SS:Incomplete Life, impt note....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello! EVERYONE...I'm back with another SS...cant help it yaar was missing writting like crazy finally got the chance to start writing one.....I'm hoping to finish this SS before Ramadhan...(I know i will cos I updt everyday...LOL) this idea poped in my head for long time and also I have been inspired by a FF which I read on KS forum but I cant remember the the FF's name or the writers...it was quite old FF i believe....
The past one and half month i was soooo busy didnt even had time to relax....im still busy though and im also having bad flu and sore throat which i hate....my exam results are coming soon...which im very scared of cos exams werent that good....but im hoping that Inshaallah i will get to uni or else married....
I hve no idea what to name this SS...if you guys have an idea then let me no please....but for now i will call it "Incomplete Life"...and the first part is true part...(this happend to my bhabi when she was in labour about a month ago)...I with my two bare eyes witnessed all that and for a week i was having nightmares, when i tried to eat all i could see was blood...i remember my heart nearly stopped when i look at my sis in law in that state and Dr's around her then the nursepush me out of the room...only i know what me and my family went through....but im glad its all over now...
I am not a good writer at all but nevertheless i tried my best describing everything....hope you guys will like it and as usual comments, suggestion and fedbacks are always welcomed....
Enjoy reading....
Part 1
Beep, beep, beep.....nurse call Dr Robinson please hurry up....put the oxygen mask on her....get the xyz drugs immediatley....ordered Dr Deepa Mehta....frustrated, panicked Dr Mehta tried again to take the baby out using the especial medical spoons to take the baby's head out.....

The beep continued and within seconds the entire labour suit was full of Dr's and nurses...5 Dr's at once stood around the only one lady who was fighting for her life...different Dr's did different tasks....Dr Mehta mangaed to succefully take out the baby using the spoon and her hands....finally the baby cry out loud enough that the entire labour ward heard...the nurse immediatley took the baby from Dr Mehta...As the baby came out of his mother womd next followed was the pool of red blood....the blood came in a way as if Tsunami of blood erupted....Dr Mehta was in red pool of blood...but she didnt care or flinched a bit....still confidence she took hold of bunch of cotton wool and tried to stop the blood until Dr Robinson took over her....

The Dr's and nurses got busy tried everything to bring back the patient alive, to make her BP stable, to make her pulse normal and to make her breathing gentle...the nurses took the crying baby, quickly cleaning him with towel, cutting his umbilical cord...and covering him with another clean towel then handing him to Dr Walia who stood near the door like a statu, not even flinching a bit, he stood there lifeless, he lookd as pale as cream....with his entire body as cold as ice...physically he was there but mentally he wasnt there....he witnessed everything that happened but couldnt dare to speak a word, it looked as if his mouth was ziped...he couldnt bare seeing his beloved wife Ananya in that state...he died thousand deaths seeing her in that state...he couldnt even saw her a bit as there hundrads of nurses, Dr's were around her....he wanted to scream and say some thing but he couldnt...he couldnt open his mouth....

Mr Walia please hold your baby....nurse said

looking at the young lady infront of him...he new he heard her but couldnt make sense of the words she said....the nurse coxed him again pleas sir...with trumbling hands he took the baby who was crying non stop in his shaking arms...not even once glancing at him....as his eyes were fixed on the Dr's infront of him....

Dr robinson: get 2000 ml saline...add xyz drugs...give to her now...hurry up will you said the old Dr to his coleagues....then again trying to stop the bleeding that was caming out non stop....felling frustrated with everything and the loud crying of the baby...he ordered the nurse...get him and the baby out of here...Now....

the nurse run to Dr walia...please she pleaded him...please you cant stay here ...please leave...on the other hand jai didnt heard a single word she said...the nurse pushed him out of the room and shut the door at his face.................

TBC....

Thanks for readding...i will try and upt tomo....😃
Edited by MeenaKhan - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Akhroat!!!!... U writing this ff... Anyways before reading ur SS i read your lamba sa bashan... U better finish this one before ramadhan and ramdhan mein no need to write any ss or ff... Ek dum shareef bacha ban kar prayer mein busy rehna hahaha... Thats the only month when i open holy Quran woh alag baat hai my mum shout at me everyday to read atleast one page...

Chalo ab ss par aate hain... Start was good but yeh jai and ananya ye kia chakkar hai... BTW u wrote that dr was confident after seeing blood ... Mein kehti hoon ye doctors ke pass dil hi nahi hota hhahaha.. Body ko woh loag ek labortary samjhte hain... Anyways nice part chalo now cont like a good girl...
Edited by Hani_H - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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You are finally back, that too, with a SS. was missing you around here, glad that you are here again. Now I have a chance to read another wonderful story. Looks very interesting so far. Is Dr. Walia by any chance JW himself or his father and the baby Jai? Can't wait to see what happens. Please continue soon.

love,
Dil

p.s. How could you have gone through seeing all that blood? I wouldn't have been able to, I would have freaked out or had fainted. Hopefully your Bhabhi is completely well now.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey mina
good start
so now what
will ananya die
poor jai
dont know what he must be going through
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey!
welcome back...glad you started another ff..
OMG the starting is so sad..
When a woman gives birth and she dies, I think that is the saddest thing that can happen in the world..
continue soon
nadia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello....everyone.........
I'M REALLY SORRY TO DISAPOINT YOU GUYS.......BUT I WILL NOT CONTINUE WRITING THIS SS....
im feeling bad saying this but i have to do this....i love writing and i guess this was the last incomplete ss that i wrote.........i may never or i might do write in future....but at the moment i cant..
after 2 months i thought my commetments and responsibilty were over....and i will hve some time for meself...but its not over...there are still so many things i have to do....for myself tooooooo....
ususally its always the eldest child in the family who carries all the responsibilities etc but.....im the last and youngest child in my family and my responsibilties are more than anyone....
and right now there are so many things that i have to do therefore i hve no time to write ss and i dont even like making my readers wait for like weeks....thats why im ending it here....i hope you guys understand.........
if any one would like to take over than please do so...PM me i will give you the rough plan.........
at last i would like to thank all you guys for readding my other short stories....and commenting...your commenting has been great boost........i will miss you guys....
as i may not visit IF regularly....but i wish you all the best in future....
and Ramadhan Mubarak in advance............
thank you all
Allah bless you all
Meena...(this is my real name)lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ dil:.....i was about to have a hear attck when i saw all that but had to stay put for my bhabi....but i couldnt stop crying...nd thn whn i was holding my nephew...it was such a special moment....very sweet....and my bhabi is not 100% ok but thankfully she is recovering.... and Dr walia is JW...actually he was a famous surgen...in this ss.....nd his wife dies in child birth thn bani his sis in law marries him for the sake of the child...and bani is also young to...i wanted to write on how their relationship will form...
love
meena
Edited by MeenaKhan - 16 years ago

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