Twisted Luv Story *note* pg 98

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Hiii friends I am the youngest michi fan as I am only 14

This is my first fan fiction

Hope you guys like it.

TWISTED LOVESTORY

Characters

Prachi - A sweet and beautiful girl. She is calm, quiet, intelligent, fun loving girl but knows her limits. She is a brilliant student as well as brilliant singer. She eventually falls in love with Milind and her life gets changed.

Milind ' The hottest hunk of the college and a rich spoilt brat. He doesn't care for the feelings and thinks that girls are like a tissue paper. Use and throw. He falls for a girl who has already gone from his life.

Neev ' The handsomest of all, fun loving guy belonged to a rich family. He had keen interest in music and has a huge crush on Ayesha Sarin.

Ayesha ' Beautiful and sexy. She is the heartthrob of the college. She too is rich girl and she also has a huge crush on Neev Shergil.

Sukriti ' sister of Milind. She studies in hostel in Nainital.

Aalap - Ayesha's brother and a rich spoilt brat.

Soumya ' Ayesha's sister and classmate of Sukriti.

Purvi ' Neev's sister and Aalap's girlfriend.

Badi ma ' Prachi's guardian. She is the teacher in nainital.

Saket ' Badi ma's son and both Sukriti and Soumya's classmate. He is the best student and prince charming of every girl in hostel.

Baba ' Sukriti and Milind's father.

(Rest characters will be revealed further.)

Part 1

COLLEGE ' MASTI, FIGHT, FUN AND ETC

Prachi woke up early and prepared the breakfast for herself and her best friend Ayesha who was still sleeping unconsciously.

Prachi ' Ayesha Ayeshu (her nick name kept by Prachi) wake up. We'll get late for college.

Ayesha ' Yaar, just two more minutes. Please. (Said lazily)

Prachi ' No it's already 7:30 am just half an hour left for the first lecture.

Ayesha ' What????? Yaar subah 'subah lecture ka time mat yaad dilaya kar.

Prachi ' ok baba. You have to cheer up Neev for his basketball match. Do you want anyone else to cheer Neev???????

Ayesha ' you know you are very clever. You know how to use right cards at right time.

Prachi ' ya ' ya. After all I am Ayesha Sarin's best friend.

Both girls enjoyed each other's company. They lived in Ayesha's flat but Prachi was more concerned as she handled every matter related to the house.

They both sat in Ayesha's car and left for the college. They reached in time and found Neev waiting at the main gate.

Neev ' what is this yaar? You know that today is my match and you are coming now. How will you prepare yourself?

Ayesha ' no hi no hello. So Neev Shergil ko match ki tension ho rahi hai'

Prachi ' hi Neev and best of luck. I have to catch Mr. Bharat's lecture.

Neev ' you know Prachi what you have to do?

Ayesha ' she is my best friend and doesn't forget anything.

Prachi ' acha- acha makhan mat lagao. Tum dono ko notes mil jayenge. Aur aap logon ki present bhi lag jayegi.

Both together ' thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prachi ' best of luck!! By the way Neev this match is against whom?? Seems to be someone new. Because as well as I know no one dares to challenge Neev Shergil in basket ball. After all he is the champion.

As soon as Prachi spoke these lines, a tall guy with curly hair wearing a Levis jeans and a funky T-shirt came to her, giving her a grin look.

Milind ' itna bharosa acha nahi hai. I have dared to challenge Neev. Oh the so called champion. I will show you guys who is the true champion.

Prachi ' oh that I was'''' I mean.

Milind ' I am not interested in listening you. You may go and attend your lecture or otherwise you will be accused of bunking your class. You bloody book worm.

As he spoke these lines Prachi was full of tears. But she collected herself and went from there.

Ayesha and Neev followed her way. But she was in no mood.

For the first time someone has talked to her this way. She was a sweet girl and the reason for some people to smile.

Ayesha ' Prachi stop ' yaar ruk ja meri rajdhani express.

Neev ' Prachi '.. Prachi. Statue.

Prachi stood there where she was and wiped her tears.

Prachi ' let me go Ayesha. Neev best of luck.

Ayesha ' don't worry at all and you forget all this nonsense. We will see him afterwards.

Prachi- ya byeee I am getting late for the lecture.

It was a cloudy day for Prachi. Mr. Bharat was a strict and punctual teacher. When he saw Prachi arriving late he was very angry.

Prachi ' may I come in sir?

Mr.Bharat ' you may Prachi. Do you have wrist watch?

Prachi ' yes.

Mr.Bharat ' then you might not care to look at. You are late.

Prachi ' (making a cute little puppy face) sorry sir. This will not happen again.

Mr.Bharat ' ok now you go and take your seat. Better not do it again. Don't you want to top this time?

Prachi ' yes sir.

Mr.Bharat ' ok enough of talks. Let me start the lecture before I take up the attendance.

Prachi very cleverly imitated Neev and Ayesha's voice and made their presence. Bharat sir proceeded with the lecture and Prachi very carefully listened to it.

AT THE BASKETBALL COURT

Ayesha was really very upset. Neev was very attentively staring Ayesha. He didn't like her this way. So Neev started with the conversation.

Neev ' lagta hai cheerleader ko mujhe cheer karna padega.

Ayesha ' C'mon Neev why would you have to cheer me? I am alright. I am cool

Neev ' I know I know that Ayesha is super cool. Now let's see when these cheetahs (Milind's team) will come.

Ayesha ' let them come anytime my tigers (Neev's team) will defeat them.

Neev ' you and Prachi just keep smiling. I'll defeat any cheetahs any lions. (Said laughingly)

The cheetahs arrived by the time. Milind came nearer to Ayesha and Neev.

Milind ' oh you two of you. Where is the third angel hat book worm? Must be attending class now.

Ayesha ' how dare you to speak like this about my best friend.

Milind ' well who are you to interrupt in between? I am talking to Neev and you better don't poke your nose.

Neev ' keep your mouth shut. Why the hell you came here?

Milind ' yes you are right. Hell is here with Milind Mishra. Ok I came here to put the bet.

Neev ' what bet?

Milind ' if I defeat you, you have to claim that I am the champion and you are the loser in front of the whole college.

Neev ' ok. What if I defeat you?

Milind ' well there is mo chance. But what you want?

Ayesha ' you have to do what I say.

Milind ' didn't I tell you not to poke your nose in between? Who the hell are you?

Milind starts humiliating Ayesha.

Neev ' don't force me to react. I am seeing you since morning. I am calm and she is my girlfriend. Do you have any problem?

Ayesha stares at Neev. Neev understands that she is angry. He pleads her to stay there nahi to uski izzat ka faluda ho jayegi. Ayesha understands that and still stays there. This all is eye to eye contact.

Milind ' girlfriend. Bachon ki bhi girlfriend hoti hai??

All the cheetah gang began to laugh.

Neev ' Ayesha tell him what you want.

Ayesha ' if Neev defeats you, you have to apologize to Prachi in front of the whole college and she will also gift you something.

Milind ' what?

Ayesha ' a slap.

Milind ' well that's ok.

i hope you guys loved it.

comments awaited

INDEX

PART 1- PAGE 1

PART 2- PAGE 3

PART 3 -PAGE 4

PART 3(SECOND PART)- PAGE6
PART 4 -PAGE 8
PART 5 - PAGE 10
PART 5 - PAGE 11
PART 6 - PAGE 12
PART 7 - PAGE 14
PART 8 - PAGE 15
PART 9 - PAGE 18
PART 10 - PAGE 25
PART 11 - PAGE 30
PART12 - PAGE 33
PART 13 - PAGE 38
PART 14 - PAGE 41
PART 15 - PAGE 47
PART 16 - PAGE 59
PART 17 - PAGE 64
PART18 - PAGE 67
PART 19 - PAGE 76
PART20 - PAGE 84

PART21 - PAGE 92

PART 22 - PAGE 96

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Crazy_girl_15 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
I am 14 too 😳 Why is Papa so mean
Calling her bookworm
Neev chachu calling Ayesha aunty girlfriend😳
I hope Papa wins😳
Even tough I know neev is going to win😆
Update soon
Do read my Freaky story
BTW Shabbir/Milind is my Papa and I'm his ONE and ONLY daughter😳
If you have been a silent member all this time then you might know that😆
You can be my cousin...His niece😳
What abt that😊
Edited by may268 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#3
I want Neev to win
Gr8 start and for your first ff this is pretty good 👏👏👏
Milind is sooo mean hope prachi teaches him a lesson soon 😉
Neev and Ayesha boyfriend girlfriend 😆😆😆
Continue sooooooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kiran_1

I want Neev to win

Gr8 start and for your first ff this is pretty good 👏👏👏
Milind is sooo mean hope prachi teaches him a lesson soon 😉
Neev and Ayesha boyfriend girlfriend 😆😆😆
Continue sooooooooooon

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ya i will continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start 👏plz continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: michiluv

nice start 👏plz continue soon

thank uuuuuuuuuuu
i 'll continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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welcome to ff world hun🤗
so u got affected by ff virus,

great start
like ur concept
and attitude milind,but he should not behave like this to prachi,
loved ur ayesha and neev
i wish neev should win,
continue soon dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😲woww!!! u're 14?! dont seem like so..u write so well..u have a beautful flow of writing.....welcome to the ff league...
love the first part! milind so mean! and prachi poor girl, glad she has neev and ayeaha as friends who stands by her all the time...cant wait to see this how this twisted lovestory goes...do continue soon...eagerly waiting for the next part🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was great.
do con't soon.
thanks for starting new FF.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi,
u r 14 and u r really writing so well.
👏

TWISTED LOVESTORY-title itself is engaging.

milind is so rude.he thinks girls ae like tissue paper.use and throw.😡very bad.
but good explanation for his character.
and Aalap is ayesha's brother?interesting.u have brought lot of changes in relations.
hope neev wins the match and milind recieves the gift from prachi in front of all.
waiting for next update.
please continue soon.
thanks.

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