27th July Update- Kabhi Alvida na Kehna

-Faith- thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#1
Written Update 27th July 09

Moti Ben's room
  • Santu comes in tells Moti Ben she is ready to give Maalik chutta chilla.
  • Moti ben gets shocked for a bit and then elated how Santu got convinced so easily.
  • Santu is worried and asks her if she would actually get Khemi married to Hiten after this
  • Moti ben shrugs off how she is not really in a state to put conditions yet she insists that Hiten's happiness is the most important thing for her.
  • She says you just leave DM's life before he returns and its now decided that you will go away from DM's life I will open up the way for Khemi into Hiten's life.
  • Santu is about to leave.
  • Moti ben asks her to stop for a bit and repeats that if she really wants Khemi and Hiten to get married and once she puts her thumb print on the papers, she would never come infront of DM ever again.
  • Santu agrees and asks again if she would actually get KH married.
  • Santu then asks Moti ben if she would stop calling Khemi 'badchalan'.
  • Moti ben goes on to convince her how she wud herself go to Madhav Solanki and ask for Khemi's hand in marriage.
  • A sad Santu leaves the room.
  • As soon as she leaves Moti ben shows her true colours and says once she puts the thumb prints. She would have nothing to with her or the promise she made to her
Hiten's room
  • Hiten is playing the guitar and imagines Khemi sitting and smiling at him.
  • Kadambari opens the door and calls out Hiten and says she wants to talk to him.
  • Hiten calls her in and says that after getting married she now doesnt need permission to talk to him and its her right.
  • Hiten says if you are here to talk abt me and Khemi I m not going to listen to anything on that topic.
  • Kadambari says she is here to talk abt their 'mother'.
  • Hiten gets shocked and asks abt our mother.
  • Kadambari asserts its about their 'mother' Santu.
  • Hiten retorts how he doesnt consider and accept and Santu as his mother.
  • He says he never gave the place of his mother.
  • Kadambari says but she has given her that place.
  • She says I know what you want but the person this is affecting the most is Santu.
  • But she never said a word.
  • She says how both of them and Maulik were against DM because they thought he came in the way of their happiness.
  • But Santu has always thought of our happiness.
  • Because of Santu the people living in that house became a family and the house(makaan) became a home(ghar).
  • And dad has also changed.
  • A father has awoken in the Maalik of Dharampur.
  • Please dont do anything that would take away the happiness(khushiyan) of this home.
  • Even those khushiyan would go back ulta paon.
The corridor
  • Santu is shown walking back.
  • Santu hears DM's voice calling him 'Ae chokri'.
  • Santu thinks how can it be DM's voice when he is not there.
  • Santu goes into DM's room.
DM's room
  • She spreads her bistar on the floor.
  • And then says out Maalik this is my last night in this house.
  • After putting my thumbprints on the papers I will leave this house.
  • Unless I dont step out of this house, Khemi behna's happiness wont come on.
  • I had thought I wouldnt come in to your room when you call me.
  • But that would never happen.
  • Forgive me for sleeping in your room without your permission.
  • I wont be able to see you before I love but I want to feel your presence and live your memories.
  • Thats is why I want to spend this night in your room.
  • Santu plays the cd
'Tere dil ka mere dil say rishta purana'
Santu- DM Flashbacks/ with the bg song lines
  • Santu putting eyedrops in his eyes 'In ankhon ka har ansoo mujh ko chupana hai'
  • DM gives her the roomal.. 'Rishta purana hai'
  • Suddenly the song stops.
    Moti Ben enters
  • The teary eyed Santu turns around to find Moti ben there with the divorce papers.
  • Santu is shocked that she had said she will get papers tomorrow
  • Moti Ben says she knows how difficult this night will be for Santu and she wudnt be able to sleep if wants
  • The memories of this house will haunt her
  • She says you are doing so much for this house's son. So its my duty to lessen your pain
  • So I will make it easier and make u sign/put ur thumb prints on the paper today only
  • With tears in her eyes, Santu looks at those papers
  • Moti ben casually says come on come on sign it.. Oh I forgot your uneducated okay okay put your thumb print
  • Santu stands still
  • Moti ben gets alarmed and talks to her self that she should hurry up lest Santu changes her mind
  • Moti ben holds her hands and makes her put the thumb prints on the pages..
The dreaded moment
  • As Santu puts the thumb prints on each page. She has flashbacks of her marriage, but in reverse and backward
  • Santu putting the garland
  • Placing her hand in his hand
  • DM and Santu taking pheray
  • DM tying the mangalsutra
  • Done with the thumbprints
  • Santu is left numb and feelingless
  • While Moti ben harps on how happy she is. And how Santu has done the first good thing that she did since coming to this house
  • And she says u were scared for nothing. Kitney araam say ho gaya. She holds Santu by her shoulders
  • Aaj pehli baar chotay logo kay haath kuch acha ho
  • She says no u have no relation with this house. Nothing left to do with this house or this room. What will you do by staying here. Self respect is also something.
  • I know you have a lot of self-respect so go to your house
  • I will come myself to bring Khemi and Hiten's wedding invitation
  • Now u r free from this house
  • Should I escort you till the door
The corridor to the door
  • Moti ben holds Santu's hands and takes her down the stairs and drags her out till the door
  • She says her relation wont break totally with this house as Khemi would get married in this house
  • And she could visit and think of it as her house
  • Santu bends and touches Moti ben's feet for her blessing
  • Moti ben gets irked and thinks in her head how the chotay ppl are always doing Nautanki
  • Santu turns to leave
  • Moti ben says stop take your Amanaat
  • And goes up and brings her suitcase(the one she brought when she came in to her house)
  • Moti ben says I kept it ready incase you would come in tomorrow to get it
  • So the memories will haunt you more if you come here
  • Now Go
The silent pain
  • Santu is all heart broken yet turns to leave
Sad version of the title song plays
Waqt yeh kaisey karwat badla
Hum yeh samajh na payeee
Aik khushi chahi thi lekin
Dard hi dard hai payeee
Ankho say ashko ka sagar

Har pal behta jaye
Kabhi dukh ki kabhi sukh ki
Sanginiiiii
Bandiniii
  • Moti ben waves and as soon Santu steps out she heaves a sigh of relief at what she believes is Good riddance
NOTE: Heylo everyone :-)
m extremely sorry for the way this has turned out *hides muh*... Just filling in for Nu and its not easy to fill in for her updates or for that matter Sukhi's updates .. I tried to keep it simple and objective and tried to make it in english mostly so its less confusing. And did not add in much of my commentary. Kept it neutral and objective.

As for my take on the episode is that it definitely was heart wrenching. My heart went out to poor Santu. What has she gotten herself into. Just want DM to come back blast at Moti ben and then tear off those divorce papers and pakdofy the chokri by her arms and bring her back true DM style...

I was soo confused abt the title wanted to make it Khamosh dard ki chubhti huwi kirchiyan lol but then I thought might get too heavy duty... so sticking to Kabhi Alvida na Kehna for now
Edited by -Faith- - 16 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

19

Views

4.5k

Users

15

Likes

77

Frequent Posters

AreYaar thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#2
Aww Zainu, fantastic update yaar! I don't even watch the show but still everything was so clearly and nicely described that I could understand it all clearly!👏

Muahhh! Rocking update!🤗
soap-critic thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#3
Thank you Zainab for filling in for Nupur. Very nice update highlighting all the happenings in the episode.
-Faith- thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#4
@Anu Bannu: Awww AP🤗 muahhh arre yaar u r kinda biased when it comes to me..
But then shukar hai I dint want it to be messy and cluttered...but then u understood clearly coz u r ishmart lol

And then it was just last minute resort...😆


@Hema: Aww no problemo... Nu was busy na.. Plus she is my friend cum maata cum putri.. Anything for her :-) And m glad kaam chal gaya :D
md410 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 16 years ago
#5
hey faith nice update thank you
I love and agree with your take on epi.
just a wild thought that could it be dream sequence of santoo TOM --- LOL
-Faith- thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#6
@md410: Oh not a problem at all :-) most welcome!
Awww really yaa BT and even other shows have a penchant of showing painfully long and horrific dream sequences... So it is a possibility... Guess we will just have to wait and watch.. Hopefully DM's is coming back by tomorrow

pyar-ishk thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 16 years ago
#7
Thank you Faith for the wonderful update and I hope you're right that it was dream that this divorce didn't happen. I for one will have to take a break from watching this show but will continue to read the wonderful update, cause I just can't take them draging this track.
Soapgirl thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#8
Thank you for the update....doesn't moti feel anything at all when she sees tears in somebody's eyes?!?!?!?! She is so weird of a character
-Faith- thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#9
@Pyar-ishk: No problemo! :-) Glad u liked the update.. Oh yaaa could be a dream but then if DM comes and tears up the papers.. even then the divorce wont be valid...

Maybe this would eventually help DM realize what place Santu has in his life.. And hopefully they wont drag it that much I mean Bandini has still been better considering the usual dragging standards

@Smilegirl: You are welcome! :-) Your id is really cute btw
Oh yaa tell me abt it even I felt that Moti ben might melt a bit seeing Santu's sacrifise... Maybe that raaz thing is responsible for turning her this cold and heartless... Even then Santu's tears and pain had absolutely no effect on her

rita7482 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#10
very nice update no other bakavas

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".