hai. Sports teacher ko toh uspe bohot impress hai. Jaane de waise bhi woh boring lecture kon attend karna chahta tha!!!"

Rajat "so what we waiting for lets go"

 

Vikky "I had sms to sia she is coming"

 

Rajat "Pata nahi yaar tu sia ko kyu bardhasht karta hai"

 

Vikky "cuase I love her jab tuze pyar ho jayega tab dekhenge" said smiling at him

 

Rajat "woh toh hone se raha abhi tak toh aisi koi ladki muze mili nahi"

 

Vikky "Lo sia bhi aa gayi"

Sia was coming towards them

 

Vikky "hey y u r late?"

 

Sia "hold hold I got ur sms but uno I got new friend and she was not use to bunk the lecture, who hamari tarah bigadi hue nahi" and all laughed

 

Vikky "Areh bhai hamse milvao toh tumhare naye friend se!!! where is she?"

 

Sia "she just coming taking notes from maya"

 

Vikky "Kaafi studious lagti hai!! Kyu rajat?"

 

But rajat eyes were fixed on someone?.

Someone is entering in his life.....

 

Edited by RTMCFAN - 14 years ago

hey dear
lovely dear
i loved as u know
do continue
bey sumi

Hey its lovely yaar. very nice. heroine ki entry  ho rahi hain. wow. Interesting. Plz continue soon. Who told u that u r not a gud writer? I wanna meet that person.U r indeed a very gud writer dear. Post the nxt part soon. Rajat ki toh hosh khone wala hain,wow, cant wait.

lovly update do continue waiting for next part

nice story

plzzz do continue

AWWWWWWWWw thts soo cute....i just loved veer shera n also prithvi sanyo n /...................plz plz plz plz continue n add me to ur pm list.....so hamari mughda is studiuos.............lolz waiting for ur next part.......

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

hey dear
lovely dear
i loved as u know
do continue
bey sumi

thank u so much for loving it dear 😊

Originally posted by: sweetshera

Hey its lovely yaar. very nice. heroine ki entry  ho rahi hain. wow. Interesting. Plz continue soon. Who told u that u r not a gud writer? I wanna meet that person.U r indeed a very gud writer dear. Post the nxt part soon. Rajat ki toh hosh khone wala hain,wow, cant wait.

Hey thanks for appreciating😊
And it's me only that thinks so😆😆😆
Aur haa rajat ke toh hosh udane wale hai 😳