my poem on *rati* - Page 2

hey shipla excellent job, man i totaly love it. its genuine, simple and soooooooooooooooo nice. hugs.

Originally posted by: muneefah

i luv it..
Its so true n cute
Good job

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thanks muneefah di 🤗
i was tensed wheather u guys would like it or not

Originally posted by: Senny

hey shipla excellent job, man i totaly love it. its genuine, simple and soooooooooooooooo nice. hugs.

thanks senny hun
i was just hoping that u guys like it 😛

@ shilpa=
AReey yaar!!!!
Tense honey ki kya baat!!

u r good at writin so jus write & post

😃 Widout carin if v will like it or not!!coz m sure everyone would lub it

Originally posted by: krishmjht

Yaar Shilpa it's a very nice poem😳...Rati will surely love it...and yes yaar...me too think ki the length is perfect but still i want u to include a line or two on her smile too coz she has a very pretty smile.😳...so if u like dear then plz include a line on her smile too...😊

yeah will surely do it
thanks for ur suggestion 😛

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

shilpa gr8 poem ... excellent 👏

thanks sana di
ur comments really mean a lot 😉

Originally posted by: muneefah

@ shilpa=
AReey yaar!!!!
Tense honey ki kya baat!!

u r good at writin so jus write & post

😃 Widout carin if v will like it or not!!coz m sure everyone would lub it

awwwwww.... muneefah di
love u for saying this 🤗

Originally posted by: shilpa mehta...

yeah will surely do it
thanks for ur suggestion 😛

Ur welcome🤗

Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

awww shilpa its fantabulous

loved it!

u have a gr8 writing talent..

keep writing more.....

thanks a lot drishti 🤗
will try and write more 😉