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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Dharam and Veer stopped at the nearest village to change into their get up (before stepping in the Surai kingdom) ... It was around midday when dharam was all ready to go in to the mahal while veer was waiting a little whille longer (this was so that no one would suspect them)

Mean whille in the mahal there was a lot of preperations going on.. Every one was very busy with their work .... there were maids decoration the halls, some lighting the dia's, some caring tali's that contains flowers.. the main hall was looking so beatifull and there was only 1 person giving the orders.

This one person had a bright smille one her face as if she was very happy of something

Then a maid came to her =>
maid- maharani ji kapre (closh) aae chucke
maharani (the lady with the bright smille)- sach?
maid - ji maharani
maharani- theek hai mere kamre mein layee

The maid then went to fect the closh and brought it in Maharani Sana room.. maharani Sana was waiting for this closh for 3 months now (she had her desiner made it specialy for someone)..
the maid brought the dress and maharani Sana examinated it..

Maharani S- yeh mere beti par accha lagega (she said this with full confident)
Maharani S- tum jaao aur meri beti kho bulake ao

Edited by aandhanika - 16 years ago

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

With that the maid left..

At that same time Dharam got into the mahal without getting any problems from the sainiks as every one there was expecting a pandit for the hawan ceremonies

While he was walking through the halls he kept looking left to right as he didn't understand why the palace was getting decorated... Suddenly he heard a voice

Voice- aaye pandit ji.... hum aap kha kapse interzaam kar rehata

Dharam looked right infront of him (where the voice was comming from) ...The voice was coming from a man who calls himself MAHARAJ VAISHNAV

Maharaj walked forward and took the blessing of the pandit (dharam)

Edited by aandhanika - 16 years ago

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Out side the palace Veer was dressed as a old man waiting for the right time to go in the palace... at that time he heard from a few village girls =>

Girl 1- Samantha kya tumhe pata hai khi aaj mahal mein ek feest hai...
Girl 2- kya yeh sach hai?
Girl 1- haan sach hai aur khushi khi baat yeh hai khi hum sab waha aaj jayenge
Girl 2- yeh toh bohut khushi khi baat hai... lekin kis khushi mein yeh feest rakha gaya???
Girl 1- Are bhudu kya tum bhool gaye khi aaj rajkumari Sia kha janam din hai (birthday)... aur woh hum sab khe saat celebrate karna chate.... akhir woh hamare bhi dost hai na
Girl 2- theek hai ....toh hum kab jaange?
Girl 1- kuch deer mein

Veer overheard this whole conversation and then thought of going undercover as a village girl instead of the old man

In the mahal=>
Maharaj Vaishnav had taken the pandit (dharam) to the main hall where the maids were just done with decorating. the whole place was lighted with dia's... it looked as some kind of heaven..

Maharaj V- aapka safar kaisa tha pandit ji
pandit (dharam)- mera safar theek tha lekin muhje thoda takhan araha
Maharaj V- toh theek aap thoda aaram kediye ... hum aapka rehene (stay) kha itezaam karatha hoon
Pandit (dharam) nodds his head

The maharaj calls one of his maids and tells her to take the pandit to his room as he needed to rest for a while.. After the made had showed him the room she left from there thinking of not disturbing him.
When she was gone dharam got off the bed and started to look for clues all over the room in every corner... not one was left that he didn't search...

Dharam sweating from the whole searching proces and though of taking some fresh air in the balcony.
From the balcony he could see a very big garden...with all trees, flower, fountain, butterflies and between all the tree there were places where you could sit (garden chairs what were made out of stone)

Dharam closed his eyes and took a deep breath..... whille his eyes where closed he heared sounds coming from a payal and with that payal sound he heard a girl gigling....

When he opend his eyes he saw a girl running around the trees with behind her a few maids saying

Maid- rajkumari Sia rukje.... rukje rajkumari Sia!

But the girl didn't listen she kept running and playing by the tree... dharam could see flowers falling from the tree on rajkumari sia as she was pooling on the tree branches...
Dharam was smiling on seeing this.... he kept looking at her from the balcony hoping to see her face but before he could get the chance to do that he heard someone walking towards the room..

Edited by aandhanika - 16 years ago

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Anusha

@anusha_123

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

And it was Maharaja Vaishnav.

Maharaja V: PANDITJI

Dharam:Hain me to bas........

Maharaja V:arye aap aaram kijiye.

Dharam:nahin hum teek hain...

Maharaja v:Teek hain........Agar koi zaroorat ho to humey bula lijiyega..

Dharam:teekh hain.......

Veer is dressed as a veer and is listening to the maids and villiage girls.

Viilage girl no. 1:Rajkumari aaj bahut saajengi

Village girl no. 2:hain......

Village girl no. 3:Aur maharja aur maharni aaj bahut khush hoonge

Veer to himself:oh toh is pradesh ki rajkumari ka aaj janm din hain.....

As he is dressed as a mid he enters Dharam's room....

And....

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Veer (in a girl like voice)- pandit ji....
Dharam (as pandit)- haan bacche
Veer- kya mein kuch pooch sakta??
Dharam (getting nervious)- bolo.... kya pooch na chate ho tum??
Veer- kya aryanagar kha rajkumar ko ek gf hai?
Dharam (shocked hearing his own name)- kya?!.... mere matlab yeh kaisa sawal hai?
Veer- Ji boliye na....
Dharam- nahi hai... lekin tum ye sab?
Veer- kya hai na mujhe unke dost hone khi nate yeh sab yahna (know) hai
Dharam- tum?? 😕

Veer took off the goongat (from his face)
Dharam looked shocked to see veer and also a bit irritated

Veer- ji mein sumaina ka rajkumar veer
Dharam- veer tum bhi na... yaha tang karne keh liye aaja ho yah kaam karne keliyee??
Veer- haan haan mein jaanta hoon

There was a little pause

Dharam- lekin tum toh ek old man khe get-up mein kyun nahi aaja??
Veer- kyunki mere paas ek idea aaja tha
Dharam- oh i see

Dharam- veer tumne dheka.... mehal mein kitna decorations ho raha hai.... lekin kis liyee yeh hume nahi pata
veer- don't worry dharam mujhe pata hai....
Dharam- toh bataje kya horaha hai yaha
Veer- Aaj yaha koi rajkumari Sia kha janam din hai.... is khushi mein raat kho ek feest hai mehal mein

Dharam remembers hearing this name some where.....

Dharam- meine yeh naam kahi suna hai

Dharam thinks very hard where he heard this name

Dharam- are haan mein waha (showing towards the balcony) khara tha (standing there) aur ek larki pheer (tree) khe neeche baakti hue dekha tha.... uske peeche bohut sara maids tha yoh "rajkumari Sia! rajkumari Sia!" bola raha tha

Edited by aandhanika - 16 years ago

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kiran

@crazy_kiran

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

lovely idea but me not one of those great writers

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran
lovely idea but me not one of those great writers

Hey kiran do try writting a bit....it's fun.... once you start writting you won't wanna stop
The lines for the scene or coversations just comes to you whille your writting
.....

Edited by aandhanika - 16 years ago

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Hey Guys i would like to continue the story... i'm not sure if there still are people reading... but if you read to leave a comment.. thanks..

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The both of them went to the balcony as fast as they could without making any noise..

Now standing in the balcony veer sees no one..even dharam is confused where she had gone.

Veer- Shayed woh chali gayee

Dharam- Haan mujhe bhi lakta..

Veer- Dharam Hume Maharaj Vaishnav se baat karna hoga lekin usse pehli hume uski sare kamsori (weak points) kho jaana hoga. I think tonight will be the best time to find out.. Raat jab feest hongi tab hum mehel me pata chal sakte when every one is bussy partying.

Dharam- Okay... but i think this pandit get-up is gonna get me into a lot of trouble.

Veer- Aisa kyun?

Dharam- kyunki yaha khe lookh kisi pandit kha intezaar kar raha tha.. and they think that i'm that pandit...

veer- hmmm problem... Dharam you don't worry i will try and find out you just keep Maharaj Vaishnav and the others bussy

Dharam knots his head..

On the other side of the mehel a door was openned to a room..