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Posted: 19 years ago
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i'm happy that u r continuing it.khusum team shud've followed this story after kshitij's death
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
Are you a more garv fan or garv kumud fan....sounds stupid question but i wud like to know???
Also who do you think is more hot CHETAN OR SALMAN?😉



well i am more of a garv fan but i love kumud too. Both are equally hot, but CHetan is younger so he is hotter. but Salman is the hottest in Bollywood along with Abhishek.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 I'm glad Garv will not fall for Kumud so easily.I want her to suffer.
That's why in my FF I make Kumud suffer.😛


I don't want Kumud to suffer, just want her to realize her mistake.


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: candyfloss

Okay.
I find Imran Hashmi very hot and sexy.


oh my god how could i leave out hrithik he is another hottie. i don't really find emraan hot, i mean he is ok.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Garv and Kumud reunite part 5

Kumud reaches home and decides to explores Garv's room
. kumud enters his room for the first time and sees
pictures of Kumud on his night table, I mean photo
frames. Kumud is tear eyed and goes to his closet, it
is all organized but she doesn't find anything that is
worth her attention, you know just clothes and files.
But later on she opens his drawer and finds poems,
letters and pictures of garv and kumud as a couple.
The poems are tere naam songs and the letters are the
ones that he wished he wanted to send to Kumud when
they were going through the tough times of their
relationship. Kumud reads em, and is happy but at the
same time upset coz she hurt the one person who loves
her like anything.

The phone rings and she puts everything back in its
place but by the time she reaches the phone it stops.
The phone rings again. Kumud lifts the phone.

Garv is on the line.
G: Hey kumud!
K: Hi(blushing)
G: Kaisi ho? I mean bore ho rahi ho na?
K: Naa, mein toh bas
G: Kumud, I am sorry.
K: Sorry kisliye.
G: umm mein tumse iss tarah se jhagad tah hoon, I am
keep on fighting with u, I am sorry.
K: Garv, its okay. I am sorry too, mein tumhe bahut
tang karti hoon, isliye tum ghussa ho jate ho.
G: Alright, (they both laugh). Umm toh kya kar rahi
ho?
K: Kuch nahin, I will just go and take a shower now.
Garv mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain?
G: kya baat hain.
K: Phone par nahin. Tum ghar kab aaoge?
G: Lunch time, I will be home during lunch time, hum
dono lunch ke liye jaate hain, ok? We'll talk then.
K: thik hain.
G: so I will see you then.
K: yea,
G: Bye.
K: bye, (she smiles)

They hang up, Kumud goes to take a shower.

Garv is wondering what is that Kumud wants to tell me.

Kumud gets all dressed up and is all excited and
nervous to tell him, that she still loves him.

After 4 hours

Garv is still wondering, Aaliyah comes into his cabin.


A: Hey Garv, I am leaving now I have go to meet Mr.
Jones regarding the case in an hour. But Tum itne
pareshaan kyun lag rahe ho? (worried)
G: I am not worried, I am just wondering kay what is
it that Kumud wants to tell me. I mean she can't tell
me on the phone.
A (Is wondering whether it might be the whole
confessing the love) ummm… garv, I think she is in
love with you. (thinks in an understatement)
G: KYAAAAAAAAAA! Yeh tumhe Kumud ne kaha?"
A: nahin, lekin uski aankhon mein tumhare liye pyar
totally nazar aata hain. Jaise tumhari aankhon mein
uske liye.
G: Aaliyah, come on, jab hum ek ho sakte thay, tab
usne kshitij se shaadi karli, ab woh mujhe kyun pyar
karegi?
A: what if she does.
G: If and is mein bahut farak hain!
A: Okay, who pyar karti hain tumse toh?
G: I don't know, I don't want to get my heart broken
again.
A: toh tum uska dil tod dogay? Kya tum Kumud, ka dil
tod dogay?
G: Aaliyah why talk about something that's not gonna
happen. Kumud doesn't love me, she never has. Okay I
have to go now I have take Kumud to lunch.
A: Garv, u r wrong, anyways ,ein chalti hoon. See ya
tonight. Hope we win the Jones case. Bye.
G: Yea, good luck! Bye.

Garv thinks…
Kya aaliyah sach keh rahi hain? I shouldn't jump to
any conclusions. I should learn from my mistakes. When
everything seemed right, when Kumud told me she loved
me, she married Kshitij. Koi majboori bhi nahi thi
uski, I mean she could have told kshitij that she
loved me, and he would have understood, but instead
she married him, and broke me apart. I won't fall for
it again. Aaliyah bhi naa.

He gets back to his work.

Kumud is sitting on the sofa, wondering how is she is
going to tell him. Suddenly the phone rings, yet
again.

Garv : Hi!
K: Hi.
G: Kumud are u ready, its like lunch time and mujhe
bahut bhook lagi hain. I am coming.
K: (she laughs) haan mein tayaaar hoon. Come home
fast!
G: open the door.
K: kya, tum aa bhi gaye.
G: tum ne pukara aur hum chale aaye, jaan hatheli par
le aaye. (he makes her laugh)
K: Garv tum bhi naa. ( she opens the door, they hang
up)

G: Okay, Ms. Kumud chale?
K: Chalo.
G: (holds her hand and takes her to the car. Kumud is
like wow, today is something special).
G: Kumud
K: Garv?
G: you can drive the wrangler.
K: Oh great! Thanks.
G: No problem. (he says something – I hope I am doing
the right thing)
K: Kya?
G: Kya?
K: Tumne Kuch kahan
G: Nahin toh.
K: garv, don't worry.
G: I am not.
K: Keys?
G: Oh haan, yeh lo.
K: Thanks.

Garv and Kumud sit in the wrangler, and are ready to
go to lunch. Kumud is driving.

G: So tum mujhe kuch kehne waali thi right.
K: Haan.
G: So, tell me.
K: later. Ab mujhe concentrate karne do.
G: Oh yea, do that. Zindagi aur maut ka sawaal hain,
especially when it comes to immature drivers like you,
karo concentrate, I won't disturb you.
K: Stop being mean. U just wait, mein tumhe safely
pahucha dungi.
G: Safely upar pahuchadogi tum!
K: (She hits him playfully). Enough haan Garv, tum
chalao phir, mein nahin chalane wali tumhari yeh
precious gaadi.

(She stops the car and is about to get out)
G: Oh I am sorry Kumud, I was just joking, tum mazaak
bhi nahin le sakti. Come on lets go, I will shut up.
K: Good boy.
G: Boy? Ok anyways, lets go, mujhe bhook laggi hain.
K: Ok baba, here we go.
G: Slow haan! Itni bhi bhook nahin laggi hain.

They both laugh.

The end.

Will Kumud tell Garv that she loves him?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
ahhhhhhhhhhh fab part jaan!
it was awesome!!!!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!
soooo cuteeeeeeeeee!
me sooo exicted to read da nxt part!

keep up the fab work as usual!

luv ya loadz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: calichick35

ahhhhhhhhhhh fab part jaan!
it was awesome!!!!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!
soooo cuteeeeeeeeee!
me sooo exicted to read da nxt part!

keep up the fab work as usual!

luv ya loadz




thanks jaan, i will try to keep up to ur expectations. lol
luv ya too
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Garv_Kumud_4eva




thanks jaan, i will try to keep up to ur expectations. lol
luv ya too

awwwwwwww sweetie i dont have any expectations! u just keep riting and i will keep reading!!!! and i will luv each and every part! cuz me luv ur fan fic!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
wow candy i can't believe this. i mean u are kinda hard to please, so i guess i am doing a good job. lol. thanks. yea, i will try and continue whenever possible. ummmm, even i don't have the ff saved on my pc. lol.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: candyfloss

Hard to please😕...i didn't understand...
Oh i guess you don't visit anyother forum besides kkusum and kahani😆
that's why you don't know me😉




i am an active member at kyunki, kahanni, kkusum, kaisa yeh pyaar hai and kkavyanjali (at times) hum paanch. well if u are in another forum besides these, well yea i guess then i don't know ya . umm regarding the hard to please part i meant, u don't like fan fictions that easily, i mean saving it on ur computer tells me that i have done a good job, coz usually u wouldn't do that, u know ok its hard for me explain.

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