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Michelle

@mich09

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Posted: 15 years ago

#451

Thanks a lot Annu, Clars, angel_sub, Ivy, Nehu, Fati, Bhavna, Sweety, Saima (leaves), Pinali, Pri and Sonali. I am so glad you all like my scenes. What is really touching for me is that you all have noticed and liked those little scenes which I was hoping you all would notice and experience the essence of Abhi-Nik like I do when writing out those scenes. For me AbhiNik may not be verbal about their relationship, inspite of all their angst, bitterness, etc, these little nuances bring out how so attuned they are with each other and how made they are for each other.

I am glad you all liked the kitchen scene 😃 and Bhavna yeah I wanted to go into more detail, but then realise I could be ban from IF so refrained from doing so 😆 😆

Thank you all once again.

Mich

Coming up the 8th part. AbhiNik having dinner with the Puris 😃 and how Abhi is dying as Nikki is looking so beautiful..... 😃

Edited by mich09 - 15 years ago

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Durre Hussain

@romantic_stylez

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#452

Yay!! I now I really can't wait for part 8..LOL.. BTW Mich you can call me Riya if u want.

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Ivy

@Ivy9

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#453

** Scenes Written by Sanjana38**

SCENE 1

After AN confession has done and that song sequence.......

AN siting near fire looking at each other.Abhi says to niki do u trust me..?niki i want to tell u something about my past.Niki replies Abhi i really don't care about ur past.Abhi says but its important for me to tell u.Abhi standup niki followed him...Niki I'm married...Niki expression changes into anger before Abhi could say anything or give any explanation niki cums front of him and slap him,and says ur telling this now,u used me... and shoted at him and ask him to leave her alone..... Suddendly Abhi awakeup and he realised it was just his dream.He look at Niki sleeping near him still holding his hand...Abhi slowly move to Niki face places a soft kiss on her forehead and says niki i really don't want to lose u.Then he says to himself but i had to tell her the truth before its too late.

Next day Niki awakeup and shocked to not find Abhi there she get scared and started searching for him..she saw him in neghiouring farm standing near small water pond.She rushgly goes there Abhi u r here i was searching for u...she notice Abhi's worried face.she ask "what happen Abhi?",Abhi replies Niki i had hide my past from u...Niki I'm married"..Niki get shocked after hearing this she places her foot one step backward and started to turn..Abhi continue..niki 2 yrs back i was working in Delhi as senior doctor where i meet Priya.she was my inter we slowly started falling for each other and get married.One day she was performing surgery and becz of her mistake that patient dies...Family member of that paitent files case against hospital.she calls me and was begging to me to do anything but i don't want my carrer to get spoil...i don't have any option left and i take all the responsibility of that case..i was fined and disallowed from doing any surgeries in furture....few days later i cum to know that she was having affair with some bussiness man and we get seperated...

Abhi continues..Niki many times i try to tell u the truth but every time the throught of loosing u stops me...

Niki sarted walking away from him,tears rolls down from her eyes...saying to herslf why god...why i has always to suffer in love...Abhi wanted to stop her and not knowing what to do he continues...Niki after this incidence i put wall around me becz i don't want to get hurted again but when i meet u...i can't control myself....I try to keep away from u and i cum that much closer to u....i can't help myself Niki....I Love You...U r my life...i can't live without u...Hearing his words Niki stops all the moments she spend with him started rollong in her mind....She turns towards Abhi and says "even i can't live without u",and run towards him..Abhi grap her in his arms and says never leave me alone niki and tighten his grip.......

~The End~

Edited by Erutan99 - 15 years ago

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kabeeraspeaking

@kabeeraspeaking

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: anyalolita

Gosh, I know this is not the place to elaborate, but Fati, it's amaaazing when Abhi does that! Like the scene at camp too when he backs her into the boxes. I don't know how the man can be so intense, then switch to 'I don't care' mode so instantly! Hot as hell though.

Hmmm...just thinking....I've said this before, and I stand by it. I want to see more of Abhi's anger. He expresses his displeasure, but that anger is suppressed until it bursts out, and then he's dangerous,sexy. 😍😍 and dangerous is

Okay, to make this somewhat relevant 😛...Mich, please give us some Abhi-anger. Let it be directed at Simi, Niki, anyone, but can we see the man angry again? Total turn on 😛😃

Ok, maybe this is not the best place to continue the conversation, but since you started it, boo-ya! 😆😛 [Or maybe I did that first 🤓😆 Ah, no matter 😛]

@Red: Seeee, that's is exactly what I mean by 'playing-hard-to-get' 😉 😆 We're always on Nikki about how she has mood swings, but boy, Abhimanyu is one tough cookie to handle too! And IMO, the contrasting, sudden switches from intense to indifferent are maybe what make him all the more ...alluring? 😍 There's an unreachable, unattainable aura to him...and what woman doesn't find that becoming, a challenge to take on? 😆😉

@Blue: LOLOLOL, well said. A's a natural at expressing displeasure, with or without words 😆 And dude, does he have one heck of a highly combustive and volatile temper or what? :unsure:

😆 Truth to be told, that's one time I don't envy our Nikki Pehlwaan 😆

@Michi: With us of the reading-into-every-line-action-gesture-you-name-it, are you surprised that its the nuances which jump out the most? 😆😍 Looking forward to what happens 😛

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anyalolita

@anyalolita

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#455

Oh Ivy.....thanks so much for this little scene...Thankfully it was just a dream, you really handled that well *wipes forehead*...really don't know what kind of things we'll have to watch this coming week but Amit's excited so I'm excited (lol it's become like my catchphrase or something...i'm hooked on DMG all over)!

Urgh, don't like Priya, why would you have an affair when you have Abhi? Hope the creatives make his wife a similar goldigger too, then we can hate her and love Abhi more 😛. And I like at the end how it was Abhi who asked her never to leave him alone? Same as her he's lonely and he doesn't usually express or show it though, he's too busy being there for her. So that was a great way to end the scene!

Gosh. No scenes on TV so I'm taking out all my pent up words on your scenes 😆

Fati, your multicoloured comment outlining all of Abhi's intriguing and irresistable qualities made me drool. Woman I love the way you write. And Abhi's displeasure seriously just brings a huuuuge smile to my face. Just wanna go pinch his cheeks and pout at him the way Niki does to wind him up even more 😆 *sigh* I can't elaborate because I literally loved everything you wrote. Also I'll probably get a warning for continuing this conversation here so...😳

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sushma

@angeltiara

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#456

hey mich loved the 7 part the bond u created between abhi n interns and the way abhi helped armaan he is sooo sweet

loved thekitchen scene so much the way abhi helped nikki and niki cared for abhi n abhi getting confused as to waht niki wants from him

just perfect

loved the smallest gesture and words they shared soo cuteeee

and i agree with ya all i wanna see abhi angry as hell he is just too hardto resist when he shows that raw emotion in his coldness and his each and every action hits directly at other persons without even knowing what he is upto he is one ausumn guy who knows when to give what

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Ivy

@Ivy9

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#457

Glad u liked the scene Bhavan but its not mine...its Sanjana's!

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Michelle

@mich09

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#458

@ Sanjana very cute scene.

@ Fati, No of course not, I am not surprised at it at all, knew you all will understand what I am trying to say in my scenes 😃

@ Sushie thanks so much, glad you liked the 7th part too.

Well Bhavna, Sushie, Fati, there is some angry Abhi coming up and both Nikki and Simi are going to feel the heat soon 😃

Mich

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pinalkpatel

@pinalkpatel

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#459

ohh my God Mich... part 8 was the best sooo far ....... the kiss was soo sensual... i still have butterflies when i think about it .... wow..... u r amazing!!!

keep it up girl!!!

very excited for ur next part
Pinal