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Posted: 16 years ago
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hii guys...I am Ananya this side...those who know me here through book talk forum might be familiar with my name...😉..hello....
I am new to this forum and well...I must confess that I read some of the best works here...congratulations guys....I am truly honored to read such wonderful works...especially nishi...aishwarya...jasleen...archu...and my dearest sonshu....
so I thought to pen down a poem of my own...okay..Let me confess...that this poem is not an individual endeavor...sonshu helped me a lot with this...but this is well...my first post here..so please...do the needful and tell me hows it...
thanks..so much....
hope u welcome me with a big warm hug...
regards
Ananya

I wish he could be mine

- Ananya and Sonshu.

I saw him coming my way...
he looked perfect, divine...
I wish I could hold him forever...
I wish he could be mine...!!

He walks across smiling and gleaming
Shining brighter than the sunlight
I look at those glimmering eyes
And just wish he could be mine….

I wish u could feel the way I do…
I wish, to be with him...so he could see me shine...
yet…I am here, still, and mesmerized…
I wish he could be mine..!!

His voice is like no other
Hoping he'd sing our song to me
I sat by thinking and praying
Wishing that he should be mine…

He is every girl's dream...
He is in my mind…my soul…
I don't know...If I love him more than god…
Could he be mine?

My love for him is wider than the universe
Deeper than the ocean
Stronger than sunlight
Purer than clear water…

But All I can do is wish…
Wish for the day,
When in due time
He could be mine

But I know I can't...
As he is no longer here with me…
He is there in my memories now…
And there could stay…be mine..!!

I loved him then...I love him now…
And he will always stroll in my dreams...now and then...
All I can say is…love; you are the one…for me…forever and always…
I am eternally yours...And For me, you are mine...you are mine..!!


hope u like it...well...It's a kinda story made by me...and please twilight fans...don't think this prince charming as Edward cullen ...he soo..is not!! please..!!
thanks...
😆


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Posted: 16 years ago
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no body likes it?????😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ananya, it might take some time for people to comment here but dont give up 😃
waisay, i really loved it. you writer ver nicely.... im not a twilight freak but its hard to imagine someone that is not edward cullen to fit all of these characteristics ou made here.. 😆 I hope you will write more soon and post here.. 😳
welcome to the Writers Corner 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ohhh please Edwards Cullen is not perfect!

i found someone more perfect than him,.... 😳lol
anyway, jokes apart, i really didnt imagine Edward till u mentioned him 😃😆
About the poem... its beatiful! r u in love? coz it seems ur in love, coz, its just perfectly senselessly, coz its beatiful and sweet and a bit just a bit sour 😍 it describes really well what someone feels while seeing that special person 👏
ya... Ananya, u r really familiar to me, but its been a long time since i saw u 🤔 u used to visit PRC forum?
anyway😃😕, where did u read any work of me? lol 😆😛.... yes there r many fantastic writers here, ⭐️ but i didnt post on this corner anything yet, except comments.
Nice to see u again 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammygurl



I wish he could be mine

- Ananya and Sonshu.

I saw him coming my way...
he looked perfect, divine...

I wish I could hold him forever...
I wish he could be mine...!!

He walks across smiling and gleaming
Shining brighter than the sunlight
I look at those glimmering eyes
And just wish he could be mine'.

I wish u could feel the way I do'
I wish, to be with him...so he could see me shine...
yet'I am here, still, and mesmerized'
I wish he could be mine..!!

His voice is like no other
Hoping he'd sing our song to me
I sat by thinking and praying
Wishing that he should be mine'

He is every girl's dream...
He is in my mind'my soul'

I don't know...If I love him more than god'
Could he be mine?

My love for him is wider than the universe
Deeper than the ocean
Stronger than sunlight
Purer than clear water'

But All I can do is wish'
Wish for the day,
When in due time
He could be mine

But I know I can't...
As he is no longer here with me'
He is there in my memories now'
And there could stay'be mine..!!


I loved him then...I love him now'
And he will always stroll in my dreams...now and then...
All I can say is'love; you are the one'for me'forever and always'
I am eternally yours...And For me, you are mine...you are mine..!!





the lines in red are the ones wich wid i identify myself, my world, or things that i have seen/felt/heared... that means, ur poem is really realistic 😃👏
theyr beautiful
and the ones wich impress me more, its the "purer than the clear water" and the "Hes there in my memories now, and there could stay and be mine!"
😃 they all really mean a lot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awee it's really beautiful annanya!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awee it's really beautiful annanya!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Chandani....thanks so much...🤗...And I have noticed people here are really sweet...Yeah..they are a li'l lazy in replying..hehehe....but still...they are my own..:)

@ Girl_007....Thanks so much...you really did find someone more interesting than edward Cullen?👏...wow....congrats...aww.....so u r in love...well...I am not in love..But i am waiting for my EC...hehe....lol...nothing like that...It's just a way of xpressing my wait...for him...:)...and i ahve never visited the PRC forum...But..even u do seem familiar...Hey..What's your name? I would like to address you with the same...:)😉..Many people have said..that this poem reminds them of edward..that's why...I mentioned it is not for edward cullen.
And the lines you highlighted are my favorite too...😳
@dream...thanks....means a lot to me...

@ forever123.....thanks dear....means a lot to me....:)

I AM waiting for more comments.....
Regards
Ananya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammygurl


@ Girl_007....Thanks so much...you really did find someone more interesting than edward Cullen?👏...wow....congrats...aww.....so u r in love...well...I am not in love..But i am waiting for my EC...hehe....lol...nothing like that...It's just a way of xpressing my wait...for him...:)...and i ahve never visited the PRC forum...But..even u do seem familiar...Hey..What's your name? I would like to address you with the same...:)😉..Many people have said..that this poem reminds them of edward..that's why...I mentioned it is not for edward cullen.
And the lines you highlighted are my favorite too...😳

ya Ananya... well i dunno, but Edward Cullen... hm... 🤔 i think hes a bit overestimate, i find him different just coz he is a vampire 😊... dats my opinion, so no need to congrat me 😆
aw ur not in love, well but really got into the shoes of a lover 😛
wait.. i didnt notice that, expressing ur wait? 😲😛 so sweet way of expressing it... but expressing ur wait to whom?
my name is Archana, then, have i seen u in the DharamVeer forum?
those lines r indeed beautiful 😳
Edited by Girl_2007 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Girl_2007

ya Ananya... well i dunno, but Edward Cullen... hm... 🤔 i think hes a bit overestimate, i find him different just coz he is a vampire 😊... dats my opinion, so no need to congrat me 😆
aw ur not in love, well but really got into the shoes of a lover 😛
wait.. i didnt notice that, expressing ur wait? 😲😛 so sweet way of expressing it... but expressing ur wait to whom?
my name is Archana, then, have i seen u in the DharamVeer forum?
those lines r indeed beautiful 😳


yes...archana...i have read ur work....when i just posted it..i remembered this is archu...aww.....ur work is really beautiful....
And again...i have not visited dharamveer forum....at any point in my life....
i tell you where u can find me....Book talk forum....100% most of the time i am there...:)....
HP forum....FAn fictions....Twilight...Debate....rarely...here....😆...and ML....CC too....
Apart from these...i hardly visit any forum...😉....
I get into the shoes of a lover when I am writing....coz i am more of a romantic one...I am expressing my wait for the dream boy...😆😆...wans't that obvious?😳
Thanka again...I am going to add u as a frnd of mine...in my buddy list....Wanna know more about you....
Thanks for replying...And hey hey hey....I am more with team jacob than supporting edward cullen...hehehe🥱

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