|| Turth About Ash || -Premeer OneShot-

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Okay Okay Okay

I came up with another Idea for a OneShot.. =)

|| The Turth about Ash ||

Heer and the whole family looked at Prem shocked.

Heer – "Tumhein pata thaa?"

Prem – "Haan." He said looking away from Heer.

Meher – "Jiju liken ap …"

Prem – "Meher mujhe kuch batna hai ap sab ko kuch batna hai …. Heer mein nahi chata tumhien yeh baat koi or batyay or mein yeh bi nahi cahta kay tum iss baath ko lay kay mujh sey dhoor jayo." He said looking into her eyes.

Heer – "Prem saaf saaf batyo." She said looking a bit annoyed.

Prem – "Heer … Sne … Sneha .. meri beti hai." Heer hell shocked with everyone shocked even more.

Heer – "Tum … Tumhari beti." Prem turned around to face her.

Prem – "Haan."

Heer moved back as tears rolled down her cheek, and her heart again broken.

Suddenly Ash came, Heer looked at her shocked as she stood beside Prem.

But Heer didn't say anything she just walked past Prem and her going upstairs.

Prem followed her calling her name but Heer didn't turn.

She just went to their room and locked the door crying.

Prem banged on the door but she didn't open.

Prem – "Heer please darwaza kolo Please." He said worriedly.

Heer wiped her tears and opened the door, as soon as Prem walked in she turned and went to the bed facing away from him.

Prem – "Heer mujhe pata hai tum dukhi ho …"

Heer turned around with tears rolling down her cheeks.

Heer – "Mein yeh jaan kay dukhi nahi hoon kay Sneha tum … Tumhari beti hai liken bus ek baath ka duk hai tumney mujhe batnay kay layak nahi samjha."

Prem – "Heer asi baath nahi hai."

Heer – "Asi hee baath hai Prem 6 saal pehlay bii yehi hua thaa meiney tumhien nahi batya tu tum kya soochnay lag baday thaa or aj phir tumney wohi kiya jo 6 saal pehlay meiney kiya thaa." She said looking away from him.

Prem – "Heer mein tumhein batna chata thaa liken mujhe dar thaa kay…."

Heer – "Kay mein phir sey tumhein chord kay chali jayoon ghee hain na." Prem nodded.

Heer – "Prem kya tumhein hamray pyaar mein vishwaas nahi hai." Prem looked at her shocked. Heer looked away from him and left the room.

She walked down the hall wiping her tears when she saw Sneha looking at Prem's picture.

Sneha – "You're the best Papa in the world." She said kissing the picture.

Suddenly Ash walked in and sat beside her.

Ash – "Mr.Prem Juneja … How stupid." She said grabbing his picture.

Ash – "Pagal samjtha hai Sneha hamari beti hai …. Us ko tu yeh bi nahi pata kay hamray beech kya hua thaa uss raat … Kuch bi nahi liken Prem Heer kay liye bohat kuch or ab jab woh mil gay hain mein wapis aa gayi phir unko juda karnay kay liye." She said smiling a evil smile.

Heer shocked to hear what Ash was saying.

She couldn't move her feet but their was a happiness inside of her telling her something.

Heer ran back to their room and saw Prem looking at her picture.

Heer – "Prem … Prem … woh." She couldn't find the words.

PRem – "Kay hua?" he said getting up. Heer just hugged him tightliy as tears rolled down her face.

She told Prem what she heard but instead of being happy he was angry. The hatered he felt towards Ash was something hard to describe. Prem pushed Heer away from him and went to the room Ash was in.

Ash got up as soon as she saw Prem in anger, and started her emontinol drama.

Ash – "Prem deko na Sneha …." Prem didn't say anything just slapped her across the face so hard that she fell on the ground.

Prem – "Tumhari himat kasay hui mujhe Heer sey dhoor karnay kit um hoti kooon ho .. KOI BEE NAHI." He said pulling her up by her arm and dragging her downstairs.

Everyone looked at the way Prem was dragging Ash by her arm.

Prem – "Niklo yahaan sey niklo." He said pushing her out of the house.

Sneha – "Mama Mama."

She said running behind Prem.

Prem – "Tum bii jayo mama ki chamchi." He said throwing Ash out and slamming the door shut.

Preet – "Bhahia kya hua." Prem told them the whole thing and What Ash did.

Everyone was shocked but also happy for them.

So from that day on Premeer's life went well and everything was in place.

Okay guys I know its one of the worst OS ever but I don't have time to make it better so tell me you like it or hate it.

Love Ayysha

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Posted: 15 years ago
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-reserved-

once more 😆 but pakka promise, i'll unreserve everything tomorrow !! I'll go through my PM's, sach !!
Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lol i loved the last part ."tum bhi niklo mama ki chamchi "🤣 lol tht was halirious ...really nice one shot keep it up 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it ayysha

hope this happens 4 real and ash and that sneha r kicked out

thanx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey darlingg!! of course i loved itt!!! anything that leads to the death or perhaps the leaving of ash makes me more than happy :D:D
acha lissen...my inbox is..well...80% FULL!!!!!!! LOL...never thot that would happen to me! but of course...what else can u expect from a deshian! LOL...i've started reading so many ffs (majority of them are courtesy of my fave lil one right here ;)) so all the pms add up...and i never really bothered to empty them! so InshAllah..i'll pakka try to empty the inbox for 2moro...cuz im loaded with studies right now...but basically..i wanted to tell u this because in case u send me a pm about an update or an os, i mite not get it..but obv. i'd still wanna read it! so if u could please..i dunno somehow save the links or do something so u can send it to me again! i know this is a bother but i'd really appreciate it if u could still send me the links after my inbox is cleared...still......i plan on emptying it 2moeo...hopefully i'll get to it xD
thanxx soo muchh hunn
keep writing wonderfully!
love
Samra <33
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsume...ayesha it was too gud espicialli da mamma ki chamchi part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome os
kaash ki aisa hi hoooooo
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome os
hope this happens in the show!!!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank God us mamma ki chamchii ko bahir nikala prem ni....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey
Nice one shot
haha i love this dialouge mama ki chamci haha
Nice one

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