Dance with me (RN) one shot

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey you all since I'm not being able to update any of my fics at the present moment I thought of posting a short story i wrote instead. Hope you all enjoy it.

DANCE WITH ME

The foyer was decorated in fluorescent lights and sober flyers and flowers. Everyone was dressed in serene colours of black and blue. All the cadets were involved with each other enjoying the atmosphere full of romance and magic.

In between the lit candles emerged two people who had come to the party with different intentions and mixed feelings. But as soon as their eye fell on each other, everything was forgotten. It was as if nothing else existed and the world stood still.

Her face glowed in between the candles and she looked so beautiful that he simply couldn't take his eyes off.

She lowered her eyes feeling conscious of his gaze. She wondered whether he was staring at her with awe or staring at her with amazement. Why was his gaze so piercing? Why couldn't she look away?

Both of them walked simultaneously but remained opposite not meeting each other afraid of what the whole hall of eyes would think.

They had so much to say to each other but didn't hold courage to speak up so they used the alternate and talked with their eyes and mind.

He said: "Aaj bohat khoobsurat lagrahee ho Naina."

She replied: "Thank you sir. Aap bhi bohat acche lagrahe hai aaj.

He said: "Maine aaj se pehle tumhe is roop me dekha hee nahi."

She replied: "Aaj moka jo itna khaas hai."

Gradually their feet began taking them towards each other and as they reached all eyes fell on them. It was as if everyone wanted to know what will happen next.

The music in the background changed making their heart skip a beat as this was the perfect song for them.

Ya maula aaaaaaaaaaaah

Ya maula aaaaaaaaaaaah

He put his hand out towards her to offer her a dance and she had this hesitation whether to accept it or not.

He asked her in his mind: "May I have this dance?"

She finally extended her hand and rested in his and then he pulled her closer.

Mere haath me, tera haath ho

Saari jannate mere saath ho

Mere haath me, tera haath ho

Saari jannate mere saath ho

One hand was securely clasped with hers and the other remained on her waist. Her hand rested on his shoulder.

Tu jo paas ho, phir kya yeh jahaan

Tere pyaar me hojau fanaa

Mere haath me, tera haath ho

Saari jannate mere saath ho

Tu jo paas ho, phir kya yeh jahaan

Tere pyaar me hojau fanaa

Mere haath me, tera haath ho

Saari jannate mere saath ho

Each word reflected their feelings they had developed for each other and it was as if the song was made just for them.

"Tere dil meree saaso ko panaah miljaaye

Tere ishq me meri jaan fanaa hojaaye"

Jitne paas hai, khushbu saas ke

Jitne paas hothon ke sargam

Jese saath hai, karwat yaad ke

Jese saath baahon ke sangam

Jitne paas paas khwaabon kee nazar

Utne paas tu rehna humsafar

Tu jo paas ho, phir kya yeh jahaan

Tere pyaar me hojau fanaa

Mere haath me, tera haath ho

Saari jannate mere saath ho

Their steps were beautifully co coordinated with each other and everyone else stopped to only stare at the two as they couldn't believe to have seen a more beautiful sight.

"Rone de aaj tu humko

Tu aakhen sujaanede

Baahon me lele or bhigjaane de

Hai jo seene me qaid darya

Wo chute jaaehga

Hai itna dard ke tera daaman bhigjaaehga"

Jitne paas paas, dharkhan ke hai raaz

Jitne paas boondo ke baadal

Jese saath, saath, chanda kee hai raat

Utne paas naino ke kaajal

Jitne paas paas saagar kee leher

Utne paas tu, rehna humsafar

Tu jo paas ho, phir kya yeh jahaan

Tere pyaar me hojau fanaa

Mere haath me, tera haath ho

Saari jannate mere saath ho

As the song ended they still stood in each other's arms not wanting to go. She looked in his eyes and saw he wanted to ask her something and he saw that she was ready.

"Adhuri saas thi

Dharkhan adhuri thi

Adhure hum

Magar ab chand pura hai falak pe

Or ab pure hai hum"

Right then he had no fear or care about what others would think as what mattered was only them.

The whole hall had stood still to see what will happen next as they were expecting Rajveer to make the next step. Nobody cared about the right and the wrong anymore as this was the matter of true love.

Before he could say anything she asked him a big question, "Sir, will you promise me one thing today?" he nodded waiting with anticipation as to what was she going to ask.

"Sir, aap mujhse waada karenge ke zindagee bhar aap mera saath nahi chorenge or hamesha mere mentor banke rahenge."

Rajveer thought about the right answer and then replied. "Isme koi poochne kee baat nahi Naina. Me to her waqt se tumhaare saath hee tha. Aaj me waada karta hu ke me zindagee bhar tumhaara haath thaame rakhunga." She gave him a sweet smile. "Lekin tumhe bhi ek waada karna hoga." She squinted her eyes with slight tension as to what was going to come her way. "Tumhe waada karna hoga ke tumbhi mera haath kabhi nahi chorogi or hamesha meri protge banke rahogee."

With no reaction for the first few minutes, Rajveer felt a bit dejected but then Naina burst out laughing which relieved his hyperactive heart.

"Yeh bhi koi poochne kee baat hai. Me to hamesha se aapkee hee hu sir or aapkee hee rahungi."

That was enough to satisfy both of them and now nothing more remained to be declared. It was a union of two hearts, two souls and of true, undying and eternal love.

Here is a VM made by sakurakinomoto2
THE END
Hope you all enjoyed this and I shall be waiting for your lovely comments.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woww....lovely story..
soo romantic... 😍 ..song selection is just superb...!!! n the atmosphere of the eve is just... perfect for the most romantic couple.....!!!😳 😳 😳
just awesome... 👏
Edited by sweet_shona - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏...........Phew....haath thak gaye mere taali bajaate bajaate..........yipeeeeeeeeeeee........chalo di tum waapis toh aayi.........it feels like ages since i have read an excerpt of urs.......YAADEIN taaza ho gayi.....wow......the pics were awesome......thoda tumhari taariif se diversion lena chahti thi.....afterall you know whatever u write is awesome,fantabulous,excellent, superb, mashallah.....waah waah.....aaa....aur adjectives mujhe aate nahi.......hehehehe.............😆........see i am sooooo happy to finally hear opps i mean read from you......kaash ek true confession serial mein bhi ho jata.....par tum ho na us adhure kaam ke liye.......nice nice song......ab jaldi se lost aur ajnabi ko bhi update kardo plzzzzzzz...........and finally a granddddd welcome backkkk.....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow beautiful one shot. Just a dance n so many emotions wer attached. Even the readers' emotions attached wid Raj n Naina wer awaken again. Thnx 4 this wonderful shot. Luved it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_shona

woww....lovely story..
soo romantic... 😍 ..song selection is just superb...!!! n the atmosphere of the eve is just... perfect for the most romantic couple.....!!!😳 😳 😳
just awesome... 👏

Hey thanks alot for appreciating my work
I'm glad u luved it
Yeh it is just perfect for them thats why i used it.
Thanks once again
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

👏...........Phew....haath thak gaye mere taali bajaate bajaate..........hehehe phir bhi kam lagtee hai mujhe

yipeeeeeeeeeeee........chalo di tum waapis toh aayi.........it feels like ages since i have read an excerpt of urs.......YAADEIN taaza ho gayi..... - aaw thanks alot. Yeh i know its been ages and am happy to be back
wow......the pics were awesome......thoda tumhari taariif se diversion lena chahti thi.....afterall you know whatever u write is awesome,fantabulous,excellent, superb, mashallah.....waah waah.....aaa....aur adjectives mujhe aate nahi.......hehehehe.............😆- yeh i know but its fun to hear it all the time. hehehehe
........see i am sooooo happy to finally hear opps i mean read from you......kaash ek true confession serial mein bhi ho jata.....par tum ho na us adhure kaam ke liye.......nice nice song......- I'm just glad u luved my work and hope u continue loving it.
ab jaldi se lost aur ajnabi ko bhi update kardo plzzzzzzz...........and finally a granddddd welcome backkkk.....😃- sure yeh huwa hai to wo bhi ho hee jaaehga jald

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow beautiful one shot. Just a dance n so many emotions wer attached. Even the readers' emotions attached wid Raj n Naina wer awaken again. Thnx 4 this wonderful shot. Luved it.

Thankyou very much for enjoying my work
I'm glad u luved it a lot.
Hmmmm yeh kaafi yaadein jo taaza hogayee. It was a gr8 awakening piece and its good to see u luved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is sooooo sweeeeet........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳 I m so glad Arwa that u wrote this...!!!! 👏
Really with these two together, nothing else mattered....!!!!! 😉😉😉
With Naina saying" Main hamesha aap kee hee hoon...." , Rajveer need not hear anything more...!!!! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OWSOME !!!
it's too beutiful to look back...u reminded old days with so much love.thank u dear...aur jab baat RN ki hoti hai toh they always Rock...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Arwa
How r u??? Welcome Back...... It has been a long time since u have updated...
Wat r u doing these days????
Your writing style is brilliant 👏
This was just perfect ..I really loved the way u expressed their unspoken love... Raj n Naina r the best couple..They can talk volumes with their eyes only..😛😛 Way Naina n Raj expressed their love by promising each other dat they wud never leave each other even in the toughest time..This is wat we called immortal love
The song was perfect for this situation...
Even the video mix was just terrific.. I really hope dat u comeback soon to complete your fictions... Waiting for u.... 😊😊😊
Bye Take care

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