Hum Aap-updated - Page 3

Sistu .. This was TERRIFIC .. wait .. BEYOND TERRIFIC!! This is OUTSTANDING! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Loooved every bit of it ... Wowwww!

@kheerni: tnx

@hapinezz: tnx dear

Wow, Sistu! That was beautiful, really beautiful..LOVED reading it..And it suits the situation so well..

And stop saying you're not as good as others, you're excellent..⭐️ Would love to read more of your poems..

it was so awesome......u have some skill. great work

@sarah: i m so happy that you liked it. Its a pleasure to recieve compliments frm u coz u r such an excellent writter.

Originally posted by: HAOOY

👏👏👏👏👏👏Superb...!!👏👏👏👏👏

Thanks so much for reading and replying.

Originally posted by: sistu

Hey everyone😊

After watching yesterday's episode, I came up for a few lines for PriDa

Hum aaye the jaal beechane ke liye

Kab aapke liye sapne sajaane lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapko rulaane ke liye

Kab aapke aasuon pe khud rone lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapko khushiyon se door karne ke liye

Kab aapke saath muskuraane lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapki aakon ke neend udane ke liye

Kab aapki aakhon mein khone lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the kaali ghata ban ke

Kab aapki kaalin julfon mein ghum hogaye pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapke hosh udane ke liye

Kab hum madhosh hone lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapko chot pahucahane ke liye

Kab aapke marham ban gaye pata nahi

Hum aaye the aapko sharminda karne ke liye

kab khud sharmane lage pata nahi

Hum aaye the yeh soch ke aap humare kusurwaar hain

Kab khud aapke ghunegaar ban gaye pata nahi

Hum aaye the apko akela karne ke liye

Kab aapke humsafar ban gaye pata nahi

PS: When it comes to writting, I am not as good as most of you guys are on this forum😕 . So I m really sorry if I dont make any sense. Plz do comment and feel free to add😊

Updated in light blue😊

Sistu: This is EXCELLENT piece of writing, my favorite ones were the one in green...especially the kasurwar and gunehgaar beautifully sums it up...👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Shwetha!

Sistu: This is EXCELLENT piece of writing, my favorite ones were the one in green...especially the kasurwar and gunehgaar beautifully sums it up...👏👏👏👏👏

And will hit u with a danda if u ever say u are not good, u are very very good⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

sistu your hindi is really really good......😃