~*~AN Fiction Thread 2~*~ - Page 16

Note to the Viewers:

@BB.....I told u Tia was gonna be an angel!!! Noone believed me 😆....yeah I wish the same 2....can we just borrow her from Abhi n play with her!! Thank u soooooo much 4 ur comments!!I loved writing this part!!n am so glad u liked it...kiss...hmmm...why shud he not kiss her...he loves her like crazy!!

@Honey,mujhe pata hai ki tum hamesha cliffhangers par hi chodti ho par mujhe, tum aise romantic cliffhangers par chodna pasand nahi😆

Originally posted by: ANfan

@Honey,mujhe pata hai ki tum hamesha cliffhangers par hi chodti ho par mujhe, tum aise romantic cliffhangers par chodna pasand nahi😆

u will have something 2 look fwd 2!!😆

honey......
another marvellous job from u indeed....
the whole scene has turned out to be brilliant

it was quiet nice the way nikki understood abhi........and is handling him
and TIA....nice twist he's not her real daughter......GOOD ONE....

and the corridor scene was quiet nice when she teases her that she missed him 😆 😆
and the kiss scene..... 😆 😆 😆 KYUN TIA KO BIGAAD RAHI HO 😆 😆
but it was the best scene of the part........
UPDATE SOON............
U HAVE TURNED MY TEMPLE OF DESIRES THESE DAYS.......
WHERE I COULD FIND EVERYTHING GOOD ABOUT AN........
it's llike i'm a desperado underneath your window.. 😆 😆 😆
waiting for ur scenes 😆

LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT PART............
OUTSTANDING WORK.. 😃 😃 😃

Thank you honey for so cute and lovely scene🤗

I loved the scene very much it's good that i read it today 😳😳

Oh Tia is such a sweet angel in AN life 😳

I loved the sweet talk between tia and niki they were so sweet 😳😳 The way tia was asking niki question and the way tia was replying so sweetly for one second i thought even i was with both of them there in the scene 😆

Oh when abhi tells tia not to talk to stranger was so funny,he was indirectly taunting to niki 😆

I knew it i knew it yes yes yes that tia was not abhi's daughter 😛 My guess was right 😉
The emotional scene in which she tells niki that her mom and dad are with god loved it 👏 And when niki was crying after listening to this tia told her don't cry "My Daddy will love you too if he sees you sad." ❤️ I just love it 😳 Tia doesn't know his daddy, how much he love's niki 😆 He already loves her 😳

Oh and the kissing scene was surprise for me 😃 and the next surprise was when tia says""Daddy…..you kissed your friend…..you like her."😆

Lovely scene honey 👏
I wish in DMG instead of character like susu and jiah we get to see such sweet and lovely character who can bring smile on our face 😃

**Scenes by mich09**

Scene 12

(After yesterday's episode, just wrote a continuation to it randomly)

A heartbroken Nikki reaches home. Abhi's words keep hammering into her ears, "You have to leave Sanjeevani, leave this city." Leaning her back against the door, she cries uncontrollably.. The tears doesn't wash away the pain which was piercing from within. Wiping her tears, she gets up and starts packing her bag.

'Everytime I wanted to go away from you Abhi you pulled me back. Now you yourself are asking me to leave ? How could you believe I could do something like that Abhi? How ?' she flings a dress on the bed and sobs bitterly. 'How Abhi? How could you ?' she chokes.

Finally having completed her packing she wonders, "Where do I go ? What do I do ?'

Her phone rings. " Nikki?"

"Yes?" she answers mechanically.

"Nikki, Atul here, I am badly injured. I need your help." Atul sounded frantic

Jolted into senses, Nikki worriedly asks "What happened Atul ? Is everything alright?"

"NIkki can you please come quickly ? I'll explain everything later." There was urgency in Atul's voice.

"Ok I'll be there in few minutes."

Reaching Atul's place, Nikki finds the front door slightly ajar. She enters the house. It was dark at the entrance. She finds herself hitting against someone's back..

"Ouch" she rubs her forehead as she looks up at the reason for her pain.

"You?"

"You?"

Two incredulous voices thunder in unison.

Abhi and Nikki stare disbelievingly at each other.

"What are you doing here?" Nikki asks him angrily.

"Atul is injured, so he called me here" Abhi answers " and you?" he asks searching her face.

"He called me, because he was injured. Why would he call you?" Nikki glares at him

"Yes, Atul did call you both!" The caller confirmed. The lights are switched on. Nikki and Abhi turn towards him.

"Atul kya hua ?" Going to him Nikki asks him worriedly. "You said you were injured, but you seem fine." She looks confusedly at him. Abhi too looks at Atul in puzzlement.

"Well Nikki, I had a question to ask Dr. Modi and wanted you to be present when I ask him that."

Nikki and Abhi look at each other and then at Atul.

"Dr. Modi, May I know why Nikki has to leave?" Atul firmly asks Abhi.

"Dr. Atul can you please leave that to Nikki and me. She knows what has to be done."

"Exactly Dr. Modi! I want to know why?"

"Because he believes I tried to kill his loving wife." Nikki butt in, with a sneer at Abhi

Abhi closes his eyes to shut of the pain of her accusation.

"Nikki is not going anywhere Dr. Modi. Why does she have to?"

"Atul" warns Abhimanyu. "I said stay out of this. Look its best if Nikki leaves. If she leaves, there won't be any charges against her."

"Oh how charitable of you Dr. Modi." Nikki angrily retorts " You take everything from me and then as a sop, leave me half-dead? This is your love ! Right ?" Defeated, Abhi lowers his gaze.

"Nikki, don't worry" Atul assures putting an arm around her. "Whether anyone is with you or not, I am with you," he glances at Abhi, "I'll stand by you."

Abhi shakes his head in frustration.

Atul continues to pat Nikki's head. "You won't go anywhere Nikki. You'll stay right here!"

Taking an angry breath, Abhi forcibly drags Atul by the collar and says "What do you want her to stay back for? To be sent behind bars? How can we prove Nikki did not attack Jiah ? All evidences are against her right now. Don't you realise Jiah's statement is enough to send her to prison and ruin her. You are her friend na? then would you want her to go to prison?" he yells. "Everything is in Jiah's hand and you know how much she hates Nikki. Atleast if I go back to her and send Nikki away, she has agreed not to give her statement against Nikki. Nikki need not go to prison and the consolation is she will be safe. Do you think I am happy sending her away? Its like my soul is leaving my body. But, its better than anything bad happening to Nikki'..Nikki's life is in grave danger Atul, she needs to go away .. Try and understand this fact'." He pleads worriedly.

A smile breaks out on Atul's lips.

Seeing his smile, Abhi realises he blurted out the truth he was not supposed to.

"Did you hear him Nikki?" Atul looks at Nikki standing behind Abhi completely shell shocked at Abhi's words. . " This is your Abhi! This is his love for you." Looking at Abhi he says, "I overheard your conversation with Jiah, Dr. Modi."

Nikki stands numbly. She is unable to speak.

Abhi shuts his eyes tightly as he slowly releases Atul. In frustration, he hits his fist against the wall.

Nikki goes and stands in front of him. Tears glisten in her eyes.

Unable to look her in the eye, Abhi turns his face away.

Angrily, Nikki holds his face with one hand , her fingers digging into his cheeks and makes him face her.

"Look at me Dr. Modi. Why have you stopped looking into my eyes when you speak?" Abhi's sad eyes looks into hers. He can see the pain in them. "Why couldn't you tell me this ? Why did you hurt me Abhi?"

"No, Nikki, No!" Abhi warns. " There is nothing left between us. In any case all that I have given you is pain and all that I will give you in future is pain. So here is an opportunity to put a stop to all your pain and misery.

"No Abhi, that pain is much more bearable because I always knew inspite of all that we go through, you still love me. However, when you asked me to leave just like that, I thought you stopped loving me. This pain is killing, Abhi." Abhi's eyes moistens seeing the anguish on her face.

Reality dawning on her, Nikki wipes away her tears.

"Abhi I can't bear to see you live with that dangerous woman. She is too dangerous. I am not going anywhere Abhi," she says firmly. " I am staying right here. Now I don't care what happens to me. "

Abhi can't help but curse himself for his stupidity Oh God, if Jiah knows Nikki is still with me, she'll ruin her. Fear makes him run his hand through his hair.

"Nikki, I said No, you are going" he says firmly. Then holding her face tenderly he says "Please Nikki, try to understand. Your going away is very important to expose Jiah. Even if we don't keep in touch with each other, your presence itself will get her hyper and she'll harm you. Moreover, don't forget, since she was the injured person, everyone will believe her. You have to go Nikki. Atleast till we expose Jiah, get her to admit the truth. My concern for you compels me to do everything Jiah says. If you are not around, I can slowly get her to admit her crime."

Tearfully, Nikki hugs Abhi. "Where do I go Abhi? Moreover, how can I stay away from you knowing all that you will have to go through with her. I don't want to go Abhi. Please don't send me away." she pleads as she clings tightly on to him.

Abhi tightens his clasp around her. An emotional Atul is watching them. Tears well up his eyes. "Nikki need not go anywhere" He tells them.

They turn towards him.

"You are still stuck on it after all that I said?" An astonished Abhi asks Atul

"What I mean is Nikki can stay at my place till we expose Jiah." Seeing Abhi's surprised look he says "Yes, I'll help you in exposing Jiah" he smiles. Happy, Abhi smiles at him. Nikki looks joyously at Atul and then at Abhi.

Atul says "You stay here Nikki. No one will know you are here. I'll temporarily move out to another place."

Nikki says "You are my friend Atul. I know you mean the best for me. There is no need for you to move out of your house for me. I'll move in."

"Exactly!" Abhi agrees. "With you around, I know Nikki is in complete safe hands, Atul." He heaves a sigh of relief.

"I think its best to let Jiah know Nikki is in hiding."Atul tells Abhi. "She'll attack Nikki and we can expose her."

"I've thought about it!" Abhi says, but even the slightest error on our part and Nikki's life could be in danger. No," he shakes his head. "I don't want Nikki and Jiah to meet."

" I agree with Atul. We need Jiah to get hyper and slip up" Nikki tells him.

"But, Nikki.." Abhi strutters.

"Let her attack me Abhi. With Atul and you around, I have nothing to fear" she looks fondly at him. "Now, I am ready to face Jiah. I will fight for my love!" she resolves.

Looking at the determination in her face Abhi pulls her into his arms, on one side and extends his other hand to Atul who smiles as they shake hands.

fantastic scene mich......
it wuld be great when jia will be exposed
nice work..
update soon....

Superb Mich! Its really good!

Michiiiiiiiii....u made my day girl......loooooong time since I read anything from u....n as usual its bful....Oh I love Atul's involvement and how Abhi blurts out the truth....n joining forces to defeat Jiah....music to my ears!!! U shud think of continuing this.....its lovely!!!