PH FF: Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi (upd pg 12, note pg 15)

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CrazyChatterbox

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

Promo 1

As she enters the restaurant, she sees that almost everyone has arrived, and her birthday cake is ready, sitting on a table in the middle of an empty space, waiting for her to cut it.

Just then, a guy whizzes past her.. He seems really worried and scared. He ends up knocking some tables as he crashes into them. He is finally stopped by the table, holding the cake, when he crashes into it. The cake falls on his face, and he falls on the ground. She starts getting furious at him for attempting to spoil her birthday party.

Promo 2

Every day after that day, where he accidently embarrased himself and destroyed "his angel's birthday party", the place where he saw his "angel" for the very first time - he has been unable to forget that face, that angelic face, and that beautiful laugh that belonged to that even more beautiful angel. Not knowing, he has actually fallen in love with her.

Promo 3

He finally gets to meet his angel. Over time, he and his angel become close friends. Just when he is about to confess to her about his feelings for her, she drops a bomb - she is in love with someone else. He is heartbroken, but attempts to be happy for her sake. When is is unable to take it any longer, unable to see her with another guy, he decides to leave her. And when he does, she becomes deeply disappointed, as her one good guy friend, someone who was able to understand her way better than her own childhood friend, has left her.... Will they be able to meet again? Will she ever understand his love for her - that not only is it deep rooted, but it is also never-ending, self-sacrificing, and the most love that one can ever show to another person? More importantly, will she ever reciprocate his feelings for her, or will he be left broken hearted once again?

Edited by NehAditya8791 - 15 years ago

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

heyy guyys... i am gna start a new ff based on kis desh... just the characters will be same, not the storyline...

the first post is on the promos.. the following one will be on the significance of the title, just to tell u why i chose this title, so i am not named a copycat or anything...

tmr i will post the first part, and after tt only i will reveal the characters... but in case u guys are already dying to know.. i'll tell u tt its the most fav couple on this forum (well, duh...!)

so... i really do hope u enjoy this fan-fic of mine... which i vow to complete, and if i dont u can personally come over and bash me up... and my other fan-fic which i left halfway some months ago will also be completed (my apologies for leaving tt halfway, as i was burdened with my finals 12th std exams, which get over tmr...woohoo! haha)

so yeah.., i do hope u read both my ff's, and plz do comment and say what u think abt my ff and its general concept (as from the promos) so tt i know how and why u guyys like it... and also how many ppl like it... and also if there are any improverments to be made, how and in what way shud i make them...

thanks guyy!

and see ya tmr...!

MODS... plz dont close this topic, i have posted this in the ff section forum too, but not everyone from the ff forum visits the kis desh forum, and after some time ppl from the other forum may even forget abt it... so for everyone to upkeep and remember, i am posting in both forums... i am not sure if this is against the rules, but if it is, then plz do tell me so... it wont happen the next time...

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

Significance of the title...

Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi ~ ~~ Couples, soulmates, are made in heaven, and sent down to earth to meet. This is one such story - of a couple - destined to be with each other from the start. God blesses each one of this couple with a good, safe, and long life together - and that wherever they may be, they will go together - so not even time, people, nor their fate will be able to separate them forever (Na waqt, na log, na haalaat, koi judaa nahin kar sakta - a quote from the old serial Tum Bin Jaoon Kahan, that is actually the basis for my storyline) nor even God himself, even thought he created them...

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

~ PM List ~

Kamal_23

yasu09

nehara

Heerbeauty

crystall

...Nikhita...

anishajk99

Ayesha103

sweet scorpio

snehaheer21

fireblaze_divya

premspadhu

sofsunmannee

simi2

sadz

rhtpkcm

~ FF Index ~

Promo 1 --- pg 1

Part 1 --- pg 1

Characters --- pg 2

Part 2 --- pg 2

Part 3 --- pg 3

Part 4 --- pg 4

Part 5 --- pg 4

Part 6 --- pg 4

Part 7 --- pg 6

Part 8 --- pg 6

Part 9 --- pg 6

Part 10 --- pg 7

Part 11 --- pg 9

Part 12 --- pg 9

Part 13 --- pg 12

Part 14 --- pg 12

Part 15 --- pg 12

Part 16 ---

Part 17 ---

Part 18 ---

Part 19 ---

Part 20 ---

Edited by NehAditya8791 - 15 years ago

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Kamal

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

great

plz add me 2 ur pm list

Kamal

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foxi

@foxi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

hi .. i do like your concept ... is it about Premeer or Meet or both? anyways looking forward to read

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Fatima

@-Fatima-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey
its really nice
wait for next
update soon
luv
Fatima

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 1

It is a stormy night in Mumbai, as a guy is seen driving his car.

"Tring, tring!" his mobile phone rings, and he stops the car at the road shoulder so that he can answer the call.

"Hello?!!" he says worriedly, fearing that it may be her, calling to tell 'the news'.

"P-p-p-r-r-e-e-m-m-m'" sobs the other person on the line.

And, that sob, those tears shed while saying just his name, confirms his fears. He quickly puts the phone down, ensuring the sobbing person that he will be there, with her, soon. He rushes back to his destination, fortunate enough to not have had an accident, and the guards let him in the 'Juneja House'.

He quickly rushes inside the mansion after parking his car, and as he opens the main door with his keys, he sees that it is complete darkness inside.

He makes his way through the hall, up the grand staircase, and into a bedroom. As he comes nearer, the sobbing person who he was talking to earlier hears his footsteps and gets up.

And when she sees his, she runs into his open arms..

"Prem!!" she cries again...

"Heer!" he says, and he cries along with her as we feel the depth of the pain both of them are experiencing...

And then, they part from their hug, with their tear-streaked faces.

Edited by NehAditya8791 - 15 years ago

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

hi, its really nice. loved it.
cont.soon. i read ur ff in ff section also.

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CrazyChatterbox

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#10

heyy guyys... sorry for this short part, but i wanted to know ur opinion first, before i proceed to post the other parts...

do u like my style of writing?? how abt the main characters - you guyys fine with premeer?? dont worry meet fans... meet will also be in this fan-fic, though their role will be smaller...

plz do tell me ur opinions... either comment, or click on the "LIKE" button on my post, so i know who likes and, and if i shud continue or not... also, if there is any improvement i shud make, plz feel free to give suggestions... i am open to them...

and yeah... HOW MANY OF U WUD LIKE A VM based on my FAN-FIC ??? i will be more than happy to make one for u guyys...