mayur the loving birds..; prt 23 pg 53 last part

my mayur os gallery

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my new mayur ff ("mayur" the temptation)

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Introduction....

mayank: he is a big business man's son and very responsible..... all akadu types.. gussewala and all .... very rich........

samrat: he is mayank's best buddy... his father is a lawyer..........

nupur: very bubbly.... charming... bahut bolti hai.... daughter of a rich mother(divorced)........ uski mom jyaadatar ghar pe nahi rehti.... family business hai to wahi sambhaalti hai...

gunjan: nupur's bachpan ki dost... yeh mayank ko bhi jaanti hai coz he studied in her school.... (he was her senior).... mother ek company me kaam karti hai... father ek doctor hai....

sab apni life mein khush hai... abhi XL college mein admission liya hai........
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part -1.......

ab college hai to ragging to hogi hi..... to mayank to bahadur baccha hai usse kon dushmani mol leta... so fasi to bichaari nupur...

nupur: dekho mein yeh nahi kar sakti...

the seniors: karna to padega hi.... college mein rehna hai ya nahi.....

at last nupur ko maanana hi pada..

ab nupur wait kar rahi thi ki door se koi jaan pehchaan ka hi nikle....

aur kya nikla to mayank.....................

nupur to herself: mar gyi........

nupur mayank ke paas jaati hai....

nupur: dekho dost.....

[mayank ek weird look deta hai kyuki wo usse jaanta bhi nahi...]

nupur: mera matlab hai.. classmate..

wo mein yeh kehna chaahti thi ki...

mayank: xcuse me... tum mujhse baat kar rahi ho...

nupur: "tum mere sapno ke raajkumar ho" (yeh bolte hi nupur ka challenge to pura ho gya ab bas usse wait karna tha mayank ke reply ka.... kyuki reply sunana bhi uski ragging ka hissa tha.....)

but jese hi mayank ne nupur ko confused sa look diya nupurkumaari ne mayank ko dheere se kaha "ragging",,,,,,, aur apne mayank baabu ka dimaag to bahut tez hai... chat se pakad liya,,,,

mayank: haan veer kunwari,,, yeh sach hai....... tum hi mere sapno ki rajkumari ho.... hum jeevan bhar ek duje ke haah me haath daale chalte rahenge sarhad ke paar.........

(nupur was impressed and seniors were sepressed)

bas phir kya tha......
and then they became gud frnds...............

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interesting. But add al ur updates to a single thread. Keep writin.

PART - 3

and they went for shopping leavin behind sajan..........

after they came back from shopping evry thing was ready......... they both were surprised that sajan did a fantastic work................ but nupur knew if she wud say hanx it wud look a little formal and all that show off types..........

nupur: to log kitni baje tak aa rahe hai.......

sammy: bas aadha ghnte mein pahunchte honge....

maynk: i dont think mein party mein enjoy kar paaoonga.......

s: wat?????? kyu........

gunjan: shaayad mein jaanti hoon..........

n: kahin tum log meri baat to nhi kar rahe.......

m: haan jhaansi ki raani nupur kumaari tumhaari hi baat kar rahe hai...... kisi ke paas shopping karne ka itna stamina kese ho sakta hai.........

n: by god mayank... phir mene tumhe ice cream bhi to khilaayi na.......

m: nupur plzzzzzzz....... agar tum icecream nahi khilaati to mein wahi uss shopping centre pe shaheed ho jaata.......

s: kya matlab??

m: matlab yeh ki shehsaahe raajkumari ko kuch pasand hi nahi aata...... mene aaj iss shehar ki saari shops ke chakkar kaate hai.... and u know wat nupur har jagah ki lagbhag saari dresses try karti hai....... aur mein pak gya tha............ oh wat a horrible day..

n: mene kaha tha tum bhi kuch lelo ab tumne nahi liya to bore to hona hi tha.....

s: haan mayank tum bhi kuch le lete.....

m: le leta😲 (in a louder scale) mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki mein ghar waapas kese aauu,,,,,,, aur meri haalat ab yeh hai ke mein agle 1 mahine tak koi shop pe nahi jaa sakta........

s:😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆........

m: haso haso....... tumhaara haq banta hai.. (poor mayank⭐️)

n: oh come on mayank........ tum bhi na........

s: accha accha plzzz...... ab party start hne waali hai tayyar nahi hona kya.................

n: are haan.... mayank tum kya sochte ho mein wo jo hamne aaj pink dress li wo pehenloo.....

m: konsi???

n: mayank .... tumne i to suggest ki thi,,,,,,,

m: haan haan pehen lo......

(nupur goes inside to change)

m: pata nahi yeh konsee dress ki baat kar rahi hai.... mujhe to waha chakkar aa ra he the.. nupur mujhse poochti thi yeh loo ya yeh. mein to yoo hi bina dekhe koi bhi dress pe haath rakh deta tha..........

s: dood ........... chill.......

(every body is ready mehmaan bhi aa gye hai..... bas nupur nahi aayi sbko ussi ka intezaar... hai..... especially maynk)

there comes nupur through the stairs wearing a pink hot top and white mini skirt ....... white boots..... high pony with half french plet..... her waist cud be seen a bit coz the to p was a little up and skirt was a little down.......... and yes the hotti black net jacket...

every body gazed her lyk anything... mayank cud not stop himself from looking at her.......... she walked down the stairs...........

g: waah nupur kya dress pehni hai.......👏

n: ahem...... mayank ki choice hai.....😳

m: hn......😛

sab dance karne lagte hai....... samrat aur gunjan bhi dance karte hai......... and the left out ar e mayank and nupur.........😭

part 4 page 1

Hi Pari,
nice update.
keep it up.
And do pm me ur next 1.

Awesum

i read ur updates now...continue soon...
plzz pm me when u continue..

part 4

nupur is waiting for mayank to ask her for dance......... where as mayank on other hand is hesitating to ask nupur for dance....... finally mayank asked nupur for dance and nupur and mayank started dancing..........

nupur: wese mayank tum itna bhi bura nahi naachtey ho,,,,,,,

mayank: ohh,,, wese tum to kisi princess ki tarah dance karti ho........😆

(suddenly samrat arrives)

s: are waah kaafi accha dance kar lete ho tum donno.......😃

n: haan,,,,,,, mayank ka to pata nahi mein to kaafi accha dance karti hoon,,,,,,,😊

s: tabhi to tum MAYANK ka wait kar rahi thi ki wo kabb tumse dance ke liye pooche,,😉

m: tum mera wait kar rahi thi....😲

n: wo mere pass koi parner nahi tha to...😕

s: nupur,,,, tum bhool rahi ho eh tumhaari party hai tum kisi ke saath bhi dance kar sakti thi...

n: (she feels lyk her theft is being caught)

mayank to change the topic says: wese tum logo ko nahi lagta ki thoda late ho raha hai hume party khatam karnee chahiye kaafi log to jaa chuke hai.....

[the party got over after half an hour to this statement,,,,,,,,,,,, every body was gone......]

s: bye dood...... kal milte hai college mein......

g: nupur... mujhe nahi lagta maa mehmaano ko akeli handle kar paayegi wese bh i party to khatam ho chuki hai to mein chalti hoo.....

n: thik hai,,, koi baat nahi.. tu jaa .......

now only ,mayank and nupur are left.......

mayank: ok... mein bhi chalta hoo.......

nupur: haan...... bye.....

(nupur mayank ko chodne baahar tak aati hai...)

it starts raining.....

thats it guys,,,, i know its a short update but no tym now...... hope you will lyk it...... and surely some mayank nupur moments will be ther in next update...... plz comment,,,,,,,, i m also ready for negative results.........

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hii..cool update.... 👏
pls pm wen u update

hey awesome yaar......kitna short and precise tha.....loved it......

part - 5

it starts raining so heavily that mayank and nupur hav to cum back to the house,,,,, mayank asks npur if she cud lend him her umbrella and she replies by saying that umbrella wont work in such a heavy rain on bike... and she wont mind him staying at her house for a few hrs...... to pass the tym mayank starts looking at some of nupur's childhood snaps.....

mayank: nupur..... in sabhi photos mein tum akeli ho.... tumhaare ghar mein aur koi nahi hai kya.... tumhaare dad ke baare mein to pata hai par tumhaari mom....

nupur: wo actually...

(mayank notices that nupur is not comfotable in sharing her personal lyf with him)

m: i wont mind if you dont wanna tell..........

n: no no its not that..... you are my best frnd now... its lyk i dont want to talk abt my mother........

m: okk..... heyy.. whos dis?? (pointing to one of the snaps)

n: its my younger bro.....

m: bhai? you never talked abt him...

n: ya..... he lives in dubai with mum.......

m: but why dont you also live with them???

n: they dont lyk staying with me.....

m: what???

(nupur starts crying😭)

seeing his mayank is a little confused but consoles her..........

m: lets leave this topic........

n: no lets dont leave this topic......... today want to talk abt this....... yes today...... its 12.15 am now....... todays my b'day.....(she says crying)

m: todays yur b'day??? happy b'day....... then why are you crying..... its yur day today.....

n: no..... its not mine...... no body wishes me except gunjan,,,,, and today you.....

m: hello..... if you wont tell people yur birthdate how can they wish you????? (mayank says in a rude way)

n: i only share my b'day with special people......

(mayank was shocked and happy... shocked bcoz the girl who is mad for parties dont give party her b'day!!!!!!!!!!! and he is glad to know that he is special for her...)

m: heyy... dont cry.... it hardly matters if yur relatives are not able to wish you........

n: its not that...... its they dont want to wish me..... they dont lyk even to talk to me.....

m: you cant say that ....... the lady (pointing to the snap) is yur mother and a mother.......... (mayank stops wen he sees nupur crying more bitterly.. mayank is confused wat to say??)

m: luk nupur is nothing to cry abt...(nupur cuts him)

n: she is not my mother........ she's my step mother...... no body knows this .......... my mother died just aftr my birth...... my father married again just after 2 months and divorced this lady after 2 years......... then he died in an acccident wen i was five...... this lady had to bring me up unwillingly.......... she never had to give me financial help coz my father left more than enough for me....... and now due to court's decision she has to lend me an amount of money per month............... i hav not seen her from last 5 years............... i m alone........ (she cried lyk anything....... and hugged mayank............ mayank also became a litttle emotional coz he neer thot that nupur is suffering this much... she is rich of course but money is not every thing..... he gave her a hug back)

they hugged........ nupur was lost but mayank had senses ......... he felt weird...... but this was the tym for a frnd to console the other........

m: nupur.. abb.......

(it was enough for nupur to cum back to senses....)

n: haan...... tum betho mein tumhaare liye coffee laai hoo..........

nupur looses her balance and is going to fall bu mayank handles her.... in his arms....... there is an eyelock...... this tym mayank is lost......... than after some tym they handle themselves and nupur goes to the kitchen and bring coffee............. they sit n the couch placed in the living room.......

m: nupur..... i m sorry.....

n: sorry...... kyu??

m: mene tumhaara b'day bigaad diya.........

n: nahi aisee koi baat nahi hai.................. tum mere liye special the to mene tumhe bataa diya..... ab yeh baat sirf tumhe aur gunjan ko pata hai..........

m: par.......

n: nahi mayank..... i trust you so i shared my problems with you.........

(then they talk for sometym........ and wen the rain stops myank leaves............. while going to his home mayank feels very happy.... that nupur trusts him and he is special for her....... on the other hand npur is confused why he shared every thing with mayank?????)

heyya guys............... thanx for all yur comments......... i m sorry bcoz my next update wud be a little late...... it might take a few weeks........ i hope u will understand.... bcoz there is a huge load of studies......... and i will wait for the comments........

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