my poem on *rati*

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Prerana

@-Preru-

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Posted: 16 years ago

there u go guys
my poem on rati 😉

You filled our world with joy
Without a single day of cry

You have the eyes of an angel
Which speak words of different angle

We can say you are best
Cause you are one who is truly blessed

When ever u reflect your smile
our heart skips a beat for a while

You have crossed all bounds of acting
Cause we all know your very attracting

You make us cry with joy and fear
Cause we know your the bestest dear

You can be the other name for perfection
Cause you like the other name of attraction

These words can belong to only and only one
Who else can it be except our very own *RATI*

so guys howz it
any changes to b made ????
added one extra line about her smile guys 😉

Edited by shilpa mehta... - 16 years ago

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Prerana

@-Preru-

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

i know it's small
do u guys want me to extend it a bit ???

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Kavya

@Bazinga

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

Aww Shilpu , its really cute - I am sure Rati would love it 😊

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meepha

@Meeph

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

i luv it..
Its so true n cute
Good job

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Prerana

@-Preru-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_KraZQueen
Aww Shilpu , its really cute - I am sure Rati would love it 😊

thanks yar kavz
do u think it's a bit small
i mean can i extend it a bit
i though i would keep it small as rati should not have difficulty in reading u know 😉