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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

It was very awesome..!!

And my fav part was when dodo came and told her that you should eat something....and the sisterly bonding...you showed it so nicely...!!

Great job..!

Keep writing these one-shots yaar...I mean mayur ones too..!! LOL

couldn't help adding that..! hehe

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: hgrhr
It was very awesome..!!

And my fav part was when dodo came and told her that you should eat something....and the sisterly bonding...you showed it so nicely...!!

Great job..!

Keep writing these one-shots yaar...I mean mayur ones too..!! LOL

couldn't help adding that..! hehe

aww thanks sooo much Nidhi..yeah that was my fav part in the one shot too..lolzz...because we rarely see Dodo show concern for his sisters..but when he does...he's a real darling...yeah..i so badly wanna see a dia-nups-gunjan scene...thanks a ton yaar..sure ill write..and ofcourse ill write mayur one shots too...lol..dont worry..and thanks a lot once again!

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preksha07

@preksha07

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

its a nice one and a rare one.....since RIa is always taken as side roles......but i must say its a gud try.....

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: preksha07
its a nice one and a rare one.....since RIa is always taken as side roles......but i must say its a gud try.....

hey thanks a ton yaaar

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innocentdevil.

@innocentdevil.

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

It's not bad at all. I liked it. Ha, so even RV's the Bad Guy Here, HUH? Well it was more of Dia so i guess it's like that. But it was very nicely written.

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Edited by ShadowKiss - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ShadowKiss
It's not bad at all. I liked it. Ha, so even RV's the Bad Guy Here, HUH? Well it was more of Dia so i guess it's like that. But it was very nicely written.

-P

hey thanks a lot....well RV isn't quite included in here..its more of Dia's pov...well...actually Rv isnt bad in the one shot...but then Dia would still take time to trust him again..so that's what i've tried to show....thanks a lot..im glad u liked it