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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~
lol mayank ne nupur ko gira diya😆
loved the os, it was very cute n sweet
anyways continue soon n pm me

thanks Mishu dear! hope u got my pm!

Originally posted by: stuti123
very well written ....... waiting for da next part eagerly ......

thanks dear, part 2 pg 3, do read and comment!

Originally posted by: Bronze.
haha.. the ending was awesome.. typical mayu..
good one yaar...

thanks dear!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Nice shot dear
waiting 4 next 1.
pls pm me if possible.
Faria

thanks Fariaa!

Originally posted by: myownarea
zoah...kya baath hai...kya suspense mein end kiya😉
ab kya hoga?? 😲

he he 😆 😆

thanks Divz, i really thought that idea from that song main hoon na, where Zayed Khan drops Amrita! lolz!

Originally posted by: Kanky
How sweet! 😳 Update as soon as possible! 😃

thanks sweet-heart!

Originally posted by: XAiShBaBy08X

Good story! Please continue!

thanks huni!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988
wow...zoah..love u!!!! great beginning!!!! 🤗 👏 just perfect yaar!! u write damn well dear...dnt get anxious...now waitin 4 ur next part... 😍 kp writing n rocking!!!god bless u!!!
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

thanks meri jaan! do read the next part and let me know how it is!

mayur hugz 🤗

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#34

Originally posted by: minalpink100
so cute plz continue it

thanks Minal!

Originally posted by: zoya_me
hey awesome part
please pm me wen u update

thanks a ton dear!

Originally posted by: Sunny-Malik
zoah awsomeeeeeeeee yaar.... loved it like anythingg

thanks Sana, and u said my and my best friend's favourite pet line, loving like anything! lolz!

thanks a ton!

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#35

Originally posted by: Naughtynatty
hey dude hey huni
sorry for being a silent reader buh hats off u were great no worries, snt be sorry and thanks for the appreciation dear!
i guess u shuld like continue to make it a proper FF will defo think about it soon!
i think u will rock it !!! awwwwwwww, thats really sweet of u!
I loved it !!

thanks a ton for liking my work!

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#36

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~
zoah!! i loved the updt!
it was sweet n cute n romantic!
awesome!

thanks Mishu once again, it really encourages me to write more!

Originally posted by: robinblue91
Zoah it waz toooooooo gud..!!
luved it..!!
it was so realistic... can imagine every bit..!!
tooooooo sweet..!!

thanks rabiia, i tried my best to make to look realistic, thanks for the compliment!

Originally posted by: zoya_me
hey it was awesome
loved it

thnx for da pm

thanks zoya dear!

Originally posted by: Bronze.
hey why do you think its not good.. its really sweet and cute.. enjoyed reading it... loved the cute moments..

you should consider reading ff.

thanks dear, i thought its not at all romantic!

thanks for loving it!

Originally posted by: myownarea
zoah...i think it was adorable..sweet , cute n perfect 😳

awwwwww, thats really gorgeous of u to say that! well appreciated huni!

thanks a ton!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: nikki028
oops i wantd to comment 1st........bt koi baat nahi main nahi meri bahut achi frnd hi sahi...my sweetu piyu...hehe....btw zoah.............thank u soooooooooooo soooooooooo soooooooooooooo much for dedicatin this OS to me............i'm soooooooooo soooooo happy n xcited to d core..........tum keh rahe ho its nt gud...chamaat marungi main tujhe,huh..........it ws xcellent.........rockin......i felt like real serial mein ho raha hai....sadu ke sadu mayu n naughty naughty nupsi....hehe....yaar tune ek dialogue na mujhe kashmakash mein daali......maana nupsi said.....bt still........mujhe SRK aur AB dono bahut pasand hai......if u hv said mayu toh raj se be zyada handsome lag raha hai....then it ws 5n.....bt still its ok.....u knw hw much i'm crazy for SRK...hehe....isliye i cudn control my feelings...abhi mere mann jo bhi hai vo sab likh rahi hun.....10 on 10....for this 1st part.......lovd it to d coreeeeeeeeeee........................last part ka mujhe bezabri se intezaar rahegaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.............n i'm damn sure usmein romance toh bilkul hoga hi..hehe...😉
luv u loadsssssssss.........

hey dear, its ok u couldnt comment first, dnt worry about it!

ur welcome dear about the dedication!

chamaat mat marna yaar varna college, sab kya bolenge lolz, thanks for the wonderful appreciation!

im sorry about the SRK thing, u know mayur magic is in the air, lekin vo mera brain mein chad kar bol raha hai, so didnt realise about the dailogue! good thing u pointed out cuz im crazy SRK lover!

thanks for loving it!

love ya loadzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

mayur hugz 🤗

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#38

Originally posted by: nikki028
ohhh zoah..........wht a gr888888888 rockin awesomeeeeeeeeeeee romanticccccccccccccccccccccccc oneshot yaar......10 on 10..........srsly...........i luvd it to d core.................sone pe suhanewaali baat tune yej OS meri req par likh di............awwwwwwwww.................i'm soooooooooo happy............btw maine tere liye jo gift pm bheji thi woh padi?😉

awwwwwwwww, thanks huni, 10 on 10 for me, wow, pehli baar mile hai! thanks to u!

me really glad that u loved it man, i was dead nervous before posting it!

thanks a million dear!

yes dekha gift, aur suna bhi! what can i say about it man, simply beautiful! thanks sooooooooooooooo much for it!