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sistu

@sistu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

Hey everyone😊

After watching yesterday's episode, I came up for a few lines for PriDa

Hum aaye the jaal beechane ke liye

Kab aapke liye sapne sajaane lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapko rulaane ke liye

Kab aapke aasuon pe khud rone lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapko khushiyon se door karne ke liye

Kab aapke saath muskuraane lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapki aakon ke neend udane ke liye

Kab aapki aakhon mein khone lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the kaali ghata ban ke

Kab aapki kaalin julfon mein ghum hogaye pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapke hosh udane ke liye

Kab hum madhosh hone lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapko chot pahucahane ke liye

Kab aapke marham ban gaye pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapko sharminda karne ke liye

kab khud sharmane lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the yeh soch ke aap humare kusurwaar hain

Kab khud aapke ghunegaar ban gaye pata nahi

Hum aaye the apko akela karne ke liye

Kab aapke humsafar ban gaye pata nahi

PS: When it comes to writting, I am not as good as most of you guys are on this forum😕 . So I m really sorry if I dont make any sense. Plz do comment and feel free to add😊

Updated in light blue😊

Edited by sistu - 15 years ago

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Sonikins

@Sonikins

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

love it 👏

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Nikita

@nikita_88

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

This is really good Sistu, stop saying it is bad, it is amazing!

It so romantic, I want a love letter like that lol, it so sweet and honest, it is amazing I shall be reading that again!

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sistu

@sistu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

@pridafan: thank you! By the way shud i call pridafan or soni?

@nikita: loveletter😊. Thats so sweet of you.

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fibrinogen9

@fibrinogen9

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

its really good...sistu... keep it up...👏

n plz keep writing more n more for prida😉

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sistu

@sistu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

@fibrinogen: Thank you and i will surely try my best to write more for Prida.

@ashi: glad u liked it.

Edited by sistu - 15 years ago

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Nikita

@nikita_88

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

@sistu LOL it is so well wriiten i didn't know what else to say.

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Confuzed Amby

@AmbyCious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

rly true!!great post...can u add me as a friends

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sistu

@sistu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

@savni-love: tnx dear and sure why not. By the way what do i call u?

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dee86

@dee86

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#10

Sistu, this was GOLD!!! And so apt for the situation! Love this... Please please please write more!

Originally posted by: sistu

Hum aaye the yeh soch ke aap humare kusurwaar hain

Kab khud aapke ghunegaar ban gaye pata nahi

Hum aaye the apko akela karne ke liye

Kab aapke humsafar ban gaye pata nahi

These lines were especially brilliant! They are my favs...

PS: When it comes to writting, I am not as good as most of you guys are on this forum😕 . So I m really sorry if I dont make any sense. Plz do comment and feel free to add😊

You call this not good? I agree... It wasn't just good, it was BRILLIANT!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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