Garv and Kumud - kkusum goes on 3/20 upda - Page 3

well,
i appreciate ur reading my fan fictions, and your honest opinions. thanks, i mean they encourage me to write better. as far as me adding kshitij in my fan fictions well, i do that, because i like kshitij, but not with kumud. I love Garv though. I am totally fida over him, everything about him is soooooo hot.
So yea, and plus my friends are kshitij fans too, so they tend to read my fanfictions too. This one that u like is basically, what would have happened if Chetan would have chosen to make a comeback on the show.
I love your fan fictions too. So yea, I was just saying, nothing personal.

Sam

Originally posted by: candyfloss

fanfiction???
I don't read any fafic besides jasmine,fakra,you and sugar cookies.
Did I say anything against your fanfic?😕
I give jasmine my honest reply becos she always ask me to criticise bad/good.
Also I'm writing garv-kumud fanfic cos she told me otherwise I wouldn't be writing.
Some crazy kshitij fans give me friendly pm to tell me my story sucks becos it bugs them to read garv-kumud romantic scenes and tell me to write abt their favorite actor.😆
How can i stay cool with them???
I can't lie or pretend.Your previous fanfic I didn't like the fact you added kshitij so I told you....I'm sorry if it hurt your feelings.
I don't have starplus so I'm active in Debate Mansion.Bollywood,hollywood forum;Indian idol,saregamapa,saath phere,kggk and avatar and signature shop.😳

Kumud continues to drive the wrangler, and they are almost there at the Indian restaurant. Garv is impressed by her driving. They finally reach the Indian Restaurant. Kumud parks the car. Lol. Am I getting into the details or what?

K: So Mr. Sachdev, Kaisi laggi meri driving?
G: Wow! I am alive.
K: Hahaha, very funny. (She is being sarcastic)
G: I am impressed Kumud, good job.
K: Thanks, Ab to tumhe mere driving par confidence hain naa?
G: Oh yes, ofcourse. U can be my driver from now on, as long as u are here.
K: Garv, tum kabhie serious hote ho.
G: Problem is that, ke kissi ne bhi mujhe seriously nahin liya hai ab tak.

(He is talking about the past, but I guess Kumud has got the indication, then Garv tries to change the topic. I hope u guys got what Garv is trying to say as well).

G: Umm, so chale.
K: Yea lets go.

Garv offers to escort her in. She holds Garv's hand. I mean its pretty normal for guys and gals doing that. It doesn't mean anything, atleast not to Garv. But Kumud thinks its something. Lol.

They find themselves a table and then the waiter comes along.

W: Hello, Mr. Sachdev.
G: Oh hi Jay! How u doing man. (they shake hands).
W: I am fine, sir. How are you?
G: Great, thanks.
W: So today, what can I get for you and ma'am. Drinks?
G: Well, Kumud tum kya logi, coke, pepsi..juice..?
K: Umm..coke.
G: Hmm, cool. Well one coke and I will have water.
W: Ok, I will be right back.
G: U know what Jay, hold up.
W: Ok sir.
G: Kumud, u know what we should get a lassi. Mango lassi, I am just craving for one.
K: Lassi? (Laughs).
G: Whats so funny, I have always loved lassi.
K: Fine, we will have lassi.
G: cool. I mean its fine if u wanna have coke.
K: No Garv, lassi sounds good.
G: Ok, then. Umm... Jay cancel the coke and get us two Mango lassis.
W: Alright, will be right up.
G: Thanks.

The waiter leaves, while Garv and Kumud decide the menu.

G: Nice place haan?
K: Yea, it so Indian. I like it.
G: yea. So tum kya logi?
K: Ummm.. (she can't decide)
G: I will have the combo of idli, dosa, and wada. Lol.
K: Well I will have the same.
G: Cool. That was fast.
K: Yea. (Kumud is like are we just gonna talk about food, and stuff. I don't know how am I gonna say to him, that I love him).
G: What are u thinking?
K: Kuch nahin, bas yuhin.
G: hmm..( The waiter comes with the lassis. And then takes the order of the udipi dishes. The waiter is surprised).

W: Sir, I am shocked.
G: Why?
W: U are eating vegetarian food. Never served u that before.
Garv starts laughing: Just go Jay.
W: I am kidding sir. I will bring your order right away.
G: Thanks.

Waiter leaves.

K: Toh Garv, aaj veg jyun?
G: Ummm.. woh isliye kyunki tum vegetarian ho, u know. And plus I don't eat non veg every day, 2-3 times a week max. Jay was just kidding, like he said.
K: Garv...
G: Kumud... what is it tell me. Tum subah se mujhe kuch kehna chahti thi.
K: Haan..Garv aaj mujhe Kiran ne mom kehke pukara.
G: Oh really she did.
K: And the principal called me Mrs. Garv Sachdev.
G: Ms. Jenkins? She is.. I am sorry Kumud mein Kiran ko kahunga ke woh tumhe mom na bulaye, I mean she is a kid. She doesn't know anything. U shouldn't take it personally.
K: Actually, Garv u don't understand. I like it when she calls me mom.
G: Achha. (he is like what to say)
K: Garv mein iss baat ko sachayi mein badal na chahti hoon.
G: Kya, I didn't get it.
K: Garv, mein yahan sirf tumhare liye aayi hoon. I want you back in my life.

Garv is shocked, he doesn't know what to say. What will he say?

wooooo omgggggggg! wat a part yaar! it was just omg so gud!!!!! i cant wait to read da nxt part!!! sooo exictedd!!!

Garv was like totally surprised. The food comes and Garv changes the topic. Kumud is like what the hell.

G: Lo Kumud, lets start. The food looks good.
K: Garv, tumne meri baat ka jawaab nahin diya.
G: I don't know what to say, Kumud. Just forget it. I am ..... (he looks at her like he doesn't care, about this anymore. Kumud needed an answer, she feels hurt).
K: Fine, I can't take this. I am leaving. (She gets up and leaves).

Garv who was eating, stops and is mad, he is irritated. He goes and pays the bill. So no one eats anything. Aww they are hungry.

Garv follows her, Kumud is sitting on a bench in a garden that was around that area. Garv sees her and goes and sits next to her.

G: Weather acha hain naa, (he smiles)(he looks at her, she is wiping her tears off).
K: Garv, tum mujhse pyaar nahin karte?
G: Karta hoon, bahut karta hoon, lekin...
K: Lekin kya Garv...?
G: Kumud, I started to fall in love with you, when we got married. Tumne mujhe iss baat ka ehsaas dilya ke mere zindagi mein agar meine kissise sacha pyar kiya hai toh woh tum ho.
Kumud keeps quite.
Garv holds Kumud's hands.

G: But lets face it kumud, tumne mujhe hamesha sirf ek dost maana hai. U never really loved me.
K: Garv, yeh sach nahin hai.
G: Kumud, its ok. U know for the past months that have been away from home. I have been thinking about my life. Kya hua, kaise hua? And I realized that I was the one at fault.
K: Garv, humare beech dooriyan isliye aayi kyunki kali ne..
G: nahin kumud, kali ko blame karne se kuch nahin hoga. The fact that Kali could break our relationship was proof enough that we didn't trust each other. I didn't even trust myself.
K: Garv we are meant to be.
G: Toh phir tumne kshitij se shaadi kyun ki? Kyun mujhe akela chod diya. Kumud, if your love for me was strong enough then u would have come to me. You could have forgiven me. But instead you... broke me into pieces Kumud.
K: Garv, I am sorry....
G: Kumud, right now I just want u to know that I forgive you, I don't have any grudges against you. You are, were and will always be someone who holds a special place in my heart.
K: Garv... humme apne aap ko ek mauka dena chahiye.
G: sure, we will. But before that, just let me know the answer to this question.
K: Kya.
G: Agar aaj Kshitij zinda hota toh kya tum yahan aati. Would you have said these same words that you did? The answer will let us both know whether we are meant to be or not.

Kumud is shocked, she starts crying. Garv feels bad. He wipes her tears off.

K: Garv, destiny wants us to be together that is why he got me here.
G: Kumud, destiny has just united a friend with another friend. I don't know what the future holds for us. But for now, I am happy with the way life is going. Mein bahut khush hoon Kumud. I have learnt to deal with it.
K: Garv tumhe kya lagta hai, ke meine zindagi se samjhota nahin kiya. Garv, meine bhi mere pyar, zindagi, ko kissi aur ka hote huay dekha hai. Kali ne tumhe mujhse cheena, Garv I went through the same thing u did.
G: Exactly Kumud, and I don't want to hurt you anymore. My decency has always been my biggest enemy. Kali ko madad karne gaya toh khudki zindagi barbaad kardi. Tumhe kho diya meine. Now I don't want to lose whatever is left between the two of us.
K: Fine, u just want to be friends right?
G: Right.
K: thik hain. (she thinks in her mind, Garv, you and I will end up together. Its fate, and will be waiting for the day.)

Garv kisses her forehead. He gets up and so does Kumud.

G: I am still very hungry Kumud, tum bhi naa.. now I will have to pay the bill twice.
K: Garv, this time I will pay.
G: I was just kidding.
K: Pata hai.

They hug and act as if nothing happened. Will Kumud and Garv really end up together. Will Garv give in? Will kumud succeed. What does the future hold for them.

I know it's a hardcore Garv Kumud fan writing this fan fiction so its obvious that they will . but otherwise, what do u guys think.

Please post your comments.

Sam.

Preview: Garv is getting married, with whom? Don't know.

ahhhhhh sammy!!!!!
omg this part had to be like the best part! lol
u know i truly luved this part cuz of how u made garv act! mind-blowing yaar! lol
and then i think that bill part was 2 cuteee! lol
ahhhhhhh hes getting married? 2 much supense for me! lol

luv ya

Originally posted by: calichick35

ahhhhhh sammy!!!!!
omg this part had to be like the best part! lol
u know i truly luved this part cuz of how u made garv act! mind-blowing yaar! lol
and then i think that bill part was 2 cuteee! lol
ahhhhhhh hes getting married? 2 much supense for me! lol

luv ya

i know he is gonna get married, are u gonna be on the groom's side. lol. i know i can imagine him react that way. i liked this part the best too. lol. he told her. 😆😆😆

👏
wonderful and excllent parts

soon there will b a video mix kinda related to the fan fiction. so hang in there. lol.

the vid mix is up and i will update soon. 😉