MayUr one shot! Part 2 Pg 3!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guyz, zoah here! well, as all mayurians are gone mad with the excitment of SBS kiss segmnet and the precap, so here is the one shot for it! i know its really not good, but i tried my level best to write it! this was especially requested by Nikki (nikki028), so Nikki, here is the treat!
Note: the court case is finished and sajan has confessed!
Next day after court case, its college holiday:

Mayank rings Nupur at her house! as always uday picks the phone up!

Mayank: hello
uday: hello
(hearing uday's voice, he feels like punching the phone reciever)
Mayank: nupur hai?
Uday: are mayank, na hi na how r u? sidha nupur hai? (imitating him)
Mayank: (irritated) hi uday, how r u?
Uday: thats like a good boy! (nupur comes to him as she hears uday taking mayank's name when she was in kitchen)
Nupur: uday bhaiya plz phone dijiye na!
(hearing nupur voice on the other end of the phone, mayank sighs in relieve that he would not have to tolrate uday's bakwaas)
Uday: nahin nupur, mujhe mayank se baat karni hai? u know mujhe uski help chahiye!
Nupur: kya? (with shock) hmmmmmmm (thinks of an idea) uday bhaiya gunjan ne apke liye Cheese sandwich banayi hai, jaldi jayiye varna Dia kha legi! (sorry couldnt think of any good idea)

Uday runs towards the kitchen and Nupur places the reciever near her ear!

Mayank: ye uday bhi na, kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai ki.......... (realises what he says about uday in front of her sister Nupur Bhushan)
Nupur: kaisa lagta hai? (angry tone)
Mayank: kuch nahin, bahut accha lagta hai, he is soooooooooo sweet!( he says this making face)
Nupur: accha, natak bandh karo, ye batao phone kyun kiya?
Mayank: uday ne sabko sikhaya lekin apni khudi ki behen ko hi sikhana bhul gaya ki pehle hi, how r u bolte?
Nupur: accha, (teasing) hi, how r u? how do u do?
Mayank: nautaunki! accha suno, mujhe library me milo, kal ke project ki preparations karni hai! (he says in a serious tone)

Nupur: (annoying tone) mayank tumhe aur kuch bhi nahin aata kya?
Mayank: kya matlab?
Nupur: matlab ki, collge ki aaj holiday hai aur mujhe laga tum mujhe surprice date par lake jaoge, lekin nahin tumhe to apni books se holiday mile tab na, sadu kahin ke?
Mayank: accha to tumhe date par jana hai, hum library chalte hai na? the best date ever! (teasing her)
Nupur: MAYANK.......... plz mujhe nahin aana, tum jao! waise bhi aaj DDLJ aane wali hai TV par, i dont want to miss it!
Mayank: (getting irritated from her excuse) fine, don't come! im going, bye (saying this he slams the reciever over the phone!)
Nupur: mayank suno toh (the phone was already diconnected)

After a while, outside the town library:

Nupur is sitting on the bench outside library and waiting for mayank to come! finally after, 10 mins wait, he arrives, looking as dashing as always!
Nupur POV: so there he is! finally sadu fursat mil gayi aane ko liye, lekin BY GOD kitna handsome dikh raha hai, SRK bhi iske saamne to kuch bhi nahin hai! but why does he look so dull? shayad naraz hai?
Mayank POV: so finally use aana hi pada! lekin mayank (warns himself) tu usse baat nahin karega, aakhri use bhi to teri importance pata honi chahiye! so dude, try ingore her!
mayank walked passed her and enterd the library entrance without even giving a one looks nupur! Nupur was shocked to see this, but she followed him too! Mayank went and sat on the last corner seat where anyone hardly comes to read (lolz)! nupur goes and sits next to him! she turns to him but he was tooooooooooo busy into the book! she closed the book by purpose!
Mayank: Nupur kya kar rahi ho? ye library hai koi graden nahin hai?
Nupur: (she knows he angry with her) sorry, i know u r angry with me! sorry (touches her ears wit hands and makes a puppy face)
Mayank: (awwwwwwww, she is damn cute look) its ok! ab project ke liye preparations kare?
Nupur: mayank plzzzzzzzzzz!
Mayank: (raising her eye brows) nupur!
Nupur: theek hai! BY GOD mayank, kya koi chutti ke din bhi library aata hai?
Mayank: chup chaap, notes banao, mein kuch aur books lekar aata hoon!
mayank goes to the very last book shelves to get some more books, where nupur follows him! as she was walking she didnt see the book kept in the middle of the way and she trips over it but before she could fall on the floor, two strong arms cathes him him in his arms! its Mayank! they both share a eyelock for a few seconds, suddenly nupur realizes they they are in library!
Nupur: (breaking the eyelock) Mayank chodo mujhe!
Mayank/: u sure?
Nupur: haan baba, im sure! ab chodo!
Mayank leaves her and nupur falls on the floor!
hey guyz, this was the first part of my one shot!
will post the next and the last part tonight!
im really not good at romantic scenes, but tried my best to write this!
plzzzzzzzz do comment!
love Zoah
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome one shot yaar......please update soon.pm me😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oops i wantd to comment 1st........bt koi baat nahi main nahi meri bahut achi frnd hi sahi...my sweetu piyu...hehe....btw zoah.............thank u soooooooooooo soooooooooo soooooooooooooo much for dedicatin this OS to me............i'm soooooooooo soooooo happy n xcited to d core..........tum keh rahe ho its nt gud...chamaat marungi main tujhe,huh..........it ws xcellent.........rockin......i felt like real serial mein ho raha hai....sadu ke sadu mayu n naughty naughty nupsi....hehe....yaar tune ek dialogue na mujhe kashmakash mein daali......maana nupsi said.....bt still........mujhe SRK aur AB dono bahut pasand hai......if u hv said mayu toh raj se be zyada handsome lag raha hai....then it ws 5n.....bt still its ok.....u knw hw much i'm crazy for SRK...hehe....isliye i cudn control my feelings...abhi mere mann jo bhi hai vo sab likh rahi hun.....10 on 10....for this 1st part.......lovd it to d coreeeeeeeeeee........................last part ka mujhe bezabri se intezaar rahegaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.............n i'm damn sure usmein romance toh bilkul hoga hi..hehe...😉
luv u loadsssssssss.........



Edited by nikki028 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lol.. nice one .. i cant believe mayank nupur ko neeche girane ki galti kar sakta hai!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Superb jana so we'll get a kiss here also
Haine
If possible pm me plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey...twas awesome...pls pm me when u upd8...w8ing for kiss! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its awesome n amazing.... do continue.. n do pm me sweets once u update..
Posted: 15 years ago
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lol mayank ne nupur ko gira diya😆
loved the os, it was very cute n sweet
anyways continue soon n pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very well written ....... waiting for da next part eagerly ......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haha.. the ending was awesome.. typical mayu..
good one yaar...

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