FF - Love Never Dies - COMPLETED!

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Love never dies

Part - 1
Heer ran to the room and got shocked to see Ash on the bed. She couldn't believe her eyes. She can't swallow her thoughts that Prem broke her trust and love. She just sat on the floor crying. Prem is standing behind her with shock. He couldn't recollect anything. But he was sure that nothing happened.

Prem: Heer, I don't know how to prove but I'm sure nothing happened.

Heer looked at him with anger. Prem couldn't look into her eye. 'Prem, Tell me confidently. Nothing happened.' but Prem has no answer for that because he is not in his sense that time he drank too much.

After a while she ran to Gaya3. She cried on her lap for sometime. Hearing the news Gaya 3 went to talk to Ash. She was crying. Gaya3 returned and told Heer to leave Prem. Heer is in shock hearing the word from Gay3.

Heer: Ma, still I'm confused whether to believe Prem or not.

Gaya3: I'm sure he did the mistake. He is not worthy to forgive. So leave him and by this way you can punish him.

Heer always respected her as a mother. So she thought as a mother what she thinks is correct. Heer believed Gaya3's words. She agreed and got up to leave.

Gaya3: one minute Heer. Give me promise that you'll never come into Prem life again.

Heer said," Promise". Now Heer had only anger on Prem. What she can think after his own mother is confident that her son did the mistake.

Gay3: Heer, Remove your mangalsutra. You are leaving out without any memories of Prem.

Now Heer is in shock and looked at Gaya3 with confused face.

Gaya3, 'Don't get angry on me. You cannot live with him anymore. I don't want to spoil your life. This mangalsutra will be a disturbance for your future. I want you to be happy for ever.'

Heer was one side angry on Prem for doing this and another side she saw the caring heart of a lady whom she loved more than as a mother.

She thought,' Ma, always supported me in all my critical situation. So she will never guide me to the wrong direction'.
Gaya3 insisted her to remove that Mangalsutra again. Heer agreed and said I'll leave that in Prem's room. Gaya3 know Heer will always keep her words.

Heer went her inside the room and packed all her stuffs. When went near the window she remembered her sweet moments with Prem. But it gave her pain this time. She removed her Mangalsutra with tears in her eyes. Outside Prem is sitting and crying in Kuldi lap. Everyone is in shock.

Heer came out of her room. Prem ran to her and begged not to leave him alone. 'I'll not break your trust in the future. Please forgive me this time.' Heer is not in the mood to listen. She just walked passed everyone. Prem ran behind her and sensed one hand on his shoulder. Gaya3, 'don't worry Prem she will come back as soon as she realise that what she did was mistake. Give her sometime to think. Don't run behind her. That will make her angrier on you.' Prem looked at her mother with hope and leaned on her shoulder and cried.

Heer step out of the house thinking how happily she entered this house with Prem.

Flash back

Prem and Heer are standing on the door. Gaya3 took arthi for them. Heer pushed the rice pot and walked after printing her happiness in the floor Juneja house. Gaya3 stopped Heer and asked her the promise that she will never leave Prem and always keep him happy. Heer shyly agreed and saw the proud Prem next to her. he tickled her back without noticed by others. But can't escape from Kuldi's telescopic eye and she teased them.

Present

Tears rolled down on her cheek. She looked at the Juneja house for the last time. 'I entered this house as a bahu and become a daughter but now thrown out by my husband's bad behaviour. I once loved this house now i have only hate towards this house. I'll never step into this town again'. With this confident she moved forward.

Gaya3 is talking to Prem and comforting to be happy and wait for her. Heer is on the other side thinking. 'If Prem truly regretted for his doing he might have stopped me when I step out of the house. But he not even tried for that. So he committed the mistake. What mother said was correct. He is not worth to forgive.'

Prem enter into his room and saw Heer's payal on the floor. He took that and cried. Then he saw the mangalsutra on the table next to their picture. He doesn't have strength to cry. He lay on the floor motionless hugging her mangalsutra and payal in one hand and her duppatta in another close to his heart. Those things were only things she left behind as her memory and few photographs she forget to pick up.

Heer enters railway station bought ticket to Delhi. Her eyes are still searching for Prem. She got into the train. Sat on her place and leaned over the window. Train started moving forward. Her thoughts also started moving but backwards.
Looks like the episode but turns different in next part.
Links to FF Parts.
Part - 1 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=1
Part - 2 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=1
Part - 3 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=3
Part - 4 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=4
Part - 5 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=5
Part -6 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=6
Part - 7 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=7
Part - 8 & 9 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=8
Part - 10 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=9
Part - 11 & 12 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=10
Part - 13 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=11
Part - 14 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=12
Part - 15 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=13
Part - 16 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=14
Part - 17 & 18 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=15
Part - 19 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=16
Part - 20 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=18
Part - 21 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=20
Part - 22 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=22
Part - 23 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=24
Part - 24 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=26
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Part - 26 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?ID=1273254&TPN=29
Part - 27 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=31
Part - 28 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=33
Part - 29 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=34
Part - 30 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=35
Part - 31 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=37
Part - 32 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=39
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Part - 37 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=50
Part - 38 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1273254&TPN=52

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hello
it was nice
gayatri seems to be more evil than she acted in the show..
plz don make heer leave...
i wish prem could join her and both of them go away
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Love Nerver Dies

Part - 2
Heer's memory raced back.
It is a beautiful small village surrounded by green fields. A bus came and a girl jumped out of it with happy face wearing yellow salwar. She ran holding a file in her hand. She ran to a lake where already a guy and a girl are waiting for her. As she went near to them she shouted and jumped in happiness. They sensed the truth and joined with her. She told them 'I'm an engineer now. I got university rank too.'

Girl's name is Heer and she got her BE result. She passed with university rank. Megher, younger sister and she is very naughty. Nihal is her elder brother. He loves her sisters very much especially Heer. Her father Balraj is a farmer and works hard to run his family life. They have a very small house but filled with joy and love. Nihal to meet the needs of her sisters and his studies went to job early but he finished his graduation in correspondence as requested by Heer. He is very happy that her elder sister is the first Engineer of that village.

Villagers are mainly depended on the yield of the field but that too is taken by a Landlord. Balraj took lot of money from him kept his house. He wants to get Heer marry to a good person before his house goes in debt.

Balraj and her wife are talking to a elderly man who came from Ludhiana. Balraj asked him to look a nice person for her daughter. Three reached the house. Megher ran to the Kitchen and came with the sugar bottle and dumped sugar into her parent's mouth. They are happy and sensed that Heer passed in her exams. Elderly man hearing the news blessed Heer and his eyes said, 'I got a life partner for you.' He left without saying anything.

Juneja's house

Lalit, head of the family and his wife Gaya3 is discussing about searching a life partner for Prem. Prem is a very loving person and helping his father in business. Within two years he helped his father to fly high in his hotel business. With his talent and brilliant stratagey Juneja's empire spread widely in most of the countries.

They asked Kulraj about Prem's taste. Kulraj is Prem's elder sister. Prem is very much attached to her sister. She is married.to Kiran, he is a business man. He mostly travels around the world so she is staying with her parents. They have two kids. Prem always shares every moment of his life with his sister. Along with mother her children are also attached very much to Prem.

Preet, a lover boy. Just out of college and always like to tease others. His hobby is getting scolding from her father. Not interested in joining his father's business. He loves to roam around and enjoy life.

Veera, little sister. She is the heart of everyone. She likes to be very lavish.

They all came to India from Canada to search a girl for Prem. Prem loves homely and traditional girl and he is not willing to look any girl for marriage now. Everyone is happy except Veera, she loves to attend party and disco. She thought, 'I'll never marry a Indian. They are sentimental'.

Elder walked in. (he is the one who earlier met Balraj). Juneja's welcomed him and started chatting. Elder said he have a girls details which you can see for your son. He handed over Heer's photo to them. When Lalit and Gay3 saw the photo they were happy but they are not sure about Prem. Prem entered at the same time but he ignored the photo and went in saying 'I'm not interested in marriage now.' Gaya3 called Kulraj. She looked the photo and thought she is a perfect match for Prem. 'I'll talk to Prem. He will surely agree if he looks at Heer once.' She is confident. Everyone happy and Lalit asked him to arrange for a casual meeting with them.

Balraj house.

Heer is in her high temper and jumping up and down for searching guy for her without asking her permission. Nihal is trying to pacify her. Megher supports her sister.

Heer 'I want to do MBA then some job. I want to be one of the successful business women in India. You broke all my dreams.' She is in tears. Nihal went near to her holding her by her shoulder 'still you can be like that. we are not breaking your dreams.' Heer looked at him with confusion. Nihal 'Juneja's are one of the leading business men in this world. You can study further and can take of part in their business along with your husband. They are really very nice people.'

Heer is satisfied looking confidence in her brother eyes. She agreed. Heer and Nihal are very close. Balraj know only Nihal can make her agree for that. Heer, 'if they didn't agree after seeing me then you should not go for another proposal.' Nihal agreed for her condition.

Next morning.

A formal pooja is arranged in a temple. There Balraj's and Juneja's are planned to meet. They planned to proceed further function in home If both sides are interested.

Heer is restless and prayed that this proposal should fail. But her inner heart felt that that is not correct. This is the man for me. she is confused. Megher helped Heer to get ready. Heer looked very beautiful in pink salwar with embroidery and a simple necklance around her neck. Nihal hugged her sister and kissed on her forehead wished her happiness.

They all reached the temple. Juneja's already waiting for them. Kulraj, Kiran and kids are having fun in the entrance of the temple. Kulraj is happy to see her and thought she is the perfect partner for my Prem. Lalit and Gaya3 is also happy. Prem is busy with phone. Preet and Veera are teasing one another. They are running around chasing one another. Preet is about fall on something. One hand pulled him back. 'are you mad? Don't you have eyes? You are about to push the pooja flowers on to the mud. Mad.' He turned to see the female voice scolding. Megher is standing there. Preet looked at her with anger 'why you came on my way and scolding me. Mad lady.' Megher got angry and about to open her mouth again when Nihal called her to accompany Heer to the temple.

Lalit and Balraj are introduced to each other by the Elder. Both the family started introducing their members. Gaya3 searched for Prem Kulraj came with Prem. When Gaya3 intorduced Prem to Heer, he casually looked at her. Heer is still looking at the ground. But to Prem something happened in his heart and couldn't move his eye away from her. Kulraj noticed this and slightly hit her hand. Prem came to conscious. From his face she got the point and shouted 'Prem likes Heer'. Everyone is happy. Heer with a shock she lifted her face and looked at Prem for the first time. She too stared at him. She started blushing and their eyes meet. Kulraj whispered congrats into Prems ears. Nihal too did the same to Heer. Prem and Heer lowered her eyes with happiness.

Lalit wants to do the marriage as early as possible. Both the families proceeded with wedding preparations. While getting inside Balraj's house Veera felt and not willing to enter the house. Gaya3 gave some advises and to escape from further advises Veera managed to smile around the entire proceedings. Prem and Heer didn't get much time to share anything between them. They are always interrupted by Preet and Megher fights. But they could understand the feeling for each other.

Marriage is very simple cermony. Juneja's didn't demand anything from them. Lalit knows there situation and he only wants Heer as his bahu. When Prem wore the mangalsutra around her neck he promised her that he will always give her happiness and stay with her in every ups and downs. When kept the sindoor Heer promised him that she always stand with him in his decision. Even though they thought it in their mind they could hear the words in each others hearts.

Heer left Balraj's house with tears. Nihal and Megher hugged Heer with tearful eyes. They were never separated from each other. Prem took Heer to the car. Juneja's left the village. Heer remembered all her days in the small village. Prem slowly wrapped her shoulder with his hand and wishpered 'I love you'. Heer is shivering feeling his breath in her ears. This is the first time she is sitting this much close to him.

After 2 hrs of travel they reached Juneja's house. Heer looked stunned by the size of the house. She never before looked such a big house. After few traditional ceremonies and dinner Kulraj took Heer to Prem's house. Prem is egarely waiting for Heer. This is the first time he is going to be alone with her. he is confused about her likings. He is counting every second.

Edited by newt2007 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hello
it was awesome
i liked the way thins went on.....
continue this one sooooooon....
i'm actually waiting to see whether heer leaves or not
par now i'm interested to see how they got together.
thanks for the pm
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hiiiiiiiiiii its a wesum ff loved the update plz update soon plz add me in ur pm list
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awesomeeeeeeeeeee...................
can't wait 4 da next part ..............
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