*Yuvizzz Poemzz*my 4th poem-waqt (pg 27)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy everyone... guyss im yuvvraj.. u can call me yuvi...basicallyy i love writting poemss... hindi n english both... i know m no comparison to the other few ive read like from sunita and falak and sana n shinella n sindhya... there r tooo manyy to name... buhh well itss a tryy.. do lemme noe guys if it wuzz nice...
luv yuvi
okayy heres the index-
poem 1- mayur journey(nupurs pov)- pg 1
poem 2- 4 black cards- page 10
poem 3- If- page 23
poem 4- waqt page 27
oooopss tooo much bak bak...okayy heres the poemm....
mayur poem-
i lived in a dreamworld of my prince charming
the real world seemed absurdand studies seemed alarming
i saw my prince charming on the white horse galloping
i wondered when he'd come the feeling made me go numb
i looked up at you for a flicker of recognization
but you were someone new somewhere out in the nation
i looked for you all through morena
just one glance was enough but it was so tough
in desperation i left to my mumbai, the dreamworld
hoping to find you there in a white horse coming to my side
but i went there and waited guess who comes by
he crashes into me, and goes crap, this really sadoo guy
a complete jerkish idiotic nerd he was
the most insensitive guy ive ever come across
he was paired with me for the project of deodhar sir
but it took me along time to see how sweet and caring the sadoo were
we played diwali together at his place
and then i forced him to samrats place
i taught him how to enjoy and it brought me joy
jus to see him happyy enjoyingg oh boy!
i loved being his friend
he was more of a hero from qsqt film
i adored the perfection he showed always
and lo behold my secret came out straight
and that to when i was about to tell
he got it out and made it hell
i gave him a letter he stuffed it in
and said he didnt bother to read whats within
and as my luck would be the talent parade came around
where i wished and wished tthat he would come along
but maybe somwhere within i knew
that he didnt care but twas not true
he came, he danced, he kept his promise
proving me what a jerk i ve was always
but then he came around along
to show me how much i brought him down
the next few days just passed in a flash
he would pass comments and call me trash
then the exams came to my ride
getting the compo getting on astride
he beat me just by two marks
good lord, twas as though i thrown to the sharks
i fared so well, yet couldnt get on
within some where i was cringing lone
deodhar sir sent us off to the academic meet
where we again became friends, boy was it neat
thats where i started noticing a change
he begaan to act very strange
i asked uday of what could it be
that affected him so much indeed
and uday gave me two options
to be love and drugs as the suppositions
as the dud head i waas i chose the wrong one
and face another wid mayank one to one
but the next day it all became so new
he apologized filmy style with a heart so true
i guess that was when i started to change
and suddenly everything seemes so strange
that evening he came to reherse at my place
where i finally saw a new set and trace
i slowly started crushing him
i called out to him as in my dream
he bought me roses and pampered me
and made me feel so special within
as the love grew more for him in my heart
so did the confusion of this new start
it confused me alot as to who wooed me these past few days
mayank varun ? or was it just me who felt this wierd way
and then the play finally set astride
bringing out the feelings we tried to hide
that was how it all began
and from now i know that hes my man....
hope u guyss liked it.. do press the like tab guyss...
love yuvi...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey yuvi good one yaar im lekha this wes great yaar another poet in our forum yaar thanx for sharing dooo write more and Pm me wen u do
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Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

hey yuvi good one yaar im lekha this wes great yaar another poet in our forum yaar thanx for sharing dooo write more

heyyyy lekha... thnkss sooooo muchh yaar...
definitelyy ill continue this threadd for my mahaan poems...
m rillyy gladd u lykdd it
i wuzzz a lil tensed u knoww
whther u guyss wudd like it
cuzzz itss nothin comparedd to wht the others write...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its rlly vry nice ........ keep up da gud work
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wow man yuvi!!!!.....awesome poem!!!.....do rite more of dem........lovely really.......oh nd im ananya by d way......u knw me frm rohit's thread rite?
so really awesome job nd well i loved it

luv
ananya
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Originally posted by: -chocolateboy-

heyyyy lekha... thnkss sooooo muchh yaar...
definitelyy ill continue this threadd for my mahaan poems...
m rillyy gladd u lykdd it
i wuzzz a lil tensed u knoww
whther u guyss wudd like it
cuzzz itss nothin comparedd to wht the others write...

ntn lyk dat yaar new talents are welcome to the forum
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: stuti123

its rlly vry nice ........ keep up da gud work

heyyy thnkksss stuti...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya_s

wow man yuvi!!!!.....awesome poem!!!.....do rite more of dem........lovely really.......oh nd im ananya by d way......u knw me frm rohit's thread rite?
so really awesome job nd well i loved it

luv
ananya

heyyyy welcumm to my threaddd ms ladakuu....😆
thnkss maaannn.... ⭐️
bdw m yuviii...
nice to meett yaa...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

ntn lyk dat yaar new talents are welcome to the forum

heyyy m rillyy gladd lekha...
ppl here r soo coool n fun luvngg...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ananya- rohit ke thread par aa... uski taang ki keechte hai!

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