MJHT, Mayur Next week - FF - My Version

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Posted: 15 years ago
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POSTED THE SAME POSTING IN Fan Fictions. Sorry that I didn't know that this is not the right place to post the fictions.
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Please comment. Your feedback is very imp for me.
Jess
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Hi guys,

I just couldn't wait till Monday to see what is going to happen next in the show. I kept on thinking about Mayur and started visualizing my own version. Wanted to share with you all. So decided to write it down. Let me know how you like it. It's a Mayur Reunion, Sajan conferssion, chinki's wedding at Morena FF.

PART I
Continue from Friday's handpump scene.
Gunjan heard some sounds and went inside to see what's the problem. Mayank and Nupur looked at each other. Nupur was feeling awekward. She was happy inside that finally her Mayank came to her to appologize. But she was deeply hurt from the last fight they had. She just didn't want to talk to him. Mayank sensed her feelings. He tried to start the conversation. "Nupur, muze tumse baat karni hai." Suddenly Chinki enters there and say's "Maa ne aap dono ko andar bulaya hai."

Inside Gunjan meets Uday, Dia and Benji and tells them that Mayank is here and about their fight. She tells them about Bablu who was supposed to come to come see Nupur for shaadi, but how Bui misunderstood Mayank as Bablu and how Mayank is pretending to be Bablu now. She requests them not to reveal Mayank's secret to Bui as that will ruin Mayank's plan to woo Nupur back. Uday, Dia and Benji all agree to that. Uday is so happy that Mayank is here too. "Aakhir Mayank mere bahen se bahot pyar karta hai." Gunjan then takes all three of them to their rooms. "Thodi der me fresh hoke neeche aa jao. Bui ko hum sabse bahot baatein karni hai."

Mayank and Nupur comes inside with Chinki. Bui looks at them and thinks that these two are feeling awkward here in front of everyone, they should get some private time to talk to each other. She calls Gunjan and says, "Beti tum en dono ko thoda baaher leke jao. Bablu ko apna gaon to dikhao." And she winks at Gunjan to take them outside so they can talk privately.

Nupur hesitates, "Bui, muze kahi nahi jana hai. Mai yahi thik hu."
Bui - "Nupur, jid mat karo. Sheher me ja kar tum bahot ulte jawab dene lagi ho. Meri baat suno aur chupchap Bablu ko apna gaon dikha ke aao."

Nupur, Mayank and Gunjan steps outside. They walk towards the lush green sarso ke khet. All three are still quiet. Mayank and Nupur keeps looking at each other chori chhupe. Gunjan is feeling like kabab me haddi. Itane mein Gunjan ko Samrat ki guitar ki jani pehechani tune sunayi deti hai. Gunjan awaaj ki taraf dekhati hai. Lekin use koi dikhayi nahi deta.
Gunjan - "Di, aap dono baatein karo, mai abhi aati hu." And Gunjan leaves them two alone and starts running towards the guitar music.

Mayank turns towards Nupur.
Mayank - "Nupur, muze pata hai maine bahot badi galati ki hai. Isiliye mai tumse mafi maangne Morena chala aaya. Muze tum pe trust karna chahiye tha. Lekin tum.."
Nupur suddenly cuts his sentence. "Ab yeh sab baato ka koi matlab nahi hai. Galati meri hi hai jo mai tum jaise ladke se pyar kar baithi. Tum pe bharosa karne lagi. Tumhare saath jindagi bitane ke sapne dekhane lagi. Muze samazna chahiye tha ki jo ladka apne pyaar ko logonke samne laane se darta hai, voh pyar ke vaade kya nibhayega? Jo ladka mere saath shaadi ke sapne dekhane se darta hai, voh pyar ke rishte ko kya samzega?"

Nupur's eyes are teary, Mayank is deeply hurt to hear those words from Nupur. He still tries to calm down Nupur. He tries to hold her shoulders, she removes his hands with anger.
Nupur - "Muze tumhare jhoote dikhave ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Muze akela chhod do. Aur please yaha se chale jaon. Tumhare aur mere rastein alagh hai aur yeh muze pehele hi samaz jana chahiye tha. Tum muze kabhi samaz hi nahi paoge. Aur maine tumhe apne sapno ka rajkumar samaz liya? Mere sapano ka rajkumar aaisa ho hi nahi sakta."

And Nupur starts crying. Mayank tried to come close to her, she turns him away and starts running towards home.

Nupur runs upstairs in her room. Bui doesn't understand why Nupur went upstairs without saying anything. Bui sees Mayank and says -"Arre beta, Nupur sharma gayi hogi. Tum baith jayo. Abhi bulakar lati hu usse. Chinki, Gunjan, sabke liye khana to lagao, raat hone ko aayi hai. Kal jaldi uthana hai. Do din rehe gaye hai bas. Chinki ki shaadi ke liye."

Everone gathers at the dining table for dinner.
Bui-"Beta Nupur, Bablu ko jara palak paneer to khilao. Hamari Nupur ne apne haaton se banaya hai. Waise to isse khana banana bilkul achha nahi lagta. Lekin jab banati hai, to itna achha khana banati hai ki dil khush ho jata hai."
Nupur serves palak paneer to Mayank. Mayank remembers the dinner at his house and the fight. He feels sad. He looks at Nupur. She is sitting at the other end of the table. He stares at her and eats palak paneer.

Dia, Benji and Uday try to make the conversation and keep cracking some jokes. Dinner is over and so is the day. Mayank goes in the guest bedroom. He lies down, keeps thinking about Nupur, couldn't sleep. Keeps changing sides thinking what to say to Nupur.

Brand new day. It's chinki's sangeet today.
Bui makes Chai and nashta for everyone.
Bui - "Nupur beta, tum sab log ghumne chale jayo bazaar me. Kuch apne liye shopping bhi kar lena. Aaj Chinki ka sangeet hai. Tum sab log acche se tayyar ho jana."

All the gang and Bablu aka Mayank goes out to bazaar for shopping. Dia wants to buy something indian to wear for the evening. She asks Uday and Benji to help her. Gunjan is with Nupur and Mayank. Nupur sees a small shop of bangles. Her eyes catch the colorful bangles and she couldn't resist the urge to see the bangles. Mayank keeps on watching her from the corner. Gunjan hears the same guitar tune again and starts searching for Samrat. Mayank approches Nupur and pulls her towards himself. Nupur gets surprised with his move and feels awkward. Snaps out of his hands and walks away.
Mayank tries to talk to her, but all his efforts are in vain. Nupur doesn't give a damn.

Gunjan finds Samrat and they confess their love. Samrat comes to the house and tells Bui that he is Dia's best friend.

Everyone comes home. Girls get ready in all indian beautiful outfits for Chinki's sanjeet. Nupur and Gunjan are looking adorable. Mayank is wearing kurta pajama. Nupur sees him. Mayank's heart goes hmmmm hmmm when he sees Nupur. Both look at each other and remember Diwali night at Mayank's house.

Suddenly, there is someone at the door.

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Let me know how you liked my version of MJHT so far. I'll post part II sometime later.
Jess
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Posted: 15 years ago
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All FF's in the FF section.

FF's are not allowed in MJHT forum anymore 😃

But nice start!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Naima1994_

All FF's in the FF section.

FF's are not allowed in MJHT forum anymore 😃

But nice start!

ok, so do I need to re-post it somewhere else? I'm new to IF, your help will be appreciated.
thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aww Jess!!
Lovely Start dear!
Its just so real..loved it completely!! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing start...plzz pm me when u continue...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its nice jess....continue soon...n add me 2 ur pm list!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing start dear....pls do add me to ur pm list...and continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fan-Fictions to be posted in FF Section.

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