'Its Your Love' :: AR Minni Fic Pt 3(A) :: Pg 37

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Hey guys hi m Deepa....n m here with my 4th fic.....well guys i knw i have gone crazy bt wat cn i do....hmmm so this fic as other's wld be on AR.....it wld be a minni fic nt decided hw many parts bt it wont be a very long one....i hope u guys like it.....

Its Your Love

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"Riddhima beta u seriously want to do it"
"Yes mom, after all i can't jst marry any random guy, whom i don't knw properly" Riddhima said packing her bags
"So beta for tht u can meet him y do u two want to stay together....."
"Mom meeting him for n hour or so wont do, n thn i have my internship n he has his
business so taking n hour also wld be tuff, bt if we stay together we cn manage to get
some time together everyday......it suits both of us....." she said as she sat down
besides Padma n held her hand.
"Mom i need to knw him we shld be compatible to spend our life's together, n we cn
only come knw tht by living together"
"But beta wat if" Padma asked as a worried mother, ofcourse she was worried abt her
daughter staying with a Stranger in a unknwn city....
"Mom u trust me na"
"yes beta but"
"So mom jst relax nothing will go wrong" Riddhima assured her worried Mother.....
"Ok fine bt u'll call me daily once in morning n once at night without fail got it"
"Ok mom as u say, but nw we need to rush or else i'll miss my flight" Riddhima said smiling n hugged her mom lovingly

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"Armaan seriously i yet can't belive tht u guys will be staying together" Rahul said in amazement...
"Wat's the big deal in tht, many guys n girls stay together b4 marriage..."
"Ya thy do, bt thy atlest knw each other thy r couples, u guys don't even knw each u have meet her only 3's if m nt wrong right"
"So wat we will be staying together to knw each other better, n if she doesn't have a problem y shld i, it was her idea after all"
"tht's wat amazes' me all the more tht it was her idea, i mean she is some girl to come up with such idea......u r so lucky dude, i sooo wish i had done this with Muskaan b4
ur wedding"
"Y u nt happy with her"
"No No m jst saying tht it wld have been sooo much fun staying together, hey u spoke to uncle n aunty"
"Ya we did n omg the way thy shouted i almst bcame deaf, u knw it took us complete 3 hours to make thm agree, bt m happy thy finally agreed, n nw if u are done cn we leave i need to catch a flight tonight"
"Ok lets go"
"by the way wen are u coming to London"
"In a week or so, Muskaan wants to stay here for few more days"
"Ohk" thy said as Armaan packed his bags n made his way down where his parents wer waiting for him.
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Part 1
"Mom please stop crying.....dad tell her na" Riddhima helplessly looked frm her mom to her dad.....since thy left for airport Padma had been crying continuously......
"Beta this is the first time tht u are going so far away frm us n tht too alone" Padma said
"Mom m a big girl nw i cn take care of myself, n i wont be alone ther" Riddhima said looking at Armaan, who was standing with his parents Raj n Naina Mallik n his best buddies Rahul n Muskaan.....
Armaan was trying very hard to control his laugh, n he was sure if he had to see this seen for 5 mre mins he wouldn't
be able to control himself......Naina nudged Armaan to go n talk to Padma
"Mom bt y"
"Armaan look she is worried for her daughter, n Riddhima is going to be staying with u so its ur duty to console her, n
please for gods sake stop giggling n go"
"Mom" he said wimping a bit bt seeing the strain look on her face he sighed n went to Padma....
"Aunty" he said softly bring her to notice him......n wen she looked up at him he held her hand n started....
"Aunty please don't cry, i assure u tht i will always be with Riddhima n take proper care of her, even if she forgot to call u bt i'll call u daily tht's m promise, please aunty don't cry see nw even ur daughter started crying" Armaan said looking at Riddhima who hd tears in her eyes......she had never thought tht Armaan wld do such a thing, bt nw she was mre thm happy seeing him bonding with her parents......
"awww Riddhi don't cry, c even m nt crying nymore" Padma said n hugged her daughter tightly.....when thy heard the boarding announcement being made for ther flight.....
"Mom dad i'll miss u" Riddhima said hugging both her parents....."we'll miss u too sweetie" Shashank said......
While Armaan too took his parents blessings n thn went n hugged his best frnd Rahul
"Take care of her Armaan she looks to nave n innocent n right nw she will need u, she's nt crying bt i cn see she going to have tuff time staying away frm her parents"
"Sure man.....u too take care of urself n Muski, n ya come soon ok" Armaan said hugging him n thn went towards
Riddhima....
"Riddhima shall we go the final announcement is being made" he said softly....
"ya sure lets go"
"Byee mom byeee dad" both of thm said ther finale byee's n moved towards the check in counter....
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"Passenger please fasten ur seat belts we are about to take off"
Hearing the announcement Riddhima tightly clutched Armaans hand n closed her eyes tightly......feeling her holding him he turned to look at her with close eye mummuring something......he smile as he realized tht she is scared of flights takeing off......n held her hand tightly.....which made her open her eyes n look at him......
"So u scared of flight" he asked with a sweet smile.
"ummmm nt exactly.....actually m scared of take off's n landing......" she saaid nervously.....
"don't worry u'll be fine" feeling the plane running fast on the run way.....she held him tighter n closed her eyes tightly again while praying softly....
As the plane was nw steady nw high up in the sky......Riddhima opened her eyes n slowly removed her hands frm his.....n saw him smiling at her n she returned his smile with a very sweet smile.....after some time snacks came n thy chatted a bit...
"Armaan wer r v going to stay, i mean house n all"
"hmmmm even i thought abt it.....well ihv thought of living in my apartment its empty since last 6 months so we cn like move ther if u don't have a problem, otherwise we cn find some new place"
"No no tht wld be fine, bt u live in London rit thn y is tht apartment empty"
"actually i hate staying alone so i used to stay with Rahul n Muskaan in ther apartment which is quiet near by......n wen evr mom dad used to come i used to move back, bt nw since u r ther i wont be alone...."
"hmmm ok" shortly after tht ther wer served dinner......
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It was along journey, thy slept mst of the time actually Armaan slept as Riddhima cldn't sleep in the flight........nw thy wer finally sitting in the cab moving towards Armaan's apartment.....
"Its a beautiful city" Riddhima said looking out side the glass.....when thy stopped in frnt of a tall building.....
"which floor is ur apartment"
"30th floor"
"what 30th....."
"ya"
He opened the door to the penthouse apartment n welcomed her in.......mayb the place was empty since last six months bt Armaan sed to come her every weekend to clean it up.....
"So we are home" he said as he placed ther luggage in the living room
"So this is the living area n the stairs"
"its beautiful Armaan"
"Come i'll show u around" he said holding her hand
"Ok so this is the kitchen"
"this is mom n dad's bedroom"
"come lets go up"
"So this is my room" he said opening the door to his room....
"beautiful room Armaan....u have nice color choice" she said smiling admiring the room
"thnx" he said n thought *our future room* he smiled at this thought
"ok so right in frnt of my room is ur room" he said as he opened the door to her room
"did u like it otherwise u cn use mom dad's room"
"no this room is very nice" she said smiling
"n nw i'll show u my fav place" He said as he lead her to the other corner......
The view amazed her, she never thought london cn look soooo beautiful
"U knw this place is the reason i brought his house, the first time i saw it i jst loved it" he said as thy settled on the couch
"Its a beautiful house Armaan" while he jst smiled at her n after some time thy went in ther rooms for a short nap as thy wer truly tried.....
In evening Riddhima came down wering her pajamas n a baby pink trank top, with her hair tried in a pony tail......she moved towards the kitchen n saw Armaan searching for somethin....
"Armaan" He turned as he heard her sweet voice.....
"U look very se....ummm cute" he said checking his words....
"thnx" she smiled
"ummm Riddhima i think we need to g shopping ther is no food item here at all, n wat ever is ther is mstly expired...."
"hmmmm so we can go 2moro even i need to buy some stuff"
"so i guess we need to call for dinner.....wat will u like to have"
"hmmmm pasta" she said
"ummm pasta"
"Ya y u don't like it"
"no no its jst tht"
"its ok Armaan we cn order something else.....u like pizza"
"Ya i loveeee Pizza, bt we'll even order for some pasta"
Armaan order for Pizza n pasta n some soft drinks n thn thy started arranging ther wardrobe......thy came down as the heard the bell ring.....
"hmmmmm this pizza looks yummmmyy" Armaan said looking at the family size pizza with extra cheese.......
"ya Armaan, its all ur u cn start eating" Riddhima said slightly giggling looking at Armaan staring at the pizza as if it was first time tht he was going to have it.....
"wat type of movies do u like, i mean hindi or english"
"i like both, bt m mre of a bollywood person.....i love those romance arnd the trees"
"hmmm so do u wanna watch a movie i have a nice collection of Hindi movie as dad n Rahul love thm so i keep it, m mre for english thrillers"
"hmmmm ok" thy went n saw his collection mostly having all of SRK's movies
"all SRK movies" she said holding the cd's finding a nice one to see....
"ya he's one Indian actor i truly like so..."
"hw abt this" She said holding the cd of DDLG...
"cool i love this movie" he arranged for drinks n some chips n sat down in the living room watching the mst romantic moive ever.....
"hmmm Riddhima wen is ur internship starting"
"hmmm in a week"
"ok thn i'll also join office wen ur internship starts, by tht time we cn do all the shopping n i'll show u around London"
"coool"
Thy sat ther eating chips n drinks sometimes smiling, while some times making sad face as Simran was taken to India for her forced wedding bt it turned to smile when Raj came to India to take her back.....
Armaan was deeply engrossed in the movie when he felt some weight on his shoulder he turned to look at Riddhima fast a sleep, holding his arm tigthly n snuggling closer to him.....he saw a strand on hair disturb her beauty sleep.....he smiled n put it back behind her ear to see her smile in her sleep....
He went back to watching the movie trying nt to move much or else he wld disturb her.....which he didn't wanted to as he was enjoying feeling her close to him.....
The ring of her cell phone distracted him.....the phone was kept besides Riddhima he bend a bit to pick it up.....bt his movement disturbed her n she slowly opened her eyes......to see him bend over her a bit.......
This was the first time thy wer soooo close.....She looked deep in her eyes n found her self lossing herself......the phone started ringing again bring thm out of ther trace.....Riddhima lowered her eyes n picked up the phone.....while Armaan again settled down besides her....
"hello mom"
"hello beta hw r u?? hw is London....did u have ur dinner"
"mom chill m fine n i jst had my dinner mom, don't worry soo much....m perfectly fine"
"i miss u beta"
"me 2 mom, hw's dad"
"he's fine"
thy chatted for another 5mins n thn she kept the phone.....she looked at Armaan's smiling face....she thn tried to move a bit away bt something stopped her.....she looked at her arm which was yet holding Armaan tightly......blushing she removed her arm
"hmmm i have a habit to holding something while sleeping" she said softly....
"tht's good....its a nice habit" he said in his ever soooo sexy voice, making her blush more as she got the real meaning behind his word...
"ummmm i think u r tried y don't u go n sleep.....as it is the movie is over" he said looking at the tv to see Raj n Simran hugging each other in the train....
"ya i think sooo.....i'll jst take all this inside"
"ok" he helped her put the dishes back n bidding goodnight thy retired to ther rooms with a smile.....
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Hey guys first of all thnk u all sooooo much for liking this story soooo much.....m really happy.....a big hug to u all 🤗🤗🤗......so here is the first part i hope u all like it....this wld be a smiple story filled with romance n masti.....do comment/criticize wat u feel abt it or press the Like button if u like it....😊
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Part 2
Next Morning:: Day 1
Starching her arms yawning she got up, opening her eyes while sitting on the bed with crossed legs, for the time being she wondered wer she was, thn realized tht she was no more in India n in London with Armaan....
"Armaan" she said softly while turning to look at the clock.....her eyes widened seeing the time it was 11:00 am "Omg it's late mom wld have called" she instantly tried searching for her cell bt cldn't find it anywer..... "Now wer did i kept it" she thought....scratching her head remembering wat all she did n wer all she went last night, as she realized tht she had kept it on the table in the TV room while thy wer watching the movie.....getting out of the bed she went down in the TV room, bt cldn't find it anywer...
*May be Armaan took it wen mom had call, I'll ask him* she thought while moving towards his room....she knocked bt got no response......she called out for him n knocked some more bt yet got no response.....she thn slightly turned the knob to find tht it was open slowly she went in, bt cldn't find him wen she heard some noise.....moving towards the noise she stopped at the door on the other side of his room....
*Ye kaun sa room hai, Armaan didn't show me this one last night, nw wat shld i do shld i go in or nt* she thought debating with herself weather she shld go in or nt..... *i think I'll go, i need to call mom b4 she starts freaking, bt wat if this is his personal room n tht's y he didn't show it to me, bt i need to call mom, nw wat shld i do* after some more debating she finally decided to knock
*Knock**Knock* bt got no response....she could hear music frm inside....music turned loud as she opened the door....she moved in to see the room filled with gym equipments....she moved further in to see Armaan working out, his back facing her.....Armaan saw Riddhima through the mirror.....he kept his dumbbells down.....n wiping his face with the towel he moved towards her smiling
"Hey u up, good morning" he said smiling sweetly
"God morning" she said softly....she nw had a perfect view of his well toned body as he stood in front of her in his shorts n vest....looking at his handsome face she got lost in his mesmerizing eyes, for moments thy stood starring at each other, nt able to look any more she lowered her eyes to his well toned chest n abs....realizing tht she is actually checking him out she turned her face a bit, stopping herself to check him out any more....while he waited for her to say something
"ummm sorry i came in like this"
"No no its ok actually i 4got to show u this room last night" he gestured her to come in.....
"So u like working out, i guess"
"say m addicted to it, my day starts with it, do u like gyming"
"never tried"
"ummm y don't u join me frm 2moro...u cn continue if u like it" he suggested
"hmmm ok" she said after thinking abit
She suddenly rem y she actually came her "Armaan my phone, i left it in the living room last night"
"oh ya wait a sec" he said as he moved back in his room, taking her phone frm the bed he gave it to her "actually wen i went down in morning i heard it ring, n thn u wer sleeping so i
answered it, i hope u didn't mind it"
"No no its ok, who's call was it"
"Aunty, i told tht u wld call her back, n u better call soon, she worries far too much"
"ya i knw, actually for the first time m living alone with a stranger so she's a bit scared"
"i cn understand, k u call n thn get ready thn we cn go for some shopping"
"ok" with tht she left his room, she called her mom n told her tht she was fine....n thn went for a shower, she closed her eyes as cold water hit her face, n instantly she saw Armaan standing ther in his shorts n vest.....she quickly opened her eyes, *well no doubt he looks extremely sexy* she thought with a smile....after getting dressed thy went out for shopping....
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It had been exactly 1 hour 25 mins since thy wer roaming in this super market.....
"Ummm Riddhima are we done, i mean how much more time will it take" he asked getting bored, Riddhima was tooo particular abt wat ever she brought, she wanted everything perfect, she would actually check all the veg's fruits, juice cans properly b4 taking it....
"Armaan we yet need to get some snacks n thn jam, soap's, shampoos, conditioner, cleaning detergent n other stuff.....ther's alot remaining" she said while checking a juice can.....while Armaan groaned inwardly.....he seriously hated all this shopping.....n thn he was very very hungry...
"Riddhima if u don't mind can we first go n eat something thn we can come back"
Riddhima looked at him, n got to knw how bored he was "Ya of course" she said sweetly.....thy went for lunch to a near by cafe.....Armaan literally atached the food as if he had nt eated since ages.....while Riddhima too realized how hungry she actually was....once thy finished the lunch thy again went back to complete ther shopping
"Armaan u can go back home"
"no no it's k m fine"
"No Armaan seriously i'll call u once m done, i knw u don't like shopping like this"
"No Riddhima its perfectly ok, come on lets go in" he said n moved in.....Riddhima smiled at his cuteness n went behind him....
This she would ask Armaan abt everything she brought so tht he doesn't get bored.....thy almst debated on everything thy got.....as if Riddhima liked strawberry jam thn Armaan wld prefer mix fruit....if Armaan liked something Riddhima wld like something else....so by the end of it thy had....every item in 2 varieties one of Armaan's n one of Riddhima's choice.....thy
finished shopping in abt 3 hours....
"Armaan how r we suppose to carry all of this" she said looking at the 6 big bags
"U don't worry i'll tell tony, the guy at the cash counter he'll deliver it"
"tht'll be good"
Thy came out tried....it was almost 8 in the evening wen thy finished
"finally done" Armaan said sighing
"ya...i hope u didn't get bore"
"no no, actually u knw i never shopped for all such things"
"thn who used to do u"
"Muskaan wld do it, or i wld simply call tony n he wld deliver"
"ok...so hw was ur first experience at a super market" she asked as thy walked back to the apartment....
"I must admit it was tiring bt at the same time it was fun too" he answered smiling his dimple smile....
Thy entered the apartment n Armaan literally threw himself on the sofa...."I must say shopping for vegetables is nt a easily job at all, the way u wer looking at each one, seriously u have some patience to do tht, i would have gone mad doing tht"
"Its bcoz my mom likes everything to be the best, specially in food everything shld be fresh n of good quality"
"U both truly love each other right??"
"Ya, so Armaan wat do u want for dinner"
"Riddhima its quite late already, so it think we shld go out some wer for dinner instead of cooking"
"hmmm ok cool with me, i'll jst change n come"
It had been almst n Hour nw n Armaan was waiting for Riddhima to come *God how long does it take to change its 9 already* he thought pacing frm one corner to other....after abt 15 mins wen he was abt to knock, her door opened in ther came n angel dressed in white.....
"Woow" was his first reaction, as he saw her standing in frnt of him in short white dress looking sexy n elegant at the same time
"Armaan can we go" she said shying by the way he was looking at her....
"Ya sure"
Thy went to one of the nicest itatlian resto.....
"Finally one thing in common" said Armaan "both of us like italian"
"I knw, i was thinking weather we wld match in anything at all....we are sooo deferent....we are opposites" she said as thy settled down
"hmmm opposites attrach don't thy" he said with a naughty grin....thy ordered ther food well thy had hardly anything in common abt wat thy liked...
"I guess i said tht very soon, we don't match in italian also"
"ur right"
"bt it's k a little adjustment n compromise makes a good relation right"
"right" soon ther food arrived n nw thy both enjoyed lovely italian cuisine.....thy tried wat the other one had ordered n thy actually liked each other's choice
"this is nice Riddhima i wonder y i didn't had this b4" he said tasting the pasta "mayb bcoz it look's weird in a way"
"food shld taste good nt look" she said at his cute adorable face as he starred at the pasta....
"hmmm i'll try to do tht" thy enjoyed ther dinner with a little chit chat....some times serious bt mst of the smile laughing....as thy talked abt everything n nothing....
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Day 2::
Riddhima again got up late.....she went down to see Armaan in the kitchen making coffee...
"Good morning" she said as she moved in the kitchen
"Good morning sleeping beauty....i wonder hw'll u'll manage wen ur internship starts"
"hmmm i'll manage....tht wld be different....."
"So wanna join me in gym" he asked taking a sip of his coffee
"hmmm ok, i'll be back in a while"
"ok bt please don't take long"
"ok ok i'll be back soon" she went up n after getting fresh she changed in her black track's n a pink trank top...
She entered the gym room, too see Armaan doing the warm up exercises......Armaan taught her some basic starches so tht she doesn't hurt her body....many a times his hands would touch her bare waist as she would lift up her hands while her held her so tht she didn't fall.....she wld tremble wen ever he wld touch bt wld try to not show it to him.....ther was nothing vulgar wen he wld touch it didn't make her feel uncomfortable at all.....n thn while he was doing weights she did cardio....she had been running for like 25 mins n was tired as hell....stopping the machine she went n sat down besides Armaan who was doing push up's
"m tired, hw do u do so much" she said drinking water
"its a habit nw, i enjoy wat i do" he said nw laying on his back while looking at her panting...."don't worry u'll soon get used to it, it wld increase ur stamina" he said "so u wanna try weights" he asked
"hmmm i think it's enough for today, i can't do anything more, i'll go n shower" Armaan smiled shaking his head as she moved out of the room...
By the time Armaan went down, Riddhima had already made breakfast n was waiting for him at the table....tht silently ate ther breakfast...when Armaan spoke
"so wats the plan for today, wat do u wanna do"
"hmmm anything, bt i need to go to the hospital to confirm my starting date n i have to submit some papers"
"do we'll go ther n dou like art, so we can visit a museum, n thn i wld take u too a small old market n thn 2moro if u get up early we can go to the amusement park"
"ok fine...i'll jst go and get ready"
"come fast" Riddhima quickly got ready...n thn thy left for the the day...first thy went to the
hospital n thn thy visited the museum...
"this one is beautiful" Riddhima said observing the painting....
"hmmm its beautiful" he said starring at her as she observed the painting
"n this one its amazing, hai na Armaan"
"amazing" he said as she described the painting n its depth to him....

"Armaan r u even listening" she turned to look at him starring at her....she bcame conscious as she felt her constant gaze on herself...
"Armaan" she said softly....bt got no response "Armaan" she said a bit loud, when he broke out of his trace..
"umm ya sorry wo actually...i was...umm nothing" he said embarrassed on being caught staring at her....after looking at some more painting thy headed to the small market....the small things she saw ther fascinated her a lot....she loved the small small jewelry....she shopped a lot, while Armaan jst enjoyed listening to her description n comments on the various things.....he enjoyed the way she spoke to the elder women at the counter.....he jst enjoyed being in her company......he was busy looking at her wen some on came running n hugged him tightly...while Riddhima jst stood ther starring at thm.....
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hey guys soo here goes the 2nd part....hmm its nt much bt jst the start...i hope u all like it.....do comment/criticize wat u feel abt it....silent reader please do press the like tab if u like it
A Question:: guys as u see this part was according to days so do u perfer it like tht???? i'll do wat u guys like....n is this pace fine or shld i go fast, i mean shld i descirbe everything or jst go in a fast forward mode???

N ya guys jst one more request don't jst reserve the post bt comment please guys thy really mean a lot 2 me...😊

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Hey, The beginning seems great, Something interesting, Nice, sounds like Dostana😆

Congrats on the 4th FF😲

Thanks for the PM

Love

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great intro.......
pm me wen u update

love
debadrita

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woah dear its really an awesome one mind blowingso cutesound interesting plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


Ridhima to Armaan
"I want some who will never leave my side,
I want someone who will say 'I love you' and mean it,
I want someone who will watch a Friday night movie with me,
I want someone who will put me in a happy mood,
when I'm in a bad one,

I want someone who will hold me when I'm scared,
I want someone who will give me there jacket when I'm cold,
I want...............you (Armaan)"



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"Sending you a JUMBO-SIZED
Congratulations dear
!

On ur new ff"



"To the one that in my life came
And in my heart so special she became.
Tomorrow things will not be the same
And life will stop being a game
For there is a future you have to aim,
A shining star you have to claim,
And a destiny to make with no one to blame,
With head always up and never feel any shame...
I'm so proud of you, much more then I can acclaim
From all my soul I wish you joy, success and fame."







Nidha


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hey nice start their parent are easy to persuade its cool though that they allowed their children to live together and understand each other...i cant wait for the upcoming parts they seem really fun...add me to ur pmlist an cont soon x
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hey Deepa
congo for your new ff
I loved the intro
it sounds interesting
thanx for the pm & plz continue soon
Rabia
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i luved it! new fic n new story line! lol! cont soon n plz dont 4get ur other FF dat im waiting 4! thnx!
❤️twinkle!

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8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Swasan and Shivika ff - Ishq wala love

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

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Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya and Raina ff - Love me like you do

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

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Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Raina,Ragsan and Vikresha ff - My love is only for u

Let's me introduced the Characters Ritik Raheja (Arjun Bijlani) : A very rich business tycoon and elder brother of Ranveer and Ragini Ranveer

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Posted by: jasminerahul

6 months ago

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love) Veer Zara SS

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love)Part 1 Thank you my dearest friend Sydell for the beautiful cover page. I dedicate this SS to mili_ai who...

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Posted by: MidnightLibrary

3 months ago

Punishment sequel to destiny of love ( Climax))

Hey there, readers , Just a quick note: I wanted to let you know that since the old module is now locked, I've created a new one for you. You...

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