A MayUr Scene! Written by me :) - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you so very much, Roshni!

That's really sweet!

-Mahi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
excellent scene Mahi, it was perfect! I loved the bit where they fight! It's so sweet. 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow this is such a sweet story wow...u r so gud mahi....keep writing.....plz i will be looking forward to ur next post...i hope u will continue....WOW TOO GUD...BRILLIANT...REALLY GUD JOB MAHI...cant wait for next one...plz post it soon okay.....wow....it was so touchy though....loved it...gr8....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Wow Mahi Wow....beautiful!! i love it!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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How sweet, you guys are soo nice and kind in your comments! 🤗

-Mahi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww mahi di i love u🤗🤗 this scene is so adorable i hope the creatives see ur story this instant and incorporate it in the serial the story is so sweet,cute,adorable and innocent. I so want a mayur scene like this uff the story is so satisfying i loved it ur so talented mahi di ur so great at siggy/avi making and in story writing as well im so proud to have an elder di like u😃 keep up the amazing work and hoping to see many more wonderful stories and scenes from u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......................superbbbbbbbbb scene yaaaaaaaaar............
4me d best part ws these 2 moments...

1)Mayank turns around to face Nupur and taking her hand in his says, "I asked for another beautiful evening about forty years later when I will still be holding your hand and making another wish." .......haaaaaaaaaayeeee...........it ws sooooooo sweeeeeeet n passionateeee..............


2)"I can stand you for forty lives," Mayank says still holding her hand........ wowwwwwwwww.......kitna gehraaaaaaaaaaa pyaar hai..........sooooooooo touccccchiiiiin........

ur oneshot really deserves this-⭐️.....n thnx soooooo much 4dis wonderful mesmerizin scene....😊




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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
Ridzi - I'm happy to have a lil sister like you! Love you!

Nikki - Thank you soo much! Those two were few of my favorite parts too!

You guys are giving me way too much praise, thank you so much!

-Mahi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow mahi first attempt very nice hai yar

mayur so cute

big mayur jhappi 4 u🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
hey very well written..:)
keep it up!!

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