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fahi91 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ivy, fantastic!!!! šŸ‘
loved the chages u made!!! so funny, i was on the floor!!! 🤣
good job u ā­ļø
my fave part:

~Later that week~

Bam
Abhi: Whoa...*grabs Niki on reflex and freezes*
Niki: *gasps before freezing as well*...



Abhi: *whispers softly* U alright....
Niki: *just as softly* yeah....
*Slowly reluctantly the two pull apart and let go of each other*


Armaan: *mouth drops open* Whoa...what do u know...the girls were right...they do look good together...


******

~The Next day~


Niki: What's gotten into u Armaan. U've been sitting here grinning to urself for the past fifteen minutes!
Armaan: Oh nothing'*smirks and thinks to himself* I've found u the perfect rishta, Niki' and this time I won't let him escape like those other guys did or let u scare him away...I'll make him fall for u and get him to sign the contract and viola I'll have u taken care of before the poor sap ever realizes how crazy u are'or give u a chance to get rid of him'don't worry this guy is ur perfect match'

Niki: *thinks to herself* Why is he smirking??? And why am I getting a bad feeling over his "oh nothing."

really, really love it!! 😃
plzzz continue soon!! 😃
Edited by pagli91 - 15 years ago
fahi91 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
ohh priiii šŸ¤—

catch up on ur sleep, u'll write better with a fresh mind. 😊

cnt w8 2 see wt u gt in store 4 us! 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Guys, Please Help me. Please give me the link to Ivy's caption story..
Ivy9 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks everyone! I'm glad ur enjoying my crazy captions story...
@Mich-its on pg 96!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Ivy,
I enjoyed your caption story.....
Loved the Devil Reincarnated Dr. Modi extracting payback from Nikki 😃 Armaan willing to hand over his "Abhi" to Nikki šŸ˜‰ saying he is the one he has been looking out for šŸ˜†šŸ˜† and Operation Secure Modi for Nikki 🤣🤣
Looking forward to continuation...Its fantastic
Edited by mich09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
woww Ivy dear awesome cap, loved the dance one ^^
keep it up ^^
Ivy9 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Mich-I enjoyed coming up with the Secure Modi for Niki part too! And the payback dance was one of my favorites as well!

@Fahi+Honey-The running into each other and having Armaan see was one of my favorite parts too!!!!

@ everyone- Thanks guys!! This is actually a lot of fun...I have the basic idea of where this is going and have found a ton of caps for the scene so now I just need to find the time to write it out....hopefully the rest of it will turn out as well as this beginning part did....next part up will be the staff of Sanjeevani stalking Abhi: trying to find out his habits, convince him Niki is the girl for him, and creating general mayhem in his life while trying to push AN together....

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow guys..seriously i started yesterday and i couldn't stop my self to not read...and i have to say u all have writen awesome scenes and ff parts..i loved all of them..u guys are very good at this....
fahi - thanks alot dear for pming me the link..and i readed ure scenes, i have read all 5 scenes...hehe they were very long...but as long as they are on abhi niki..love to read them..
keep it up guys and do write more beautiful scenes on an..
and sorry guys..if i had more time i would love to give my feedback to eachone....
PS: i have some parts/ scenes to read..
Edited by KasuPremeer - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
HEY GUYS I'M NEW TO THIS FORUM AND JUST LIKE YOU PEOPLE CRAZY FOR AN.LET ME TELL YOU ALL OF YOU ARE WONDERFUL WRITERS ESPECIALLY MICH AND HONEY ARE GREAT GUYS
THEIR SCENES ARE JUST MINDBLOWING.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Attention plzzzzzzz, new scene by Ratika is on the board.....šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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For all Jiah haters, this is specially for them...šŸ˜†

Ok this is random situation and Dr. Muskaan is back.

"Dr. Muskaan, good to see you back. I hope you are fine and ready to get back on your duty from today." Abhi in calm and happy mood ask Muskaan. But Muskaan looking little depress as she know nothing is same in SANJEEVNI as it was.

"Yes Dr. Modi" replied Muskaan giving him smile that was not by heart.
" What happen Dr. Muskaan..??" Abhi asked seeing a sad smile on her face,
" Dr. Abhimanyu..a...a...you and Nikki.." muskaan suddenly stops as the door of the cabin opens, a lady entered and goes to abhi and BANGGG!!!..
She hits abhi on his forehead with a little solid thing in her hand, MUSKAAN was stunned and shocked to see what just happened in front of her, she stared Abhi who was bleeding heavy with her little mouth open.

" JIAAHHHH..!!!" Abhi with pain in his voice speaks, keeping his hand on his forehead trying to stop his bleeding
. "What are you doing..?' showing little anger in his voice and stopping her from hitting second time. he holds her hands tightly and take her out of the room. Jiah with her psycho and evil behaviour asking abhi " How dare you..??" Muskaan was not able to hear her properly as she was taken out of the room before she speaks anything.
Muskaan went out of the room reaching to the area where all doctors meet, looking back again and again to get a glimpse of Dr. Modi thinking if he is fine as he was hurt badly. '"This Jiah must have ruined their life, she could be such a psycho...But where is this Nikki..??' Buttering while reaching towards that area and finally jumped into Nikki who was looking in a file and with irritetion in her voice, Nikki speaks " Who the He..." suddenly stops and brings smile on face seeing Muskaan around her.

Muskaan also felt happy and they both hugged. Muskaan hurriedly telling Nikki about all she just went through in Abhi's cabin.." Nikki, Abhimanyu ko.." She stops as nikki interupts.." Dr. Abhimanyu, Muskaan".

' Haan..par uss Jiah ne" Muskaan want to tell her but Nikki was in no mood to hear anything about them stops her again.." Jiah..kya Muski..??" nikki takes a breath and continues " Look.. He is out of my life now, I don't know him and don't want to know anything about him."

Muskaan giving Nikki understanding look but she has to tell her what just happened.." What happen to you Nikki, why are you so rude towards him ..??"
' Muskaan, tum kuch nahi janti, tum abhi abhi aayi ho.." nikki wanting to avoid the talks and there Muskaan interupts her " main abhi abhi aayi hoon iska matlab ye nahi hai ke mujhe kuch nahi pata...main nahi par Atul toh yahan tha na, usne mujhe yahan aane se pehle sab kuch bataya tha...aur sach maano Nikki mujhe aisa lag raha hai ke tum sach se bhagna chahti ho..tumhe pata bhi nahi hai JIAH ek Psycho BITCH hai."

While speaking to Nikki, she just take a halfway turn and see Abhi rushing to some ward " Ohh GOD..!!! Dr. Abhimanyu." seeing Abhimanyu Muskaan rushes toward him to check whether he is fine or not and ask Nikita to join but she refuses without looking at Abhi's condition and continues with doing what she was doing.

Muskaan entered to a the ward, there a nurse inform her that Dr. Modi need to be under private obsevation as he does not want anyone to ask him question about what happened to him and how?
On otherhand Nikki getting worried and asking to herself
" Why did muskaan rush towards Dr. Modi?"

In private ward Muskaan taking care of Dr. Modi and he speaks with heavy breath " PLease don't tell it to anyone here."
"But Dr. Mo..." Abhi interupting her says "PLEASE..."
" Ok, but Dr. Modi, this is really bad, it's bleeding heavy.." Muskaan looking worried see Abhi who was fainting, his eyes were closing slowly slowly, looking at the window from where he could see Nikki standing outside. Nikki looked shocked and stunned the way Muskaan was.
Muskaan following Abhi looked outside the window and see Nikki standing there motionless, Muskaan calls her inside but she was so worried and shocked that she just couldn't move, Muskaan hold her hand and bring her inside.
Nikki stood by him and her tears were about to roll but then Jiah enters in the ward and ask Muskaan " How is he..?" Muskaan replied her in Bad tone "He needs rest, we will be taking care of him tonight"
Listening this Abhi slip on his bed and went to sleep. Nikki looked at Muskaan and Jiah talking.
Muskaan continues to Jiah "No ma'm, A doctor will be here for obsrvation, I cannot allow you to be here whole night, so you can go."
Looking at Abhi's condition Jiah replied to Muskaan" come out with me......U both!!!"

The three of them went out of the room, Jiah closed the door and pointing finger towards both of them, in bossy manner.." U know who I am..?? right..?? so just do what I tell you to do......DO whatever to him, medicines, injections or anything..GIVE HIM SO MUCH PAIN THAT HE WILL NEVER FORGET TO NEGLECT ME".

Nikki and Muskaan just could not believe what they heard from a wife for his man. When Jiah turned away and starting to move on her way, Muskaan told her what happened in Abhi's cabin, she advised Nikki to stay with Abhi. Nikki accepted and request Muskaan to take charge of her duties, Nikki explained everything about her duties to Muskaan and after getting everything Muskaan left Nikki with Abhi..

Nikki sits beside him while he was sleeping, looking at him, feeling guilty finally after such a long time she takes his hand into hers and with guilt in her voice said " SORRY..!!!".

after few minutes remembering Abhi's word about Jiah.." Jiah is very dangerous, being her in India is not Good" and then shifting her gaze towards his injury..
she gets up and stand in front of her window putting her both hands on the wall and speaks.." How can she do that..?? how..?". she just stand there alone looking outside the window seeing people moving here and there but her thoughts remain still.

After few minutes, she felt the old breath on her neck from the back, he comes closer and closer to her, resting his face on her shoulder, putting his both hands on hers to imprison her, a satisfied voice was heard " I LOVE YOU and no one else" after a pause both he continues " Please don't try to leave me because you can never will".
The tears roll down from both of their eyes, Abhi grabbed her tightly and Nikki kept her hands over his.
Nikki turns and then hugged him, while crying she said " I could never believe she can go to such extent".

" This is nothing for her, she hurted me badly before, that is why I told you to stay away from me infront of her, but you kept distance from my heart too.."
Abhi consoling her in his arms.

" Sorry...I am so sorry, u have no idea how hard this distance was for me, EVERYTIME it's just me who has to loose love for someone else"
Nikki still crying.

They stayed like this for few minutes, remembering their special moments spent with each other, in this situation they couldn't think of anything else but to smile on them now.

Nikki breaking the silence speaks.." Tumne kuch khaya nahi hai, main..main kuch laati hoon" Abhi in no mood to release her, she forced but couldn't escape and said " Tum abhi bhi kaafi strong type ho....ab chodo mujhe..kuch khaoge nahi to problem ho sakti hai.."
' toh hone do..kaam se kaam uss Jiah se toh dur rahonga" replied Abhi in sarcastic manner..

Nikki somehow released herself and ask Abhi to wait till she brings food for him. He just went on looking her till she was out of his view. Abhi wanted to go out, so he went upto the roof and while reaching there he asked a nurse to inform Nikki that he is waiting for her there.
The nurse find Nikki in canteen and informs her about Dr.Abhimanyu. She ask Nurse to take his food to the ward. She reached to the place and it was already raining slowly slowly and Nikki started feeling every drop falling on her...like this...( SORRY I COULDN'T FIND ANY OTHER IMAGE)


and Abhi just melt like an Ice looking her and thinking what beauty was away from him....
Nikki didn't realise he comes closer from back, holds her both hand and pulled her towards him....




Kissed her neck, Nikki left herself totally for Abhi, she wants to feel every bit of him now, Abhi got her feelings and turns her to start GAZEBO...



totally lost in each other, Dancing on the tune of nature, interchanging their breaths, caressing each other faces...LOST IN THE WORLD OF FANTACY..

Suddenly Nikki snaps out and realise that he need to take his food, she remove her hands from his neck and his from her waist, Abhi just looked unhappy.

She hold his hand take him back to the ward...ordering Abhi she said "sit down and have your food..It's already very late, you must have it now."
Abhi keep on looking at her while she is busy placing plate in front of him and serving him...she looked him and said " Aise maat dekho....SAARA ROMANCE AAJ hi kar loge.."
They both break into a smile..
" Chaloo, ab khana shuru karo..." Nikki sighs Abhi,

Abhi comes in fun mood. He hold her hand and ask her " Pehle kaunsi khaon..??"

" Kya..Matlab??" in confusion she ask him and he replied.." LADYFINGER....I mean.."
Nikki releases her hand and Pat on his forehead near his injury and he shouts " AAWWOooo.."
Nikki become nervous and hold his head in her hands, said " SOrrryyyyy...I am so sorry ...uff abhi tum bhi na jaan leke hi chodoge..."
" Kiski....tumhari ya apni..???" Abhi joyfully questions her. He started acting like baby and refuses to eat hiself....so Nikki started feeding him..šŸ˜†..when they ended, Abhi become a little serious and tells her his wish.." Nikki, kash mein aaj raat lambi kar pata.."

Nikki giving him understanding look and explains him.." Abhi yeh sirf ek bura sapna hai, haien sirf raat nahi puri zindagi chahiye.."
Abhi becoming low and thinking about Jiah says " kash yeh bura sapna hota...toh I wish main kabhi nahi sota....pehle raatien bhi thi aur din bhi, PYAR nahi tha, ab PYAR hai toh..."😭

Nikki hold his hands and ask him to come out with her. They both again went upto the roof. No rain this time but the wind was blowwing...abhi become happy and says.." Aaj raat bhi jaanti hai usko kitna khubsurat hona hai..."
He looked towards niki and NIkki towrds him..they went onto each other's, this time they blew away with wind.. Abhi brings Nikki's hand and kissed it..then her elbow...then her shoulder..then her neck....this time their romance was pure like the music of nature, he reached her face, remove the strand of hair, Kissed her eyes...then Nose..reaching her lips, nikki got nervous and turned and nervously said ' BAS..HH"..
Nikki rushed towards the door but Abhi stops her, holding his grip over her waist, bends down a little over her and kissed along her chest.......keep reaching on her face and Nikki just melted in him..
as he reach her face, they both looked at each other and separated..abhi looses his grip on her and Nikki just stepped back, She was so nervous and so shy that she just couldn't face his gaze and ask him to get down and take rest..😳
TO BE CONTINUED.....

Edited by ratika89 - 15 years ago

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