new ff** kis des mein hai mera dil ** updtd pg 2

hi all..............i'm mariyam ,here to present my first ff on premeer............kis des mein hai mera dil....................

its d story of beautiful ,very lovely girl heer,daughter of balraaj mann ,she is her father's laadli.her mother passed away when she gave birth to meher
rishi( eijaz khan) is her best friend........heer shares everything with rishi....they r soo close..........
amarjeet rishi's father & balraaj's close friend promised to balraaj that ,he had choosed heer as rishi's wife..........heer & rishi were so happy by hearing this........their happiness knew no bound...........& atlast heer got her best friend as her life partner................
amarjeet got promossion in his job & has to go to london......the days passes away........on d day of amarjeet leaving for london
balraaj : bhabhi ji aur bache ki khayaal rakhna........wahaan jaake hume mat bhool jao..............
amar : are tume kaise bhool jaayenge..............aur haan meri bahu heer ki khayal rakhna ,mein waapas aaoongi na tab undono ki shaadi bade dhoom dhaam se karenge............teeke.....
balraaj smiled & hugged amarjeet
amar : bache kaha hai..........
balraj : dono baath kar rahe hoge

rishi & heer sitting in d field...........heer was very sad.........
rishi : heer tum dukhi kyu ho ?
heer : aaj tum jaayenge toh mein akele ho jaaongi na?
rishi : mein jaldi waapas aoonga heer...
heer : tum wahaan jaake mujhe bhool jaayenge
rishi : kabhi nahi ,mein tume chitti bejoongi ,tum reply karoongi na?
heer: haan ............
rishi : toh mein jaa rahi hoon..........bye........

amarjeet & family leaves 4 london.........rishi waves his hand to heer ,heer with heavy heart waves back,no one couldnt undestand that two little heart's feelings......................
their car dissappeared from her sight...still she waves her hand & whisperd...
'' mein tumaari intzaar karoongi ,jaldi aao...................''
a tear drop fall from her eyes

to be continued

plz do read & comment/critisize

love
mariyam..........😛

nice do continue soon!

Originally posted by: hreeyaa

nice do continue soon!

thanx ..........'ll do😛

nice start.......i will w88 for prem not for amarjit in story......it's too difficult for me to even think heer with any one else yaar......do continue ........prem v/s heer story.......me too saying bye👍🏼 to amarjit hope his plane will crash 😲n prem will come india in next flite😉.......hope u understand dear......

awomse do continue soon jst lov it when you update can you add me to your pm list continue soon

yeh, great work yu'v done ,

hey mariam
awesome start....looks like something different...cant wait to read more...continue soon...😊

plz continue soon!
interesting concept... XD

Originally posted by: parminderkaur

nice start.......i will w88 for prem not for amarjit in story......it's too difficult for me to even think heer with any one else yaar......do continue ........prem v/s heer story.......me too saying bye👍🏼 to amarjit hope his plane will crash 😲n prem will come india in next flite😉.......hope u understand dear......

thank you dear😛 yaar sabr karoooooooooooooooooooo .sabr ka fal mitta hota hai😆😃 just wait 4 next update.........thanx 4 reading🤗

Originally posted by: karannandani

awomse do continue soon jst lov it when you update can you add me to your pm list continue soon

thanx , sure ,i'll inform u when i'll post d next part.............😛

Originally posted by: shawanah

yeh, great work yu'v done ,

pls do continue ..😊

thanx...............😛

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey mariam
awesome start....looks like something different...cant wait to read more...continue soon...😊

thanx afreen.............yeah i think sooooooooooooo 😆 sure😛

Originally posted by: Momana

plz continue soon!
interesting concept... XD

thanx😛

Originally posted by: aditi18

plz continue........

surely 😛

thanx guys 4 ur commends😛

Hi all………….thanx 4 reading my ff ………ur commends means a lot to me

sorry 4 being late............actually i was in my in laws home .....................
here is d next part.........................

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6P6vskFF9lo

10 years later...................
ludhiana...
it was a rainy morning.......still the people of that village were busy asusuall
mann ghar..........
balraj was reading news paper,meher give a cup of tea to him
balraj : kitni achi mausam hai na.
meher : haan
balraaj : heer nahi uti abhi tak ?
meher : nahi ,
balraaj : aaj uski results aanewaale hai na.aur woh so rahe hai
meher : mein abhi bulathi hoon
meher went to heer's room ,then she opened d window
meher called heer ..there was no reply...........
meher : heer didi uto na
this time a little sound came from under d blanket
: 2 minit aur..........
meher : dekho didi , mein paanch tak ginenge ,uski andhar aap nahi udenge toh mein ek bucket paani aap ke uper fek doongi
and she starts to count 1...2.........3.......4...........
but heer wake up before meher completes d counting
meher : yeh hui na baath
heer (with deceitful angry ) : kya meher ,mein itni achi sapna dekh rahe the aur tum ............
meher : acha.........ek kaam kijiye.......aap phir se so jaa......aur apna khwaab ko poora karo,teeke............har jagah badi behen choti behno ko jaagathe hai.aur yahaan chotti ko badi behen ko jagaana padtha hai.........
heer : oh meher.......tum bahut bolti hoon.todi der apni zubaan ko araam do

meher : waise aapko yaad hai aaj kaun si taariq hai

heer : kaun si ?

meher :5 sep .aur time 9 bajkar 10 minute ,.shayad aapko yeh bhi yaad nahi hogi ki aaj aapki llb exam result hai

heer : oh god………..meher tum yeh bath abhi batha rahi ho..tum mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya

meher : acha ,abhi meri galti hai……aapki result aanewaale hai aur aapk yaad rakhna chaahiye tha na? haan

heer : bas bas……..mujhe der ho rahi hai……..

she ran to bathroom,heer gets ready to go

heer : papa,mein jaake aathi hoon

balraj : teeke beta........

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at college........

she saw a crowd infront of result board ,she also joined in it.....she search for her name with curiosity....but she cant find it there.......she losed her hopes.......for a minute she believes that she failed...........but one second,she cant believe her eyes.......her name was in topper list...........

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mann ghar.......

balraj : kya hua beta

heer come before him and hugged

: baba.mein jeet gayi ,aapko pata hai mein kitni khush hoon............

balraaj smiled

heer : meher kahaan hai ?

meher appeard in door step& she raised her hand,there were a letter in her hand& she sang

'' chitti aayi hai,aayi hai.......chitti aayi hai''

it was rishi's letter from london

heer : meher ,mujhe woh chitti do .

meher run away ,heer also followed her

heer cried out 4 d letter.......but meher didn't listen to her........

heer : meher.plz.rukhoooooo

heer grasped meher's hand & stopped her ,she take a long breath

heer : bas ,bahut hogayi.......mujhe woh chitti do meher.........

then she snatched d letter away and open d letter

then she looks at meher

: kya hai ,kya dekh rahi hoon........jaao..........

meher : acha baba mein jaa rahi hoon.........

heer read d letter

heer,

kaisey ho tum.....aur tum jeet gayi na? congrats

heer was surprised by thinking how he get to knw tht she passed her exam,she continue reading...........

tum to soch raha hoga ki mujhe kaise pata chala ki tum jeet gayi ho,hai na? kyunki mein jaanthi hoon ki mera heer kabhi haar nahi sakthe..........m right na?

heer ab humara intzaar khatm...........mein waapas aa raha hoon heer.........next week mein apni heer ki pass aaraha hoon.......

apna khayal rakhna

with lots of love

ur rishi....................

heer was in cloud 9...............her happiness knew no bounds.............

to be continued............

do read & commend/criticize

loves

mariyam😛