FF-Hate...ya...Love. -pt 20-last part!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Everyone,
I am attempting to turn a short story writtten by lovely_lady aka Isha, into a short ff. It is gonna be a very short ff. I am sure i wouldn't be able to reach up to all the good standards set by all the wonderful writers in this form, but i do hope that you would be entertained a bit throug this ff.
Credit for this ff goes to Isha aswell---the idea and foundation of this ff is given by her.
And i take no credit for Part 1 at all because it is fully written by her.-Credit goes to her alone 4 it!
Introduction
Gunjan
Nupur's twin sister. In love with Samrat.
Samrat
Nupurs best friend. In love with her twin sister, Gunjan. Cares 4 nupur loads. Is also like a big bro at times.
Shilpa aka MM
Mayanks mom. She is under the impression that Nupur and Mayank r madely in love.
Loves her bahu, nupur , a lot. Nupur and Shilpa r more like friends. Loves her family a lot.
Nitin aka MD
Mayanks dad. He is also under the impression that Nupur and Mayank r madely in love.
Loves Nupur more like a daughter. He emjoyes playing with her.
NM-Nupurs mom.
ND-Nupurs dad.
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Part 1----Page 1.
Part 2----Page 1.
Part 3----Page 5.
Part 4----Page 6.
Part 5----Page 6.
Part 6----Page 9.
Part 7----Page12.
Part 8----Page14.
Part 9----Page15.
Part 10--Page16.
Part 11--Page20.
Part 12--Page21.
Part 13--Page25.
Part 14--Page27.
Part 15--Page30.
Part 16--Page31.
Part 17--Page34.
Part 18(a)--Page 40.
Part 18(b)--Page 42.
Part 19--Page 45.
Part 20--Page 47.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi again,
I have not given a brief introduction-pardon me 4 that.
And i need u guys to help me come up with a name 4 this ff.
Do comment.
I was thinking -- Bandhan
-- Yea Rishtha
-- pyar ya farz
But they all don't sound so -u know. They sound more like one of the saas bahu serial names i guess.
So please do help me with that.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here goes part one.
Credit goes entirely to lovely_lady aka Isha.
She only wrote this.
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hello everyone..okay, so i usually don't make topics..but yea..anyways, i was just sitting on the laptop when i had a weird story idea..i thought of making it into a ff but i as too lazy, so i decided to make a short story i guess. i hope you like it! oy yea, its my first time..so yea..

Nupur and Mayank Sharma are both 24 years old. They totally despise each other. However, due to unfavorable circumstances, they both are married to each other. Nupur hates Mayank's sarcastic attitude towards her and Mayank hates Nupur's talkative personality. She thinks that he needs to tone down the sarcasm, and he thinks that she should keep the chattering to a minimum. However, they cannot express their distain toward each other because Mayank's parents are under the impression that Mayank and Nupur are madly in love. Nupur and Mayank do not have the heart to break their parent's hearts, so they pretend to love each other. However, during night time, when they are all alone, their fights begin. Usually their fights are quiet, but one day'

NIGHT TIME IN MAYUR'S ROOM'

Nupur was on the bed with her laptop. She was chatting with her friends on msn. When she chats, she gets really caught up; she begins talking as she types. Mayank, on the other hand, was sitting on the other side of the bed looking at some office files. He likes everything silent when he works. However, Nupur kept on talking. She had no idea that her talking was annoying Mayank.

Mayank (in a very rude manner): gosh Nupur, do you have to talk so much? I'm trying to work here.

Nupur (annoyed): well, you could've told me before and nicely too..sheesh..(Under her breath) baby..

Mayank: what? What did you call me?

Nupur: you wanna know what I called you? I called you a baby because you keep on whining!

Mayank: me? I whine? Look whose talking! Queen of whims! You don't do anything. I'm the one who works day after day to make money while you sit here and talk to your friends!

Nupur: excuse me! I work too! I'm an interior designer if you didn't know! I meet people all day, and you know how hard it is to smile at people 24/7 and agree with them even if they are annoying you? Also, I come home and help make dinner! All you do is sit in the office all day! I'm the one who does real work around here!

Mayank: what?!? Office work is so much harder! At your job, all you do is act! At my job, I actually use my brains! Wait, I can't blame you for not using your brains because you don't have any!

Nupur: what?!? You take that back! I am and was and will continue to be much smarter then you!...

Nupur and Mayank continued to argue, and with each reply, both began to get much louder. They were practically yelling at each other. Mayank's parents could hear their kids yelling, but they were puzzled at why they were yelling. To them, Mayank and Nupur loved each other dearly and always got along with each other.

Shilpa (Mayank's mom): I wonder why Nupur and Mayank are yelling? Do you think there's a problem?

Nitin (Mayank's dad): I don't know. Do you think so? I think you should go and check it out at least. Okay?

Shilpa: ok I'll go.

Shilpa went off to her son and daughter-in-law's room. She heard voices coming. They sounded like Nupur and Mayank's.

Nupur and Mayank had heard their parent's door open. Instead of quieting down, they had gotten even louder.

Nupur: moron! You're so loud!

Mayank: me? You're the loud one loser!

Shilpa had heard the "moron" and "loser" parts. She opened the door; her face a mixture of worry and anger.

Shilpa: excuse me! Did I just hear moron and loser come from your mouths?

Nupur: *gasp* um..uh..eh..um..yeah..but it's not what you think it is!

Shilpa (in a threatening voice): then what is it?

Nupur: um, you see, I did call Mayank a moron, but I didn't mean that Mayank is a moron, you see. Mayank is my..husband, so I can't say anything like that to him! But moron is totally different. It stands for My' Observant 'ish' Riveting-ly' Obliging' N..New Husband! Yeah! That's it! MORON..H, but the "H" is silent. See? I love Mayank mom! (Gives devilish smile to Mayank)

Shilpa: aw..Nupur, you are so sweet! You even gave Mayank a nickname! I new you would turn out to be the perfect daughter-in-law! and what about you Mayank? What does loser mean?

Mayank: that..um..mom..you see..um..it mean..uh..I got it! It means Lovely.. Overjoying-ly..Smart..Efficient-ish'R..R..Reviving-ful Wife! Yes! That's it! LOSER..W..but "W" is silent..like Nupur said.

Shilpa: aw..you both are so sweet. Now go to sleep and stop fighting over something small. Good night!

Mayank's mom left the room.

Nupur: copy-cat! You copied me lines..now who has the brain?

Mayank: oh whatever. Big deal. I'm doing as mom said. I'm going to sleep, so let me please sleep with no noise!

Mayank quickly ducked under the covers and fell asleep. After a little while Nupur also fell asleep.

so yea..thats the end.. i am really sorry for all the mistakes and stuff..anyways, please do comment! this is my first time!



Edited by lovely_lady - 27 June 2009 at 7:10pm
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I copied and pasted 4m her post.
I have taken her permission!😉
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I cannot promise anyone about PM'ing!
This ff is going to b really short !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks yaar, first one to comment.
Aacha part 1 posted do read it. Credit 4 this part completely to lovely_lady.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i'd love to read this FF...!! the plot looks interesting!!
them having to pretend to be in love..LOL...
those full forms they cooked up were hilarious!
do continue!! and PM me...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2
Everyday Nupur wakes up in the morning. She goes down and along with MM prepares breakfast. Although Mayank and Nupur despise eachother, their relationship with parents is totally opposite. They both love them very much.
For Nupur, MM & MD are more like friends.
After the fight night/Next day morning
Nupur: Good morning aunty
MM: Goodmorning beta. (She hands Nupur a cup of chai). Did u have a good night.
Nupur: Haan, kyun?
MM: Thum dhono ko meine pehli baar ek dusre par chille the hua suna. Sab teek hai na.
Nupur: Sab teek hai aunty. Kal raath kuch nahi hua. Hum bas aaise he. Aap tho jaanthe hai hum dhono ek dusre se zyaada dur nahi reh sakthe.
MM: (smiles in satisfaction) haan janthe hu. Vaaise, aaise choti jagade hoone chahiye-kehthe hai na ki pyaar zaayda bad jatha hai.
Both laugh.
Nupur: Aaj mein aalu ke paratha banaungi. Aaj aap kitcchen se break le liji ye.
MM:(teasingly) Arre vah! tho ye saach hai ki pyaar bad jatha hai.
Nupur: mathlab
MM: Jadge ke baad Mayank ka favourite dish, vo bhi thum apne aap bana na chahithi ho puri tharah. (teesing smile) Thum mayank ke baare mein kithna sooch thi ho.
Nupur smiles at MM and thinks in her mind: Mein aalu ke parathe Mayank ke bare mein sooch kar nahi bana rehi hu, bas bahut din hogaye hum aalu ke paratha bana kar iss liya.
Nupur prepares the breakfast and then goes to MD. MD is reading the newspaper, sitting outside. He Updates her on the latest news. Then they plan on playing chess in the evening.
Nupur then goes to her room upstairs and finds Mayank still sleeping asusual (Not always but most of the time she has to wake him up)
Nupur: Mayank utho. (She removes the sheets and blanky off) Mayank utho!
Mayank: 5 minutes Nupur.
Nupur: Kal tho bada chilla rehe the ki thum bahut hard work karthe ho, vagara--But u cant even wake up by yourself in the morning!
Mayank immediately got out of bed irritatedly: Shut up Nupur.
Mayank goes down. Nupur sets the bed and then takes a quick shower, dresses up and was going down 4 breakfast. As she was going down her phone rings.
Nupur: Goodmorning,
Caller: Goodmorning Nupur. Important baath hai. Ek client aaya, bahut badi project leke. 2 big mansions in London, he brought the pictures and the structural design of the Mansion.
Nupur: Vo sab tho teek hai magar appointment kithne bajhe hai?
Caller: Vahi tho Nupur-they want to meet you now. How much time will it take 4 u to come?
Nupur: Now! par...teek hai, abhi start hoti hu CJ. Bye.
CJ: C U, jaldi aana.
Nupur's hair was still damp. She grabs her bag and keys and rushes down.
MM & MD: Aare kya hua? Itni jaldi kya hai?
Nupur: Vo actually abhi call aaya. Mujhe ek client ke saath abhi appointment hai.
Nupur hugs them and leaves without giving them a chance to say anything.
MM, MD & Mayank sit to have breakfast.
Mayank: Maa Nupur, kaha hai.
MM: Usne thumhe nahi baathaye? She received a call, and had to leave 4 an appointment. She didn't even eat.
Mayank: Oh! Mein tho bhul gaya tha. Haan, uusne kuch baathaya-mein baathroom mein tha tho baath teek se sun nahi paaya.
Mayank to himself: Yeh Nupur bhi, bina kuch baataya chali gaye. I'm sure uski friends ke saath gaape marne chele gaye. Vaise bhi accha hai vo gaye-thoda shanti ho mujhe miley ga.
He smiles to himself. He enjoyed the breakfast. Aalu ke parathe, his favourite,,,and coinscidentally Nupur is an expert in making it. But he gave no thought about her.
Later on Mayank leaves 4 work aswell.
During this time Nupur was with her cliant. They gave her the pictures, paper work, etc. The mansions were really huge-she was to do the interior designing 4 them. Later on during the day she had more cliants just like any other day. Nupur liked her job-INTERIOR DESIGNING- so it was not like work but more of a hobby that she enjoyed doing.
After a long day Nupur goes home.
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Edited by luv-myur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Um guys-once again---------------i cant promise any one that i would PM. Let's just put it as NO PM.------------Sorry but, actually i barely get enough time on the computer to update, thats why.
Um i'll update part 3, hopefully withing the next 3 days!
Do read and comment.
Name 4 the ff?????????????
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 plot......but plz update sooner..........thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi
First mayur ff which does not hav romance
Hop we'll se romance later
But it was nice
Do continue if possible plz pm me abt update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great FF!
Loved the MORON and LOSER!😆😆😆
Please... update soon.
Anjali
*edited*
Ummm... what about something like journey of love, or falling for you? OK maybe not... 😕
How is the story going to be? Something like how from hating each other they fall in love, or how they much trust each other? So the title could be something relating to the story. Its up to you...
Edited by *angel94* - 16 years ago

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