Ishq Hua - {Part 12 Pg 35} - Nov 23rd

Hey guys I am planning on starting a new ff.. i have the first part written.. and i will put it up as soon as I proofread it...

Pankaj Garewal: Rahul's dad. (P)
Smriti Garewal: Rahul's mom. (S)
Rahul: we all know him!

Satish Chadda: Muskaan's Dad. (Sa)
Prerna Chadda: Muskaan's Mom (Pr)
Muskaan: know her as well!

Armaan and Ridhimma will enter later..
let me know what you think about it!

Thanks😊

hey shilpa!!

Looks intresting

please PM me when you continue!!

interesting intro...can't wait to read the first part...please PM me when you continue!!

oh wow shilpa u starting aFF ....Congo yaar 👍🏼..........waiting for the first part ....plz PM me if u could😳

Part 1

Story begins with two families, the Garewal's and the Chadda's.

Garewal and Chadda families were very close to each other, and always got along well with each other, except their kids: Rahul and Muskaan.

These two couldn't stay away from each other, but when with each other it was a nuisance for others. No one ever knew what to expect when these two were with each other, they could fight with each other, break windows, or burns things down, and trust me on that one... it has happened before. Here's they come's let wait and see what happens this time.

M: Arey Rahul ruk to sahi, main tumhe kuch nahin karoongi'ek minute ruk na

R: nahin muskaan nahin.. main tumhari baton par yakin nahin karta.. meine tera favorite doll phadiya hai.. tum mujhe pakdogi to mere haal kya hoga mujhe bhi pata nahi'

M: Ab bohut ho gaya ha rahul'ruk ja warna baad mein pachtayega!

Rahul runs away'and Muskaan can't find him any longer..

M: ab dekhlo Rahul' tumhe to iskeliye saza to milegi..

Muskaan goes to Rahul's house..

M: hi aunty.. Rahul ghar aggaya?

S: nahi beti.. abhi tak to nahin..

M: theek hai main uski wait karti hoon..

S: theek hai.. ab muje kisi kaam se bahar jaana hai' kuch badmashi mat karna'

M: main aur badmashi aunty.. yeh toh kabhi nahi hosakta hai.. (evil smile)😉

Smriti leaves'

M: ab Rahul ka band aise bajaongi ke kabhi nahin bhoolega .. HAHAHA(evil laugh)😆

Muskaan goes around the house an makes the necessary arrangements and hides waiting for Rahul to arrive..

A little while later Rahul enters the house making sure the coast is clear..

R: Muskaan to nahin hai na yahaan par.. mujhe hoshiar rehna padega..

Rahul then goes up to take a shower.. as he was sweating a lot from all that running'

While taking a shower' Rahul is washing his hair with shampoo..

R: yeh kaunsa naya shampoo.. o.. iski badbhu aa rahi hai.. (wrinkles his nose cause it is stinky)

R: isko dhona padega..

Later Rahul comes out of the bathroom combing his hair.. just then muskaan enters and starts laughing(Muskaan style)😆

R: aye to has kyu rahi hai.. aur wo bhi chudail jaisi'

M: pehle apna chehra dekhle phir samajh mein aayega..

R: ha.. kya hua mere chere ko.. (looks in the mirror).. haan chehra to theek hai..

M: ab apna baal dekh..

R: baal ko kya hoga muskaan.. faltu batein mat bana.. (looks at his hair.. it is spiked and blue in color) .. oye yeh kya hua mere baalon ko.. ruk muskaan ab mein tujhe nahin chodunga..

The chase begins..

Smriti enters the house to see Rahul and Muskaan chasing each other.

S: Rahul tumhare baal ko kya hua?

R: maa dekhiye na.. Muskaan ne kya kiya..

M: par aunty rahul ne bhi to mera doll phada hai..

S: Rahul, Muskaan hadh ho gayi hai.. har waqt ek dusre ko pareshan karne mein hi lage rehte ho..

To Be Continued'.

Please let me know if this writing style is alright.. i mean the dialogues in hindi and the rest in english...

also please do criticise... and give me any suggestions on what you might want to see happening next time(i will try to incorporate it if possible)!

Thanks😊

nice part shilpa...thank u soo much for the pm and please continue soon..can't wait to read more

Really nice part!!!

Hey Dear first of all Congo for the new FF....🥳

😆😆😆...v cute part ....RM bhi na !!! just had a lil doubt how old are they at present in ur FF???