mayur the loving birds..; prt 23 pg 53 last part

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part 19-

it was so awesome

teasing was best

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part 20-

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Mahima

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part 21-

omg... i was blushing like anything

this update was so cute

lenghga sharma jayega was amazing

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Mahima

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part 22-

no words yaar

it was amazing

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

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part 23-

finally finished reading

the ff was totally amazing

i loved it a lot

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get_jasneet

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Posted: 15 years ago

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lud it luvd it luvd it............. awesum ya!!! don hav wrds 2 describe it.......... 1st ff wid least problems n dt 2 shrt tym k liye........... d bst update was ur lst prt wen arti says "baalon ko mat chuo maa" n "by God ma aap ye kitni baar bolti ho"... 😍 😳 indeed d bst ff i've read till date.............. luvd it luvd it luvd it!!! 👏 Arti was exactly d duplicate copy of mayur.......... awwwwwwww........... 😳

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get_jasneet

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Posted: 15 years ago

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i seriously LOVED d last part ya!!! jitni baar padhti hu utni baar hasi aur khushi hoti hai!!! i cannot stop myself from smiling on dese cute scenes!!!😊❤️

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Krushi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey Pari,
just finished reading ur ff
this ff ws just amazing
luved each and evry part
and last part by god...has has ke mere cheeks dukh rahe he
luved it to da core
do write more ffs
thxs for the pm 😊

Krushi