FF KPNHJ-1 New E 42 Europe here we come! P. 149

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I am starting a new FF hopefully will be posted this weekend as I am in teh process of plot development. Have been writing FFs for more over 3 years and enjoy doing it. I would like to see more of FF writers putting their creativity in the section to draw younger crowd in our section since the story may be taking turn towards abhi simi's romantic love story with lots of hurdles in tehir way...
My FF will be based on serial story somewhat but then lot of imaginary stuff will be added and it will have no shortage of romance.😊
links to my other FFs RKAB
Raja ko rani se pyar ho gaya
Saat phere my most read
saloni ki premakahani
Love at first sight
Pyar to hona hi tha
Index
Episode 1 meeting with an Angel p.1
Episode 2 Simi in Wonderland P. 2
Episode 3 Wedding off Abhi hurt p. 3
Episode 9 Abhi's confession p.14
Episode 10 Abhi confesses his true feelings p. 18
Episode 18 Simbhi's suprise for ANuj and Anita P. 46
Episode 19 Abhi Mili's plan p.50
Episode 19 part 2 Abhi's biggest V day Surprise to Simi p.52
Episode 20 Simbhi's suhag raat p. 57
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Yess....I'm also interested!!
Let's get started!
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Episode one Meeting with an Angel

Abhinav is coming home to surprise his sister and his mom. He sees a temple and stops his car to get blessings of Mataji to be successful in mission of unting anuj and Anita and bring her a prince charming. As if mataji has answered her prayers and sent her an angel in form of Abhil. who also sees a girl in the temple. She looks so pure and divine with a baby face of l an angel. He instatntly likes her and gives a smile. He stares at her. Girl Simi is unaware of all this as her eyes are closed, She is very sad and asking Mataji to help her in her mission to unite his brother and his girl friend Anita.

Abhi finally walks behind Simi to reach a bell. Both Simi and Abhi rings bell at the same time . Their hands touching each other. Abhi then walks away But SImi with the touch is shocked and looks behind as she finds the touch so loving and calming to her soul.

She looks behind but only see some one walking away with the bell ringing and hanging out of his shoulder bag. Simi walks home thinking about a touch. That night she dreams about the faceless man touching her soul.

Next day when 3 sisters go out to buy some sweets. Simi runs into Abhi but does not recognize him. Abhi is happy to see Simi and asks her directions to the place he wants to visit. Abhi then extends his hand to thank her. Simi holds his hand and finds the same feeling as if abhi is touching her soul. She likes the feeling 2nd time around As Abhi walks away the bell from his pocket drops on the road.

Simi sees the bell and picks it up remembering she saw it outside the tenple in the shoulder bag. As soon as she holds the bell it gives her feeling of hope in her life which seems sinking with no ray of any hope, She is forced to marry a person she despise as she is 30 year old over weight college lecturer. She is not an ideal choice for modern men who are mostly interested in choosing girls who are either slim or perfect figured attractive girls and younger as then themselves..

Simi is simple heavy side middle class woman who is constantly being verbaly abused and taunted by her family and outsiders especially her younger brother anuj who is so eager to marry his girl friend anita.

Simi comes home that night with bell and holds it close to her heart while going to sleep. She experience a feeling of hope and peace she has not experienced in years. Sher gets good sleep that night.

Next day while Abhi is looking for the bell/ Simi is holding onto it tight with a new hope and dreams in her life. Her dreams are shattered when Rajiv forcefully takes her out and tries to force himself on her. Simi resists Rajiv and walks away. She falls and finds bell next to her fallen from her purse,. She holds the bell tight and runs away.

Abhi is also in that area thinking to help his dad who has lost his land to some greedy builders. Abhi is taking pics with camera to find Rajiv's car and calls police. Police comes and arrest Raji. while Simi is still running away hurt and her foot is bleeding.

Abhi talking to his sister Anita finds Simi in front of his car. abhi hangs up the phone and runs out. He is shocked to Simi in bad condition. Before he says anything Simi faints in his arms.

Abhi is shocked and feels sad. He puts her head down on his jacket and runs to get water. He puts Simi's head on his leg and sprinkles water while lookig at her and calling her out. He wants to wake her up and take away all the pain and fear which is visible on her face.

Simi wakes up seeing a shadow and thinking of Rajiv and what he did. She quickly gets up and starts running. towards the car Abhi runs after her trying to stop her.

Abhi: Suniye aap ruk jaiye. Aap thik nahi lag rahi. Mai aapko.....

Simi ignores him and runs away. Abhi sees her bleeding foot and stops her standing in front of her.

Abhi: Dekhiye aap ke pair se khun bahe raha hai. AAp aise chal nahi sakti. aap rukiye mere saath chaliye doctor ke pass you need help.

Simi is still in the shock and scared thinking about Rajiv and slaps Abhi hard. Abhi is sad and drops his jacket being shocked. Simi then breaks down dropping her head on abhi's shoulder crying very hard holding his hand..

abhi comforts her putting his hand around her shoulder. He then gently taps her back comforting her.

Simi with a feeling of comfort and peace frees herself despite her mind saying not to let go of abhi. As first time in her life she has found an unknown feeling of comfort, security, an intense peace. Her heart is screaming at her saying: Simi hold on to him and to this feeling of being secure.

Puzzled Simi realizing how much she has hurt a wrong person by slaping him when all he tried to do is provide her aching body and heart a support. She is so emberassed while gasping for air and looking for words to ask him for forgivenss,

She breaks up while trying to say sorry, but the words refuse to come out from her moth and she feels like crying one more time on his shoulder and let out all the pain rejection she hs suffered thru out her life. Simi stops herself feeling embarassed at her own thought and utter word Sorry cryingly.

Abhi says; It is ok. I will take you to doctor. You are hurt badly, Simi is thinking fast::" You are the only doctor I need. who can cure all my pains. I just want to be with you for a little while."

Abhi not aware of what is going thru Simi's mind replies:" Ok I will take you home or where ever you want to go" . Simi Thinking: "Kash aap mujhe in sapno ki duniya me le jate jahan sirf aap aur mai ho. Magar mujhe jaldi ghat pahochna hoga . Wahan papa mummy mera injejar kar rahe hai. Magar mai aap ko ye bhi nahi kahe sakti mujhe ghar le chalo," she reples: Plz drop me near karol baag. Abhi agrees and walks towards tha car where he finds his lucky bell. Simi sits in the car, Abhi drives her. Simi is looking at him and thinking: "Aaj bhagwanji ne mere liye sach me el angel bhej diya hai. Kash ye angel hamesha mere pass rahe or sirf mera banke rahe." Abhi is also looking at her and remebers her wound.

He stops the car and genty puts her foot on the foot rest and cleans the wound with cold water first. Simi is lost in another world. Making comaprison between abhi and Rajiv. When Abhi is cleaning the wound with dettol while blowing air with his mouth. So it won't sting her, . Simi feels same intense pleasure as if some one has put a big bandage on her heart taking away all her pain. Abhi asks: Is it hurting a lot? Simi nods her head saying she is fine, Abhi puts antibioic and bandage on her wound. Simi is thinking: kash aap mere sare jhakmo pe marham laga sakte jo abhi mai aapko dikha bhi nahi sakti. Abhi is trying to read her mind and walks away to the back of the car and gets his sandles. He puts them on Simi getnly brushing her legs with his hand.. Simi again feels a sense of joy comfort going in thinking mode: " Rajiv is going to marry me and yet all he has caused so far is pain and hurt to me and my family. Yet a perfect stranger has saved my life and took care of my wound and putting his belonging on me so I can be comfortable and fine. What do I call you ? My angrl, my friend. She looks at him with so much love and admiration in her eyes.

Abhi senses this and smiles at her going to the back of car and getting thread and needle and handing her that while asking who did this to you? Simi replies "my mangetar". Abhi is disgusted and sits in the car,

Simi spots the bell in between seats and holds it. Abhi replies: this is my lucky bell. But you can borrow it as you need it right now.. Simi thanks him. She wants to say lot to abhi. But holds herself. Thinking of a song

Tera saath hai toh mujhe kya kami hai andhero se bhi mil rahi roshni hai

Tera saath hai to koi ghum nahi hai har ek bebasi ban gayi chandani hai

When abhi drops her .

He asks her one more time:" will you marry this person". Simi replies: "sometime you have do things for others." Abhi asks her to consider her happiness before others. As when you get hurt ppl who love you get hurt too. Abhi hands her his phone number. Simi accepts and walks away thinking about all that has happened to her including meeting an angel who has made her smile after a long time and ease lot of her pain she has been carrying in her heart for years. She grasps the bell tight in her hand and puts it close to her heart and walks home thinking about Abhi a perfect stranger she did not care to know his name. For her she has finally found her angel and she knows things will be all right in her life. Abhi is also confused as he kept calling her to intorduce himself but she walked away. He is not sure why did he feel so close to Simi without even knowing who she is. He felt like he knew her for a long time. And wanted to meet her again and again and make sure she is not sad any more but smiling. He did not relaize why Simi's smile matters so much to him.

Plz pardon my typos.

To be continued.

Plz post your feedbacks they are most welcome and appreicated. 😊
Edited by ramas - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww love your FF raksha di!
wow i never knew you were so creative! 😛
i really like how things are going between abhi and simi <3
keep it up di! 👏
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very cute fan fic, can't wait for next part
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Originally posted by: ..TatianaMJ_SD

Yess....I'm also interested!!

Let's get started!

I hope you enjoyed first episode.😊
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heyyyyy its sooo good thnx for posting
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Reading it again....I can imagine it.....and vivid thoughts are racing in my mind!
Welll described!!
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Originally posted by: Jess.

awww love your FF raksha di!
wow i never knew you were so creative! 😛
i really like how things are going between abhi and simi <3
keep it up di! 👏

Thanks Jess most beutiful part is coming up. just hang in Abhi is in action.
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Episode 2 Simi in wonderland

Simi walks home feeling like on cloud nine. She feels so light that she wants to fly and be in the unknown place with abhi where she has never been. But as soon as she comes home reality strikes. As her mom says they have to go to function given in their honur by RB . Simi has no choice but to accept as she can not tell what happened to her,
She goes in her room and cries hard clutching the bell very hard with one hand and Abhi's sandles with other. Her sisters joins her and they all cry hugging each other, Mili bugs her but she refuse to tell her anything other than she has to go away from them soon.
After Mili and Nitu leaves the room Abhi's words are haunting SImi and She decides to confront RB at the party.
They all leave for the party. She meets RB and completely ignores him. But RB comes forward with a gift and offers her asking for her forgiveness earlier. Simi makes it clear that I have neither forgotten nor forgiven you for what you did to me and I may go to police. with the clothes I have that you torn. RB is shocked and leaves. He makes his friend insult Mr Sethi and then threatens Simi regarding their shop to buy her silence.
Simi warns him if he does anything bad to her family she will go to police. RB is shocked. Simi at night is thinking about all the courage abhi gave her and how she handled RB. she again clutches bell real hard close to her heart thinking about abhi the perfect stranger. That night she gets little sleep as she sees anuj's sad face asking her to help him.
But in her dreams Abhi is dressed as a prince. She is running away from RB as RB is after her . All of a sudden Abhi approaches RB and kicks him hard. RB falls and abhi beats him up. RB escapes and Abhi picks up crying and sad simi helps her on his horse and takes her away. simi is holding him tight closing her eyes to forget RB thinking of a song
Mujhe tum mil gaye humdum sahara ho to aisa ho jidhar dekhu udhar tum ho nazara ho to aisa ho,
Abhi takes her to beautiful place where the birds are chirping and butterflies are fluttering around. The lake side is filled with booming flowers and there are rainbows coming out from the lake. in the mountain side.
Simi feels so happy. She asks abhi to help her down. Abhi stops the horse and gets down. He holds Simi's hand and helps her down. Simi gets down scared. and holds abhi abhi. abhi gently puts his hand around. Simi is so happy as her heart is beating so fast and her face is all flushed red. She wants to look in Abhi's eyes to find the same love she has in her eyes for him. But she is scared. At the same time Abhi is looking at her adn he likes Simi looking so beautiful with her face and lips all red . he too want s to kiss her face and lips. He is so tempted . he feels like he is in command to protect this beautiful lady in his arms. he wants her to look at him and feel the same love he is feeling for her this moment. With these thought his heart is pounding like he is racing. They have forgotten everything and they are lost in anotehr world.
while the song is playing
Tum jo mil gaye ho ye jahan mjil gaya ek bhatke huye rahi ko asmaan mil gaya
Finally simi frees herself and looks at abhi. She is so delighted to find so much love in his eyes and blushing like a bride. Abhi is also looking at her. All of a sudden abhi gets an idea and starts Running towards the lake. Simi follows him. Abhi jumps in the lake and asks simi to join him. simi refuses then Abhi starts splashing water on her. Simi runs for a while then she joins him they both are spashing water at each other. forgetting there are ppl watching them.
All of a sudden Simi gets out and looks back to find abhi missing. She is scared and wakes up screaming.
Mili and Nitu both runs there. Simi tells them it was just a dream. anuj reminds her one more time to help him. Simi decides to meet RB and sacrifice her life for her brother's happiness.
As to her surprise she is walking thinking about her dream and reality Abhi stops the car and asks her if she needed ride. Simi is so delighted. her heart says yes i need a ride for my whole life can you help me. Abhi is looking at her and Simi looks at him. There eyes do the talkig while Simi sits in his car.
they are both again lost in another world thinking about each other. When simi gets down and walks away abhi feels emptiness not in the car but in his heart as well. He sees her going away out of his sight then he too drives away thinking about her. and that he still does not know what is her name yet he can not get her out of his mind.
To be continued.
Plz pardon the typos. and enjoy. Plz do not forget to leave your fedback.
Edited by ramas - 15 years ago

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